2005浙江英語高考滿分作文

A. 求2000到2005年的高考滿分作文

給你篇精彩的

赤 兔 之 死

建安二十六年，公元221年，關羽走麥城，兵敗遭擒，拒降，為孫權所害。其坐騎赤兔馬為孫權賜予馬忠。
一日，馬忠上表：赤兔馬絕食數日，不久將亡。孫權大驚，急訪江東名士伯喜。此人乃伯樂之後，人言其精通馬語。
馬忠引伯喜回府，至槽間，但見赤兔馬伏於地，哀嘶不止。眾人不解，惟伯喜知之。伯喜遣散諸人，撫其背嘆道：「昔日曹操做《龜雖壽》，『老驥伏櫪，志在千里。烈士暮年，壯心不已』，吾深知君念關將軍之恩義，欲從之於地下。然當日呂奉先白門樓殞命，亦未見君如此相依，為何今日這等輕生，豈不負君千里之志哉？」
赤兔馬哀嘶一聲，嘆道：「予嘗聞，『鳥之將死，其鳴也哀；人之將死，其言也善。』今幸遇先生，吾可將肺腑之言相告。吾生於西涼，後為董卓所獲，此人飛揚跋扈，殺少帝，卧龍床，實為漢賊，吾深恨之。」
伯喜點頭，曰：「後聞李儒獻計，將君贈予呂布，呂布乃天下第一勇將，眾皆言，『人中呂布，馬中赤兔。』想來當不負君之志也。」
赤兔馬嘆曰：「公言差矣。呂布此人最是無信，為榮華而殺丁原，為美色而刺董卓，投劉備而奪其徐州，結袁紹而斬其婚使。『人無信不立』，與此等無誠信之人齊名，實為吾平生之大恥！後吾歸於曹操，其手下猛將如雲，卻無人可稱英雄。吾恐今生只辱於奴隸之手，駢死於槽櫪之間。後曹操將吾贈予關將軍。吾曾於虎牢關前見其武勇，白門樓上見其恩義，仰慕已久；關將軍見吾亦大喜，拜謝曹操。操問何故如此，關將軍答曰：『吾知此馬日行千里，今幸得之，他日若知兄長下落，可一日而得見之矣。』其人誠信如此。常言道：『鳥隨鸞鳳飛騰遠，人伴賢良品質高。』吾不敢不以死相報乎？」伯喜聞之，嘆曰：「人皆言關將軍乃誠信之士，今日所聞，果真如此。」
赤兔馬泣曰：「吾嘗慕不食周粟之伯夷、叔齊之高義。玉可碎而不可損其白，竹可破而不可毀其節。士為知己而死，人因誠信而存，吾安肯食吳粟而苟活於世間？」言罷，伏地而亡。
伯喜放聲痛哭，曰：「物猶如此，人何以堪？」後奏於孫權，權聞之亦泣：「吾不知雲長誠信如此，今此忠義之士為吾所害，吾何面目見天下蒼生？」
後孫權傳旨，將關羽父子並赤兔馬厚葬。

滿分的 高手可以訪寫。。。

B. 2007~2010高考英語滿分作文 10篇（含題目）

北京卷
【試題回放】

第一節情景作文

假設你是李華，要給英國筆友Harry寫封信，介紹你班兩位同學競選班長的過程。請按下圖順序描述。

注意：

1.信的開頭已為你寫好；

2.詞數不少於60。

提示詞：競選班長monitor election

Dear Harry,

How are things going?

Last Monday,

Best wishes,

Li Hua

第二節開放作文

請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數不少於50。

In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.
【滿分範文】
第一節情景作文

滿分文(一)

Dear Harry,

How are things going?

