『壹』 寫了篇英語作文,請高手幫忙修改,謝謝!
My name is Siyuan Cao. I am an engineer. I have graated from Hunan University for two years. When I was a student, I thought campus life was rather ll, and I didn't like my specialty, too. But now I miss my university life and my classmates very much.
On September 10, 2003, I entered Hunan University, and begun my campus life. During those seemingly ll four years, I had got a lot of knowledge. In my spare time, I used to stay at library or climb Yuelu Mountain with my friends. Sometimes, I visited Yuelu Academy, one of the greatest academies in Chinese History which has ecated so many great men like Zeng Guofan, Zuo Zongtang, Cai E and so on.
I will never forget the day of June 25, 2007 when I graated from Hunan University. If there is a chance， I will go back to my Alma Master, visit my teachers and have a good view of Yuelu Mountain again.
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『貳』 急求2篇描寫中國的法語文章
先傳上去一篇：
Plus qu'un simple destination de voyage, la Chine est un pays é. Berceau de la plus ancienne civilisation monde, ce pays peut à juste titre s'enorgueillir d'un patrimoine artistique, architecturale, linguistiuqe, culinaire d'une grande richesse. Ce territoire immense demeure encore suffisamment sauvage pour satisfaire vos goûts de l'aventure.
Aujourd'hui, la Chine s'affirment et prend conscience de l'importance de sa place dans le monde, une importance dont témoignent ses nouveaux positionneements sur la scène international: elle a rejoint en 2001 l'Organisation mondiale commerce, Beijing a organisé les Jeux Olypiques et Shanghai va organiser l"Exposition universelle de 2010. Les sites touristiques bénéficient d'investissement massifs. La qualité des transports s'est considérablement ameliorée ces dix dernières années, les trajets s'effectuent beaucoup plus rapidement et dans des conditions plus confortables.
『叄』 介紹福州英語作文
介紹福州(About Fuzhou)
Fuzhou is the provincial capital of Fujian Province, it is a well-known city with 2200 histories of more than years. Lie in the southeast of our country, the straits west bank of gulf very much, population is more than 6,600,000. It is moist that angry Hou is warm, green tree is evergreen. The scenic spots and historical sites are numerous, there were a lot of famous personages in history, for instance: Lin Zexu, Yan Fu, Lin Juemin, thanks Bing Xin,etc.. Laudatory title enjoying " banyan city " in Fuzhou.
[譯文]
福州是福建省省會,是一座擁有2200多年歷史的名城.位於我國東南部,太灣海峽西岸,人口660多萬人.氣侯溫暖濕潤,綠樹常青.名勝古跡眾多,歷史上有許多著名的人物,如:林則徐,嚴復,林覺民,謝冰心等.福州享有"榕城"的美稱.
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