A. 以「practice makes perfect」為題,按下列要求,寫一篇120詞的英語作文。
The famous saying 「Practice makes perfect」 is widely accepted today.It means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again,we』ll be able to perform it perfectly.
The practice of learning English is a good example.We are not living in an English speaking country.So,in order to learn it well,we need extra practice,such as reading English books,going to English corners,or communicating with foreigners.Only sitting at the desk cannot lead to the mastery of English.
As another example,if we want to be skilled in using the computer,we also need to practice using it.Some children become little experts in computer,just because they play with it everyday.On the contrary,if we just stick to books,we will still feel confused when using computers.Judging from the evidence offered,we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect.
B. 用practice寫一篇英語作文
Practice Makes Perfect
The saying that practice makes perfect means that after you have plenty of practice in what you are doing, you will be perfect in it. He who practices a lot will master the skill more quickly than he who seldom or hardly practices.
For example, when we learn English, we have to learn grammar, words, expressions and so on. The most important thing may be how to put what we have learned into practice. If you only learn the grammar rules by heart and don't do enough exercises, it is certain that you can't understand them perfectly. But if you practice a lot, maybe you will understand them more deeply and you can find some good methods of applying them. Memorizing English words whenever time permits,we can easily memorize them and can even find a way to memorize them more quickly.
There is another example. A famous singer can sing very welt. Of course, his talent is very important, but practice is necessary. It is necessary to practice to make the singer sing better and better.
It is evident that practice is important for everybody. If you want to improve your study and work, you should remember that practice makes perfect.
C. 跪求高考英語滿分作文5篇以上,帶翻譯!
Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is 「My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School」.
Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Some students live a very expensive life. They have the same hairstyles as their favorable stars and wear top brand of clothes and shoes. Some use expensive mobile phones.
The reasons why they do so are as follows. Firstly, they hope to look smart and special. Secondly, they want to win others』 admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool .
As far as I am concerned, we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life because it is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What』s more , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school to receive normal ecation. Last but not least, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable.
Thank you for listening!
大家下午好!
我今天演講的題目是「我的態度在學校工作,追求時尚」。
現在在我們學校有一個追求時尚熱點。有些學生生活非常昂貴的生活。他們有他們的有利星級相同的發型,穿的衣服和鞋第一品牌。有些使用昂貴的行動電話。
究其原因,他們這樣做如下。首先,他們希望看起來聰明和特別。其次,他們想贏得別人的欽佩和尊敬。此外,它使他們感到涼爽。
據我所知,我們的學生應持正確的價值觀念意識。我們應該在日常生活中實踐節約,因為它是我們中華民族的傳統美德之一。更重要的是,這是值得我們捐些零用錢給希望工程,使農村地區的貧困兒童能重返學校,接受正常的教育。最後但並非最不重要的,它是內在美,而不是我們的外表,使我們尊敬的。
謝謝你聽著!
What a Great Olympic Games!
The 29th Olympic Games has been over in Beijing, China on August 24,2008, which has left a great impression on the whole world. About 204 countries and regions attended the Olympic Games. In the Games, our Chinese athletes have won 51 gold medals, while America,36; Russia,23. This is the first time that we, Chinese athletes have won so many gold medals in one Olympic Games, which means our sports games belong to the first class in the world!
It is our athletes』 intelligence and other qualities that have won the great honor for us Chinese all! Days when we were looked down upon have gone forever! From the very Games, we have proved that our government has the ability to hold the Olympic Games successfully! Not only can we hold the Olympic Games well, but also we can perform well. The fact has showed everything to the world! It is the successful 29th Olympic Games that destroys the saying of those who doubted about it days ago! What a great, successful and impressive Olympic Games!
多麼偉大的奧運會!
第29屆奧運會已在北京結束,在2008.8.8-2008.8.24,這對整個世界留下一個偉大的印象中國。約204個國家和地區參加了奧運會。在奧運會上,我國體育健兒獲得51枚金牌,而美國,36,俄羅斯,23。這是我們第一次,中國選手奪得一奧運會,這意味著我們的體育比賽屬於世界一流這么多的金牌!
