『壹』 商務英語作文範文+中文翻譯（1000字左右）
Dear xxx,
Hope you everything goes well.
Recently, the price of wheat is rising rapidly, which proces a negative effect on the sales. And there is no sign of lowering in the near future. Thus, we would like to decline our order of the wheat. Hope you take into consideration of our situation. We will discuss with you futhur about the details of exact quantity if you agree with it.
Your immediate reply will be appreciated.
Best regards.
Yours,
親愛的，，，希望萬事順利近來，小麥的價格不斷在上漲，在生產銷售的時候出現了負面的影響，在不久的將來，這些沒有標志的貨物會降低成本，因此，我們願意降低我們的成本，希望你們能顧及到我們的情形，如果你同意這樣，我們將進一步詳細的正確的數量你方立刻答復我方將不勝感激。誠摯的問候你們
『貳』 怎麼寫商務英語的作文啊 求例文
例：The Internet provides an amazing forum for the free exchange of ideas. Given the relatively few restrictions governing access and usage, it is the communications modal equivalent of international waters.
題目：Alienation and the Internet （網路，你「離間」了人群？）
你是一個每日無網不成歡的「網蟲」、「網蝶」？ 抑或是一個問世間網為何物的「網盲」？網路正潛移默化地改變著現代人的生活，而現代人也就其與自身的關系進行著深深的思索。
The Internet provides an amazing forum for the free exchange of ideas. Given the relatively few restrictions governing access and usage, it is the communications modal equivalent of international waters.1 It is my personal belief that the human potential can only be realized by the globalization of ideas. I developed this position2 years before the Internet came into wide spread use. And I am excited at the potential for the Internet to dramatically alter our global society for the better. However I am also troubled by the possible unintended negative consequences.
There has been much talk about the "new information age." But much less widely reported has been the notion that the Internet may be responsible for furthering the fragmentation of society by alienating its indivial users.3 At first this might sound like an apparent contradiction: how can something, that is on the one hand responsible for global unification by enabling the free exchange of ideas, alienate the participants?
I had a recent discussion with a friend of mine who has what he described as a "problem" with the Internet. When I questioned him further he said that he was "addicted,"4 and has "forced" himself to go off-line. He said that he felt like an alcoholic, in that moderate use of the Internet was just not possible for him.5 I have not known this fellow to be given to exaggeration, therefore when he described his internet binges,6 when he would spend over twenty-four hours on line non-stop, it gave me pause to think. He said, "the Internet isn't real, but I was spending all my time on line, so I just had to stop." He went on to say that all of the time that he spent on line might have skewed7 his sense of reality, and that it made him feel lonely and depressed.
The fragmentation of society has been lamented for some time now. It seems to me that it probably began in earnest after World War II when a generation returned from doing great deeds overseas. They won the war, and by God they were going to win the peace. Automobile ownership became commonplace and suburbs were created. "Progress" was their mantra.8 So even prior to the Internet's widespread popularity, folks were already becoming distanced from their extended families and neighbors. And when we fast-forward to today we see an almost cruel irony in that people can and often do develop on-line relationships with folks on the other side of the globe, without leaving their homes. But at the expense of the time that would have otherwise been available for involvement in other activities which might foster a sense of community in their villages, towns and cities.
Last weekend my wife and I invited our extended family to our home to celebrate our daughter's birthday. During the celebration my young nephew spent the entire time on my computer playing a simulated war game. My brother-in-law and I were chatting near by and it struck us that in generations past, his son, my nephew, would have been outside playing with his friends. But now the little fellow goes on line to play his games against his friends in cyberspace.
It seems to me that the Internet is a powerful tool that presents an opportunity for the advancement of the acquisition and application of knowledge. However, based on my personal experience I can understand how, as they surf the web some folks might be confronted with cognitive overload.9 And I can also understand how one might have his or her sense of reality distorted in the process. Is the Internet a real place? Depending upon how a "real place" is defined it might very well be. At the very least, I believe that when we use the Internet, we are forced to ask fundamental questions about how we perceive the world about us—perhaps another unintended consequence. Some would argue that the virtual existences created by some users who debate, shop, travel and have romance on line are in fact not real. While others would argue that, since in practical terms, folks are debating, shopping, travelling and having romance, the converse is true.