Last Monday, my class held the monitor election, a fierce competition between two students really. First, the two candidates, Liu Dong and Wang Hong, gave their election speeches respectively. Then other students wrote a name of the candidate on paper and put it into a box. The teacher counted the number of pieces of paper voting for the two candidates fairly. Finally, Wang Hong got 28 votes while Liu Dong got 15. So Wang Hong became our monitor. It was an interesting election, isn

C. 近年高考英語滿分作文十篇

一
假設你叫王明，昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京來學習中文。他想了解如何學好中文。請你用英文給他回復一封e-mail，介紹學習中文的體會和方法，提出你的建議，以及表達你幫助他學好中文的願望。
英語作文網

Dear David,

I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

二
請你根據下面的提綱，以「我的家鄉」為題，寫一篇100—120字的短文。
提綱：
(1) 家鄉的地理位置；
(2) 解放前的情況；
(3) 解放後的變化；
(4) 對家鄉的感情。

My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

三

健康對於我們每個人來說是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙於工作而忽略了這個問題，你很為他們擔憂。請你以此為話題，並結合提示給他們寫一封信。

提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是開車或坐車；

2.每周至少去體育館鍛煉一次，或打球、或游泳；

3.飲食要健康；

4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。

要求：1.短文結構完整，意思連貫，語言流暢，語法准確，符合邏輯；

2.80—100詞左右；

3.開頭和結尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Dad(Mum),

You』re so busy every day that you don』t pay much attention to your health. I』m worried about your health all the time. I』d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn』t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You』d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What』s more, it』s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

四
Dear Dad(Mum),

You』re so busy every day that you don』t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I』d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.

I』m looking forward to receiving your letter.

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

五

隨著陽光體育運動在全國開展，政府對中學生身體素質有所下降這個問題給予了高度重視，提出了這樣的標語：「EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY」。同學們參加了各種體育鍛煉之後，校園里出現了可喜的變化，強身健體，增強了學習效果，校園生活豐富了。請你報道一下學校開展這一活動的情況。

注意：1. 詞數80—100左右。

2. 要求文章結構合理、內容通順、句子連貫。

參考詞彙：build up one』s body strength 強健身體

rece diseases 減少疾病

As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play footb

D. 江蘇13年英語高考滿分作文

今天老師給我們留了個作文，題目是驕傲使人落後，我放學回到竭力放下書回包，坐在書桌前開始想答了起來，不知道該怎麼寫，我認真的想驕傲為什麼會使人落後！ 媽媽看見我在發呆，走過來問我怎麼了，我說老師留了個作文題目是驕傲使人落後，不知道怎麼寫，媽媽給我講了好多故事使我知道了什麼是驕傲使人落後。我想到了我上次考試得了100分，而這次考試我得只有96分的原因，那就是驕傲的後果，總認為老師的題目太簡單，上課開小差，作業也不認真了。爸爸教育我說驕傲會使人失去上進心，看不到自已的缺點，滿足於現在，學生就是不好好學習，只有虛心才能使人進步。 聽了爸爸說過的話，我明白了牆壁上貼的條幅「驕傲使人落後，虛心使人進步」的道理，我對自己說以後要好好學習，不管做了什麼事都不能驕傲，因為驕傲會使人落後的。

E. 近幾年英語高考滿分作文

2007年高考英語讀寫任務題品讀
一、試題：第二節 讀寫任務(共l小題，滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文，然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Dear Ari,
As you sleep in my arms, I'm amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.
I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That's why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means "lion". It's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.
Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.
Finally your mother's labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (臍帶) and put you in your mother's arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.
And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. Welcome to the world, Ari.
Love,
Daddy
[寫作內容]
假設你就是信中的Ari，父親在你出生的時候寫了這封信。今天是父親50歲生日，你准備以寫信的方式，祝賀他的生日。以下是信的內容(信的開頭和結尾已經為你寫好)：
1．以約30個詞概括父親在他信中對你的期望；
2．以約120個詞表達你對父親的感恩，並包括如下要點：
(1)讀信後的感受；
(2)以你自己成長的經歷說明你的感受；
(3)表達你對父親的感激和祝福。
[寫作要求]
1．作文中可使用自己的親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子；
2．信中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
[評分標准]
概括准確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。

