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1. 2019高考英語滿分作文

2018·全國Ⅰ卷

假定你是李華,你的紐西蘭朋友將去中國朋友家做客,發郵件向你詢問有關習俗。請你回復郵件,內容包括:

1. 到達時間;

2. 合適的禮物;

3. 餐桌禮儀。

注意:

1. 詞數100左右;

2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Dear Terry,

How
are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to
a Chinese friend』s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some
relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you
are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare
the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you』d better
bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What』s more, when you
are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing
food.

Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 全國Ⅱ卷

你受學生會委託為校宣傳欄「英語天地」寫一則通知,請大家觀看一部英語短片Growing Together,內容包括:

1. 短片內容:學校的發展;

2. 放映時間、地點;

3. 歡迎對短片提出意見。

注意:

1. 詞數100左右;

2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Notice

In
order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding
English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from
2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the
Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin
with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the
development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only
meaningful but also interesting. What』s more, everyone of you will be
welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a
heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

The Student UnionJune

2018 · 全國III卷

假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Peter 來信詢問你校學生體育運動情況。請給他回信,內容包括:

1. 學校的體育場館;

2. 主要的運動項目;

3. 你喜歡的項目。

注意:

1. 詞數100左右:

2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Dear Peter,

I
am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last
letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following
information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous
new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our
school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports
events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as
running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I』m intoxicated
with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the
challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 北京卷 · 第一節

假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣,計劃明年來北京上大學。他向你咨詢相關信息。請給他回郵件,內容包括:

1. 表示歡迎;

2. 推薦他上哪所大學;

3. 建議他做哪些准備工作。

注意:1. 詞數不少於50;

2. 開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。

Dear Jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【滿分範文】

Dear Jim,

I』m
so glad to hear your future ecation plan in Beijing in your last
letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am
sure you will have the most unforgettable experience ring your
college in Beijing.

Learning your keen interest in Chinese
culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you
where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich
culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The
Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be
helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

I
sincerely hope your dream will come true and it』s my pleasure to show
you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further
questions, please feel free to let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 北京卷 · 第二節

假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序,寫一篇英文周記,記述你們上周接待外國學生,帶領他們體驗中國茶文化的全過程。

注意:詞數不少於60。

ards
the mountains. 'Don』t be late for supper,' Uncle Paul cried, 'and keep
to the track so that you don』t get lost!' 'OK! ' my dad cried back.
After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so
peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green
pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It
looked like a beautiful woven(編織的)blanket spread out upon the ground
just for us.

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

注意:

(1)所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;

(2)至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語:

(3)續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;

(4)續寫完成後,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

Paragraph
1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

Paragraph
2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting
dark._______________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

【滿分範文】

Paragraph 1

Suddenly
a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I
yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse
from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident,
the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed
closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse
and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get
lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.

Paragraph 2

We
had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we
were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of
water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the
riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may
lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time
appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and
before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but
memorable experience it was!

2018 · 天津卷

假設你是晨光中學的機器人興趣小組組長李津,你的美國朋友Chris就讀於天津某國際學校,他曾在機器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團隊,參加即將於7月底在天津舉行的世界青少學機器人技能競賽。請根據以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。

(1)比賽的時間、地點;

(2)邀請他的原因;

(3)訓練計劃將發送其郵箱,請他提出建議。

注意:

(1)詞數不少於100;

(2)可適當加入細節,使內容充實、行文連貫;

(3)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。

【參考詞彙】

世界青少年機器人技能競賽 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you.

I』m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【滿分範文】

Dear Chris,

I
have good news to tell you. Targeted at cultivating the teenagers』
interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to
throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World
Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children』s
palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a
good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each
other meanwhile.

I am eager to invite you to join our team for
the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make
acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know,
you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous
competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this
field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By
working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring
others' strong points as well as double our achievements.

If you
are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training
program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could
bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I』m
looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

2018 · 江蘇卷

請閱讀下面文字,並按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。

Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny

Our
family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago,
Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the
information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I
simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we
ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the
case and told me she liked it very much.

Su Hua 6 July, Sunny

This
morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We
found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We
spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot,
and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I
was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?

