Ⅰ 英語作文修改，謝謝
The ability to deal with problems As the saying goes:」 happiness is not the absence ofproblems, but the ability to deal with them.」 Nobosy』s life can always gosmoothly. For instance, there were many problems and failure in Edison』s life. Whenhe was eager for the invention of electric bomb, more than 1000 materialschosen to make the bomb were taken into consideration, all of which had beenproved useless regrettably. Nevertheless, Edison kept searching for the most suitable material until the electric bomb lightened! As Stephen Hawking once said:」 It』s not aproblem, It』s a challenge, enjoy facing it.」 We are supposed to develop ourability to deal with problems and be happy. For one thing, we should manage thingspositively. Attitude determines everything. For another one, never give up! Onlywe are optimistic and persist in dealing with things can the problems be solvedand we be happy finally. 這篇文章沒做大改動, 只是稍微改了一下.有的地方有語法錯誤,只是按照你的原意修改.
Ⅱ 英語作文求修改
寫得不錯，段落分明，格式規范，如果20分，最少可以得12-13分。
幾處語法錯誤及不妥內：
1. 第二段的by Chinese不妥，by沒有容必要啊(不是被動)。
2. 它下一句的倒裝不對。
3. 比較級more cheaper不對。
4. thriving和innovative不準確。
5. 結尾的最後一句不妥。結尾是用兩到三句重申第二部分的觀點，上面沒有提及的內容(哪怕是真的)不合適出現在這里。
Ⅲ 英語作文修改
第一句話image 應改為imagine ，後面是賓語從句，應用陳述句語序，即：what our life will be like...
Ⅳ 英語作文修改（怎麼改如下）
I want to read a book ring the winter holiday because books are very important to us. I usually read 【改成enjoy】a book in my spare time. For example【可以改為for instance，同樣的意思，明顯這個詞彙更高級】, when I have nothing to do, I will read【改為appreciate，有欣賞的意思】 it.
{ I also read a book before I go to bed， which has turned out to be right because they can improve my reading and writing ability.}這整句話前面那句是在不咋的，和你後面所用的詞彙完全不是一個檔次的，話說你幾年級，後面的詞彙到高中（turn out to be adj.)才會教。所以我決定全部改掉。。As a result of it,I broaden my horizon.What's more,I gain various knowledge.At the same time,I improve my reading ability in a short time.
Ⅳ 英語作文修改
Success has been an important motivation in the progress of human work. There is no doubt that success can encourage us to work harder. As a matter of fact ,the consequence of success can bring faith.in our mind .
But what qualities contribute to be successful in work ?However,most people are confused about it. I hold the opinion that honesty plays an important role in it..For example when we are students ,our teacher always tell us never to cheat in any exams even if you can not pass the exam. What matters most is whether you are an honest and reliable man.As a matter of fact, a leader always thinks highly of those people who are honest. What is more., honesty dramatically narrow the gap between people, which is impossible happening to dishonest people. On the contrary,being dishonest does do great harm not only to others but also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for example.The reason why so many babies get sicks there is that all of them drink the fake milk,which contains harmful substances that badly affected their health. To our great relief ,the procers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end..
你自己對照一下，按原文意思更改。不當之處，請諒解！能力有限。
Ⅵ 免費修改英語作文
www.pigai.org句酷批改網里的自測作文,可以幫你修改文章.
請問你這句句子想表回達什麼意思呢?我不太理解答.
Ⅶ 英語作文修改
But my teachers are serious and responsible work, amiable attitude of students.
這一句有問題，my teachers are serious and responsible work，把修飾語serious and responsible去掉是my teachers are work，不搭配可修改為：my teachers are serious and responsible to work. 後一句，犯同樣的毛病，可改為：take amiable attitudeto students
2. Although I am a negative person.
negative和 person不能搭配，改為：inactive
3. I joined in an army of activities. 這一句看不懂。
4. I will wait for your letter. 改為：waiting for you early reply. 符合英文書信的結尾用語。
其它沒有任何問題，用詞和句子結構都符合一個大一新生的英語標准。
註：請採納！
Ⅷ 英語作文免費修改
It was the best of times, it was the worst of times. It was the season of light, it was the season of darkness. It was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair. We had everything before us, we had nothing before us. We were all going direct to heaven, we were all going direct the other way ——in short, the period was as far as the present period, that some of its noisiest authorities insisted on its being received, for good or for evil, in the superlative degree of comparison only.
In my a opinion, the beginning of the 「Tale of Two Cities」 was not only the portrayal of modern society, but was also a warning of an era. Charles Darnay, anephew of Marquis St. Evremonde , gave up his knighthoods and property to become a successful teacher of French in London. He tried his best to become a ordinary citizen to obtain the recognization of French civic.Then he fall in love with Lucie Manette whose father suffered persecution for Marquis St. Evremonde, what a funny joke of fate!
I believe the love could dissolve hatred, a matter of fact Dickens had the same viewpoint with mine. 「It is a far, far better thing that I do, than I have ever done; it is a far, far better rest that I go to, than I have ever known.」 The end of the story give a nice ending for Charles and Lucie, they live together with harry for ever.
Equality and fairness are what people seeking, which led to the French Revolution. But these so-called "patriots" would like to see more and more innocent prisoners going to the guillotine, was that true? How many innocent person have died in democracy?
改了一些， 你照著對一下就看出來了。
沒看過那電影或者電視劇，所以也不知道你寫的是什麼，不過改一改也是可以的。
你是上大學的還是高中的。。。 在我這邊高中好多英國人都沒你這好文筆，我更是寫不出來了！
Ⅸ 英語作文修改
cause great改成greatly 很大程度的改變比你產生了巨大的影響更貼切一些。
save up改成save save up 是儲存的意思，節省時間版用save就可以。
technique can cause problem too. problem加上s，變成復數權。
We human indeed us改成Our human。
and not lose要表達的是「而不是」的意思，所以改成「，rather than」