二、評分標准
項目 分值 評分標准
概括 5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息, 沒有增加與原文無關的信息, 沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結構正確，行文規范。
4 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 沒有增加與原文無關的信息, 沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結構正確，行文規范。
3 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 但包含一些不相關的信息, 有個別句子抄自原文。語言結構基本正確，行文比較規范。
2 不能按照要求概括主要信息, 包含較多不相關的信息, 有較多的抄襲原。語言結構不夠正確，行文不夠規范。
0---1 沒有按照要求概括主要信息, 基本是不相關的信息, 大多數句子都照抄原文。語言結構不正確，行文不規范。
寫作 18---20 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內容要點。主題明確，內容豐富。詞彙豐富，用詞得當。能有效運用合適的語言結構，而且沒有（或較少）語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性好。
14---17 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內容要點。主題明確，個別內容不準確或者不相關。詞彙較豐富，有個別用詞錯誤。較好地運用了合適的語言結構，有少許的語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性較好。
11---13 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內容要點。主題比較明確，個別內容不準確或不相關。詞彙較豐富，有個別用詞錯誤。較好地運用合適的語言結構，有少許的語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性較好。
7---10 包含題目所給的部分內容要點。主題基本明確，有些內容不準確或者不相關。詞彙有限，有較多的用詞錯誤。語言結構出現較多的語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性差。
4---6 只包含題目所給的個別內容要點。多數內容不相關或者不準確。文章有些地方照抄原文。詞彙貧乏，有較多的用詞錯誤。大多數的句子出現語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性差。
1---3 只包含與題目所給要點內容有關的一些單詞。主題不明確，文章基本照抄原文。詞彙及其貧乏，基本不能正確用詞。幾乎沒有正確的句子。篇章結構零亂。
0 以下幾種情況，給0分：
1） 完全抄襲原文（或其它文章）
2） 文不對題
3） 只寫一些零散的單詞，完全沒有表達完整的內容。

三、任務型寫作評卷場評分細則
◆概括
1．完全不理解，照抄原文 0分
2．死板機械地抄，不改變原文順序 1分
3．改變主語或賓語的抄為主 2 分 (靈活地抄)
4．稍為改動總體的抄 3分
5．改變句子、用詞，重新排列組織 4—5分 (字數不特別要求)
◆120字自主寫作
1．感想，語言，內容，連貫性
2．語言為主, 內容的相關部分，綜合考慮連貫
3．首先看語言是否合格
4．內容： 讀後的感受, 成長的感受, 感激和祝福
5．用了閱讀理解中的素材不算抄襲
6．內容偏離的時候以語言為主

四、學生習作選評給分情況
1 ( 1+5=6分)
Dear Dad,
On this date of your 50th birthday, Mom gave me the letter. You wrote me when I was born 18 years ago. In your letter, you hope me up to successful and brave in society, and you named me is Ari, means strong and do well for myself, you wish I love you and Mommy.
I very love you and mother, because not only you and Mom love me, but also you do every think is e to me. When I was ill, you and Mom are very busy for me, give me best love. Now I was 18 years ago. I become a strong and can do well for myself. I think you for you and Mom. I』ll use my all love for you, but sorry, I didn』t can earn the money for you, because I have to study. So hope you wait me.
I wish you strong and healthy all the life.

2 ( 2+9=11分)
In you letter, Daddy, I know that you hope me grow strong and eager grasp. You love me, you give the best for me. You imagining I will be like a lion who is brave.
I felt very warm when I reading your letter. In my growing road you give me the best. When I in trouble, you give the help for me first. If I make mistake, you won』t angry for me, you only give me a warm love. In my life, you and Mum』s love is full of it. I can grow up without your love.
Happy birthday, Daddy. I won』t make you sad, I would be a brave and success lion while you hope me to be in the difficult society.
Thank you. Dad. I love you and Mum forever.

3 ( 0+13=13分)
In your letter, I know I was a lovely boy in your life, and I was know that lots of funny things happen before I was born.
In my living, I was happy and lucky, because I believe you on doing a lot things that make me happy. When I was young, you often tell strong to me, you often play games with me though you are very busy. When I was ill, you will take me to the hospital first, when I go to school, you often tell me to take care of myself and don』t break the traffic rude. After I guard from high school, you show me a lot of fresh things that I had never come through.
Words fails me to express my thankful to you. Now, I st hope can live happily and have a strong body. What』s more, wish you will healthy forever.

