A. 各類型高考英語作文經典範文
高考英語滿分作文-租房
假設你是李華,你的英國筆友Bob將於九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文,來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息,寫信介紹住房的情況,並告知住房面積為25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.詞數:100左右:
2.參考詞彙:房租—Tent(n.).
I』m very happy to receive your letter, and I』m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I』ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確,意思表述完整,行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句並用,還使用了以『which,』引導的非限定性定語從句,從而使文章層次分明,富於變化,不愧為考場佳作。
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譯:
我很高興收到你的信,我很高興地聽到你會去中國且在我們這里學習中文的消息。我已經找到了寓所。在芳草街,不遠處就是我們的中文學校。乘坐11號巴士就可以到達,前一站就是中文學校。寓所是在三樓,有3個房間,其中一個是卧室,其他兩個衛生間和廚房。有一張床,一個沙發和一個辦公桌,25平方米小公寓里有椅子,租金是每月500元。也許這房子不如你的願望,但我會盡我所能,滿足您的需求。如果還不夠,給我寫信,我會尋找另外一個更好的地方。
希望你能很快來到這里!
就到這里啦!
此致,
李華
B. 高考英語作文字數
高考英語作文亂寫湊字數最多能得0-5分。高考英語作文,不管是全國卷,還是地方卷,都有明確的給分標准。給分標准基本是一致的。一、一般一篇25分,字數要求150詞的英語作文評分原則如下:1.本題總分為25分,按5個檔次給分。2.評分時,可先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然後以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調整檔次,最後給分。3.概要部分少於20詞或多於40詞;全文少於130詞或多於180詞的,從總分中酌情減去1-2分。4.評分時,應注意的主要內容為:內容要點、運用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。5.拼寫和標點符號是語言准確性的一個方面,評分時,應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英美拼寫及詞彙用法均可接受。6.如字跡難以辨認,以致影響表達,將分數降低一個檔次。二、各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔:(21—25分)完全完成了試題規定的任務。l覆蓋所有內容要點。l語法結構和詞彙有個別小錯誤,但為盡量使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。l有效地使用了銜接手段,全文結構緊湊,內容連貫。完全達到了預期的寫作目的。第四檔:(16—20分)完成了試題規定的任務。l雖漏掉一、二個次重點,但覆蓋所有主要內容。l應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。l語法結構和詞彙方面應用基本准確,少許錯誤主要是因為嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。l應用簡單的語句間的銜接手段,全文結構緊湊,內容較連貫。達到了預期的寫作目的。第三檔:(11—15分)基本完成了試題規定的任務。l雖漏掉一些內容,但基本覆蓋主要內容。l應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。l有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,但不影響理解。l應用簡單的銜接手段,內容基本連貫。整體而言,基本達到了預期的寫作目的。第二檔(6—10分)未恰當完成試題規定的任務。l漏掉或未清楚描述某些主要內容,寫了一些無關內容。l語法結構單一,所用詞彙有限。l有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響了對所寫內容的理解。l較少使用銜接手段,內容缺少連貫性。信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。第一檔(1—5分)未完成試題規定的任務。l明顯遺漏主要內容,寫了一些無關內容。l語法結構單一,所用詞彙不當。l有較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響內容理解。l缺乏語句間的銜接手段,內容不連貫。信息未能傳達給讀者。0分:未能傳達給讀者任何信息:內容太少,無法評判;所寫內容均與試題要求內容無關或無法看清。
C. 關於高考英語作文
英語的連詞也有很多,在選取了一些適合高中生學習和掌握的連詞和連接語後,也大致的歸結為以下三類:
一. 表明事件發生的時間順序:
這一類連詞不多,大致有以下這些,也是最為我們學生所熟悉的,主要適用於第一類敘述類題型:
then, first, at once, next, after that, previously, while, when, the following day, etc.
