英語高中滿分作文大全

① 英語高考滿分作文(帶翻譯）

Olympics and I
Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What‟s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it‟s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded. My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an indivial, I‟m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.
Sincerely yours,
奧運與我
親愛的朋友，我有一個好消息，告知這里。通過長期的努力，北京已獲得申辦2008年奧運會。作為一個在北京居住，我感到很興奮，你想分享我的快樂。 這一成功意味著很多超過我的游戲。首先，本屆奧運會一定會促進我們的經濟發展。據一些專家最近的一項調查，這項比賽將提高約3％的國內生產總值，提供職位約1.0萬。更重要的是，我們的文化將得到廣泛認可和接受世界各地通過奧運會。人們會走過來從世界的每一個角落，體驗中華文化在各個方面。此外， 5 透過游戲，我們的生活環境將大大改善。例如，公共交通系統會過時。此外，據了解，將種植更多樹木，草地將大大擴大。 我的朋友，我真的期待著這個偉大的奧運會的到來。作為個人，我都願意提供我的任何方式我可以提供幫助。我也希望能邀請大家來到這里，觀看2008年奧運會，此致。

Tourism in China
Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future. Facing this tendency, we can‟t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people‟s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What‟s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
中國旅遊
最近幾年，在中國的趨勢，旅遊業增長較快。根據最近的一項調查顯示一些專家認為，約47％城鎮居民定期作出旅行，28％的農村居民，也使他們的全國巡演。該調查還顯示，更多的人在旅遊有興趣，並會在將來加入軍隊。 面對這一趨勢，我們不能不說是負責任的開發一些潛在因素。在第一個地方，隨著改革開放政策，對中國人民的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他們大多數都不能周遊。更重要的是，它相信，人們現在更積極的態度，旅遊業，把它作為一種生活方式。此外，旅遊設施正在變得越來越好。例如，交通運輸發展迅速，許多景點都已經上市。

What a disaster(災難)!
So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people. What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!
什麼是災難（災難）！
到目前為止，有報道稱，超過60,000人在四川earthquake.What的死亡，再加上數百萬人民有成為homeless.And他們在疾病和其他困難的危險之中。無論如何，感謝所有善良的人們，在國內外形勢已經改變well.But我們仍然在努力工作的，特別是為那些無家可歸的人建造房屋和醫治受傷群眾。 現在我們可以做什麼？除了做好自己的工作做好，我們可以捐錢給them.We堅信，有黨和政府的堅強領導，有全國各族人民的援助國，這將是一個抗震救災的勝利！

The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly. The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008. Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
在我們康明城市家庭平均收入從8000元，每年1998至2008年的20,000元。在此期間，平均家庭支出結構也發生了變化。這些圖形顯示了明顯的變化。 而一般家庭開支的最大部分是住房。 1998年，平均每個家庭花費了其對房屋的收入百分之25。在2880，關於住房支出上升到百分之42。食品和飲料是平均家庭開支第二大的一部分。 1998年，大約18％的平均收入是用於這一項目。 2008年，這一數字增長到30％。由於在費用等增加住房和食物，結果在其他項目的費用已經減少到1998年的57％，至2008年的28％。 因此，可以得出一個結論，隨著收入的增加，人們可以改善他們的生活步驟。但仍是一般家庭要花費很大一部分收入，以滿足基本需要。