4 ( 3+16=19分)
Dear Dad,
You encouraged me to be a brave and successful person. You were eager to see my good performances, which should be strong, seize every opportunity, do well for everybody. I keep your words on my mind and work hard all these years.
I』m totally moved by your words, my great father. I』m touched by your happiness, gave wishes and love in the letter.
Words fail to express how I appreciate you. I remember the day you taught me swimming. You put me into the centre of the swimming poor, just as if I were a brave lion and left me. I struggled to catch you but I couldn』t. You lifted me up a while and then back to water. I was able to swim that day and I was strong both physically and mentally. Thank you, Dad.
Today is your 50th birthday. I』m here to say, thank you, thank you for your love and sorrow. Thank you for the warmth and health. I can』t be here without you. I love you.
Wish you a happy birthday and happy all your life. Wish you in good health everyday. Happy birthday to you.

5 ( 5+18=23分)
In your letter, you wished me to be strong-minded and successful. You were looking forward seeing me tight for my future bravely and do well for myself and others.
After reading this letter, I feel quite shocked at your expectation on me. I also feel ashamed for not having performed well to meet your demand.
I still remember when I was in primary school, I failed to apply myself to studying. I was addicated to computer games. As a conseque I soon became the last one in my class. You didn』t abuse me at all. On the contrary, you teached me that studying was the most important object at the moment and encouraged me to study hard. Only when I have read your letter did I realize that I behaved so bad at that time and you were so sad to see I didn』t do well for myself.
I can』t help expressing my gratitude and sending my best wishes to you, wish you healthy and happy. I promise that I will spare no effort to satisfy you demand of being a brave and successful person.

F. 幫我收集20篇高考英語滿分作文

Pollution of environment These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more, since (the instrial revolution ),it is natural that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms. The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment). To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthing. We should do something such as (planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.

G. 跪求20篇簡短的高考英語滿分作文範文。

2009年廣東高考英語滿分作文
Should tourists take photos with animals？
Koalas in wildlife parks can『t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists』 behaviour illegal to protect the animals.
When people are visiting wildlife parks， they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals ring their visit.
If I were an animal in the wildlife park， I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn『t feel happy at all！ I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.
However， I don『t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can』t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time， ring which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.

2009年的年廣東高考英語滿分作文
遊客應該給動物拍照嗎？
考拉在野生動物公園不能入睡，因為他們令人不安的遊客不斷。不結盟運動思想，使遊客的非法行為，以保護動物。
當人們正在訪問的野生動物公園，他們喜歡與動物拍照留念。原因是多種多樣的。一些人可能認為拍照與動物的有趣的對比拍照與其他人。其他人可能認為，這將是一個有趣的經驗，與動物拍照訪問期間。
如果我是一種動物的野生動物園，我會感到惱火的人不斷拍照時，與我。我的生活將得到極大的影響，我不會感到高興了！我想我應該有一些私人的空間和時間來放鬆消遣。
但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布採取與動物的照片。遊客支付門票參觀野生動物園，將是很可惜的，如果他們不能的照片，一種動物。也許野生動物公園可以設置一些特殊的時間，在此期間，遊客可以與動物的照片。它既能滿足遊客和保護動物。

最近，你校同學正在參加某英文報組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票?請你根據下表所提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。
60％的同學認為 40％的同學認為
1．不應該收門票
2公園是公眾休閑的地方
3l如收門票，需建大門、圍牆，會影響城市形象 1．應收門票，但票價不要太高
2．支付園林工人工資
3．購新花木

注意：1．信的開頭已為你寫好。
2．詞數：100左右。
3．參考詞彙：門票---entrance fee
Dear Editor．
I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance
fee should be charged for parks．

高考滿分作文1(1號題)
Dear editor,
I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people』s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

高考英語滿分作文第二篇
Dear editor,
I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

Dear editor,
I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn』t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I』d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
高考英語滿分作文第四篇

Dear editor, I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public』s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?
Yours truly, Li Hua
Dear editor,
I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those who don』t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can』t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city』s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

H. 有沒有浙江近幾年的高考英語滿分作文

2013年高考英語滿分作文（浙江卷）題目

命題作文：』mProudof。通過對這件事情的闡述，談談自己的引以為自豪的原因以及從中得到了怎樣的啟示。看看自己的作文和英語作文範文差距在哪裡呢。了解到不足，才會改正才會更加有進步的空間。

One Thing I』m Proud ofI still remember how I became a good table tennis player.

The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.

