2010英語高考作文

① 2010年江蘇省高考英語作文範文

Dear teachers and schoolmates, it』 a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. I』m interested in English, and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it』s very important for me to learn English well. As everybody knows, vocabully is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I』ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.

Now I』d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we』ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more Englsih activities, such as English contests and festvals.

Thank you for listening. (150 words)

More and more people attach great importance to relationship in career success. Being polite is the first and most important step to develop good relationship among friends. Politewords can be easy yet very powerful in your daily life.

Always saying please and thank you will make your friends feel more comfortable and more willing to offer help when necessary.We all know that one man's success is based on how he deals with people! Always be grateful to other people's kindness and show your gratitude through the words you speak. The more support you win from other people, the faster you will move towards your goal.

Although some people may easily ignorance the importance of being polite,we students should form good habits and behavior in good manners. First,learn to be friendly to your parents and relatives at home. Then at school, listen respectfully when your teachers instruct you. Follow and accept their advice to improve yourself. You will make further progress if you express your gratitude in time. Remember, being polite costs nothing but it's worth of million dollars.

② 求2010全國高考1卷的英語作文的範文一篇。

Dear Ms. Smith,

I'm Li Hua , the chair of the Students』 Union of Yucca Middle School , which is close to your university . I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15 . It will start at 2： pm and last for about three hours . Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you . Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions .

I am looking forward to your reply .

With best wishes,
Li Hua

③ 2007~2010高考英語滿分作文 10篇（含題目）

北京卷
【試題回放】

第一節情景作文

假設你是李華，要給英國筆友Harry寫封信，介紹你班兩位同學競選班長的過程。請按下圖順序描述。

注意：

1.信的開頭已為你寫好；

2.詞數不少於60。

提示詞：競選班長monitor election

Dear Harry,

How are things going?

Last Monday,

Best wishes,

Li Hua

第二節開放作文

請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數不少於50。

In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.
【滿分範文】
第一節情景作文

滿分文(一)

Dear Harry,

How are things going?

Last Monday, my class held the monitor election, a fierce competition between two students really. First, the two candidates, Liu Dong and Wang Hong, gave their election speeches respectively. Then other students wrote a name of the candidate on paper and put it into a box. The teacher counted the number of pieces of paper voting for the two candidates fairly. Finally, Wang Hong got 28 votes while Liu Dong got 15. So Wang Hong became our monitor. It was an interesting election, isn

④ 2010高考英語作文範文

天津卷
Good afternoon. Ladies and gentlemen.

Welcome to this year』s English speech competition. Taking part in English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English. While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English. In the process of the competition, you should pay special attention to the following rules. First, you should finish your speech in five minutes. Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently. Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation.

I hope that the English speech competition will be a great success!

Thank you!

【思路分析】

這是一篇很實用的演講稿。旨在考查學生在實際生活中在某個具體場合下靈活使用英文來表達自己思想的能力。考查學生學以致用。本演講稿有三個寫作要點：1. 說明比賽的意義，如提高英語聽說能力，養成讀書的習慣等；2. 說明比賽的注意事項，如每人演講不超過5分鍾，語言流利，發音準確等；3. 預祝比賽圓滿成功。然後自由發揮寫出適當的結尾。

【較高級的結構和短語】form/develop a good habit of doing…; take part in; The first thing we can do is to make…; pay attention to 等。

希望你能滿意。

⑤ 2010上海高考英語作文範文

高考英語高考作文評分標准
1. 本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。
2. 評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然後以該檔次 的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最後給分。
3. 詞數少於 80和多於 120的，從總分中減去2分。
4. 評分時，應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。
5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言准確性的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影 響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞彙用法均可接受。 6. 如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數降低一個檔次。
7. 內容要點可用不同方式表達，對緊扣主題的適當發揮不予扣分。
【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好)；(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 覆蓋所有內容要點。
3. 應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。
5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6. 完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好)：(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6. 達到了預期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉一些內容，但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內容連貫。
6. 整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差)：(6-10分)
1. 未恰當完成試題規定的任務。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容，寫了一些無關內容。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內容的理解。
5. 較少使用語句間的連接成分，內容缺少連貫性。
6. 信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差)：(1-5分)
1. 未完成試題規定的任務。
2. 明顯遺漏主要內容，寫了一些無關內容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內容的理解。
5. 缺乏語句間的連接成分，內容不連貫。
6. 信息未能傳達給讀者。
不得分：（0分）
未能傳達給讀者仟何信息：內容太少，無法評判；寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。