All of this being said, I believe that the key to realizing the potential of the Internet is in achieving balance in our lives. This would allow us to maximize its potential without losing our sense of place.10 However like most things that is easier said than done. It seems to me that we are a society that values immediate gratification above all else, and what better place to achieve it than in cyberspace, where the cyber-world is your cyber-oyster.11 The widespread use of the automobile forever changed our society and culture, and perhaps a similar sort of thing is occurring now. I am not at all certain where the "information superhighway" will lead us: some say to Utopia,12 while others feel it's the road to hell. But I do know that we all have the ability to maintain our sense of place in the world. Whether we choose to take advantage of this ability is another matter.
1．上網的途徑及網路的應用所受到的限制相對還比較少，就這點來說，網上交流相當於在國際海域行駛。
2．position：立場，觀點。
3．由於網路使個人用戶之間彼此疏遠，從而有可能導致社會的進一步分化，這種觀點卻沒有得到廣泛報導。
4．addict：使沉湎、使入迷。
5．他說自己就像一個酒鬼，適量控制上網時間對他來講是不可能的。alcoholic：飲酒過度的人，嗜酒者。
6．binge：無節制的狂熱行為。
7．skew：歪曲，曲解。
8．mantra：（印度教和大乘佛教中的）曼特羅，禱文。作者用以喻指發展是當時社會的主題，是被經常提及同時又是人們所推崇的。
9．有些人上網時可能還會面臨一個認知超載的問題。意思是網上的資料太多了。cognitive overload：認知的超載。
10．place：位置，地位。
11．在我看來，我們所生活的社會重視即時利益高於一切，而沒有什麼地方能比網路空間讓人更快獲得即時利益，因為在網路世界裡你可以隨心所欲。
gratification：可以從中獲得利益或樂趣等的事物。oyster：滿足，給人快意的物(原因)。
12．Utopia：烏托邦，理想中最美好的社會。
『叄』 商務英語作文怎麼寫
商務英語中的書信的格式有三種，我們最常用的是齊頭式。它與一般書信的格式是回不同的，開頭頂答格寫稱呼Dear sir /madam, 第一段與稱呼的那行空一行r然後頂格寫內容，寫第二段時 ，要與第一段空一行的距離，然後頂格寫內容，第三段同樣與第二段空一行的距離，然後寫內容。即段與段之間空一行的距離，開頭頂格寫。這是與一般書信最大的不同，結尾署名也與最後一段空一行的距離，然後頂格寫Sincerely,再起一行頂格寫上你的名字
Dear Sir,
Thank you fou your letter.
Our procts will be shipped in July.
I will appreciated if I can get your offer!
『肆』 寫商務英語作文
Business English communication is a professional international trade doors vocational skills classes, English as a means of communication for business activities also represent the graates who work in the most widespread application of business English knowledge. After a semester of learning, I have basically mastered the international business English communications basic knowledge, the use of skilled foreign trade messages in the various language methods and formats, the correct use of professional terminology, from the establishment of business relations, credit investigation, the site, offer, counter-offer, orders, payment, transport, insurance, claims, settlements and other trade links to the letters of credit, invoices, bills of lading and other documents of the foreign trade of the proction, and also included confirmation, agreements, contracts, etc. set. With China's accession to the World Trade Organization, as well as a growing number of enterprises to enter the international market, foreign trade practitioners social needs constant development. This vast number of job-seekers to create good jobs. Cross-border between different countries commodity trading. As a result of the transaction the parties belonging to two different countries or regions, and therefore engaged in such business activities more than domestic complex, difficult, and thus more challenging. This requires a solid business personnel in the basic knowledge and highly operational capability in the modern international business activities, the use of skilled foreign trade and business English knowledge of English letters. The class will study the contents of a full integration practice work.