二. 表明文章的組織結構:
這一類的連詞和連接語最多,也最為實用,適用的范圍也廣,能夠靈活廣泛的應用後四類題型。
1)漸進類(Listing): firstly, in the first place, secondly, thirdly, my next point is, last/finally, etc.
2)舉例類(Illustrating): for example/ for instance, to illustrate, an example/ instance of this is, let』s take….., take…. for example, etc.
3)重申類(Re-stating): in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, let me put it this way, or rather, namely, etc.
4)旁引類(Referring): in this respect, in that connection, as we said, apart from this, etc.
5)重述類(Resuming): to resume, to return to the previous point, getting back to the argument, etc.
6)總結類(Summarizing): to sum up, in short, it amounts to this, what I have been saying is this, etc.
7)強調類(Emphasizing): it is worth noting, I would like to direct your attention to, let us consider, we must now turn to, I shall begin by, etc.
三. 表明作者的觀點、態度
這一類連詞和連接語對於表達主觀觀點用極大的促進作用,適用於後三類題型。
1)看法類 (opinion expressing): in my opinion, I think/believe/suppose, I agree with…, as I think, it is said, people think, etc.
2)補充類(Introcing): further evidence: moreover, furthermore, in addition, what』s more, as well, etc.
3)原因類(Cause): because (of), since, owing to, on account of, e to, as a result of, etc.
4)結果類(Effect): as a result, hence, therefore, consequently, thus, so, etc.
5)對比類(Contrasting): in / by contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand, nevertheless, whereas, while, yet, however, but, etc.
6)比較類(Comparison): in like manner, likewise, in the same way, similarly, in comparison with, etc.
7)目的類(Purpose): to this end, for this purpose, with this in mind, in order to, so that, etc.
8)遞進類(Intensification): indeed, in fact, in any event / case, at no time, to tell the truth, etc. (上述連詞分類參考自「PETS閱讀中需熟練掌握的連接詞」一文)
熟練的掌握上述有限的單詞對於高中階段的學生來說要求並不高,相反其中很多單詞和短語都是學生的課本和練習中經常出現的,學生雖然經常讀到看到,但真正能在自己的寫作中運用的卻少之又少。現在按照上面的分類重新梳理上述連接語的作用和分類,把它們記住,就完成了我們高考作文進步的第一步。
高考作文評分的特點和應對方法
首先讓我們來看看高考對考生寫作能力的要求:
1) 靈活運用語法與詞彙、組句成文,正確表達的能力;
2) 審題准確、組織語言材料有序的能力;
3) 能使用好適當的過渡性詞語使上下文承接有序,自然通順的能力。其實以上三點合到一起就是檢測學生的英語綜合能力。上文已經說過,英語綜合能力的提高還是需要學生靠平時腳踏實地的積累。本文所要提出的,是在有限的迎考時間內有效的提高英語寫作得分的學習方法和迎考策略。因此,上面的第三點才是本文所要對症下葯的症狀。接著我們來看看高考閱卷的評分標准。
自從2001年開始,高考書面表達啟用了新的評分標准,規定書面表達按5個檔次給分。主要的評分原則有:評分時,先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然後以該檔次的要求來衡量,確定或調整檔次,最後給分;詞數少於80和多於120的從總分中減去2分。評分中應注意的主要內容為:內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性;如書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分數降低一個檔次。上面這一段話中的黑體字部分明確的表明連接語的運用得當對作文分值的影響。另外從高考閱卷的老師處也了解到:行文連貫是閱卷教師比較看重的一個方面。最後我們再來看看每一檔次的作文分值中對連接語的要求:
第五檔(很好):(21~25分):有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
第四檔(好):(16~20分):應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
第三檔(適當):(11~15分):應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文內容連貫。
第二檔(較差):(6~10分):較少使用語句間的連接成分,內容缺少連貫性。
第一檔(差):(1~5分):缺乏語句間的連接成分,內容不連貫。
從上面的評分標准可以看出,無論是英語水平處於哪一個檔次的學生,在寫作的過程中,如果想要交出令自己滿意的答卷,要想為自己的作文加分,都不能忽視下面這一條:要有適當的連接成分,即連接詞和連接語的使用。為了使文章在整體上結構嚴密,渾然一體,增強文章的說服力和感染力,考生應該在句子與句子之間,甚至段落與段落之間,恰當地使用一些過渡性詞語。
另外,考生很容易犯的一個錯誤是,在寫出若干個句子以後不使用連接詞或連詞,出現「run-on sentence」(連續句)現象,這是英語寫作的大忌。考生一定要牢記,在英語書面表達中一定要用一個連詞或連接詞連接兩個句子(當然,有時用一個分號要連接兩個句子),兩個連詞連接三個句子,三個連詞連接四個句子,依次類推。
要想讓學生最後能有針對性地應付高考中的作文題,一定先要熟識上述所有的連接語及其使用的語境,教師在平時可以多採用聯句成段的教學方式來培養學生使用連接語的習慣和語感,再加上平時的寫作練習,使學生能充分重視和體驗到連接語對於寫作的重要性。在進行寫作練習的過程中,可以給學生看一些經典範文,指出其中連接語對於文章結構的妙用,然後讓學生進行模擬練習,最後還要及時批改,對使用了連接語的作文進行表揚和點評以起到鼓勵學生的作用。
最後在考試時,學生在拿到作文題目後首先要明確寫作要求,即我們常說的審題,判斷題目到底屬於哪一類文體,然後在腦海中搜索適用的連接語,對於該用到哪些連接語一定要有一個清醒的思路,然後挑出有用的記錄在旁。從閱卷的情況來看,很多考生沒有認真思考,動筆就寫,之後在寫作的過程不斷出現一些錯誤,這是嚴重影響實際成績的魯莽的做法。
實例論證
我們首先看一看高考中的一篇滿分作文。
Sample Writing I (2001)
I'm very pleased to(強調類) tell you the changes of my life since(原因類) rection of learning load was brought in. But before that(比較類),I was often exhausted at weekends. I attended school and had classes the whole day. In the evening(時間順序類),I was often forced to do my boring homework and(結果類) I could not go to bed until 11:30. Since(原因類) the program of recing learning load was introced,my life,however(對比類),has been much more interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums,drop in at computer rooms and(時間順序) draw pictures in my leisure(=spare)time. After lunch(時間順序),I watch TV,read stories and(時間順序) look through newspapers to enrich my horizon. No longer do I stay up;on the contrary(對比類),I go to bed at about 10p.m. In short(總結類),I am quite satisfied with my life now.
上面這一篇作文,是一篇敘事性的文章,因此其時間順序類連接語也用得最多,在總共用到的13個連接語中,就有4個,但是每一個都不相同,因此通讀整篇文章,不僅不讓人覺得累贅,反而使文章結構合理,行文流暢。另外類型連接語的合理運用,就更使得整篇文章語言靈活,材料組織有序。相反,如果去掉文章中的所有連接詞,那麼這篇文章的分值就要掉兩個檔次。
再來看一篇高考範文:
Sample Writing II(2006)
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think(看法類) that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that(原因類) it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides(補充類), the film is usually more interesting, and(遞進類) it is easier to follow.