② 高考英語作文範文（帶翻譯） 高考英語滿分作文（帶翻譯） 謝謝

Dream and Reality
The beautiful legeng ,Chang'e flying to zhe moon, implies the dream of Chinese to explore the Moon . For thousands of years ,we Chinese have been working hard for it one generation after another . The moon orbiter ,Chang』e One,is named after the fairy . And the successful launch marks the nation's first step towards realizing its dream of exploring the Moon.
Indeed,I've got to learn a lot from this historycal event . First of all ,we need dreams in our life ,for they are the primitive drive to everything .Then we should follow our dreams and nevergive up.At the same time we have to be aware that the path to any success may not be easy to go though .Yet whatever we do ,we should believe 「Where there is a will ,there is a way ." And then try our best to make our dreams come true.
夢想和現實
嫦娥奔月的美麗傳說暗示著中國人民探索月球的夢想。幾千年來，我們中國人一代又一代地 為這個夢想努力著。嫦娥一號月球探測器就是以這個神話故事命名的。嫦娥一號的成功發射標志著中華民族實現探月夢想的第一步。
的確，我從這個歷史事件中學到了很多。首先，我們的生活需要夢想，因為夢想是一切事情的原動力。然後我們要堅持夢想，永遠不要放棄。同時我們必須認識到通往任何成功的路並不是平坦的。然而，不論我們做什麼，我們應該相信「有志者，事竟成」，進我們所能使我們的夢想成為現實。
Please Give up Smoking
Now we often see young men smooking in public places .They think smooking is a pleasure . How silly they are !
Reports show several millions of people die from smoking all over the world every year .Smoking all over the world evevry year .Smoking can cause a lot of illness.
Smoking is also the way leading the youth from bad to worse . In order to get money for smoking,some students take away the money from their parents'pockets.Some of them even steal money from others.
As we all know , smookers can't go on with their work without cigarettets.And the more they smoke,the worse their health will be.
Smoking is our dangerous enemy. Please give up smoking as soon as possible.
請戒煙吧
現在我們經常會看到年輕人在公共場所抽煙。他們認為抽煙是一種樂趣。他們多麼愚蠢呀!
報道顯示全世界每年有幾百萬人死於吸煙。抽煙會引起許多疾病。

③ 2019高考英語滿分作文

2018·全國Ⅰ卷

假定你是李華，你的紐西蘭朋友將去中國朋友家做客，發郵件向你詢問有關習俗。請你回復郵件，內容包括：

1. 到達時間；

2. 合適的禮物；

3. 餐桌禮儀。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Dear Terry,

How
are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to
a Chinese friend』s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some
relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you
are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare
the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you』d better
bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What』s more, when you
are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing
food.

Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 全國Ⅱ卷

你受學生會委託為校宣傳欄「英語天地」寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英語短片Growing Together，內容包括：

1. 短片內容：學校的發展；

2. 放映時間、地點；

3. 歡迎對短片提出意見。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Notice

In
order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding
English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from
2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the
Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin
with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the
development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only
meaningful but also interesting. What』s more, everyone of you will be
welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a
heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

The Student UnionJune

2018 · 全國III卷

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter 來信詢問你校學生體育運動情況。請給他回信，內容包括：

1. 學校的體育場館；

2. 主要的運動項目；

3. 你喜歡的項目。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右：

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Dear Peter,

I
am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last
letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following
information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous
new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our
school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports
events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as
running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I』m intoxicated
with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the
challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 北京卷 · 第一節

假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣，計劃明年來北京上大學。他向你咨詢相關信息。請給他回郵件，內容包括：

1. 表示歡迎；

2. 推薦他上哪所大學；

3. 建議他做哪些准備工作。

注意：1. 詞數不少於50；

2. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【滿分範文】

Dear Jim,

I』m
so glad to hear your future ecation plan in Beijing in your last
letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am
sure you will have the most unforgettable experience ring your
college in Beijing.

Learning your keen interest in Chinese
culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you
where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich
culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The
Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be
helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

I
sincerely hope your dream will come true and it』s my pleasure to show
you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further
questions, please feel free to let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 北京卷 · 第二節

假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你們上周接待外國學生，帶領他們體驗中國茶文化的全過程。

注意：詞數不少於60。

ards
the mountains. 'Don』t be late for supper,' Uncle Paul cried, 'and keep
to the track so that you don』t get lost!' 'OK! ' my dad cried back.
After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so
peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green
pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It
looked like a beautiful woven(編織的）blanket spread out upon the ground
just for us.

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

注意：

（1）所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；

（2）至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語：

（3）續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

（4）續寫完成後，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

Paragraph
1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

Paragraph
2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting
dark._______________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

【滿分範文】

Paragraph 1

Suddenly
a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I
yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse
from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident,
the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed
closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse
and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get
lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.

Paragraph 2

We
had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we
were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of
water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the
riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may
lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time
appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and
before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but
memorable experience it was!

