❶ 初一下冊英語作文
1.Dear friend,
My name is Sally.I am from China.I want a pen pal in
Australia.I am 14 years old.I have no brothers or sisters in
my family.My favorite subject in school is science,
because I think it』s very interesting.I like playing the piano
and playing basketball on weekends.How about you? Can
you write and tell me about yourself?
Yours,
Sally
2.My favorite animal is a cat.I have a cat in my family.Her
name is Mimi, I think she is from China.She is two years
old now.She likes to eat fish every day.She is kind of lazy,
but she is very cute.I like playing with it after school.
3.Last summer I went to the beach.My vacation was pretty
good.I went there by bus and my bus trip was
relaxing.The beach was very beautiful.It was sunny, cool
and humid.the people were friendly and the food was
delicious.I enjoyed my vacation very much and I hope to
go there again.
4.描寫方位的短文
My home is on Center Street.On Center Street, there is a
restaurant, a post office and a library.The post office is
between the library and the restaurant.Across from the
post office is a pay phone.A bank is next to the pay
phone.The supermarket is on Fifth Avenue.A hotel is in
front of the supermarket.
5.It is Sunday.The Turners are staying at home.They are
doing different kinds of things.Mr Turner is washing his
car.Mrs Turener is sitting at the table.She is drinking
tea.Bob is talking on the phone.Nancy is sitting near the
pool.She is watching the dog swimming.They are having a
good time.
6.It』s Sunday morning.My mother and I are going to the
park.There are a lot of people in the park.Some children
are running.A dog is running after them.Four women are
sitting there They are talking.Three old men are standing
under a big tree.They are watching the children.Many
young people are dancing.Everyone is having a good
time.We are having a good time, too.
1.親愛的朋友， 我叫莎莉。我來自中國。我想在澳大利亞有一位筆友。我今年14歲。在我家裡我沒有兄弟姐妹。我在學校最喜歡的科目是科學，因為我覺得它很有趣。在周末我喜歡彈鋼琴和打籃球。你呢？你會寫信來告訴我有關你自己的情況嗎？ 此致，莎莉 2.我最喜歡的動物是貓。在我家裡我有一隻貓。她的名字叫咪咪，我認為她來自中國。她兩歲了。她喜歡每天吃魚。她是那種懶惰，但她很可愛。放學後我喜歡和它一起玩。 3.去年夏天，我去了海灘。我的假期很不錯。我坐公共汽車去那裡，我的公交出行很令人放鬆。海灘非常漂亮。陽光普照，涼爽和潮濕。人們都很友善，食物很可口。我很喜歡我的假期，我希望再去那裡。 4.我的家就在中心街。在中心街，有一家餐廳，一個郵局和一個圖書館。郵局在圖書館和餐廳之間。郵局對面是一個公用電話。公用電話的旁邊是一家銀行。超市在第五大道。酒店在超市的前面。 5.今天是星期天.特納一家正在家裡.他們正在做不同的事情。特納先生正在洗他的車。特納夫人正坐在桌子旁邊。她正在喝茶.Bob正講電話。南希正坐在游泳池附近.她正在注視著狗游泳.他們正過一段愉快的時光。 6.這是星期天的早晨.我的母親和我去公園。有很多很多人在公園里。有些孩子正在跑步。一隻狗正在追趕他們。四名婦女正坐在那裡，她們在聊天。三位老人正站在一棵大樹下。他們正在看孩子。許多年輕人在跳舞。每個人都過得很愉快。我們也正享受著一段愉快的時光。
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7.天氣預報的短文
Good morning ! Here』s the weather report for some big cities in the world.Beijing is cloudy.It』s very cold, so wear warm clothes when you go out.It is sunny in New York , but there』s a strong wind in the afternoon.It will be rainy in Sydney but very hot.The day after tomorrowwill be sunny.That』s the weather report for today.Thank you for listening.
8.描寫人物的短文
There are three people in Jim』s family.Mr.Green is his father.He is heavy and he has short straight hair.He wears glasses.He is watching TV.His mother is Mrs.Green.She is of medium height.She has curly hair.She is cleaning the room.Jim is very thin.He is playing with the ball.They are all happy.
9.I am Sally.Every day I am very busy.I have too many rules in my house.I have to get up at six o』clock every morning.I have to eat my breakfast at 7:00 o』clock.I can』t meet my friends after school.I can』t watch TV on school nights.And I have to be in bed by 10:00 o』clock.On weekends, I have to clean my room.Then I have to wash my clothes.Later I have to go to the Children』s Palace to learn the guitar.I love music.But I can』t listen to music at home.I never have any fun.My life is so boring.What can I do ?
10.日記 Thursday, August 1st
Today I went to the Palace Museum.It was cool.Then I went to the Great Wall.It was fantastic.There were many people there.In the afternon, I visited Tian』an Men Square.There were many beautiful flowers.It was really great.I went to a Beijing Hutung.It was really fun.I had a good time there.
❷ 七年級下冊英語作文大全
（1）Liuxiang made a perfect fly in the olympic games in 2004, and won not only the gold metal but also the respect in the world!
His fly knocked all the suspicions and discriminations down completely!
"It is so perfect! I never expect to run so fast! Oh it is a dream to me, and it seems I am still in a dream!", he said!
But it is just true, and it is himself who made the dream into truth!
Xiuxiang, our hero, has been regarded as a flying man all of the world!
劉翔-世界飛人
劉翔在2004年的奧林匹克運動會上完美的沖刺，不僅贏得了金牌，而且贏得了世界的尊重。
他的飛翔打破了所有的懷疑和所有的種族歧視．
」太完美了．我從來沒想到跑這末快.哦，對我來說就像做夢，看起來我好像還在夢中。「他說到。
但這是真的。是他自己使得美夢成真。
（2）The bus usually takes him to work at 19:15.He works all night.
People love to lisen to him!He gets home at 7:00,and hewatches moring TV. He goes to bed at 8:30.Can you think what hisjob is?