I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.」

I. 2009浙江高考滿分作文共多少篇 題目分別是什麼

2009年浙江高考滿分作文
送你一個滿分作文網http://e.people.com.cn/GB/8216/28339/去看看吧！！！！！！！

【原題解讀】
1、「綠葉」
兒子（女兒）、學生、遊子、赤子……
2、「根」
母親、老師（教練）、家鄉、祖國……
3、「綠葉對根的情意」
母子情（親情）、師生情、桑梓情（熱愛家鄉、鄉愁）、愛國情（遊子、愛國赤子）……
【考點解析】

這是一篇新材料作文，浙江卷自04年自主命題開始，都是話題作文與命題作文，新材料作文還是第一次。從本質上講，新材料作文脫胎於材料作文，但又不限制文體，同時保持了話題作文的開放性「三自」，更具靈活性、新鮮性與開放性，也更能發揮考生的主觀能動性。但新材料作文因其「新」的特點，容易給考生設置一些無形的障礙。筆者認為要寫好這篇文章，必須注意以下幾個方面：
第一：必須全面理解材料，不能脫離整體材料的意思另起話題，但可以選擇一個側面、一個角度構思作文。就是說要從材料中提煉觀點而不是話題。如有的學生從材料中引出話題「情意」，則有可能偏題。
第二，必須考慮綠葉與根的雙元關系、辯證關系。根滋養撫育綠葉，綠葉才得以蔥綠昌茂，綠葉心懷感恩之情，縱使飄零一生，也眷戀不忘根對自己的呵護。根作用於綠葉，綠葉反作用於根，這是相互的。有很多考生應該會提煉出「感恩」的觀點，比如「遊子對故土的感激眷戀」、「華僑對國家的回報感恩」「孩子對母親的依戀愛戴」等等都可以，但是像一般的幫助別人，比如朋友之間的互相關心，情人之間的互相體貼，陌路人一個友情的微笑，身處尷尬時一份溫馨的憐憫等等就與材料中的「感恩」之味有點距離，因為它們都脫離了「綠葉與根」的關系。

第三，要寫好這篇文章，對考生的的思維能力要求較強。近幾年浙江省命題導向顯而易見的，那就是：激活學生庫存的知識和經驗、培養學生的創新精神和關注現實的認識觀，引導學生心靈的真善美和思維的開闊和多樣。如果考生能超越 「感恩」，能從材料中品出根與綠葉的延續性關系——「給予與吸收，及再給予」，將個體心理上升為一種群體情感傾向，比如「鄉愁的文化心理」等，則能寫出一定的思想深度，容易得高分。

總之，在全國大范圍一片話題與命題的作文大潮中，今年的浙江卷昂揚走在「新材料作文」的行列，與全國卷Ⅱ及上海卷一起，情理兼重，相信積極參與生活，思考生活，注重生活積累與情感積淀的考生定能交出一份滿意的答卷。

滿分作文一

歸情

我到底該用怎樣的情感，摻雜多少理智，才能將這份深植入每朵靈魂深處的情感說清道明。

十六歲那年出遠門，懷揣新鮮感飛至大陸另一端去尋訪未知的世界。彼時還未理順心情，只當是一次游歷，所以心情愉悅地在異地街頭說著外語過著外國人的生活。還記得那是一個下雨的日子，我站在街頭無人陪同，周圍的人語言不通，滿世界都是陌生的字眼。腦海中突然泛起了韓少功在法國的掙扎——

「全世界都是法語、法語、法語!……而我的心，卻在歸途……」

我突然明白了，那種掙扎在內心的鄉土情結有多麼強大，那種歸情，實質上就是一個民族的凝聚力最完美的體現。

十六歲的我在歸情中懂得了我對故土的熱愛，也讓我突然領悟了上一輩的離鄉之人的愁思之源。當我看見年近古稀的餘光中老人堅定地在廈大校慶上朗誦他那廣為人知的詩作《鄉愁》時，不知不覺我的眼眶盈滿了淚水;當我看見在異國他鄉的僑胞們在傳遞火炬時的護跑，我彷彿看見了五星紅旗之下一顆顆忠貞的赤子之心向著太陽灼灼燃燒……

