㈠ 英語 英語作文 語法錯誤
你好，
首先，第一句沒有什麼問題，只是我不明白你那句「arouse the attention from all walks of life」是什麼意思專。「Prevention of the mountain」可改成「屬impediment of the mountain」，不過意思差不太多，我只是覺得prevention聽起來有點怪。「Excellent scenery」可改成「magnificent scenery」。下一句「detect」改成「notice」吧，有點奇怪。「Has conquer」應該改成「has conquered」。最後一句我也沒看能解釋一下嗎。
第二段第一句把「but」改成「yet」比較好吧。「Dazzing」是啥，你是想說「dazing」還是「dazzling」？「MaYun is greatly robust」把is改成「was」。剩下的就沒啥問題了！我給你推薦一個查英語語法的網站，還蠻好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下，可能有些我疏漏的點。
如果有幫助到你請採納一下，謝謝！
㈡ 英語作文，找一下錯誤說明一下
第6行hunt 後加 for。hunt 後面接獵物，如hunt deer/ birds/ rabitts 等。hunt for food 覓食。
㈢ 英語作文找錯誤
1. 第一行 Mike為人名要大寫
2. 第二行第二句開頭，than表示比較，估計你是想說then（接著），可是then放在這里也很怪，最好改成and：I am glad to hear from you, and i would like to tell you something about myself.
3. 我已經寫出來了，把第二句的me改成myself.
4. 第三句句首大寫，並把answer後的to去掉，可以把you改成your question，改為：To answer your question...
5. 從about a friend開始，句子就全錯了。應該改為：I want to tell you about a friend of mine, who I think is my role model.
6. I call him "Xiao Gu".另起一句話，不要和上一句連在一起，因為它們沒有並列關系。
7. 文章第六行：He don't like to study應改為He didn't like to study
8. 文章第七行：and always be terrible in his school test.
錯1: be，改為behave
錯2: in，改為on
錯3: test，改為tests
9. 文章第八行：be改為became：but when he became a middle school student.
10. 文章第九行：every things改為everything
11. 文章第十行：I think前面逗號改句號
12. 文章第十一行：去掉also
13. 文章第十一行：it's a big change是單獨一句話，前後都用句號。
14. 倒數第四行：had改為have；learn改為learned；the man改為a man
15. 倒數第二行：he is very kind前加and
16. 倒數第二，三行: And now, 去掉and；或者把and now改為in fact，更好。
17. 倒數第二行：that's all是單獨一句話，後面可加「of him」
以上是語法錯誤。
㈣ 英語作文不能出現錯誤！
如果是通知事情的話
第一句的規范表述是attention,please!專
attention,please!there
is
going
to
be
an
magic
show
in
the
sun
teater
on
friday,and
the
famous
magicain
liu
qian
will
be
there.
if anyone
want
to
get
to
the
show,youcan
come
here
to
register.that's
all,thank
you
!
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㈤ 英語作文《犯錯誤》
Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may make a difference.
still remember how my spoken English got improved. At the beginning, I always kept silent in oral class to avoid making mistakes. Before long my teacher knew about my situation. He encouraged me to speak up regardless of mistakes. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmates would cheer me up and then point out him I could have avoided them. Practice makes perfect. With time going by, I built up my confidence, and now I can talk fluently in English. Just as the saying goes, every bean has its black.
Don』t be afraid of making mistakes. Learn from them, and success is just awaiting us.
請採納 謝謝
㈥ 以「人生中最大的一次錯誤」為題怎麼寫英語作文
人生中處處有選擇，雖然一個選擇不能決定人的一生，但在很大程度上影響了一個人的心情。當我們面對選擇時，心態往往是不同的。而我，則是當機立斷。
清晨，沒有聽到小鳥的叫聲，它們都好像沒睡醒似的。陽光帶著一絲愜意射入窗中。我朦朧地睜開眼睛，急忙洗漱穿戴完畢。出了門，家中的小狗照例跟在身後，依依不捨般地，直到走出大門外。它的兩隻眼睛眨巴眨巴地望著我，似乎有什麼想說的話，我也沒多在意它。它忽然停下了腳步，我想它也許已回家了，便徑直走開了，可是回頭瞧瞧，它似乎迷路了，走的不是回家的路，我本想上前拉住它的，可是看了看鍾表，還有十幾分鍾的時間，擔心上課遲到，也就沒有搭理它，狠心的丟下了它。
一個人做了一次錯誤的選擇，應該分析自己的對與錯，發展好的一面，捨去不好的一面，當面對更多的選擇時，才不會畏懼，才會冷靜做出最好的選擇。
活著是美麗的,工作著是美麗的,必要時,犯錯誤亦不失為一種美麗.正如一輩子不離開地面,自然避開溺水的危險.但只有經歷嗆水和疲憊,才能領略另類生活的風采和快樂. 保留錯誤也是一種美 在漫漫人生旅途中,很多時候,我們是在錯誤中成長,在成長時犯錯.錯誤,在某種意義上講,是成就人生的必然因素.
從我們"驚天動地"來到這個世界,我們就開始犯錯,在一個又一個錯誤中,我們逐漸讓這個陌生的世界成為我們所熟悉而溫馨的家園.錯誤中,我們會跌跌撞撞走路;錯誤中,我們會咿咿呀呀說話;錯誤中,我們用稚嫩的雙手,寫字畫畫;錯誤中,我們會用我們淺薄的智慧去贏得老師家長的誇耀;錯誤中,我們便會用手指敲打鍵盤,我們可以用我們的腿腳博得陣陣喝彩;錯誤中,我們學會用屬於自己的知識步入競爭的行列.
㈦ 英語作文錯誤
You asked me what my favorite things are except study(應該用besides而不是except;what my favorite things are, besides study.)
now,(一個句子的首字母要大寫應該為:Now,)
let me tell you.
One thing is surf(ing) on the internet.Because (In that case,)I can play computer games,talk with my friends and study for(in) this way,(.)
It is so interesting and relaxing(comfortable).The second,(Another thing )is collect(ing) stamps.And I like listen (to the) music.Pop music(music是不可數名詞,不能加s) are(is) very cool,and lassical(classical) music make(s) me relax.
Yours.(,應該用逗號,而且,要另起一行)
最後屬名
㈧ 英語作文――錯誤信息的危害
網路誤導性信息的危害
The harm caused by misleading information online
It is true that the internet has brought us great convenience and efficiency, however, as the data grows at an exponential rate, the severity of misleading information arises.
Deceptive news or tips travel fast online, and worse still, they may shadow our routine life or even hinder the progress of our society. Lack of enough consideration, we are easily misled by false information which always appears in bulk on the webpage. Some will alter their plans to deal with the so-called disaster but only affect their normal life; a few may even go further to violate social security and economic trend. Moreover, if the misleading news isn』t corrected soon, there may be a trust crisis between indivials and the government. For example, the nuclear leakage in Japan in 2011 has caused great panic in Eastern China, where thousands of people went out to rob salt after the rumor that salt can prevent radiation, and ended in a turbulence in the domestic market.
To prevent misleading information spreading, government should set up laws to regulate online news while indivials need to judge independently. Only when they work in hand will the harm of false information be diminished to the end.
㈨ 英語作文找錯誤
原文好像復手機不能復制呢，制你可以去grammar這個網站上把文章放進去，它會跳出來所有錯誤的地方。
我這邊看到大小寫的問題，你再檢查一下，比如最開始的scholar Li 這種頭銜應該都首字母大寫哦。還有時間具體某一天介詞用on吧。