九點一刻時他經常乘公交車上班。他工作整晚。
人們喜歡聽到關於他的事。他7點起床，看早間新聞。他8點半睡覺。
你認為他的職業是什麼？
（3）My family
I love my family, because I have a happy family.
My father is an English teacher. His name is Jacky. He is thirty-eight. He likes playing basketball. What』s my mother job? Is she a teacher? Yes, you』re right! My mother is very kind and nice, she is thirty-seven. My mother is always laborious work. I love my parents!
On Saturday and Sunday, I often go to the library and play the piano, My father go to play basketball. Sometimes, we watch TV and listen to music at home.
I love my family. Because I』m very happy to live with my parents together!
我的家庭
我愛我的家庭,因為我有一個快樂的家庭.
我的爸爸是一名英語教師,他的名字叫Jacky.他今年38歲.他非常喜歡打籃球.我的媽媽是趕什麼呢?她是一名教師嗎?是的.你說對了!我的媽媽是一個很親切、友善的人,她今年37歲.我媽媽總是勤勞的幹活.我愛我的父母.
在星期六和星期天里,我經常去圖書館和彈鋼琴.我爸爸去打籃球.有時侯,我們都在家看電視和聽音樂.
我愛我家.因為我和爸爸媽媽一起生活得很開心!
（4）Lan and Fred
Lan and Fred were boys. They were both twelve years old, and they were in the same class in their school. Last Friday afternoon they had a fight in class, and their teacher was very angry. He said to both of them, 「Stay here after the lessons this afternoon, and write your names a thousand times.」 After the last lesson, all the other boys went home, but Lan and Fred stayed in the classroom with their teacher and begin writing their names.
Then Fred began crying.
The teacher looked at him and said,」 Why are you crying, Fred?」
「Because his name』s Lan May, and mine』s Frederick Hollingsworth,」 Fred said.
易恩和富雷得
易恩和富雷得都是男孩，他們都十二歲了。他們在學校里是同班同學。上周五下午他們在學校里打了一架。為此老師很生氣。老師對他們說：「下午下課後留在著把你們的名字寫一千遍。」
最後一節課下課，所有的學生都回家了。只有易恩和富雷得被他們的老師留在教師里抄寫他們的名字。
接著富雷得哭了起來。
老師看了看他問：「富雷得，你為什麼要哭呢？」
「因為他的名字是Lan May, 而我的名字確是Frederick Hollingsworth，」富雷得回答道。
（5）Ann』s Diary
Today was Sunday. Today was September 30th, 2004. It was a boring day. It was hot. I was not a work.
I watched TV all morning. The shows were boring. Then I called my friend, Nancy. She wasn』t at home. I didn』t know where she was.
At twelve I was hungry. There was not any food in the fridge. I was lazy. I was tired. Then I ate lunch outside. At one o』clock. I was in bed. In the afternoon I was at the movies. The film was boring. I'm glad tomorrow is Monday. I can go to school and see my friends.
安的日記
今天是星期天，2004年9月30日。這是令人厭煩的一天。今天天氣很熱，我呆在家裡，不用去上學。
我看了一上午的電視。電視節目和無聊。於是我給好朋友南西打電話，可她不在家。我不知道她去哪裡了。
十二點我餓了，可是冰箱里什麼食物都沒有。我很懶惰，也很勞累，於是我出去吃了午飯。一點我上床睡覺。下午我去了電影院。電影很無聊。很高興明天就是星期一了，我有可以返回學校見到我的好朋友了。
（6）Do you know fish ?Let me tell you something about it !fish have many kinds,and they are have many colour. some fish is big ,some fish is small.some fish is live in sea and some one is live in rivevr.of course, fish is also health food,so eat more it is better for ourbody!
你認識魚嗎？讓我來告訴你有關魚的一些知識吧！魚有很多種類，也有很多顏色。有的大，有的小。有的生活的海里，有的生活在河裡。因為魚是一種有益於健康的食品，所以多吃一些魚對我們的身體是有好處的。
（7）Talking clock
While proudly showing off his new apartment to friends, a college student led the way into the den. "What is the big brass gong and hammer for?" one of his friends asked. "That is the talking clock," the man replied. "How's it work?"
"Watch," the man said and proceeded to give the gong an ear shattering pound with the hammer. Suddenly, someone screamed from the other side of the wall, "Knock it off, you idiot! It's two o'clock in the morning!"
會說話的鍾
一個學生帶他朋友們參觀他的新公寓，甚是得意。「那個大銅鑼和錘子是干什麼用的？」他的一個朋友問他。「那玩意兒厲害了，那是一個會說話的鍾」，學生回答。「這鍾怎麼工作的」，他的朋友問。「看著，別眨眼了」，那學生走上前一把操起銅鑼和錘子，拚命地敲了一下，聲音震耳欲聾。突然，他們聽到隔壁牆那邊有人狂叫，「別敲了，你這白痴！現在是凌晨兩點鍾了！」
（8）speeding
A speeding motorist was waved down by a police patrol car. 「I'm going to give you a ticket for speeding,」 said the policeman, writing his note. 「You've been driving over 60 miles per hour.」
「Would you mind making it 100, officer?」 was the reply. 「You see, I'm going to sell the car.」
超速行駛
一名超速行駛的駕駛員被巡邏警車攔住後，警察一邊做記錄，一邊說：「我要給你開一張超速罰單，因為你剛才的車速已經超過了60英里。」
「警官，請你把時速寫為100英里好嗎？你知道，我正要打算賣這輛車。」
（9）My Sister's Fingers
Teacher: Kevin, why are you late this time?
Kevin: Please sir, I bruised two fingers knocking in a nail at
home.
Teacher: I don't see any bandages.
Kevin: Oh, they weren't my fingers! I told my little sister to
hold the nail.
我妹妹的手指頭
老師：凱溫，這次你怎麼又遲到了？
凱溫：對不起，老師，我在家釘釘子，砸壞了兩個手指頭。
老師：怎麼沒有扎綳帶呀？
凱溫：噢，砸的不是我的手指頭，我叫小妹妹扶著釘子的。
（10）That is not my dog
A woman walks into a pet shop and sees a lovely little dog. She asks the shopkeeper, "Does your dog bite?"