歸情，這份深沉的愛，在思鄉之子的心中沉澱醞釀許久的歲月里，撐起一個民族不敗的雄姿。

所以，我想我是懂得索尼爾仁琴在歸國那一剎的沉默的，我懂他在那份悲欣交集的歸情得以實現之時的激動與哀嘆;所以，我想我是敬佩錢學森的，敬佩他「豈以禍福避趨之」的勇敢的大義，更敬佩他身上那附屬著的中國人的傲骨。是那一份落葉歸根式的歸屬感集聚了人心的力量，才能讓索氏在俄國灰暗天空中樹起精神孑立的一幟，才能讓我國的軍事科學方面有了重大成就，從而推進了一個國家的崛起，一個民族的復興與強大。

懂得這份純潔的歸情，讓生命最初最美的回憶常在我心;

深藏這份厚重的歸情，讓民族最強最醇的牽引常系我心;

釋放這份歸情，這份屬於每一個有愛的靈魂的頌歌。記住，這是你對你故鄉的熱愛，也是故鄉的人對你遠遠輕輕、真摯無聲的掛念和祝福……

【點評】

文章飽含深厚忠貞的赤子之心。舉例所及韓少功、餘光中、護跑僑胞、索尼爾仁琴、錢學森……看似信手拈來，點到為止，實則始終貫串「歸情」，覆蓋古今中外，意味深長。成熟雅緻的語言，純潔厚重的歸情，寫就富有真情意韻的散文，表現出相當高的寫作水準，而且是在緊張的高考時刻完成的，難能可貴！

滿分作文二

脈脈鄉情

浩浩的江水載著揚帆的船兒遠征，然而船兒明白來時燈塔的方向是心底最依戀的港灣；碧藍的天空承載著鴿子飛翔的雙翅，然而家的方向是如此清晰。正如那江水中流淌著的依戀，天空中掠過的思念，當一個熟悉的名詞在腦際浮現，心中總是有些悸動。

曾經是如此驚詫於葉落的壯美，感懷於那極致的美麗。枝杈與土地僅有幾米的距離，然而葉兒毅然掙脫，任風翻飛，它飛旋：任車將它壓得粉碎，它依然高歌，向著根的方向飛旋著動容的美麗。我問落葉，落葉不語，那該是由內散發的情愫，慢慢體會。

直到那一年，陽光融融，拂過內心小小的激動，春風暖暖，卻吹過心底淡淡的苦澀，門前的柏樹窸窣作響，搖曳著內心的不舍，那一天我們舉家遷往城裡。遠去了清晨那晶瑩的露珠，遠去了熏豆茶在鄉土味中蒸騰出的清韻雅志，遠去了春雨下撐著傘漫步於田埂的愜意。鑽進門前等候的車內，望著陽光映襯出的古屋的倩影，記憶便塵封在這安詳佇立的院落，在那漸漸遠去的方向，我落淚了，止不住地落，從心底流淌出的。

遠離了家鄉，在一個陌生的城市一切都是那麼新奇，可心中似乎是愈加想家了。這時我彷彿能夠真切得體會到落葉掙脫枝頭的毅然，是家的力量，是根的力量呀。林語堂的一篇隨筆曾給予了我深深地慰藉。小時候的他住在鼓浪嶼，離海很近，他常常和父親在海邊傾聽海的沉吟，他常問父親海的那邊的圖景，他嚮往著，終於他飛過了那道海，可海的這邊依然深深地縈繞在他的心底。他說：「當我乘飛機越過這道海時，覺得其實它很小，而當我在海的那頭遙望家鄉時，它是如此渺遠。」短短的一句話是如此意味深長，因為鄉愁是人間最美的語言。

每個生靈都有著它的根，都有著牽引著它的一根絲，流淌著人間最美麗的情感。就在秘魯和玻利維亞的交界處有一條的的喀喀湖，上面住著一群烏魯人，當日月斗轉過多少個春秋他依然生活在浮島上，當印加文明漸去，當溫室效應襲來，他依然堅持固守，他們說：「那是根生長的水域，根是拔不起，移不動的。」