Some others have just the opposite opinion(對比類). They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile(對比類), the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with(看法類) the second view. Actually (遞進類)I have more reasons for it. I think(看法類) I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what』s more(補充類), I am able to better understand the author』s ideas. In a word(總結類), to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it. (2006浙江省高考參考範文)
這篇文章屬於議論文,因此,在其中用於表達主管看法類的連接語最多,其它的連接語也多是第三大類中適用於議論文的片語。一篇範文是老師閱卷的標准,範文既然如此,可見連接語的熟練使用對一篇作文有多麼的重要了。
綜上所述,希望可以通過本文的敘述,使學生認識到連接語在英語寫作中的重要性,並通過學習和掌握連接語的使用使學生的英語作文寫作水平能夠得到一定的提高。
D. 30篇各地的高考英語作文
書面表達
—個英文網站面向中學生徵稿請你寫一篇英語稿件,介紹「中秋節」及這個節日里的主要活動。
1. 寫作要點:它是中國的傳統節日之一;
2. 家人團聚;
3. 賞月、吃月餅;
4. 還有旅遊、訪友等其他活動。
注意:1.詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3. 開頭語已為你寫好,不計人總詞數。
參考詞彙:中秋節 the Mid-Autumn Festival 農歷 lunar calendar
賞月 enjoy the full moon 月餅 moon cake
【參考範文】
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends。
E. 高考英語作文怎麼寫
看到上面的回答,抄你估計也很頭大吧,至少我現在我看到這么多條條框框我都受不了了
下面是我英語作文沒有下過20分的原因,僅供參考,我說的都是從實際出發,並沒有引用別人的,都是我在一次次和老師聊天中,老師所說的,畢竟他參加過好幾次高考的英語改卷,因此還是比較有效的
首先我們要知道一件事:高考改卷的時間非常有限,幾乎要不了一分鍾你的作文成績就下來了,因此第一感覺非常重要。
其實想寫好高考英語作文很簡單,1是字體好看不要犯簡單的錯誤,2盡量使用有些難度的復合句,特別是第一句話很重要,建議用定語、狀語重句或者強調句開場。
這樣會給人一種高水平的感覺,只要第一感覺有了,分數也自然上去了,在考試中寫錯了不要緊,只能用筆在上面清清的劃道斜線 但是要注意不要影響到卷面的清潔度 我建議你先打個草稿,用自己能看動的字體飛速的寫好 然後重新修改一下 最後再抄到卷面上 雖然有點費時 但是你的英語字體工整卷面干凈 可以至少多拿3分 這是我多年的經驗 按照這中方法 你必須練英語字體 盡量優美點 開頭再配上一個復雜點的句子 只要後面再出現3個復合句並且沒有錯句和表達意思上的錯誤出現 整體絕對在20分以上 我可以保證
F. 高考英語作文範文!急!!!
08四川
What can I do for our environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening, I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.
08陝西Notice
Our monitor suggests that we have 「Friday News Hour」. But some classmates do not agree. We will have a class meeting in English tomorrow afternoon to discuss this suggestion. Please prepare your talk and take an active part.
May 6th, 2008
Dear fellow students,
Our monitor suggests that we have 「Friday New Hour」. I think that it is a good idea.
Everyone knows that we are busy all day. Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad, let alone what we can do for our country. By reading newspapers we can get more information about the world outside. So I think 「Friday New Hour」 can broaden our mind and enrich our school life. What』 more, it will help us improve our reading skills.
As for my suggestion, I think it』s better to have it twice a week. And we should make a choice about what we』ll read. I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity.
08福建Dear sir,
I』m Li Hua from Fujian. When I was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impressed me greatly, I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12, I think it is a kind or win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life ring the summer vacation.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
08安徽Dear David,
I』m glad that you』ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern.
As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our govenment encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.
I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are to make our country an even cleaner place.
Yours,
Li Hua
08湖南Sample 1: Thomas Edison
Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He once thought to be a boy who was not worth ecating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination.
I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1000 inventions. In his little time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname 「the Wizard of Meio Park」. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many inventions.
What impresses me most is his famous saying, 「genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration」. Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when and where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.
Sample 2: Helen Keller
Every time I read 「…if I had the power of sight for three days;, I cannot help being moved by its author Helen Keller, an ordinary but great American woman.
I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life. She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old. Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence, and communication seemed only a dream for her. But she never gave up and struggled to lead an active life. Under the guidance of her teacher, Ms. Sulliven, Helen learned to read and write, and became a famous writer. For a disabled person like her, this was really a wonder.