The shopkeeper says, "No, my dog does not bite."
Then the woman bends down and tries to touch the dog. the dog bites her.
"Ouch!" she crys, "You said your dog did not bite."
The shopkeeper replies, "That is not my dog."
那不是我的狗
一位女士走進一家寵物店，看見一隻很可愛的小狗．她問店主："你的狗咬人嗎?"
店主說:"不, 我的狗不咬人."
於是這位女士彎下腰想去摸摸這條狗. 狗咬了她.
"哎喲!"她叫道,"你說過你的狗不咬人的."
店主回答說:"那不是我的狗."
❸ 初一下冊英語作文題目3篇
A seven day long holiday has flown away. Mourning my happy hours ring the vacation, I've been looking forward to winter holidays. People around me seemed to have enjoyed the vacation, too. Then, is it fair that people have the same amount of holidays regardless of their occupations? Nevertheless, divergent views emerge on the matter in question. Some people are of the opinion that laborers should have the same length of holiday. They hold the view that people are born equal and should be treated equally. The same amount of leisure time may eliminate the unfairness among people who might be upset psychologically if otherwise. At first sight, it may seem to be an attractive idea, but it doesn't bear much analysis. To begin with, people do different kinds of jobs featuring different labor intensity and so the time needed to refresh their physical condition varies. For example, blue collar workers may work longer hours before they get tired physically, while white collar workers such as doctors and teachers are more mentally stressed. Unable to work continuously as long as those physical labor workers, white collars need more time to pull through the mental weariness than physical tiredness. All in all, people in different jobs assume different responsibilities and have different degrees of pressure. Secondly, different tasks and ties are required for different professions, resulting in the variety of holiday periods for people in different walks of life. Some employees cannot have their legal holidays and even have to work overtime, such as policemen, construction workers and people in the service line.Those professions just can't be interrupted for a mornent;other wise the society will be in a mess. Even for some people in the same occupation, they cannot have the same holidays entitled to them e to many factors out of human control, such as special assignments, and health conditions etc, then not to say people in different fields. Suppose we, as teachers do, all have three months' holiday in a year. Then factories have to employ considerably more workers because some of them are enjoying happy holiday.That's obviously against the principles of doing business at lower cost and efficiency. If we have only three days off in a year, then all the people in our country will be working day after day. No one can squeeze time to visit those tourist resorts leisurely. It goes without saying that the tourist trade and catering instry thus cannot develop rapidly and healthily. 有什麼問題 請隨時提問 有問必答 這篇作文希望對你 有幫助 沒有的話 我 在去英語作文大全 裡面幫您找找看 一定會有你喜歡的作文哈 不過希望 找和自己水平差不多的 你找的太好了 老師以為你英文很好了 到考試 時候 就沒那麼理想了 所以建議 不要和自己水平差太多的
❹ 初一下冊英語作文
經典作文選
作文類型一：某人度過的一天 （考查概率90%）
寫作要求：介紹自己如何度過一個繁忙、快樂的周末，例如你早上、中午、下午各做了哪些事情，要求用一般過去時描述。（注意：下面有三種類似的範文，【】里的內容可以互換，套用時個別地方需要修改）
記敘文格式：1. My great weekend
How was your weekend? I had a great weekend. It was sunny on Saturday.【 I stayed at home and watched TV in the morning. In the afternoon, I went shopping with my parents. They bought some new clothes for me. I felt very happy. On Sunday morning, I met my classmates and we played basketball. In the afternoon, I visited my good friend Jim. He helped me with my English. In the evening, I did my homework and read a magazine. I enjoyed my weekend.】
書信格式：2. A letter from Jim to Mary
Dear Mary,
I』m very happy to get your letter. You asked me about my life on weekends. Now I』d like to tell you about my last weekend.
【On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I watched TV with my family for two hours. After supper I did some sports and then I went to English club to practice my English. On Sunday morning, I visited my uncle. In the afternoon, I studied for the history test. In the evening, I played chess with my father. I had fun over the weekend.】
How about your weekend? Write to me soon, OK?
Best wishes
Jim
日記格式：3. A diary
Wednesday, June 10th
It was cloudy today. I was busy all day but I was happy. 【In the morning, I cleaned my room, and then I washed my clothes. At about 7:00, I had breakfast. After that, I went to the movie with my friend Jim. It was an exciting action movie. In the afternoon, I went to the library. There were many people in it, but it was quiet. After supper, I watched sports shows on TV. Then I went to bed at about 9:30.】
寫作要求：介紹自己如何度假,包括具體地名、天氣狀況、具體做了哪些事情，要求用一般過去時描寫。
初高中海量作文大全小升初
中考滿分
高考滿分
高考零分
4. How did I spend my vacation?
I went to Hainan on vacation. It was May Day. The weather was sunny and hot. I went to the beach with my parents. I went swimming and played volleyball. It was really fun. At dinner, we had a delicious seafood (海鮮) at a restaurant. We also went to some stores. They were always crowded and the things were too expensive. We took lots of photos. Some of them were very beautiful. We had a good vacation. I enjoyed myself very much.
作文類型二：介紹自己有關情況（考查概率75%）
1. A letter from Lily
Dear Kate,
Hi! I』m your new pen pal. My name is Lily. I am 14 years old, and I』m from Sydney, Australia. In Australia, we speak English. I have a good friend Li Lei. He is from China. And now he is my neighbor. We like playing the guitar very much. We both want to be pop singers. Please write to me soon.
Lily
寫作要求：介紹自己的名字、年齡、來自哪裡、喜歡的動物及食物，長大後想當什麼等相關情況。
2. About me
My name is Dave. I am 15 years old. I am tall and thin and I have short curly hair. My favorite animals are tigers and pandas. And my favorite food is beef and tomato noodles. I am a student, and I want to be a doctor. I have many rules at home. I can』t go out at night and I have to get up at 6:00 am. I am reading a story-book now. it is fun.