⑥ 2010年天津卷高考英語作文範文

從話題角度來看，和往年一樣，社會類和教育類仍然是主要考查話題分別佔到11次和6次，當然這里社會類的話題包括工作，生活，城市建設等，內容涉及多個層面，這也是數量偏多的一個原因；教育類包含學科教育, 教育方式, 家庭教育, 學校教育等一直是高頻話題，科技類和環境類上半年考頻正常,犯罪類和政府類考查偏少，各出現了一次。值得注意的是，新聞媒體考題一般出現在上半年，今年考頻加大，上半年出現了2次。

重點考題分析

Some people believe famous people』s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems. While other think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2019/04/13)

4月13日考的這道題是整個上半年構思難度極高的一道題目，也是一道老題，很多有望上6的考生都因為這道題的構思問題，變成5.5分。有些學生對題目的理解有一些偏差，題目的意思是：名人對國際援助組織的捐助使得人們關注到問題，然而另一些人認為名人使得問題不那麼重要。第一方面比較好理解，名人利用自身的影響力使得問題得到關注，比如塵肺病對於大眾來說不是很常見，是煤礦工人得的一種病，很多明星通過公益活動，讓更多的人關注到這部分需要幫助的群體。另一方面，淡化問題的原因是大眾或者粉絲只關注名人的行為而忽視問題本身，對問題沒有後續跟進，也就最終解決不了問題。

The increasing use of technology in the workplace has made it easier for young people to get work and hard for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2019/05/04)

這道題審題很容易跑偏, 很多同學把重心會放在科技讓年輕人簡單地獲得工作,或者錯誤理解成科技讓年輕人的工作簡單化,忽視了後半句hard for old people。題目中含有並列關系and，需要兩者都要提及，所以後面論證只證明對年輕人的好處是偏面的。

總而言之，上半年題目以老題重現居多，同學們還是要多刷機經，有可能就碰到自己寫過的題目，下半年大作文犯罪類，政府類考題可能會增加，可以增加這兩類話題的練習。另外，要注意審題常見的坑，乍一看不太懂的題目不妨多讀幾遍，不要貿然下筆。