Helen has set an excellent example to all of us. Her story tells us that we should value what we have and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
Sample 3: William Shakespeare
Do you know Hamlet? Have you read the Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favourite English writer and the man of all ages!
Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little ecation, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world. I like him because his comedies and tragedies gring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life!
Since 「life is a stage」, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone has his own role to play, and I will try my best to play my role well.
08湖北Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn』t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China,it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.I was so desperate on hearing that.How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
08北京 One possible version:
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
第二節 開放作文 (15分)
One possible version:
From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort. I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses, even pictures. So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show e respect for them.
08全國2June 8, 2008
Dear Peter,
I』m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you』ll be able
to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV
and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you』ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes
Li Hua
08全國1Dear Sir/ Madam,
Greetings from Chian!
I』m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I』ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I』ve been watching her grow on your website. Now she』s going to be there. I』d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
08遼寧We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power. We can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day』s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.
08 江蘇Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is 「Being a Good Listener」.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don』t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. (151)
Thank you for your listening!
5月12日四川汶川發生大地震。很多人喪生,大量房屋倒塌,當地工廠、企業遭受很大損失,請你根據下面提綱和要求寫一則英語短文。
提綱:
1、根據以上信息簡要描述5.12汶川地震
2、你所經歷(或從媒體得知的)這次地震當時的情況
3、你打算(或已經)為地震災區做什麼
要求:1、單詞量120左右
2、語意連貫,合乎邏輯
3、書寫工整、整潔
範文:
A powerful earthquake hit Wenchuan in Sichuan province on May 12, which killed so many people. Due to the earthquake, a large quantity of factories and firms have suffered a big loss. At the same time, tens of thousands of houses have collapsed.
When the earthquake happened, I was attending class. Suddenly I together with my teacher and classmates felt continuous shaking All the students in our class rushed down stairs at top speed. Soon our school playground got crowded. I saw many schoolmates tried to connect their parents or friends but they failed to have phone calls on the fixed line or the mobile.About an hour later, we got the news that a powerful earthquake hit Wenchuan in Sichuan province.
Immerdiately after the earthquake, people throughout the country took actions spontaneously(自願地), offering their help, donation,and support to the rescue efforts. As a Chinese, I also tride my best to offer my help to the disaster areas. Besides praying for people in the disaster areas I donated money and blood. Moreover, I intend to be a volunteer in the disaster areas after the college entrance examination this summer.
G. 高考英語作文範文(帶翻譯) 高考英語滿分作文(帶翻譯) 謝謝
Dream and Reality
The beautiful legeng ,Chang'e flying to zhe moon, implies the dream of Chinese to explore the Moon . For thousands of years ,we Chinese have been working hard for it one generation after another . The moon orbiter ,Chang』e One,is named after the fairy . And the successful launch marks the nation's first step towards realizing its dream of exploring the Moon.
Indeed,I've got to learn a lot from this historycal event . First of all ,we need dreams in our life ,for they are the primitive drive to everything .Then we should follow our dreams and nevergive up.At the same time we have to be aware that the path to any success may not be easy to go though .Yet whatever we do ,we should believe 「Where there is a will ,there is a way ." And then try our best to make our dreams come true.
夢想和現實
嫦娥奔月的美麗傳說暗示著中國人民探索月球的夢想。幾千年來,我們中國人一代又一代地 為這個夢想努力著。嫦娥一號月球探測器就是以這個神話故事命名的。嫦娥一號的成功發射標志著中華民族實現探月夢想的第一步。
的確,我從這個歷史事件中學到了很多。首先,我們的生活需要夢想,因為夢想是一切事情的原動力。然後我們要堅持夢想,永遠不要放棄。同時我們必須認識到通往任何成功的路並不是平坦的。然而,不論我們做什麼,我們應該相信「有志者,事竟成」,進我們所能使我們的夢想成為現實。
Please Give up Smoking
Now we often see young men smooking in public places .They think smooking is a pleasure . How silly they are !