那是多麼簡單卻是那樣動人的話語，帶著那樣尋找的願望，帶著按捺不住的依戀，再回到那片熟悉的土地，手捧一杯清綠的熏豆茶，踱步於鄉間小道，感受著那氤氳的濕氣里彌漫著的泥土的芬芳，猶如泰伊的彌撒曲一般令人銷魂，那一刻我覺得自己被融化了。隨手拔起路邊的野花，我驚詫於那根系的蔥蘢，是它生成了絢麗的色彩，那時我找到了一直追蹤的答案。

青春的我正要揚帆起航，一卷書，一杯茶，蒸騰著脈脈鄉情，在心底一直有燈塔照著我來時的方向。

滿分作文三

綠葉對根的情誼

當爺爺開始品沖泡了四遍的陳年龍井，來吊喪的賓客也已漸漸散盡。媽媽緊緊地牽著我的手，與這一片生我養我的土地作別。我微微地苦笑，原來並沒有永遠的故鄉，我們永遠都是過客。

處理完奶奶的喪事，爺爺也不再堅守這一方留下了無數記憶的土地，順從地跟隨著我們來到城裡。然而，走在鵝卵石鋪就的小路上，我無數次看見了爺爺的回眸，那深沉的眷戀與無以言表的無奈，最終都化為一滴渾濁的淚水，慢慢地倒流進心底。

別了，我聽見這兩個字。

在城裡的爺爺，依舊每日早起。這在習慣了夜生活而對早晨陽光不屑一顧的城市，多少顯得有一些另類。然而，爺爺並不在乎那些異樣的目光，依舊每日穿著洗得發白的藍布舊工作服，穿梭於社區的各個角落。他在樓前被廢棄的土地開墾出一片花田，撒下各種奇奇怪怪的種子，每日伺弄，神情嚴肅得彷彿在完成一項神聖的使命。

只有我知道爺爺的孤獨。因為我也有著這樣孤獨。我懷念故鄉的老屋。那每日清晨婉轉的鶯啼，那木製樓梯凄婉的呻吟，那透過碧綠的竹林灑落的細細碎碎的陽光，那讓人無法忘懷的帶著淡淡清香的泥土氣息。

在這一片鋼筋混凝土中，我已無法找到那樣淳樸與純粹的笑臉，我看見爺爺每次想要揮起的手都在冷漠的擦肩而過中無奈地放下，我總有一種想哭的沖動。當年的爺爺是一片意氣風發的綠葉，他可以暫時離開他的根，去遠方飄盪，尋找屬於他的風景，然而如今，這一片綠葉已然悄悄凋零，他需要回去，與故鄉永遠地廝守在一起。

那是爺爺的八十大壽，親戚朋友們藉此都聚在一起，我眼神流轉，卻尋不見爺爺的身影。悄悄起身出了宴會大廳，我看見爺爺徘徊在角落的窗前。我過去，握住了爺爺的手。爺爺動動嘴唇，說：「我想回家。」彷彿是一個尋求家庇護的孩童。

「好，我們一起回家。」

我從爺爺身上看到了自己的影子，每個人都是一片綠葉，不管飄到多遠，都已被那一方土地打下了深刻的烙印。是的，這是每一片綠葉無奈而又甜蜜的宿命。

那麼，就讓我們帶著綠葉對根的情意打拚，然後在日落之前，牽著手，回家。

【點評】

讀罷全文，覺得每一個字都飽含著真情，這是一種發自內心的情感。作者在緩緩的敘說中，展現出爺爺對故土的眷戀。選取曾使自己感動過的材料而寫出的文章，才能讓人發自內心的感動。