作文類型三：進行時特定場面描寫（考查概率55%）
1. In the park
It』s eight-thirty on Sunday morning. It』s very fine today. Dave and his friends are in the park. There are many people here. It』s very busy in the park. Look! What are Dave』s friends doing? Well, Dave, Jim and Kevin are playing soccer over there. Kate and Sally are dancing under a tree. Linda is playing the violin behind the tree. Near the tree, Julie is reading a book. Where are Tom and Ken? Oh, they』re swimming at a pool. They swim very well. Brad is listening to the music near the pool. He likes music very much. They are all happy. (Everyone is happy.)
2. On the playground
Today is Friday. The weather is fine. Our school is having a sports meeting. It』s very exciting, and all the students are busy. Look! Peter is running. Amy is playing volleyball. Tom is playing ping-pong. They are trying their best to win. Lots of students around are cheering them. Some students are taking photos. 類型四：介紹家人（考查概率45%）
寫作要求：介紹自己或他人的家人，包括多少人口、爸爸媽媽的職業以及其他家庭成員的相關情況。（注意：如果要求寫自己家人，下文里的主語稍微改下就行了）
Mr. Smith』s family
There are four people in Mr. Smith』s family. Mr. Smith is a driver. He works in a company. He works very hard. Mrs. Smith is a worker. She works in a shop. She is friendly and works hard, too. Their son, David Smith is a middle school student. He is at No. 14 Middle School in Beijing, China. He studies hard. He likes making friends. He likes playing basketball. He is learning Chinese. He can speak a little Chinese. Joy Smith, a 6-year-old girl, is Mr. and Mrs. Smith』s daughter. She likes playing with toys. They all like China. They like Chinese food and the people, too.
I wish you a good summer vacation and a good result!
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❺ 七年級下冊英語作文8篇
一般現在時
My Favorite Season
My favourite season is summer. I like summer because it's a season of enthusiasm. In summer, everything turns energetic. We are the most efficient to do things at this period of time. What's more, we are able to do a lot of sports and activities in summer. The trees and grass become very green and beautiful and I like that colour for what it represents. It is a symbol of hope. And with hope, we are motivated and creative. So summer is also the season of hope. We are able to take cold drinks in summer which is my favourite as well. In a word, I like summer, because it makes me energetic and gives me hope.
My favourite teacher
I like my English teacher Miss* best.Miss * is tall and thin,she has long straight hair and big eyes,her voise is light,and she's very kind,so we all loves her.
Yesterday morning,I slept late and missed the bus,so I was late for school.When I arrived school,it was 10am.I thought that Miss * will be angry with me.However,she didn't be annoyed with me anymore.She just said don't be late again to me.How kind Miss * is!
There is another thing I can't forget.One day in her Ehglish class,she asked me to spell accountant.I am not good at Ehglish anymore,and I don't like to remember the words.So I stood and answered nothing.To my surprise,she only said that memorizing the words is important for our study.
Miss * is really kind,isn't she?So she is my favorite teacher.
般將來時
if i have enough money
if i have enough money,i will travel for seven days.the fitst day,i will go to beijing.because beijing is the capital city of china.first,i will go to tian'anmen square.and then,i will go to the palace museum.then,i will go to my grandparents'house .i miss them very much.from the third day to the sixth day,i will go to qing with my friends.i will go to swim in qing.at the last day,i will go on a trip to my city. i want to know my city carefully,
I think i will have fun.
Our life will change greatly in the future.
In the future, every family will own at least one computer, with which we can shop online without going out. That is really fantastic. Also, robots will be employed by every family. They can help do much of the housework. Therefore family members will have more free time to spend time together. In the future, kids don't need to attend school any more. There is internet access in every family, with the help of which kids can study by themselves.
現在進行時
Spring is coming,in the park,there are so many chilren and old men playing in the park.Lision,many birds are singing the song of Spring.The grasses are very green and soft.The flowers are very beautiful,most of them have come out.The park is very lively.I like this,I like Spring!
一般過去時
It was Sunday. I got up at seven o'clock. After breakfast I cleaned my room. Then I did my homework. I went shopping with my mother by bike in the afternoon. I met one of my best friend Li Lei and talked with her for a while. Before supper I played table tennis with my father. In the evening I surfed the internet and read books. I really had a busy and meaningful day.
After the Yushu earthquake ,our school held an Earthquake Safety Ecation Week . There were a lot of meaningful activities ring the week.On Mondey ,the whole school met in the playground and mourned for the dead in the quake .On Wednesday ,an expert was invited to give a lecture on how to escape from an earthquake .And on weekends,students came to the streets to raise money for Yushu.The Earthquake Safety Ecation Week was a big success.We have learnt how to protect ourselves in an earthquake and help others in trouble.Many students said they would do more things to help Yushu's people rebuild their homes.
I had a terrible last summer vacation.I had to get up early in the morning.Then I had to do my homework.It was boring and a little bit difficult.I can't stand it. In the afternoon, I had to go to the Children's Palace to learn English. Later, I had to help my mom clean the bedroom. I never had any fun in the vacation.How about you? How was your vacation?
翻譯：我有一個可怕的暑假。我必須每天早上起床很早。然後，我必須做我的作業，它很無聊和有點難。我無法忍受它。在下午，我必須去少年宮學英語。接著，我必須幫助我的媽媽打掃卧室。在暑假我從來沒有快樂。你呢？你的暑假怎麼樣？
❻ 初一下，英語作文30篇，帶翻譯
①This summer holiday I plan to go to the beach.I will go there with my parents and cousins.We'll stay there for three days at the local hotel.The trip will be the most wonderful one that I have ever had.Because we will do a lot of things there,such as playing volleyball ,windsurfing ,having barbecue at night.I'm really looking foward to it.
②With Time past, our summer holiday is nearly over. But I don't regret, because I did a lot of significative things ring the holiday.