『伍』 商務英語作文
Dear xxx,
Hope you everything goes well.
Recently, the price of wheat is rising rapidly, which proces a negative effect on the sales. And there is no sign of lowering in the near future. Thus, we would like to decline our order of the wheat. Hope you take into consideration of our situation. We will discuss with you futhur about the details of exact quantity if you agree with it.
Your immediate reply will be appreciated.
Best regards.
Yours,
xxx
『陸』 商務英語作文大全
. 現在網路資源這么豐富，只要好好利用，一定對寫作有幫助的，你沒有必要去花錢買書啊，畢竟版書權本上的東西也只是編者從其他地方找來的。你可以自己去找一些資源比較豐富的學習論壇啊，裡面不僅僅有學習方法和經驗的分享，而且還有網路資源的共享以及下載，還可以找一個志同道合的夥伴一起練習一起奮斗，這樣學習下來動力也比較大，也比較持久吧，另外比如愛詞霸論壇，chinadaily的學習論壇也是不錯的選擇。
就像我之前學的那個網路寫作班，它也是有一個資料的免費獲取，報名還贈送語法講座視頻和電子英語雜志，挺好的啊~ http://justsaythreewords.blog.163.com/blog/static/19729426420119174371754/
『柒』 急求商務英語寫作文章例文
The Internet has changed a lot of things within the business world, including business correspondence. here once traditional, formal business letters were normal, quick business e-mails now rule the day. The ease and informality of the Internet often makes it seem we can write business e-mails poorly and get away with it; yet, it』s actually the contrary. Because e-mail is so accessible, people receive that much more of it and disregard anything less than perfect. Your business e-mails must stand out from the junk. The following tips will help you to create concise, engaging business e-mails for any purpose.
網路改變了商務世界的很多方面，商務信函便是其中之一。曾經，傳統且正式的商務信件很常見，而今，快捷的商務電郵成為主流。網路的便捷性和隨意性常常讓我們覺得，似乎商務電郵寫得糟糕沒什麼大不了的。然而，事實恰好相反。因為寫一封電子郵件太輕而易舉了，所以人們收到那麼多之後，便只處理那些寫得好的——你的商務電郵必須從電郵堆中脫穎而出才行。以下要點能幫助你寫出適用於任何目的的簡潔、搶眼的商務電郵。
STYLE
The human eye reacts differently to a computer screen than a piece of paper, so how you format your e-mail is vital. Use short, succinct sentences that get to the point immediately; remember, your goal here is to dispense important information, so give that to the reader right up front. Always include a greeting and a signature, and use as many line and paragraph breaks as possible; this makes the e-mail easier to read. And resist the urge to write a book. Business e-mails are better off short; the equivalent of a page or so is sufficient.
風格
人眼對電腦屏幕和紙張的反應不同，所以如何安排電郵的格式非常重要。使用短小簡潔的句子直奔主題；記住，寫電郵的目的是為了傳達重要信息，所以要讓讀郵件的人首先看到要點。不管什麼情況都要包含問候語和署名，並且盡量多折行多分段——這能使郵件更易讀。還有，要抑制長篇大論的沖動：商務電郵最好簡短；相當於一頁紙左右的量就足夠了。
TONE
For better or worse, the Internet breeds a nasty habit of informality. It』s okay to be slightly informal with your e-mail (people tend to expect it lately), but don』t write as if you』re talking to your mother or best friend. You need to strike a balance between traditional formality and e-mail informality. Think about your recipient and how they』d most likely write an e-mail. What words would they use? Would slang or jargon offend your readers? Use these considerations to create a concise, customized e-mail.