2018 · 天津卷

假設你是晨光中學的機器人興趣小組組長李津，你的美國朋友Chris就讀於天津某國際學校，他曾在機器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團隊，參加即將於7月底在天津舉行的世界青少學機器人技能競賽。請根據以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。

（1）比賽的時間、地點；

（2）邀請他的原因；

（3）訓練計劃將發送其郵箱，請他提出建議。

注意：

（1）詞數不少於100；

（2）可適當加入細節，使內容充實、行文連貫；

（3）開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

【參考詞彙】

世界青少年機器人技能競賽 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you.

I』m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【滿分範文】

Dear Chris,

I
have good news to tell you. Targeted at cultivating the teenagers』
interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to
throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World
Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children』s
palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a
good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each
other meanwhile.

I am eager to invite you to join our team for
the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make
acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know,
you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous
competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this
field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By
working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring
others' strong points as well as double our achievements.

If you
are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training
program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could
bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I』m
looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

2018 · 江蘇卷

請閱讀下面文字,並按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。

Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny

Our
family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago,
Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the
information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I
simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we
ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the
case and told me she liked it very much.

Su Hua 6 July, Sunny

This
morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We
found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We
spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot,
and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I
was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?

【寫作內容】

1. 用約30個詞概括上述利用排名（ratings）進行消費的現象；

2. 談談你如何看待消費排名，然後用2-3個理由或論據支撐你的看法。

【寫作要求】

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱；

3. 不必寫標題。

【評分標准】

內容完整，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。

【滿分範文一】

As
a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient
source of information for shopping in our own consumption.
Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on
different consumers.

I tend to consult consumption ratings
whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality
of the proct, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my
beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods.
Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For
example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often
confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and
economical to buy books according to the ratings.

There is no
doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in
consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often
closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards
ratings.

【滿分範文二】

Nowadays,
most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These
ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in
customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes
unsatisfactory.

There is no denying that such ratings might bring
convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable.
As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others』 judgment on the
proct or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need
or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others'
advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be
neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful
manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice
for some to pay for good ratings on their procts or services so as to
increase their sales.

Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

④ 2013英語高考滿分作文,10篇

I』 a 18 years old high school student. Because the homework is always very difficult and I have always been busy with it, I fail to help my parents doing housework. Also, doing housework can not only relax myself but also take my own responsibility. Therefore, I plan to start doing housework this week. 
This morning, I got up very early. After having had my breakfast with my parents, I firstly sorted out and washed all my clothes having to be washed. Then I tried my best to get my room in order, which used to be in a mess. After all the things were done, I began to clean all the windows in house. First I collected some old newspaper and then I got on a chair to reach the window. While I was wiping the windows with one hand, I repeated my action with the other hand. After a while, the windows are as transparent as clean water, and the sunshine brightened my face. 
Even though I got tired after I have finished all the housework, I was very happy and thought it was one of the most successful things in my life. Also, doing housework is a good way for me to thank parents for what they have been done for me, and I should bear more burden for them .（陝西）

Sometimes, bad words are to us what knives to our body. I learned this from one of my experiences that I went through ring Senior One school life.
One day, when I was playing volleyball with my classmates in my PE class, I missed several chances that I should have grasped to meet the ball. What surprised me most was that my best friend Peter called me 「fool」. I was so hurt that I almost accepted the fact that our friendship came to an end. It was my classmates』 comfort and persuasion as well as Peter』s apology and explanation that helped me realize he did have a strong sense of cooperation and teamwork. It wasn』t long before I forgave him and we were again close friends as ever.
From this story, I am definitely convinced that bad words really have bad influence on us, and that only with a good understanding of them can we get through and get along well（湖北）