First, I did all of the homework quickly.Then the rest of days, I went back to my hometown to visit my relatives. We had a good time there. When I came back to my home, I did some sports every day to make my body healthy, such as football, basketball, swimming, badminton and so on. And I also went to happy valley. I really enjoyed my summer holiday!
Though I miss my summer holiday, I am a student. I can't forget to study. I will work harder in the new term and have a higher grade.I believe I can do that.
③I spent this summer vacation in quite a different way. I used to run about every day in previous summer vacations, but this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do so. I would soon be in the last year of my high-school ecation and would after graation be up against the college entrance examinations. Though those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this. At first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this, but later I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to come. With this in mind I then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some physical. I was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a hope.
④I often go to see my grandma and grandpa ring my summer vacation.They are both seventy years old and live in the country happily. Summer view of the countryside is very beautiful. I can do many interesting things there. I am used to getting up early in the morning, breathing the fresh air,listening to the birds singing, and enjoying the green trees, red flowers and the river. I like fishing with my friends. When night comes, I sit under the tree with my grandma, listening to her telling me many funny stories. And I tell her some new things happening in the city. When I have to go back,I am always reluctant to go. I really feel happy living in the country.
⑤I like the summer holiday every year. Last summer I went to Beijing for my holiday, Beijing is our capital city. I went to the Summer Palace, climbed the Great Wall and went to many places of interest. I had a very good time. During this summer holiday, I went to Putuo and Xiangshan. I saw the beautiful sea. I enjoyed having a walk along the beach after supper or having a swim in the moonlight. It's really "cool".
When I at home, I do my homework in the morning. In the afternoon I practise playing the piano. But in the evening I can watch TV after a long walk with my parents.
If you ask me what my favourite summer holiday will be like, traveling around the world is the only answer. I like travelling so much that l often meet different people and visit different places of interest in my dream. I wish I can have two summer holidays in a year.
⑥The summer vacation had come round again. I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while. Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them. Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running and rowing, to keep me physically strong. It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time. I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.
⑦Summer can be very hot in southern Taiwan where the temperature usually goes up to 32"C or more. Because of the heat it is a trying experience to go to school or do anything else in a place that is not air-conditioned. Also because of this I stay at home most of the time ring the summer vacation and only occasionally go to the beach to plunge myself into the cool water as a way to keep my body less sticky. Actually I like swimming and think nothing is more refreshing than a swim. In the summer vacation that has just ended I went swimming many times with my classmates and we all had a good time. This summer vacation, however, was not spent entirely in seeking fun. As a second-year senior student I had to prepare myself for the college entrance examinations that were only a year away. In other words, I must find time to study, too. So I divided my time between work and play ring the summer vacation and derived much benefit from this arrangement.
⑧I spent this summer vacation in quite a different way. I used to run about every day in previous summer vacations, but this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do so. I would soon be in the last year of my high-school ecation and would after graation be up against the college entrance examinations. Though those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this. At first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this, but later I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to come. With this in mind I then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some physical. I was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a hope.
送你幾篇
My Summer holidays
I love holidays,because ring holidays ,I can do everything I like,and study something new.Now the summer holidays is coming,I'm going to do something meaningful.
I like English,I spell words well,but I can not speak English very well.So I want to improve my English in the holiday.I will read English every moring,and then I think my English must be improved.
I will also learn to swim.I think it is very helpful.
There are too many things to do,I believe in myself can do them well!
My summer holiday must be a good one !
This is my summer vacation. I intend to finish the operation. Then, take a look at China』s famous novel. Look at some day. Of course, also want to play with the computer, watch TV. Early every morning to get up and running to run, do other sports. But it is concive to our body! But one thing should not be forgotten. must help parents do the housework!
總抄作業還是不好的，快開學了，也幫你一把，畢竟我自己以前也趕過作業，很辛苦的，要記得下次放假早點把作業寫完哈。
❼ 七年級下冊英語作文
經典作文選
作文類型一：某人度過的一天
（考查概率
90%
）
寫作要求：介紹自己如何度過一個繁忙、快樂的周末，例如你早上、中午、
下午各做了哪些事情，
要求用
一般過去時
描述。
（
注意
：
下面有三種類似的範文，
【】里的內容可以互換，套用時個別地方需要修改）
記敘文格式：
1.
My great weekend
How was your weekend? I had a great weekend. It was sunny on Saturday.
【
I
stayed at home and watched TV in the morning. In the afternoon, I went shopping
with my parents. They bought some new clothes for me. I felt very happy. On Sunday
morning, I met my classmates and we played basketball. In the afternoon, I visited my
good friend Jim. He helped me with my English. In the evening, I did my homework
and read a magazine. I enjoyed my weekend.
】
書信格式：
2.
A letter from Jim to Mary
Dear Mary,
I』
m very happy to get your letter. You asked me about my life on weekends. Now
I』
d like to tell you about my last weekend.
【
On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I
watched TV with my family for two hours. After supper I did some sports and then I
went to English club to practice my English. On Sunday morning, I visited my uncle.
In the afternoon, I studied for the history test. In the evening, I played chess with my
father. I had fun over the weekend.
】
How about your weekend? Write to me soon, OK?
Best wishes
Jim
日記格式：
3.
A diary
Wednesday, June 10
th
It
was
cloudy
today.
I
was
busy
all
day
but
I
was
happy.
【
In
the
morning,
I
cleaned my room, and then I washed my clothes. At about 7:00, I had breakfast. After
that, I went to the movie with my friend Jim. It was an exciting action movie. In the
afternoon, I went to the library. There were many people in it, but it was quiet. After
supper, I watched sports shows on TV
. Then I went to bed at about 9:30.
】
寫作要求：介紹自己如何度假
,
包括具體地名、天氣狀況、具體做了哪些事
情，要求用一般過去時描寫。
初高中海量作文大全
小升初 中考滿分 高考滿分 高考零分
4.
How did I spend my vacation?
I went to Hainan on vacation. It was May Day. The weather was sunny and hot. I
went
to
the beach with my parents.
I went
swimming and played volleyball.