這是我們的運動員已獲得的情報,並為我們偉大的榮譽中的所有其他品質!當我們被輕視時已一去不復返天!從非常奧運會,我們已經證明,我們的政府有能力舉辦奧運會成功!我們不僅能舉辦奧運會良好,但也可以表現良好。事實已經表明一切的世界!這是第29屆奧運會成功摧毀這些誰對此表示懷疑天前說!真是一個偉大的,成功的和令人難忘的奧運會!
TVs and Radios
TVs are more useful than radios. From TV you can see and hear what is happening in the world. However, radios are not disappearing. They are still with us. And the number of listeners is becoming larger. Do you know why?
One reason for this is the invention of the transistor. A transistor radio can be very small. It is very easy to be carried. Besides, radio broadcasts are better for blind people. Many old people don』t have good eyesight. They can』t watch TV, but can listen to music or news over the radio. What』s more, a radio is cheaper than a TV set.
電視及收音機
電視比收音機有用。你可以從電視看到和聽到在世界上發生的。然而,收音機都沒有消失。他們仍然和我們在一起。與聽眾人數越來越多。你知道為什麼嗎?
其中一個原因是晶體管的發明。一個晶體管收音機可以非常小。這是很容易被通過。此外,無線電廣播是盲人更好。許多老人根本不具備良好的視力。他們可以不看電視,但可以在電台收聽音樂或新聞。更重要的是,一個比一個收音機電視機便宜。
A new park for children has been set up to welcome' the coming of Children's Day,
The park is in the south of our city, covering an area of 500 mu. Entering the park you can see statues of children in different races, hand in hand,which is the symbol of the world peace. In the middle is a lake, around Which are all kinds of trees and flowers. There are many boats on the take and some children are boating happily, To the south of the lake is a hill with a lot of monkeys on it. The Children's Pa]ace lies to the east, in which all kinds of exhibitions are on show. To the west of the lake is a place for children to play, where there are many recreational facilities.
I'm sure the children in our city will have a happy festival this year
一個新的兒童公園已經成立,歡迎'的兒童節的到來,
該公園是在我們的城市南部,佔地500畝。走進公園,你可以看到來自不同種族的兒童雕像,手挽著手,這是世界和平的象徵。在中間有一個湖,周圍是各種樹木和花卉。上有需要,有些孩子愉快地劃船,要在湖的南方許多船隻是一個有很多山猴子上。兒童的PA]王牌在於東部,其中各種展覽展出的。為了在湖的西面是兒童玩的地方,那裡有許多娛樂設施。
我敢肯定,在我們城市的孩子有一個快樂的節日,今年
A teacher just likes a shining
A teacher just likes a shining star to students. Miss Fu, one of my English teacher, is a shining star in my life.
I happened to be in Miss Fu's class when I began my high school years. At that time, I dared not speak English aloud in public, for I was shy and my pronunciation and intonation① were poor. Afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer the questions Miss Fu raised in class, even if I had some good answers to them. For a time, I even lost interest in practising spoken English. When Miss Fu found out the reason, she encouraged me to speak. First she bought me some English tapes and told me to listen to them carefully, and try to recite them. In class, I was often asked questions and given a lot of chances to practise speaking.Little by little, I became brave enough to speak, and was not afraid to speak English before others. Miss Fu smiled sweetly when she heard the news that I had been chosen to take part in an important oral English contest②.
Whenever I look at the stars in the sky, I recognize the brightest one ---- the symbol of Miss Fu in my heart. Miss Fu will always be a shining star in my life!