語氣
暫不論其好壞，網路滋生了「非正式」交流的惡習。電郵稍微非正式一點沒有關系（人們最近開始接受了），但是不要寫得好像是在跟媽媽或最好的朋友談話一樣。你需要在傳統意義上的正式和電郵的非正式中找到平衡。想想收件人的風格，以及他們最可能怎樣寫電郵。他們會使用什麼詞彙？俚語或行話會不會冒犯到讀郵件的人？將這些因素考慮在內，才能寫出一封有針對性的簡潔郵件。
GRAMMAR
Informality, whatever its root, does not excuse grammatical errors, and these can damage your e-mail. Grammatical errors show that you didn』t put much time into your business e-mail and you probably don』t care much about your message. Go through your e-mail carefully to make sure you have spelled correctly, and you have fixed all grammar and punctuation mistakes. Remove all rendancies and get rid of any clichés. Recipients, especially professional business people, will appreciate your attention to details and they will respond better to your message when no errors exist in your e-mail.
語法
不管「非正式」如何發展而來，這都不意味著允許犯語法錯誤—這些錯誤會毀了你的電郵。語法錯誤說明你沒有在商務電郵上下多少功夫，而且你很可能不太在乎你所傳達的信息。仔細通讀電郵，以確定拼寫正確，並且修訂了所有的語法和標點錯誤。刪除所有的多餘信息和陳詞濫調。收件人—尤其是那些職業商人—會很欣賞你注重細節，而且，如果你發給他們的電郵里沒有錯誤的話，他們會態度更好地回復你的消息。
RESPONSE
Since e-mail is an immediate medium, and a highly accessible one at that, it』s far easier than in paper letters to request a response – and far more likely that you』ll get one! Before signing off with your signature, be clear about what you want the recipient to do. Need a response via phone or with certain information attached? Say so! Your recipient will have a difficult time responding if they have no idea what you want from them. But remember: be polite when requesting action. There』s little worse than an overly forward or pushy ending.
回復
電郵是即時媒體， 也因此是一個高度普及的媒體。和紙質郵件相比，通過電郵要求對方回復更便捷—而且，你更有可能收到回復！在落款之前，一定要清楚你期望收件人做什麼。需要電話回復還是附上特定的信息？ 說出來！ 如果收件人不知道你想要什麼，他們答復你的時候就會很費神。但要記住：要求回復時一定要客氣。幾乎沒有什麼比在郵件結束時過度催促或強求更糟糕了。
『捌』 求商務英語的作文模板
BEC當中，我的寫作是最高分，如果你不好好准備寫作，那麼久很吃虧。英語寫作思維方式跟我們不太一樣，尤其還是商務英語的寫作。那麼怎麼才能寫好呢？寫作你主要是把句型記住，所謂句型，就是一些套話。不管是小寫作還是大寫作，每句都有各自的套話。你把4本真題的作文都看了，保證每天都寫2編，我當時是一點都寫不出，然後就看著答案，然後自己有點改動，把句子寫成自己容易記住的句子，這樣使句子好記住又不乏地道感。並且反復的練，每天都會有些，雖然有點麻煩，但是上手後，很簡單。我去年考試的時候題目還跟真題的題目有類似情節。大，小作文都有。寫的也很順手，成績單上是execellent.所以你只要把真題的作文變成自己的作文就可以了，當然不是照抄那種，也不是死記硬背。把範文的句子寫成自己容易記住的句子，在原句中增加或是舍掉一些自己總是忘掉或是寫不好的個別單詞，劍橋商務英語中寫作部分也是重點,我覺得劍橋商務英語要想拿到高分,應該把需要注意的問題牢牢記在心裡,考試時用這些條條框框的東西去套一下，就可以把錯誤及時糾正了。比如，盡量使用客觀中立的用語，避免加入個人感情色彩；如果分析得出幾個結論要揀最有把握的寫；注意文章的時態，有時用現在時，有時用過去時，但一定要選擇同一個時間基準……需要總結的東西很多，大家可以自己去體會。希望你准備考試的過程中努力，注意：考生寫作時，務必充分理解題目要求，明白寫作者的身份，看懂並結合提供的信息。格式上不要一會兒英英單詞一會兒美英單詞，保證它的統一性。沒有固定的應試寫作模板的，網上的模板也不適用於應付BEC考試的，所以這個LZ就不用糾結了，按我的方法可以做得很好。希望能幫到你。