Reports show several millions of people die from smoking all over the world every year .Smoking all over the world evevry year .Smoking can cause a lot of illness.
Smoking is also the way leading the youth from bad to worse . In order to get money for smoking,some students take away the money from their parents'pockets.Some of them even steal money from others.
As we all know , smookers can't go on with their work without cigarettets.And the more they smoke,the worse their health will be.
Smoking is our dangerous enemy. Please give up smoking as soon as possible.
請戒煙吧
現在我們經常會看到年輕人在公共場所抽煙。他們認為抽煙是一種樂趣。他們多麼愚蠢呀!
報道顯示全世界每年有幾百萬人死於吸煙。抽煙會引起許多疾病。
H. 高考英語作文例文帶翻譯
【全國卷I海南、寧夏】
【試題回放】假定你是李華,正在英國接受英語培訓,住在一戶英國人家裡。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家,你准備外出,請給Mrs. Wilson 寫一留言條,內容包括:
1.外出購物
2.替房東還書 K
3.Tracy 來電話留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消
2)此事已告知Susan
3) 盡快回電
注意:1. 詞數100左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Mrs. Wilson,I』m going out shopping, and won』t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o』clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn』t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Yours, Li Hua
譯文:威爾遜太太,我要出去購物,直到下午5點才能回來。我已經把你要我還給城市圖書館的兩本書帶走了。今天下午大約1點鍾,特蕾西打來電話,說明天早上她不能在博爾頓咖啡屋與你見面了,因為她有重要的事情要處理。對此她深感抱歉,不過,她說你可以安排其他時間會面。她想讓你一到家就盡快給她回電話。她已經把這個變更告訴了蘇珊。此致,李華[名師點評]
本文屬於提綱式要點作文,是學生比較熟悉的題材,體現了英語學習應該注意實用性,生活型的原則。行文人稱、時態運用恰當、准確,各個要點間邏輯連貫,行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯,而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句,因此要仔細組織語言,合理安排結構。在語言方面,要特別注意簡潔明了,開頭要開門見山。
I. 高考英語作文
2010年高考英語作文萬能模板系列
一、英語書信的常見寫作模板
開頭部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I』m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I』m pleased to hear that you』re coming to China for a visit.
I』m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
結尾部分:
With best wishes.
I』m looking forward to your reply.
I』d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口頭通知常見寫作模板
演講及開場白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we』ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don』t be late.
結束語部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you』ll have a nice time here.
That』s all. Thank you.
四、圖表作文寫作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題. The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點 . This means that as (進一步說明).
We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節一 . After 動詞-ing 細節一中的第一個變化, the動詞-ed+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化) . The figures also tell us that圖表細節二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (進一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (結論). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (給出原因). /It is high time that we (發出倡議).
五、圖畫類寫作模板:1.開頭
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.銜接句
As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.結尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...