【寫作內容】

1. 用約30個詞概括上述利用排名(ratings)進行消費的現象;

2. 談談你如何看待消費排名,然後用2-3個理由或論據支撐你的看法。

【寫作要求】

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;

2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱;

3. 不必寫標題。

【評分標准】

內容完整,語言規范,語篇連貫,詞數適當。

【滿分範文一】

As
a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient
source of information for shopping in our own consumption.
Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on
different consumers.

I tend to consult consumption ratings
whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality
of the proct, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my
beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods.
Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For
example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often
confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and
economical to buy books according to the ratings.

There is no
doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in
consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often
closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards
ratings.

【滿分範文二】

Nowadays,
most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These
ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in
customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes
unsatisfactory.

There is no denying that such ratings might bring
convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable.
As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others』 judgment on the
proct or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need
or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others'
advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be
neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful
manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice
for some to pay for good ratings on their procts or services so as to
increase their sales.

Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

2. 中考英語滿分作文帶翻譯. 80詞左右

all
of
the
children
in
china
like
spring
festival
very
much,但是中國孩子必須在寒假裡做作業,以便他們能夠記住他們以前學的東西,每個孩子都喜歡寒假!
14中考滿分作文the
winter
holiday
we
are
going
to
have
the
winter
holiday.ring
the
holiday
we
will
have
the
spring
festival.so
all
of
the
families
in
china
are
having
a
busy
time.but
children
in
china
have
to
do
the
homework
for
winter
holiday.so
that
the
could
remember
what
they
have
learn
the
year
before.each
of
the
children
likes
winter
holiday.
我們即將放寒假,在寒假期間,我們將要過春節,所以所有中國家庭都十分忙碌,所有的中國孩子都十分喜愛春節,因為他們可以吃很多好吃的食品和得到很多的壓歲錢,because
they
can
eat
many
delicious
food
and
get
many
money

3. 英語作文怎樣才能得高分

一、緊握一條時態主線
時態問題一直是英語備考中的難點,有些考生經常在一篇文章中出現兩種或兩種以上的時態,將這些時態混合使用的同時也增加了語法錯誤出現的頻率。我們來看下面的例句:
This great loss had kill Mrs. white,but actually this free her from her husband.(錯誤)
This great loss had killed Mrs. white,but actually this freed her from her husband.(正確)
建議考生在考場上作文的寫作過程中,盡量緊握一條時態主線,一是來寫起來操作性強,二來讓閱卷老師看的「明明白白」。寫作時經常使用的語法依次是:一般現在時、一般將來時、現在完成時、一般過去時和現在進行時。
二、增強語言說服力
在闡述某種觀點、說明某項情況的時候,考生要通過自己的語言讓閱讀者信服,那麼就要通過文中的句子來增強自己的說服力,如何增強呢?有兩個好方法,一是引用名人話語,二是使用被動句。增強文章說服力,使文章不再「徒有其表」。
「Data is becoming an asset which needs to be guarded as much as any other asset」says Haim Mendelson of Stanford University's businesss chool.(2007年閱讀理解Text4)試題的文章中出現引用名家話語是十分常見的成文規則,從側面說明作者觀點,同時經常是命題老師命題的高頻出題點。
被動句也是一個很好的法寶,將被動句視為對客觀事實的陳述,我們看下面的例子:
We find some use of computers in various fields.(主動句)
Computers have been widely used in various fields.(被動句)
可以看出,被動句更像是對時事的陳述。但是需要注意的是,不要過多使用,每篇出現兩至三個比較合適,過猶不及。多使用被動句,讓文章論點更容易「站住腳」。
三、書寫規范書面語
還有一點,考生千萬要注意,這也是一些英語底子好的考生經常犯的錯誤,那就是在書面語中運用口語化的語言。眾所周知,書面英語和口語有很大區別,有一些縮略語不是正確的書面語,所以需要引起考生的注意。
四、閃光詞彙必不可少
在考場作文中,but、because之類詞彙使得閱卷老師打不起精神,直接將文章打為C類,而高級詞彙的使用使得閱卷老師眼前一亮,尤其是試題中文章的精彩表述方式,考生要勤加總結。

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