⑤ 英語高考滿分作文

簡述經濟法的主要內容

⑥ 高考滿分英語作文30篇及翻譯

Dream and Reality
The beautiful legeng ,Chang'e flying to zhe moon, implies the dream of Chinese to explore the Moon . For thousands of years ,we Chinese have been working hard for it one generation after another . The moon orbiter ,Chang』e One,is named after the fairy . And the successful launch marks the nation's first step towards realizing its dream of exploring the Moon.
Indeed,I've got to learn a lot from this historycal event . First of all ,we need dreams in our life ,for they are the primitive drive to everything .Then we should follow our dreams and nevergive up.At the same time we have to be aware that the path to any success may not be easy to go though .Yet whatever we do ,we should believe 「Where there is a will ,there is a way ." And then try our best to make our dreams come true.
夢想和現實
嫦娥奔月的美麗傳說暗示著中國人民探索月球的夢想。幾千年來，我們中國人一代又一代地 為這個夢想努力著。嫦娥一號月球探測器就是以這個神話故事命名的。嫦娥一號的成功發射標志著中華民族實現探月夢想的第一步。
的確，我從這個歷史事件中學到了很多。首先，我們的生活需要夢想，因為夢想是一切事情的原動力。然後我們要堅持夢想，永遠不要放棄。同時我們必須認識到通往任何成功的路並不是平坦的。然而，不論我們做什麼，我們應該相信「有志者，事竟成」，進我們所能使我們的夢想成為現實。
Please Give up Smoking
Now we often see young men smooking in public places .They think smooking is a pleasure . How silly they are !
Reports show several millions of people die from smoking all over the world every year .Smoking all over the world evevry year .Smoking can cause a lot of illness.
Smoking is also the way leading the youth from bad to worse . In order to get money for smoking,some students take away the money from their parents'pockets.Some of them even steal money from others.
As we all know , smookers can't go on with their work without cigarettets.And the more they smoke,the worse their health will be.
Smoking is our dangerous enemy. Please give up smoking as soon as possible.
請戒煙吧
現在我們經常會看到年輕人在公共場所抽煙。他們認為抽煙是一種樂趣。他們多麼愚蠢呀!
報道顯示全世界每年有幾百萬人死於吸煙。抽煙會引起許多疾病。抱歉只有兩篇！

⑦ 近幾年英語高考滿分作文

2007年高考英語讀寫任務題品讀
一、試題：第二節 讀寫任務(共l小題，滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文，然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Dear Ari,
As you sleep in my arms, I'm amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.
I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That's why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means "lion". It's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.
Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.
Finally your mother's labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (臍帶) and put you in your mother's arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.
And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. Welcome to the world, Ari.
Love,
Daddy
[寫作內容]
假設你就是信中的Ari，父親在你出生的時候寫了這封信。今天是父親50歲生日，你准備以寫信的方式，祝賀他的生日。以下是信的內容(信的開頭和結尾已經為你寫好)：
1．以約30個詞概括父親在他信中對你的期望；
2．以約120個詞表達你對父親的感恩，並包括如下要點：
(1)讀信後的感受；
(2)以你自己成長的經歷說明你的感受；
(3)表達你對父親的感激和祝福。
[寫作要求]
1．作文中可使用自己的親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子；
2．信中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
[評分標准]
概括准確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。

二、評分標准
項目 分值 評分標准
概括 5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息, 沒有增加與原文無關的信息, 沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結構正確，行文規范。
4 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 沒有增加與原文無關的信息, 沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結構正確，行文規范。
3 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 但包含一些不相關的信息, 有個別句子抄自原文。語言結構基本正確，行文比較規范。
2 不能按照要求概括主要信息, 包含較多不相關的信息, 有較多的抄襲原。語言結構不夠正確，行文不夠規范。
0---1 沒有按照要求概括主要信息, 基本是不相關的信息, 大多數句子都照抄原文。語言結構不正確，行文不規范。
寫作 18---20 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內容要點。主題明確，內容豐富。詞彙豐富，用詞得當。能有效運用合適的語言結構，而且沒有（或較少）語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性好。
14---17 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內容要點。主題明確，個別內容不準確或者不相關。詞彙較豐富，有個別用詞錯誤。較好地運用了合適的語言結構，有少許的語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性較好。
11---13 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內容要點。主題比較明確，個別內容不準確或不相關。詞彙較豐富，有個別用詞錯誤。較好地運用合適的語言結構，有少許的語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性較好。
7---10 包含題目所給的部分內容要點。主題基本明確，有些內容不準確或者不相關。詞彙有限，有較多的用詞錯誤。語言結構出現較多的語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性差。
4---6 只包含題目所給的個別內容要點。多數內容不相關或者不準確。文章有些地方照抄原文。詞彙貧乏，有較多的用詞錯誤。大多數的句子出現語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性差。
1---3 只包含與題目所給要點內容有關的一些單詞。主題不明確，文章基本照抄原文。詞彙及其貧乏，基本不能正確用詞。幾乎沒有正確的句子。篇章結構零亂。
0 以下幾種情況，給0分：
1） 完全抄襲原文（或其它文章）
2） 文不對題
3） 只寫一些零散的單詞，完全沒有表達完整的內容。