It
was
really fun. At dinner, we had a delicious seafood (
海鮮
) at a restaurant. We also went
to
some
stores.
They
were
always
crowded
and
the
things
were
too
expensive.
We
took
lots
of
photos.
Some
of
them
were
very
beautiful.
We
had
a
good
vacation.
I
enjoyed myself very much.
作文類型二：介紹自己有關情況（考查概率
75%
）
1.
A letter from Lily
Dear Kate,
Hi!
I』
m
your new pen pal.
My name is
Lily.
I am
14
years old,
and
I』
m from
Sydney, Australia. In Australia, we speak English. I have a good friend Li Lei. He is
from China. And now he is my neighbor. We like playing the guitar very much. We
both want to be pop singers. Please write to me soon.
Lily
寫作要求：介紹自己的名字、年齡、來自哪裡、喜歡的動物及食物，長大後想當
什麼等相關情況。
2.
About me
My name is Dave. I am 15 years old. I am tall and thin and I have short curly hair.
My favorite animals are tigers and pandas. And my favorite food is beef and tomato
noodles. I am a student, and I want to be a doctor. I have many rules at home. I can
』
t
go out at night and I have to get up at 6:00 am. I am reading a story-book now. it is
fun.
作文類型三：進行時特定場面描寫（考查概率
55%
）
1.
In the park
It
』
s eight-thirty on Sunday morning. It
』
s very fine today. Dave and his friends are
in the park. There are many people here. It
』
s very busy in the park. Look! What are
Dave
』
s friends doing? Well, Dave, Jim and Kevin are playing soccer over there. Kate
and Sally are dancing under a tree. Linda is playing the violin behind the tree. Near
the tree, Julie is reading a book. Where are Tom and Ken? Oh, they
』
re swimming at a
pool.
They
swim
very
well.
Brad
is
listening
to
the
music
near
the
pool.
He
likes
music very much. They are all happy. (Everyone is happy.)
2.
On the playground
Today is Friday. The weather is fine. Our school is having a sports meeting. It
』
s
very exciting, and all the students are busy.
Look! Peter is running. Amy is playing
volleyball.
Tom
is
playing
ping-pong.
They
are
trying
their
best
to
win.
Lots
of
students around are cheering them. Some students are taking photos.
類型四：介紹家人（考查概率
45%
）
寫作要求：
介紹自己或他人的家人，
包括多少人口、
爸爸媽媽的職業以及其他家
庭成員的相關情況。
（注意：如果要求寫自己家人，下文里的
主語
稍微改下就行
了）
Mr. Smith
』
s family
There are four people in Mr. Smith
』
s family. Mr. Smith is a driver. He works in a
company. He works very hard. Mrs. Smith is a worker. She works in a shop.
She is
friendly and works hard, too. Their son, David Smith is a middle school student. He is
at No. 14 Middle School in Beijing, China. He studies hard. He likes making friends.
He likes playing basketball. He is learning Chinese. He can speak a little Chinese. Joy
Smith, a 6-year-old girl, is Mr. and Mrs. Smith
』
s daughter. She likes playing with toys.
They all like China. They like Chinese food and the people, too.
❽ 急求初一下冊英語作文10篇！！！
七年級下 英語作文
unit 1
Dear friend,
My neme is Wang Ping I come from China. My frist name is Ping and last name is Wang. I'm 14 years old. I can speak Chinese and a little english. I like palying vollerball. I like going to the movies. My favorite movie is Rush Hour because I like Cheng Long very much. I have a brother,Wang Qiang and a sister,Wang Li. Ther like going to the
movies, too.
unit 2
dear mike,
i konw you're arriving next sunday.let me tell you the way to my house.take a taxi from the airport. you pass a bank on your right and then go down long street. you go through sixth avenue and seventh avenue. then you see a big supermarket,turn left at new park. then go down and my house is on your right.
unit 3
there is a new zoo in our city. the zoo is really interesting because there are all kinds of animals in it. people all like them very much. i like going there on sundays. i like koalas very much because ther're very cute. but they're kiof lazy. they sleep ring the day and get up at night. they're also very friendly tu us.
unit 4
i'm a student now and i study in no.2 middle school. i like study. i study every day . i think it's very interesting. in the future. i want to be a reporter. i think it's an exciting job. i like talking to people. i like going to many different places. i like meeting lots of interesting people. but sometimes it's a little dangerous. i like exciting work.
unit 5
look! this is a happy family. this is bruce's family. bruce is playing computer games. he likes it very much. his grandmother is watering the flowers.his father is reading a book. his mother is watching tv. she likes the tv show very much. his sister mary is doing her homework. everyone is having a good time.
unit 6
dear frank,
i'm a middle school student in mengzi. it's a beautiful city. and i like the weather here. it's warm in spring. it's a little windy so we can fly kites in the park. it's hot in summereople like swimming in this season. it's cool in autumn. people like palying sports outside. in winter, it's very cold and it often snows. people like wearing scarfs and go skiing. people have a good time all the year.
yours,
mike
unit 7
dear mike
we have a new english teacher this term. her name is julia. she's very good-looking. she's tall and of medium build. her hair is long and curly. she likes teaching english very much. her class is very interesting. she often plays games with us. she likes reading very much. she always goes to the library on weekends. she's really friendly. we all like her and her class
yours,
peter
unit 8
my neme's xiao li. i'm a chinese girl. i like mplings best. because ther're our chinese treditional food. i'd like mplings on some festivals. i like mplings with beef best. i usually have porridge and an egg for breakfast. for lunch, i usually have rice, vegetables and pork. i like noodles and fish fmy sypper. i eat fruit every day. i'm very healthy.
unit 9
mike is my good friend. he had a busy weekend because he did lots of things on sa=taurday and on sunday. let me tell you what he did. on saturday morning, he did homework. he studied hard. in the afternoon, he cleaned the room. in the evening, he helped his parents wash the dishes. on sunday morning, he was very happy. in the evening, he studied for the english test. he liked english very much. mike had a busy but interesting weekend.