『玖』 大學商務英語作文萬能模版
我以前用的模板，十句作文法。
原因模式：給出一個圖表或現象，要求說明其原因。
1. In the last few years,there has been a growing tendency in……
2. According to the chart, the percentage of ……has nearly increased by……percent compared with last year.
3. There are several of reasons for this significant increase.
4. First,……
5. 一句話具體闡述第一點原因
6. Second,……
7. 一句話具體闡述第二點原因
8. Perhaps the fundmental reason is……
9. 一句話具體闡述第三點原因
10. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that……
比較模式1：要求比較兩個事物，能區分優劣。
1. In recent few years,……
2. Although ……（事物有某優點）,I believe……( B事物更好)
3. To be sure,……（承認A事物有優點，一句話具體說明）
4. But,there are also some disadvantages.
5. Just think…..(一句話說明A事物缺點)
6. It also affects……(一句話說明A事物第二個缺點)
7. On the other hand,……（承認B事物優點）
8. 一句話說明B事物優點
9. Besides……（一句話說明B事物另一優點）
10. The advantage is more than……,
比較模式2：要求比較兩個事物，不能區分優劣。
1.…….are the two basic ways in which……
2.There are advantages and disadvantages to both ways.
3.the biggest advantage of ……is……
4.For example,……
5.Another advantage is……
6.But the disadvantage is……
7.By comparison,……
8.一句話說明另一事物優點
9.There is again a disadvantage:……
10.In my opinion,a balance of the two ways……
闡述模式：闡述評論事物的意義，重要性等。
1. With the advance in……,more and more……
2. In my opinion,……plays an important role in……
3. ……will exert a harmful effect of both……and……
4. To have a full appreciation of……,we may first look at……
5. Recent statistics have showed that……
6. Second,……
7. A typical example of this is that……
8. Perhaps the most remarkable advantage is that……
9. I can think of no better illustration of the effect than the fact that……
10. The consequence of ……cannot be overstressed,for……
評論模式：評論某一事物，從正反面分析。
1. In recent years,the phenomenon has been brought to public attention.
2. People』s views on……vary widely.
3. As is often pointed out……
4. There is no doubt that……
5. 一句話具體說明其優點。
6. Despite all the advantages,……,it may also bring its own problem
7. The main problem with……is……
8. ……pose a serious problem for……
9. In addition……
10. Whether it is good or not,one thing is certain:……
『拾』 求商務英語作文2篇
第一篇：
Gentlemen,
I would like to report to you a matter, that my subordinate Bob has left the laptop on train on his way home, and he has contacted the railway station for this omission, but it is not that likely to get it back. Bob has wrote me a letter to explain the entire details, I will update you latter.
Best Regards,
Jack
第二篇：
According to the diagram, we can know more about the unemployment trend of US, EU and Japan from 1950 to 1995. During the past 45 years, the unemployment rate of Japan had presented a stable curve with an approximate value 2% and despite those two oil price shocks, that indicates, in this period, the economy and employment of Japan were in a prime time as well as not subject to the international oil price. On the contrary, the unemployment curve of US exhibited to us a more variable status, which had a distribution with a maximum more than 8% and a minimum less than 4%, and remarkably, after those two oil price shocks on both 1975 and 1980, US unemployment rate rocketed twice on the two crisis years. All of these, showed that the economy and employment of US were changeful and especially subject to the international oil price. For EU's curve, we can see it is also stable as Japan before the first oil price shock, however, being attacked by the shock, the unemployment rate of EU rocketed just like US from 1975, and this increase had even been continueing untill 1985. In a sense, the economy and employment of EU largely depended on international environment and difficultly recovered once being in winter.