三、任務型寫作評卷場評分細則
◆概括
1．完全不理解，照抄原文 0分
2．死板機械地抄，不改變原文順序 1分
3．改變主語或賓語的抄為主 2 分 (靈活地抄)
4．稍為改動總體的抄 3分
5．改變句子、用詞，重新排列組織 4—5分 (字數不特別要求)
◆120字自主寫作
1．感想，語言，內容，連貫性
2．語言為主, 內容的相關部分，綜合考慮連貫
3．首先看語言是否合格
4．內容： 讀後的感受, 成長的感受, 感激和祝福
5．用了閱讀理解中的素材不算抄襲
6．內容偏離的時候以語言為主

四、學生習作選評給分情況
1 ( 1+5=6分)
Dear Dad,
On this date of your 50th birthday, Mom gave me the letter. You wrote me when I was born 18 years ago. In your letter, you hope me up to successful and brave in society, and you named me is Ari, means strong and do well for myself, you wish I love you and Mommy.
I very love you and mother, because not only you and Mom love me, but also you do every think is e to me. When I was ill, you and Mom are very busy for me, give me best love. Now I was 18 years ago. I become a strong and can do well for myself. I think you for you and Mom. I』ll use my all love for you, but sorry, I didn』t can earn the money for you, because I have to study. So hope you wait me.
I wish you strong and healthy all the life.

2 ( 2+9=11分)
In you letter, Daddy, I know that you hope me grow strong and eager grasp. You love me, you give the best for me. You imagining I will be like a lion who is brave.
I felt very warm when I reading your letter. In my growing road you give me the best. When I in trouble, you give the help for me first. If I make mistake, you won』t angry for me, you only give me a warm love. In my life, you and Mum』s love is full of it. I can grow up without your love.
Happy birthday, Daddy. I won』t make you sad, I would be a brave and success lion while you hope me to be in the difficult society.
Thank you. Dad. I love you and Mum forever.

3 ( 0+13=13分)
In your letter, I know I was a lovely boy in your life, and I was know that lots of funny things happen before I was born.
In my living, I was happy and lucky, because I believe you on doing a lot things that make me happy. When I was young, you often tell strong to me, you often play games with me though you are very busy. When I was ill, you will take me to the hospital first, when I go to school, you often tell me to take care of myself and don』t break the traffic rude. After I guard from high school, you show me a lot of fresh things that I had never come through.
Words fails me to express my thankful to you. Now, I st hope can live happily and have a strong body. What』s more, wish you will healthy forever.

4 ( 3+16=19分)
Dear Dad,
You encouraged me to be a brave and successful person. You were eager to see my good performances, which should be strong, seize every opportunity, do well for everybody. I keep your words on my mind and work hard all these years.
I』m totally moved by your words, my great father. I』m touched by your happiness, gave wishes and love in the letter.
Words fail to express how I appreciate you. I remember the day you taught me swimming. You put me into the centre of the swimming poor, just as if I were a brave lion and left me. I struggled to catch you but I couldn』t. You lifted me up a while and then back to water. I was able to swim that day and I was strong both physically and mentally. Thank you, Dad.
Today is your 50th birthday. I』m here to say, thank you, thank you for your love and sorrow. Thank you for the warmth and health. I can』t be here without you. I love you.
Wish you a happy birthday and happy all your life. Wish you in good health everyday. Happy birthday to you.

5 ( 5+18=23分)
In your letter, you wished me to be strong-minded and successful. You were looking forward seeing me tight for my future bravely and do well for myself and others.
After reading this letter, I feel quite shocked at your expectation on me. I also feel ashamed for not having performed well to meet your demand.
I still remember when I was in primary school, I failed to apply myself to studying. I was addicated to computer games. As a conseque I soon became the last one in my class. You didn』t abuse me at all. On the contrary, you teached me that studying was the most important object at the moment and encouraged me to study hard. Only when I have read your letter did I realize that I behaved so bad at that time and you were so sad to see I didn』t do well for myself.
I can』t help expressing my gratitude and sending my best wishes to you, wish you healthy and happy. I promise that I will spare no effort to satisfy you demand of being a brave and successful person.