unit10
last saturday, tom got up at 6 o'clock, then he walked in the park. and he did exercise. at noon, he ate in KFC with his parents. he enjoyed the food very much. in the afternoon, he played soccer with his classmates on the school playground. they played from 2 pm to 4 pm. tom had a really fun day.
unit 11
peter and liam are talking about some tv shows. peter loves talk shows and he thinks they're really interesting. liam likes them, too. liam loves sports shows very mu because he likes sports. peter likes them, too. peter doesn't like soap operas because he think ther're too boring, but liam doesn't mind them. peter doesn't mind game shows but liam doesn't like them.
unit 12
my school rules
there are many rules in our school. we have to wear school uniforms every day. we have to boring our school id cards with us. we can't talk loudly at anytime. we can't run or jump in the hallways. we can't listen to music in the classroom. we can't eat snacks at school. we can't eat in the classroom. we have to eat in the dining hall.
熱 嗯的 年少輕狂
ps：錯誤的請不要介意，更何況本來就沒有錯誤
ther're too boring, but liam doesn't mind them. peter doesn't mind game shows but liam doesn't like them.
unit 12
my school rules
there are many rules in our school. we have to wear school uniforms every day. we have to boring our school id cards with us. we can't talk loudly at anytime. we 't run or jump in the hallways. we can't listen to music in the classroom. we can't eat snacks at school. we can't eat in the classroom. we have to eat in the dining hall.
❾ 初一下學期英語作文 30篇 人教版
1.Traveling to Dalian
Summer holidday is coming.I have a good plan for it.My best friend Tony who is from Britain will spend the holiday with mw.Tom is 17 years old ,he like China very much.One week ago,I wrote him a letter,inviting him to come to Dalian for the holidays.Tony has accepted my invitation and will fly to Dalian next week.I will go to the airport to pick him up.Then we'll show him around the city.We'll go to the beach to watch the sea first.Then we'll visit some insteresing places.Tony will live in my house ring the holiday.I hope we'll have a good time.
2.My Summer Plan
I am glad that summer holiday is approaching.I'll be able to enjoy and relax myselve,which is not easy for me,a pre-graated student.In order to have a meanningful holiday,I made a plan.First,I would like to do some housework at home.such as cleaning the room，washing the dishes,watering the flowers.Then I am going to do some exercises,including ball games,running.Finally,I want to work at my study.I'll go over my lessons and pratise my English.
3. .Traveling to Dalian
Summer holidday is coming.I have a good plan for it.My best friend Tony who is from Britain will spend the holiday with mw.Tom is 17 years old ,he like China very much.One week ago,I wrote him a letter,inviting him to come to Dalian for the holidays.Tony has accepted my invitation and will fly to Dalian next week.I will go to the airport to pick him up.Then we'll show him around the city.We'll go to the beach to watch the sea first.Then we'll visit some insteresing places.Tony will live in my house ring the holiday.I hope we'll have a good time.
4.It was the first day of our winter holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.
5.It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt I』m free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live alone but I don』t feel lonely. But I didn』t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
6.It was the third day of our winter holiday. Today, there are many business in my mother』s company. So my mother told me to help my uncle who is the manager of my mother』s company. I sat in my mother』s office and help her answer the telephone. While I was free, I was writing my homework. Although I also have a lot of time to do my homework, I still do it. Because in my mother』s office, I had nothing to do. If I did nothing, I was wasting my time and my life. I can』t do the foolish thing. We should take good use of our time.
7.It is a special day today. My mother sent one hundred basket of red bayberries. I like to eat red bayberries. It tastes nice. When they arrived in Shanghai, they were still fresh. But most of them would be sent to my mother』s business friends. I chose the best basket of red bayberries to eat. I put the rest in my refrigerator. Red bayberry is my hometown』s special proct. It is well-known in china. Many people like to eat it.
8.Today, I still went to my mother』s office. My mother was very busy, so was my father. They always live in Beijing. They must get up early. Because they will manage the factory. So I know they are very laborious. So I should save my money. Also I should help them. Although I can』t do something useful, but I think I should share the work with them. I am one of my family member. In the future, I will take a job and work. It』 time for me to begin to learn how to work.
❿ 初一下學期所有的英語作文
英語作文 英語作文的基本要求：
首先，一個段落必須有一個中心即主題思想，該中心由主題句特別是其中的題旨來表達。整個段落必須緊扣這個主題（stick or hold to the topic），這就是段落的統一性（unity）。其次，一個段落必須有若干推展句，使主題思想得到充分展開，從而給讀者一個完整的感覺，這就是完整性（completeness or adequateness）。再者，一個段落不是雜亂無章的，而是有機的組合，句子的排列順序必須合乎邏輯，從一個句子到另一個句子的過渡必須流暢（smooth），這就是連貫性（coherence）。下面我們就對這三個標准分別加以說明。
1、統一性
一個段落內的各個句子必須從屬於一個中心，任何游離於中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。請看下例：
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主題句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。文中出現兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，這一段是講的是Joe and I ，中間出現一個Bella是不合適的。還有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner這一句更是與主題句不相關。再看一個例子：
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一個是My mother was a premature baby。
從上面兩個例子可以看出，native speakers同樣會造出來irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果這種句子多了，造成偏題或離題，那問題就更嚴重了。
2、完整性
正象我們前面說得那樣，一個段落的主題思想靠推展句來實現，如果只有主題句而沒有推展句來進一步交待和充實，就不能構成一個完整的段落。同樣，雖然有推展句，但主題思想沒有得到相對圓滿的交待，給讀者一種意猶未盡的感覺。這樣的段落也不能完成其交際功能。例如：
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you proce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
本段的主題句是段首句。本段的兩個推展句均不能回答主題句中提出的問題。什麼是「a mind in turmoil」（心境不平靜）Physical work又如何能改變這種情況？為什麼它能起therapy的作用？讀者得不到明確的答案。因此，要達到完整就必須盡可能地簡明。例如：
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
段首句所表達的主題思想是一種看法，必須有具體事例加以驗證。上述兩個推展句只是在文字上對主題作些解釋，整個段落內容空洞，簡而不明。如果用一兩個具體的例子的話，就可以把主題解釋清楚了。比如下段：
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?