老師只喜歡閃閃發光
老師只喜歡一個耀眼的明星學生。傅小姐,我的英語老師之一,是我生命中的一顆璀璨明星。
我恰好在傅小姐的階級被當我開始我的高中年。當時,我不敢大聲說話公共英語,因為我很害羞,我的發音和語調①較差。怕別人笑,我從來沒有把我的手傅小姐回答的問題在課堂上提出的,即使我已經給他們一些好的答案。一時間,我什至失去了練習英語口語的興趣。當傅小姐發現了原因,她鼓勵我發言。首先,她給我買了一些英語磁帶,叫我仔細聽取他們的意見,並嘗試把它們背出來。在課堂上,我經常問的問題,並給了很多機會練習speaking.Little一點點,我就敢於說話,而不是害怕別人之前發言英語。傅小姐甜美微笑的時候,她聽到了我被選中參加一個重要的英語口語比賽②部分消息。
每當我在看天上的星星,我承認在我心中最亮的一----陸富的象徵。傅小姐將永遠是我生命中的一顆璀璨明星!
I have a good friend. He is a handsome boy and his eyes shine with wisdom.
I have known him since Senior One. We are both interested in English. Once both of us entered for an English contest. How eagerly I expected to get a prize! On hearing that I had failed in the contest, I could hardly hold back my tears. "What a pity!" I murmured to myself over and over again. I felt that the world had become cold and everyone seemed to be laughing at me.I love English and have gone all out to study it since my first day in the junior middle school. I have even dreamed of entering a foreign language institute. So I felt very sad.
Just at this time, I received a short letter in English, saying, "Failure is the mother of success. Cheer up! Don't lose confidence. Keep on your study and you will succeed!" I knew it was from the good friend of mine.These words encouraged me greatly. I forgot all my sadness. From then on, I studied English even harder. In the next English contest, I got the first prize. Of course, he was delighted with my success.
我有一個很好的朋友。他是一個英俊的男孩和他的智慧光芒的眼睛。
我知道,因為他高一年級。我們都對英語感興趣。一旦我們都進入了一個英語比賽。如何熱切我期望自己能中獎!一聽說我在比賽失敗後,我幾乎不能阻止我的眼淚。 「真可惜!」我喃喃地對自己一遍又一遍。我認為,世界變得寒冷,每個人都似乎在笑我,我愛英語,並全力研究,因為我在初中第一天。我什至夢想進入一個外語學院。因此,我感到非常難過。
就在這個時候,我收到了簡短的英文信,說:「失敗是成功之母。振作起來!不要失去信心。繼續你的學習,你就會成功!」我知道它從mine.These是好朋友的話讓我非常鼓舞。我忘了我所有的悲傷。從此,我更加努力學習英語。在接下來的英語競賽,我獲得了第一名。當然,他很高興與我的成功。
廣東高考英語滿分作文
Should tourists take photos with animals?
Koalas in wildlife parks can『t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists』 behaviour illegal to protect the animals.
When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals ring their visit.
If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn『t feel happy at all! I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.
However, I don『t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can』t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time, ring which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.
遊客應該給動物拍照嗎?