⑦ 2009、2010年高考全國卷1卷2英語滿分作文

2010年全國卷名家滿分作文
根據漫畫內容寫一篇作文漫畫內容：餐桌，許多貓吃魚，就一隻貓捉老鼠，別的貓說：「有魚吃還捉老鼠？」

餐桌上的「變化」
【考生姓名】郭雅陳 【考號】005
【考生檔案】1998年出生，郭燦金之女，開封市金明小學6年級學生。
小時候，我最愛看的動畫片就是《貓和老鼠》，每一次看到的，總是那隻「笨貓」要麼被老鼠戲弄，要麼尾巴被燒焦……所以，「笨貓」總是生活在老鼠的嘲笑之中，這讓我也總是對那隻貓充滿同情和惋惜。那隻「笨貓」的「笨」也就印在了我的心裡。
可是，時代在飛速發展。像湯姆一樣的「笨貓」在貓家族中越來越少，它們餐桌上的食物也發生了變化：
原來難以捕捉、味道也不敢恭維的老鼠已被人類所供給的味道鮮美的魚所取代。
貓們享受著美味，餐桌上充斥著不勞而獲的味道。
但依然有一些「冥頑不靈」的貓在捉老鼠。比如，這幅漫畫，別的貓都在餐桌上享受美食時，有一隻貓卻承受著別的貓的恥笑，揮汗追逐老鼠。
這幅漫畫讓我對快樂有了新的看法。快樂就是春耕秋收，雖然又苦又累，但心裡卻是收獲的充實。而窩在家裡不去工作，在家裡看電視、玩網路游戲，為自己的不勞而獲悠然自得，這種所謂「快樂」的背後卻是一種精神上的空虛。
現在的一些獨生子女，從小嬌生慣養，從不去奮斗。父母拼搏的成就，造就他們餐桌上一盤美味的魚。他們就不再想著去勞動，「笨貓捉老鼠」的那種不放棄的精神也真的只留在了動畫片里。
人們看到貓捉老鼠也只是嘲笑貓的笨拙與頑固，而勞動的快樂、精神世界的富足卻被擱置一旁。
收獲的快樂，吃苦奮斗的精神，也都隨之盪然無存。
抓老鼠有千般的苦與累，還有旁人的嘲笑，卻會有收獲的喜悅。盡管在抓老鼠的過程中也會有失落，但既然勞動了、工作了、努力了，又有什麼可遺憾的呢？不斷的拼搏與努力，一定會收獲一顆充實的心與一種不斷提高的能力。
而那些只會依賴人們給食物的貓，由於忘記了奮斗，它們的生存能力在退化，餐桌上的魚就成了它們懶惰的象徵。
在現今社會中，肯吃苦奮斗的人越來越少，不勞而獲的人卻越來越多。那些不知上進的人一生必然碌碌無為，等到年逾古稀回首一看，自己的一生沒有做什麼事；而那些肯吃苦的人，卻會成就輝煌。
餐桌上的「變化」象徵著人精神、追求的改變，原來那隻笨拙的貓也有值得我們學習的地方。
原來，通過勞動得來的美味是那麼香。
原來，拼搏的人生是那麼美！

2010年全國卷名家滿分作文
根據漫畫內容寫一篇作文漫畫內容：餐桌，許多貓吃魚，就一隻貓捉老鼠，別的貓說：「有魚吃還捉老鼠？」
要求選准角度，明確立意，自選文體，自擬標題；不要脫離材料內容及含義的范圍作文，不得套作，不得抄襲。

滿身花雨又歸來

滄海霽月，落崖驚風。一花一世界，一葉一菩提。在燈紅酒綠的都市中，在餘音繞梁的低回處，在清風送爽，點點星光之下，人，如同窗外的簾燕，在歸途中幾度徘徊。
能見證人類在現代化的大路上越來越遠的一個代表性群體之一便是貓。曾幾何時，貓已經從肩負重任的衛家戰士蛻變成養尊處優的寵兒。當我們高唱「老鼠愛大米」的時候已激不起貓的半點兒鬥志——它早已轉變了習性，愛上了魚。是什麼使貓失去了捉老鼠的本能？又是什麼使貓從獵人變成獵物？我想說「不」，貓決不是坐享其成的觀望者，它的體內還潛存著奮斗的本能。
隨著歷史的飛躍和時代的變遷，人類用雙手創造出生生不息的文明。文明的力量是偉大的，它不僅存在於精神，更滲透進政治、經濟等物質生活的各個領域，這不僅僅大幅度提高了人類的生活水平，也在很大程度上改善了人類的生活環境。我們不否認這種變化帶給人類的優越，但伴隨著進步而來的種種矛盾也日益突顯。而對優越的物質環境，人們失去了奮斗的本能，越來越不願勞動，甚至恥於勞動。各種高端科技產品及機器都以代替人類勞動為主要目標。殊不知，雙手的解放引發了思維的惰性。奮斗與勞動是大自然賦予的本能，而自然的本能在逐步褪去了，也標志著人類作為一種自然的生物卻脫離了自然，離自然越來越遠。
春來花自青，秋至葉飄零，這便是自然留給我們的本能。情感也是如此。
「住在布達拉宮，我是雪域之王。
走在拉薩城中，是世間最美的情郎。」
這是倉夾嘉措留下的詩句，也是他對於人性本能不可抗拒的寫照。他充滿傳奇色彩的一生，全是為這種本能而活。他不貪戀權位，更不為財富而誘惑，他的心，時時刻刻尋找人間最真實的情感，他把人間的至真至愛，把人間最美好的天性釋放得淋漓盡致。
問佛：為什麼總也遺憾？
佛曰：沒有遺憾，無法體味幸福。
問佛：為什麼下雪總在夜裡？
佛曰：美好的東西總在不經意間流走。
倉夾嘉措這樣問，人類也這樣問，因為我們總是在美好中留下遺憾，正如我們已淡去的本亂。
貓被誘惑蒙蔽了雙眼，忘記了本能。但我相信，人不會在科技的溺愛下失去追逐真性情的天性，更不會失去奮斗的本能。人是一隻簾燕，在自然的窗前徘徊，依然如泉般清澈，依然如茶般香醇，也依舊滿身花雨又歸來……