3、連貫性（coherence）
連貫性包括意連和形連兩個方面，前者指的是內在的邏輯性，後者指的是使用轉換詞語。當然這兩者常常是不可分割的。只有形連而沒有意連，句子之間就沒有內在的有機的聯系；反之，只有意連而沒有形連，有時行文就不夠流暢。
1）、意連
段落中句子的排列應遵循一定的次序，不能想到什麼就寫什麼。如果在下筆之前沒有構思，邊寫邊想，寫寫停停，那就寫不出一氣呵成的好文章來。下面介紹幾種常見的排列方式。
A．按時間先後排列（chronological arrangement）
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.
本段從「rose」（起床）寫起，然後是吃早餐（「not to miss breakfast」, 「closing at nine o'clock」），然後是「close to noon」，一直寫到這一天結束（「By nine——」）。
B. 按位置遠近排列（spatial arrangement）。例如：
From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的寫法是由遠及近，從遠處（「from a distance」）寫起，然後「get closer」，再到（「ten feet away」），最後是「inside the pagoda」……當然，按位置遠近來寫不等於都是由遠及近。根據需要，也可以由近及遠，由表及裡等等。
C. 按邏輯關系排列（logical arrangement）
a. 按重要性順序排列（arrangement in order of importance）
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
這一段談的是表達能力，它的重要性與職業，身份有關，從「not need much skill」或「of little importance」到「more important」，最後是「most important」。
b.由一般到特殊排列（general-to-specific arrangement）
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A —— the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and "sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
這一段談的是a writer's carelessness，先給出一個general statement作為主題句，然後通過5個 」perhaps」加以例證。
c. 由特殊到一般排列（specific-to-general arrangement）
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds, drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主題句是段首句，它僅提出一個問題：為什麼兩只貓會被搞混。然後對兩者進行比較，末句才下結論。
2）、形連
行文的邏輯性常常要靠適當的轉換詞語及其他手段來實現。請讀下面這一段文字並找出文中用以承上啟下的詞語：
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies —— in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, ring his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on schele. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.
本文中起承上啟下的詞語有兩種，一種是轉換詞語（transitional words or phrases），另一種是起轉換作用的其他連接手段（linking devices）。前者依次有：first, though, so, in particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and, consequently, and, finally.後者依次是：he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his. 本段中共有詞彙105個，所使用的轉換詞語及其他連接用語共26個詞，約占該段總詞彙量的四分之一。由此可見，掌握好transitions不僅對行文的流（smoothness）有益，而且對於學生在半個小時內寫120個詞也是不無好處的。
一個段落里如果沒有transitions也就很難有coherence了.我們看下面一個例子：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture, loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句開頭出現一個起過渡作用的」it」之外，沒有使用其他的過渡詞語.這樣，文中出現許多重復的詞語，全段讀起來也顯得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的過渡詞語來修飾的話，這一段就成了下面一個流暢連貫的段落：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences．
4、有損連貫性的幾種情況：
考生在寫作中經常出現下面幾種錯誤：
1、不必要的改變時態，比如：
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to die down, but they come after him anyway.
2、不必要的改變單復數，比如：
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3、不必要的改變人稱，比如：
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此寫作中，一定要注意時態，人稱以及數的變化是否正確，要注意保持一致。
英語作文的書寫格式
英文書寫應符合書寫規范，英文字母要寫清楚、寫整齊、寫美觀，字母的大小和字母之間的距離要勻稱。書寫應做到字形秀麗漂亮，通篇勻稱和諧。
寫英文字母要掌握正確筆順。如字母i，應該先寫下面的部分，然後再打點。有的學生卻按寫漢字的習慣從上到下寫，寫快了，就會把點和下面的十筆連在量起，顯得十分別扭。字形t應為兩筆。不少人卻將兩筆合成一筆，看上去不像t，倒像l或是e，難以辨認。另外，把r寫成v，把q寫成把g，把k寫成h等等，都是中學生書寫中常見的毛病。
不少人在四線三格的練習紙上書寫尚有規矩，能按字母的占格、高低和大小要求書寫，但在白紙或橫線紙上書寫，卻顯得十分幼稚拙劣。字母或跳上跳下，或一律寫成同一高度，占上中兩格的字母與佔中下兩格的字母完全沒有高低之別。這些現象都要防止。
另外，書寫時還要注意詞與詞之間要保持一定的距離，不能緊靠在一起。字母之間的連寫也應該按照習慣，不能隨意亂來。
在一篇字數有限的作文里，我們還要注意盡量不把一個單詞拆開移行。萬一要移行，則必須以音節為單位進行，如revolution這個詞，依照音節移行的原則可以按re-，revo-, revolu-這幾種方法移行。在移行時，我們還應特別注意以下幾點:
1. 單音節詞不能移行，即使是字母較多的單音節詞，如through等也不能例外。
2．縮略詞如Mr.，Dr.等不能和後面的名字拆開移行。
縮略的專用名詞如U．K.，U．S．A等也不能拆開移行。
3．時間、量度及貨幣單位應視為一個整體；不能分開移行。如；
11：00P.M.應寫在一行內，不能將11：00和P．M．分開移行；寫38℃時，不能將36和C分開移行。
4．由「年、月、日」表示的日期，如果必須分開移行只能將「月、日」與「年」分開。如January 6，1980不能將January和6分開移行，但可以把January 6，和1980分成兩行。
5．含雙寫輔音字母的單詞，在移行時要將輔音字母拆開。如better可拆成better，necessary可拆成necessary。
但如果雙寫輔音字母屬於詞根，後面又加了後綴，就不能將兩個輔音字母拆開。如drill加上-ing後構成了drilling，就不可以將它拆成成dril-ling，而只能拆為drilling。