考拉在野生動物公園不能入睡,因為他們令人不安的遊客不斷。不結盟運動思想,使遊客的非法行為,以保護動物。
當人們正在訪問的野生動物公園,他們喜歡與動物拍照留念。原因是多種多樣的。一些人可能認為拍照與動物的有趣的對比拍照與其他人。其他人可能認為,這將是一個有趣的經驗,與動物拍照訪問期間。
如果我是一種動物的野生動物園,我會感到惱火的人不斷拍照時,與我。我的生活將得到極大的影響,我不會感到高興了!我想我應該有一些私人的空間和時間來放鬆消遣。
但是,我不同意,如果它是非法宣布採取與動物的照片。遊客支付門票參觀野生動物園,將是很可惜的,如果他們不能的照片,一種動物。也許野生動物公園可以設置一些特殊的時間,在此期間,遊客可以與動物的照片。它既能滿足遊客和保護動物。
D. 英語參考範文是滿分作文
參考範文:
Would you want a doctor to operate on you who has only learned about operations from a textbook? The answer to this is obviously a resounding 「No!」 Knowledge gained from books must always be complemented by knowledge gained from actual experience, to be of real value。
For me actually practicing a particular action or experiment myself and experiencing the result, leaves a much deeper and lasting impression than what I get from simply reading or listening. If I read about how to write an essay or listened to someone talk about writing an essay, I still wouldn』t feel that I knew how to write an essay until I wrote one for myself. It is the case, however, that writing the essay would be based on the methods I learned intellectually. The same can be said for other skills, like sports, for example. A person can know all the rules of a game, associated skills and strategies, but until that person gets on a court with a ball in motion, the theory remains flat, useless。
To sum up, as to theoretical knowledge and practical skills, the latter is certainly more important. Just as British churchman Thomas Fuller put it, 「Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it。」
參考譯文
一個大夫只學過課本上的手術知識,叫他給你主刀你是否願意?顯然,這個問題的答案是一聲響亮的「不」。書本知識要有實際價值,就必須同實踐經驗相結合。
對我來說,實踐某件事,或者說親自去嘗試某項活動並感受最後的結果,要比讀書聽課給我留下的印象更深刻,更持久。如果只是讀到如何寫作,或是聽別人講解寫作方法,我覺得自己還是不會寫,非得親自寫一篇才行。當然,實際寫作中也會用到以前學過的寫作方法。掌握其他技能也是一個道理。以體育為例,一個人可以通曉所有的比賽規則和相關戰術技巧,但除非這個人上場打球,否則那堆理論就是呆板無用的。
總之,對於理論知識和實踐技能,相比之下,實踐經驗當然更重要。正如英國教士托馬斯 富勒所說:「知識是一種財富,但實踐是打開財富的鑰匙。」
E. 求10篇2010 英語 高考滿分作文
高考英語滿分作文
作文題目
假設你是李華,你的英國筆友Bob將於九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文,來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息,寫信介紹住房的情況,並告知住房面積為25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.詞數:100左右:
2.參考詞彙:房租—Tent(n.).
I』m very happy to receive your letter, and I』m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I』ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確,意思表述完整,行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句並用,還使用了以『which,』引導的非限定性定語從句,從而使文章層次分明,富於變化,不愧為考場佳作。
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Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there』re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I』U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確,內容完整,表述清楚,銜接緊密流暢,時態語態使用准確,特別是結尾末段適度的發揮,既充實了內容,又符合邏輯,成為本文與眾不同的亮點。
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Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I』m so glad to know that you』ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I』ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It』s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you』ll like it. If not, I』ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文內在邏輯性很強,由遠及近。由外及內,層次分明,錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運用得恰到好處,很出彩,再則結構完整,從開頭的問候語到結尾都很完備。
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作文:
Dear Bob,
I』m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I』ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I』ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文內容詳實,描述具體細膩,用詞適當准確,如「suitable house」、「not far from』』等,另外文中的選擇疑問句也很有新意。
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2009年5月1日世博會志願者招募儀式正式啟動,志願者是辦好世博會的一支重要的工作力量。另外,志願者或做家教,教小孩子閱讀、算術,或打掃公園與街道,或到醫院或療養院幫忙。你願意做志願者嗎?請陳述理由寫一篇100字左右的短文。
One possible version
I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:
First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others』 help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What』s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.
In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.
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不同人都有著不同的習慣,個人習慣直接關系著公共衛生。請根據下列要求,寫一篇120字的英語短文,開頭和結尾已經寫好,不計入總詞數。
1. 介紹有些人不同的好習慣和壞習慣。
2. 習慣與衛生的關系:習慣是衛生基礎; 不好的習慣,會導致一些傳染疾病傳播,如AIDS,SARS, H1N1流感等。
3. 你的看法……。
One possible version
It is generally believed that different people have different habits. Some people are addicted to habits like drinking and smoking, while others pay special attention to healthy diet and never taste things like alcohol and cigarettes.