⑧ 求10篇2010 英語 高考滿分作文

高考英語滿分作文

作文題目

假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將於九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，並告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1.詞數：100左右：

2.參考詞彙：房租—Tent(n.).

I』m very happy to receive your letter, and I』m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I』ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句並用，還使用了以『which，』引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富於變化，不愧為考場佳作。

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Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there』re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I』U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.

Best wishes !

Yours,

Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，內容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時態語態使用准確，特別是結尾末段適度的發揮，既充實了內容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點。

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Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I』m so glad to know that you』ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I』ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It』s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you』ll like it. If not, I』ll try to find another place for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

滿分理由

本文內在邏輯性很強，由遠及近。由外及內，層次分明，錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結構完整，從開頭的問候語到結尾都很完備。

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作文：

Dear Bob,

I』m glad to hear from you.

Welcome to our city in september. I』ve found a suitable house for you.

The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I』ll try my best to help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

滿分理由

本文內容詳實，描述具體細膩，用詞適當准確，如「suitable house」、「not far from』』等，另外文中的選擇疑問句也很有新意。

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2009年5月1日世博會志願者招募儀式正式啟動，志願者是辦好世博會的一支重要的工作力量。另外，志願者或做家教，教小孩子閱讀、算術，或打掃公園與街道，或到醫院或療養院幫忙。你願意做志願者嗎?請陳述理由寫一篇100字左右的短文。

One possible version

I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:

First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others』 help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What』s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.

In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.

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不同人都有著不同的習慣，個人習慣直接關系著公共衛生。請根據下列要求，寫一篇120字的英語短文，開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

1. 介紹有些人不同的好習慣和壞習慣。

2. 習慣與衛生的關系：習慣是衛生基礎; 不好的習慣，會導致一些傳染疾病傳播，如AIDS，SARS， H1N1流感等。

3. 你的看法……。

One possible version

It is generally believed that different people have different habits. Some people are addicted to habits like drinking and smoking, while others pay special attention to healthy diet and never taste things like alcohol and cigarettes.

It goes without saying that there is close relationship between personal habits and public health. On the one hand, good habits serve as the necessary basis of public health, that is to say, without good habits, public health can』t be guaranteed. On the other hand, infectious disease is the natural result brought by dirty habits, like AIDS, SARS, H1N1 flu and so on.

Personally, I think it is high time we placed emphasis on improving personal habits and public health. If we mind our manners and behave ourselves well, there must be a bright and encouraging future.

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假如你是李華，你學校內有人得了豬流感，正在接受治療，你校學生非常害怕，請你寫一篇短文談談如何預防豬流感?

1. 平時外出戴口罩，少去人群集中的公共場所, 避免接觸病人等。

2. 勤洗手，保證充足睡眠，多鍛煉多運動等。

3. 詞數: 120字左右

4. 文章的開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數。

參考詞彙: 豬流感swine flu; 口罩 face mask.

Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?

One possible version

Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?

We advise that you should wear face mask and avoid going to the crowded place when you go out. We remember not to be in close contact with the patients infected with swine flu. On the other hand, the best way to stay away from this virus is to wash your hands often, and make sure that you have enough sleep. At the same time, we should do more exercise so that we can build up our body.

We are sure that we must overcome the threat against swine flu as long as we take proper measures and insist on taking exercise every day.