一,英語書信的常見寫作模板
開頭部分:
如何高興收到你的來信了。
讓我告訴你一些有關活動。
我很高興收到你的4月9日的信。
我很高興地聽到你要來中國進行訪問。
我寫信來感謝你的幫助我在美國逗留期間,你。
結尾部分:
有了良好的祝願。
我期待著您的答復。
我很感激,如果你能回答剛才。
二,口頭通知常見寫作模板
呼語及開場白部分:
女士們,先生們,我把你的注意力,好嗎?我有一個要發布的消息。
正文部分:
所有的老師和學生都必須參加的。
請把你的筆記本電腦和做筆記。
請仔細聽,我們將有一個小組的討論。
請准時,不遲到。
結束語部分:
請大家踴躍參加它。
大家都在歡迎出席。
我希望你有一個很好的時間在這里。
這樣就好了。謝謝。
三,議論文模板
1。正反觀點式議論文模板
導入:
第1段:最近我們已經討論了關於是否應... (導入話題)
我們的意見分歧就這一議題。(觀點有分歧)
正文:
第2段:大部分學生都予以支持。(正方觀點)
在這里,其中的原因。第一...第二...最後...(列出2〜3個贊成的理由)
第3段:但是,其他人則強烈反對。 (反方觀點)
他們的理由如下。在第一個地方...更重要的是...此外...(列出2〜3個反對的理由)
結論:
第4段:個人而言,超重的優點的缺點,因為我們會做弊大於利,所以我支持它。(個人觀點)
2。「甲或者乙」類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:有些人的看法,一個是優於B在許多方面。另一些人則認為,B是好多了。就個人而言,我寧願A,因為我覺得有更多的優勢。
正文:
第2段:有,為什麼我喜歡甲的原因很多,最主要的原因是...另一個原因是,...(贊同甲的原因)
第3段:當然,B也有一定程度的優勢... (列出1〜2個乙的優勢)
結論:
第4段:但如果所有這些因素考慮,甲比乙更從什麼上面的討論,我們可以得出這樣的結論...(得出結論)
3。觀點論述類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:提出一種現象或某個決定作為議論的話題
作為一名學生,我強烈贊成這一決定。 (亮明自己的觀點是贊成還是反對)
這可能會列出的理由如下。 (過渡句,承上啟下)
正文:
第2段:首先...其次...除了...(列出2〜3個贊成或反對的理由)
結論:
第3段:最後,我相信... (照應第1段,構成「總 - 分 - 總」結構)
4。「如何」類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:提出一種現象或某種困難作為議論的話題
正文:
第2段:許多方法可以幫助解決這一嚴重問題,但下面可能是最有效的。首先...另一種方法來解決問題是...最後...(列出2〜3個解決此類問題的辦法)
結論:
第3段:這是不是最好的,但只有2 / 3,我們可以採取的措施。但是,應該指出,我們應採取行動,...(強調解決此類問題的根本方法)
四,圖表作文寫作模板
圖表給了我們一個整體的圖表主題圖片。首先我們看到的是,圖表最大特點。這意味著,作為(進一步說明)。
我們可以看到從給定的統計數據,圖表細節一。動詞後,安泰細節一中的第一個變化,是動詞- ED鏡頭+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化)。這些數字也告訴我們,圖表細節二。在專欄中,我們可以看到,占(進一步描述)。
從這些數字來看,我們可以得出這樣的結論(結論)。這樣做的原因,據我所知是(給出原因)。 /現在是時候,我們(發出倡議)。
五,圖畫類寫作模板:1。開頭
看看這個picture. /圖為/從這張圖片,我們可以see... /由於在picture...顯示/正如圖片中看到that... ...
2。銜接句
提醒大家都知道,... /由於眾所周知,.../眾所周知that... /在我看來,.../據我所知,.../這景象我的東西在我的日常生活。
3。結尾句
在conclusion... /在brief... /在whole... /在short... /在word... /一般speaking... /正如已經指出...
J. 高考英語作文範文
03北京的 http://www.eol.cn/article/20030617/3087003.shtml
全國 http://www.eol.cn/article/20030609/3086343.shtml
全國2 http://www.eol.cn/article/20030609/3086344.shtml
05上海的 http://xzc.2000y.net/mb/2/ReadNews.asp?NewsID=339848
06上海的 http://..com/question/9661423.html
07上海的 http://news.xinhuanet.com/e/2007-06/15/content_6247182.htm
08上海的
June 8th
Dear Haiqing,
I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can』t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.
To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don』t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things?
Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don』t earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don』t owe us expensive summer camps; they don』t owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don』t you think so?
Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive. What』s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you』ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.
Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person』s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn』t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long?
Keep in touch.
Yours
Huangping
就只找到這些,希望對你有幫助~ 0(^-^)0