It goes without saying that there is close relationship between personal habits and public health. On the one hand, good habits serve as the necessary basis of public health, that is to say, without good habits, public health can』t be guaranteed. On the other hand, infectious disease is the natural result brought by dirty habits, like AIDS, SARS, H1N1 flu and so on.
Personally, I think it is high time we placed emphasis on improving personal habits and public health. If we mind our manners and behave ourselves well, there must be a bright and encouraging future.
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假如你是李華,你學校內有人得了豬流感,正在接受治療,你校學生非常害怕,請你寫一篇短文談談如何預防豬流感?
1. 平時外出戴口罩,少去人群集中的公共場所, 避免接觸病人等。
2. 勤洗手,保證充足睡眠,多鍛煉多運動等。
3. 詞數: 120字左右
4. 文章的開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數。
參考詞彙: 豬流感swine flu; 口罩 face mask.
Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?
One possible version
Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?
We advise that you should wear face mask and avoid going to the crowded place when you go out. We remember not to be in close contact with the patients infected with swine flu. On the other hand, the best way to stay away from this virus is to wash your hands often, and make sure that you have enough sleep. At the same time, we should do more exercise so that we can build up our body.
We are sure that we must overcome the threat against swine flu as long as we take proper measures and insist on taking exercise every day.
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注意:1.信的開頭與結尾已經給出,不計算在總詞數內。
2. 字數要求: 120左右。
人口膨脹population expansion;過度開發overdevelopment。
Dear editor,
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.
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Yours truly
Li Hua
One possible version
Dear editor,
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.
With the development of instry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man』s existence.
We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.
Yours truly
Li Hua
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低碳經濟下的環境保護之一
「低碳經濟」是一個具有廣泛社會性的經濟前沿理念,最早是在2003年英國政府發布的能源白皮書《我們能源的未來:創建低碳經濟》正式提出的。低碳經濟包括低碳發展、低碳產業、低碳技術和低碳生活等經濟形態,是指在不影響經濟發展的前提下,通過技術創新和制度創新,降低能源和資源消耗,盡可能最大限度地減少溫室氣體和污染物的排放,實現減緩氣候變化的目標,促進人類的可持續發展。
Protection of Environment
1. 目前環保還存在著許多問題。
2. 為了保護環境,3. 各國政府做了大量的工作。
4. 我的看法。
One possible version
There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people』s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reced with the rapid growth of modern cities.
To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.
In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through ecation. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.
F. 2019高考英語滿分作文
2018·全國Ⅰ卷
假定你是李華,你的紐西蘭朋友將去中國朋友家做客,發郵件向你詢問有關習俗。請你回復郵件,內容包括:
1. 到達時間;
2. 合適的禮物;
3. 餐桌禮儀。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【滿分範文】
Dear Terry,
How
are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to
a Chinese friend』s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some
relevant details.
To begin with, according to our tradition, you
are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare
the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you』d better
bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What』s more, when you
are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing
food.
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2018 · 全國Ⅱ卷
你受學生會委託為校宣傳欄「英語天地」寫一則通知,請大家觀看一部英語短片Growing Together,內容包括:
1. 短片內容:學校的發展;
2. 放映時間、地點;
3. 歡迎對短片提出意見。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【滿分範文】
Notice
In
order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding
English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from
2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the
Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin
with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the
development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only
meaningful but also interesting. What』s more, everyone of you will be
welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a
heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
The Student UnionJune
2018 · 全國III卷
假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Peter 來信詢問你校學生體育運動情況。請給他回信,內容包括:
1. 學校的體育場館;
2. 主要的運動項目;
3. 你喜歡的項目。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右:
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【滿分範文】
Dear Peter,
I
am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last
letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following
information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous
new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our
school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports
events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as
running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I』m intoxicated
with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the
challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
2018 · 北京卷 · 第一節
假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣,計劃明年來北京上大學。他向你咨詢相關信息。請給他回郵件,內容包括:
1. 表示歡迎;
2. 推薦他上哪所大學;
3. 建議他做哪些准備工作。
注意:1. 詞數不少於50;
2. 開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【滿分範文】
Dear Jim,
I』m
so glad to hear your future ecation plan in Beijing in your last
letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am
sure you will have the most unforgettable experience ring your
college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese
culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you
where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich
culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The
Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be
helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I
sincerely hope your dream will come true and it』s my pleasure to show
you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further
questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
2018 · 北京卷 · 第二節
假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序,寫一篇英文周記,記述你們上周接待外國學生,帶領他們體驗中國茶文化的全過程。
注意:詞數不少於60。
ards
the mountains. 'Don』t be late for supper,' Uncle Paul cried, 'and keep
to the track so that you don』t get lost!' 'OK! ' my dad cried back.