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注意：1.信的開頭與結尾已經給出，不計算在總詞數內。

2. 字數要求: 120左右。

人口膨脹population expansion;過度開發overdevelopment。

Dear editor,

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.

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Yours truly

Li Hua

One possible version

Dear editor,

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.

With the development of instry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man』s existence.

We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.

Yours truly

Li Hua

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低碳經濟下的環境保護之一

「低碳經濟」是一個具有廣泛社會性的經濟前沿理念，最早是在2003年英國政府發布的能源白皮書《我們能源的未來：創建低碳經濟》正式提出的。低碳經濟包括低碳發展、低碳產業、低碳技術和低碳生活等經濟形態，是指在不影響經濟發展的前提下，通過技術創新和制度創新，降低能源和資源消耗，盡可能最大限度地減少溫室氣體和污染物的排放，實現減緩氣候變化的目標，促進人類的可持續發展。

Protection of Environment

1. 目前環保還存在著許多問題。

2. 為了保護環境，3. 各國政府做了大量的工作。

4. 我的看法。

One possible version

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people』s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reced with the rapid growth of modern cities.

To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.

In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through ecation. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.

⑨ 2010年全國二卷英語高考作文翻譯

你說的是這篇嗎？

In my life, I prefer fairy tales to other tories. I think they are very fun and sometimes make me happy. One of the moving fairy tales is a great story named "The Little Mermaid」. It was so sad that I almost cried along with it as I read . I like the feminine because of her kind and love. And when she died, she changed into a bubble.To love her prince she choose suffering.How great she is ! Although this story had a sad ending, this little girl who has true love moved everyone . She live inmy heart forever!

⑩ 2010高考英語作文評分標准

2010高考英語高考作文評分標准
1. 本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。
2. 評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然後以該檔次 的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最後給分。
3. 詞數少於 80和多於 120的，從總分中減去2分。
4. 評分時，應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。
5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言准確性的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影 響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞彙用法均可接受。
6. 如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數降低一個檔次。
7. 內容要點可用不同方式表達，對緊扣主題的適當發揮不予扣分。
【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好)；(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 覆蓋所有內容要點。
3. 應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。
5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6. 完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好)：(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6. 達到了預期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉一些內容，但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內容連貫。
6. 整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差)：(6-10分)
1. 未恰當完成試題規定的任務。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容，寫了一些無關內容。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內容的理解。
5. 較少使用語句間的連接成分，內容缺少連貫性。
6. 信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差)：(1-5分)
1. 未完成試題規定的任務。
2. 明顯遺漏主要內容，寫了一些無關內容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內容的理解。
5. 缺乏語句間的連接成分，內容不連貫。
6. 信息未能傳達給讀者。
不得分：（0分）
未能傳達給讀者仟何信息：內容太少，無法評判；寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。

2009年高考英語評分細則

第一檔是極優檔，30分。標准為：書寫規范；覆蓋所有要點，內容充實；詞彙豐富，有修辭意識。

第二檔是優秀，26分至29分。標准為：緊扣主題；覆蓋所有要點，內容充實；語法結構多樣，詞彙豐富，顯示出較強的語言運動能力；語言小錯不超過4個。

第三檔是良好，22 分至25分。標准為：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點，內容較充實，語言有少量錯誤，但基本不影響意思表達。

第四檔是一般，18分至21分。標准為：緊扣主題，基本覆蓋所有要點，能夠表達基本內容；語言錯誤已影響了部分意思的表達，但多數句子基本正確。

第五檔是較差，13分至17分。標准為：內容不完成，要點不全，行文不連貫，語言錯誤較多，多數句子基本正確。

第六檔是差，6分至12分。標准為：內容混亂或主要內容偏離主題，能夠寫出少數與內容相關的可讀句。

第七檔是極差，0分至5分。只能寫出與內容相關的詞語，沒有有效信息；抄寫其他文章或只寫出與作文無關的內容。

評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定是否達到及格線。根據百分制計算，英語作文的及格線是18分。