滿分作文四

綠葉對根的情意

根，托起了綠葉，在春天。根，供起了綠葉，在夏天。根，讓綠葉最後的玩一次，那是在秋天，直到冬天，綠葉再回到根的懷抱里，讓它也休息一會兒。
根有自己的想法：托起綠葉，讓它感受到陽光的溫暖，綠葉也有自己的想法，把自身的暖意，帶回給根，讓它享受到泥土外的溫暖。
根常對綠葉說，你遲早會翱翔於天際，而不在於你與我的這段日子裡。綠葉會回答它，我知道，這是最後的煎熬。根笑著，從此托起綠葉。
很快，根就撐不住了，但它仍用最後的力氣，對綠葉說，來吧，撲進我的懷抱，讓我再次保護你吧。綠葉不會，離巢的鳥，怎麼會記得巢的溫暖呢？
直到根不再有力氣托起綠葉，它才會發現，自己不再有機會翱翔於天際了，它會咒罵，對根的軟弱恨之入骨，直到它悠然而下，發現根最後的容貌是如此凄厲，它才會後悔，會用最後的力氣沖向它，安撫它，與它以同長眠。
根會勸綠葉再一次爬上去，它會托起它，但綠葉拒絕了，越高的天際，越會迷失自我，與其忘了自己是綠葉，駕著威聶的風，過著觸不可及，卻隨時會跌落的生活，還不如和你踏實的住在一起。根會哭，會笑，為綠葉的不爭氣而哭，為綠葉的醒悟而笑，它不知道，遙遠的天際，是多麼的危不可及。
綠葉和根在一起的時光是最快樂的，陪伴著托起自己的根，撫慰著為自己受傷的根，說，我同樣飛過。
根會舍棄自己的身軀，為綠葉攔下雨雪，哺育著它，綠葉也會舍棄一切，用自己的身體滋潤著它，它們都會說，來年再見。直至綠葉也在根的懷抱中長眠，根會呼喚它，醒醒吧，綠葉兒，天亮啦，我給你找了許多雨水呢。一滴滴雨水，摻著根的淚水，最後一次流在綠葉身上。
根終於把體內的淚水，都給了綠葉，但綠葉仍舊在睡，而根，也再無法呼喚綠葉了……
來年，根又托起了綠葉，問它：你渴嗎？

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綠葉對根的情意

當綠葉離開根後，感情就變做對根的思念。遠離故國，這對懷有赤子之心的遊子來說簡直就是折磨！所以，我們就很好理解為什麼美國極力挽留科學家錢學森，但他還是不顧一切毅然回到了祖國的懷抱。若是有人罵他傻，那這人一定是沒有離過鄉或是沒心沒肺的人，我就要說一句「誰解其中味」了。
古人有著更強烈的鄉土情結，「月是故鄉明」則是多數文人的心聲，其中把這種情懷抒發到極致的，非南宋著名的愛國詩人文天祥莫屬。他從元軍中逃脫返宋時曾感慨：「使旦夕得正丘首，復何憾哉！復何憾哉！」古人惜墨如金，兩句的感嘆足以看出文山先生對宋土的無比摯愛。盡管古人對於「國」的概念有些狹隘，但我們絕對要對這片「不指南方不肯休」的綠葉致以崇高的敬意。
現在我才明白，葉子在樹上出生成長，即使枯萎了也是緊落在根旁，隨風而去的不過是寥寥數片。「落紅不是無情物，化作春泥更護花」，葉子在生命的最後一刻找到了最好的歸宿。
但也總有幾片葉子不那麼安分，自己在風中縹緲也就算了，卻痴心妄想著把大樹連根拔起。我不知道他們是出於什麼樣的原因，是不甘於寂寞，亦或是受了別的大樹的蠱惑？也布置他們對我們的根有怎樣的情，是不共戴天的恨，或是平白無故的蔑視，還是心理變態的產物？只知道他們的行為可以用「以卵擊石」、「蜉蝣撼樹」或「螳臂當車」來形容。一片綠葉，或多或少總得到過根賜予的營養，但不知受了什麼刺激，忘恩負義地揚言要拔樹或「自成一樹」，這實在是很可笑。這樣蛻變的綠葉在寶島盛產，卻不是蔣介石的錯。盡管委員長帶了「國民政府」逃去了台灣，但他從沒有想過讓台灣獨立，他只是把台灣當成了一根樹干，想著憑借它有一天把*****這棵樹干給鋸了。這當然不可能成功！我們要知道的，是他從沒想讓台灣獨立地成為一棵大樹。如今台灣的「痴夢」，就是蛻變後的「國民葉」「民進葉」的產物，只能嘆一聲可笑！
不管是「國民葉」還是「西藏葉」，不管是過去還是將來，綠葉就是綠葉，永遠成不了大樹，這是我們所堅信的不爭的事實。
我們這些綠葉，既已明白中華古樹之恩，就應挑起繁榮樹葉之擔，終盡落紅護花之責，讓我們的中華寶樹永屹於世界之巔，與日月同輝！