After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so
peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green
pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It
looked like a beautiful woven(編織的)blanket spread out upon the ground
just for us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
注意:
(1)所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;
(2)至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語:
(3)續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;
(4)續寫完成後,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。
Paragraph
1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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Paragraph
2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting
dark._______________________________________________________________________________
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【滿分範文】
Paragraph 1
Suddenly
a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I
yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse
from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident,
the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed
closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse
and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get
lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.
Paragraph 2
We
had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we
were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of
water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the
riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may
lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time
appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and
before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but
memorable experience it was!
2018 · 天津卷
假設你是晨光中學的機器人興趣小組組長李津,你的美國朋友Chris就讀於天津某國際學校,他曾在機器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團隊,參加即將於7月底在天津舉行的世界青少學機器人技能競賽。請根據以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。
(1)比賽的時間、地點;
(2)邀請他的原因;
(3)訓練計劃將發送其郵箱,請他提出建議。
注意:
(1)詞數不少於100;
(2)可適當加入細節,使內容充實、行文連貫;
(3)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
【參考詞彙】
世界青少年機器人技能競賽 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
I』m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【滿分範文】
Dear Chris,
I
have good news to tell you. Targeted at cultivating the teenagers』
interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to
throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World
Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children』s
palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a
good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each
other meanwhile.
I am eager to invite you to join our team for
the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make
acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know,
you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous
competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this
field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By
working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring
others' strong points as well as double our achievements.
If you
are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training
program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could
bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I』m
looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
2018 · 江蘇卷
請閱讀下面文字,並按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。
Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny
Our
family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago,
Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the
information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I
simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we
ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the
case and told me she liked it very much.
Su Hua 6 July, Sunny
This
morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We
found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We
spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot,
and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I
was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?
【寫作內容】
1. 用約30個詞概括上述利用排名(ratings)進行消費的現象;
2. 談談你如何看待消費排名,然後用2-3個理由或論據支撐你的看法。
【寫作要求】
1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;
2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱;
3. 不必寫標題。
【評分標准】
內容完整,語言規范,語篇連貫,詞數適當。
【滿分範文一】
As
a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient
source of information for shopping in our own consumption.
Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on
different consumers.
I tend to consult consumption ratings
whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality
of the proct, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my
beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods.
Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For
example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often
confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and
economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no
doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in
consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often
closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards
ratings.
【滿分範文二】
Nowadays,
most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These
ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in
customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes
unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring
convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable.
As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others』 judgment on the
proct or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need
or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others'
advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be
neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful
manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice
for some to pay for good ratings on their procts or services so as to
increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
G. 高考滿分英語作文
首先來了解一下英語作文的評分標准
各個檔次的給分范圍及標准(滿分25分)
A.第五檔(很好):(21-25分)1.完全完成了試題規定的任務。2.覆蓋所有內容要點。3.應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。4.語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤,但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。6.完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
B.第四檔(好):(16-20分)1.完全完成了試題規定的任務。2.雖漏掉1、2個次重點,但覆蓋所有主要內容。3.應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。4.語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確,些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。6.達到了預期的寫作目的。
C.第三檔(適當):(11-15分)1.基本完成了試題規定的任務。2.雖漏掉一些內容,但覆蓋所有主要內容。3.應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。4.有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,但不影響理解。5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文內容連貫。6.整體而言,基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
D.第二檔(較差):(6-10分)1.未恰當完成試題規定的任務。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容,寫了一些無關內容。3.語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。4.有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響了對寫作內容的理解。5.較少使用語句間的連接成分,內容缺少連貫性。6.信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
E.第一檔(差):(1-5分)1.未完成試題規定的任務。2.明顯遺漏主要內容,寫了一些無關內容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。3.語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。4.較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響對寫作內容的理解。5.缺乏語句間的連接成分,內容不連貫。6.信息未能傳達給讀者。
F.不得分:(0分)未能傳達給讀者任何信息:內容太少,無法評判;寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。
從上面可以看出英語作文高分的關鍵因素及高分秘訣:
三點關鍵定檔因素(不跑題是前提)
詞彙多樣性
語法復雜性
文章連貫性
書面表達的五項秘訣:
審題,遣詞,造句,潤色,謀篇
既然知道了這些關鍵因素和高分秘訣,我們要如何從這些方面入手呢?
審題的概念
拿到試卷後,首先瀏覽書面表達的題目,研究題目要求。正確的審題內容包括A、審標題B、審體裁C、審要點。審標題:看文章是否要求有題目(title)或者主題(topic)能夠確保你不跑題;審體裁:確能夠定文章的文體,為你寫作提供方向。審要點:如果英語作文中,有要求要點的,一般打分時是踩點給分的,准確把握住要點,是高分的一個訣竅。
如何審要點?要做到以下兩個方面:
總結歸納要點:不是所有內容都要寫出來,而是抓住其中的關鍵要點、銜接要點!
理順要點:將提煉的要點按邏輯關系(如時間關系、因果關系、轉折關系等)重新安排,這樣整篇文章看起來就整體有序,流暢自然,更加容易打動評分老師,從而作文分數提升一檔。
構思文章提綱:根據題目的要點,安排好段落和主次關系。要形成良好的分段意識,寫作分段是必須要進行的(2至4段為佳),這樣顯得文章不會擁擠並且層次分明。在行文意識上,要注意突出要點。
遣詞的注意點
不出現語言錯誤
詞語和短語搭配
適度使用加分詞彙
避免詞語重復
H. 求一篇以social practice的英語作文
the Social Practice
In China,every college organizes a social practice activity for its students ring holidays.Some students go into a company to know about how it runs.Some put themselves in a community,doing some voluntary work.Others work as a tutor,making money for their schoolings.All of these would do them good.First,they can gain some abilities and skills from the practice.Second,they are able to have a better understanding of the outside world.Third,some students can earn some money.
Hower,we should make it clear that our aim is to contact with the society.So,we should not expect too much of it.Besides,we should obey the rules there.
謹以此文,歡迎新人!
I. 以practice makes perfect 為話題些篇英語作文
I have read the Chinese fable stories,with 92 in the book short story,each and every story there is a profound truth,let me be greatly inspired and learned knowledge.
Took the oil millionaires this little story,when mainly speak Northern Song dynasty,person with an arrow shot was well he ten eight or nine arrows in the arrow shot,everyone applauded,he seems flattered.Only oil where old man objected,said "arrow you very well just as skilled."He heard these words,heart feeling unhappy,said" what the old man said a few words,why rely on skilled on the line!"Old man took a small gourd on the ground,on the Hulu put a copper coins,then scoop a spoonful of oil,high lift,through the copper coins of the hole in the Middle down into the gourd,oil,copper edges m no spill oil at all.Now,he admired.Read the story,I feel,no matter which one you want to learn skills,to study and train hard,over time,practice makes perfect.Otherwise learn anything