Ⅰ 北京中考英語作文評分標準是什麼滿分是15分的!急求答案!!!!!
上面四點只是一個基礎的評分標准,對於高分作文,除了滿足這些外,非常重要的內方面,一容是表達,好的作文語句是非常優美的,就像漢語作文一樣,語言的運用是一個得高分的重要因素;另外一點就是主題,在語句表達精彩的基礎上,所描述的主題、論點深刻,獨到,也是得高分的一個關鍵。
你可以找些高分作文看一下,它們除了滿足上述四點外,語句是很優美的,論據、論點也很好,這也是成為範文的原因所在。
多找幾篇研究一下,你會有所收獲的。
Ⅱ 中考英語作文應該如何輔導
一、認真審題來,確定時態人稱自,同時關注題材格式時態:故事性文章一般用過去時,其中表達感受時可用現在時。說明性或議論性文章一般用現在時,舉例時可用過去時。根據題目要求也會出現時態的交錯使用,如過去和現在的對比等。如果句中出現了時間狀語,時態則要遵循時間狀語。如ago,last…——過去時next,in…——將來時等人稱:注意在句子中人稱的統一。例如:Thanks to the teachers,we have improved our English.其中we和our就是人稱的統一。格式:注意書信格式的開頭和結尾。
二、找全信息點,緊扣主題,突出重點切忌只看錶格中或所列1、2、3中的信息點。一定把題讀全,找齊信息點,建議用鉛筆標出,寫完後再塗掉。根據題目,可適當增加合理內容。特別注意文章要有開頭和結尾。
Ⅲ 如何提升中考英語作文
學生模仿課文中的文章寫,模仿範文寫,老師批改後不合格接著再寫,會寫同一話題不內同內容。寫作不容是一朝一夕的事情,它是一個由淺入深、由易到難的訓練過程。任何一個環節出現問題都會影響到學生寫作能力的提高。
只有教師充分利用材料,且對於學生的寫作訓練給於高度的重視,並幫助其形成有效的寫作策略,學生的寫作能力才能得到有效的提高。
我們先看一下九年級寫作的要求,這是我們教學的依據。 1.能正確使用標點符號;
2.能根據寫作要求,收集、准備素材;
3.能獨立起草短文,簡訊,並在教師的指導下修改; 4.能用常見的連接詞表示順序和邏輯關系; 5.能簡單描述任務或事件; 6.能根據提示寫出簡單的段落。
Ⅳ 如何寫好中考英語作文
如何寫好中考英語作文?有10字原則:「結構+要點+邏輯+語法+亮點!」
結構:中考最流行的結構就是三段式,深受各地區中考英語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。為什麼呢?因為這種結構十分清晰。「觀點——要點——總結」讓人一目瞭然。三段式的第一段:簡單明了,開門見山,不超過2句話,如,我們想表達小強很強壯,第一段直接說 XQ is extremely strong. 觀點明確,這一句足矣。第二段:分2-3點說為什麼他強壯。1. 每天吃10頓飯,He has ten meals everyday! 詳舉吃的是什麼。2. 每天運動2小時,He does exercise 2 hours a day! 詳舉做了什麼運動。第三段:經過第二段的論證,可以得出結論。但請注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等。如,How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!
要點:實際上中考英語寫作就等於兩個字,翻譯!因為中考英語寫作一般會給出幾個要點,要求必須在文章中有所體現。文章寫的再好,只要缺少要點就會扣分。所以要點,也就是文章的第二段內容,要做到全,圍繞中心。
邏輯:這里的邏輯實際指的就是邏輯詞。最常用的就是表示遞進的,轉折的,總結的邏輯詞等。遞進:除了first, second, third, finally 等還可以使用高級點的,如first of all(首先),in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word, all in all(表示總結的)。轉折:but, yet, however等。真正有經驗的閱卷老師會很注意這些邏輯連接詞,因為這些詞體現了這個文章的思路。
語法:其他幾點都不是硬性的要求,不那樣做不能說是錯,只能說是不好,但是語法卻是硬性的。如,單詞的使用,時態等。
亮點:當我們將前八個字都做得很完美的時候也只能得到一個二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最後兩個字,亮點至關重要。大家設想如果我們是閱卷老師。有兩篇寫人美麗的作文擺在我們面前,都是結構清晰的三段式,要點都很全,都用了一些邏輯詞,都沒有語法錯誤,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇卻用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我堅信正常人都會給B篇高分的。這些高級一點的詞彙,片語,句型便是我們得到一等文的最有力的絕招。所以,以後寫英語作文要養成一般詞彙限量用的好習慣。
只要把這十個字都搞定了,那麼就能輕松寫好中考英語作文!
Ⅳ 北京市歷年中考英語作文
1、 小作文5分
一個美國小孩 來中國後 給你郵的一張明信片有內容
要求版 你給他回寄一張明信片
旁邊有個表 是往那權里寫的
2、大作文15分
I learn english for ...
內容:學英語的目的 原因 今後打算
要求: 80 ---100 字
2008年遼寧沈陽中考作文:看似好寫實有深意
心目中開放的一朵花》其實不好寫,《螞蟻的哲學》須重新提煉主題
沈陽2008年中考語文作文題
以下作文題任選其一,文體不限:
1.螞蟻的哲學:A.深謀遠慮;B.全力以赴;C.積極進取;D.從不放棄。
2.在你心目中開放的一朵花。
Ⅵ 近幾年中考英語作文!帶翻譯,要5篇
如果讓你創建一個節日,你會創建怎樣一個節日,為什麼要創建它,時間是什麼時候,在那天要做些什麼,在什麼地方,哪些人......
If I am able to create a holiday, it would be the "Food and Fun Day". Think about it, with all the school homework and exams; it would be really nice to take a break from all the studies and just relax. Also I think everyone would enjoy the great food and lots of fun. It』s just like a big party where everyone is invited. I would like the "Food and Fun Day" be set ring the middle of the school year, where everyone can relax from their studies for a day. On that day, everyone will bring food and drinks to school and share what they brought with friends, students, and teachers. There will also be games and winners gets great prizes. Think about it, how great it would be to have a holiday like that!假如你叫李華,請根據以上要求,寫一封想作奧運會的志願者申請信。
要求:字跡工整,100詞左右。開頭已寫好,不計入總詞數。
2、參考範文
Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. As the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, I』d like very much to be a volunteer.
All our Chinese are hosts for this special event. Above all, I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests and athletes from all over the world. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture. What』s more, as we all know, English as an international language, will play an important role in communication ring Olympics, and I am good at it. I can express myself fluently and clearly in English.
To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.根據國務院發布的「限塑令」,自2008年6月1日起,在所有超市、商場實行塑料購物袋有償使用制度,超市、商場一律不得免費提供塑料購物袋。請你寫一篇英語短文,要求包括以下內容:
現狀:目前中國每天消費近30億個塑料袋,造成了嚴重的資源浪費和環境污染;
限塑令的意義:減少塑料袋使用量,提高公眾的環保意識;
提倡:重拎布袋子,重提菜籃子。
參考詞彙:禁令 ban 意識 awareness 提倡 advocate
2、參考範文
The problem of 「white pollution」 caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an important role. In China about three billion plastic shopping bags are consumed every day, which results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution. Luckily, The government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demanding that all stores and supermarkets not provide customers with free plastic bags after June 1. The rule will undoubtedly rece the use of plastic bags and enhance the awareness of environmental protection. It is highly advocated that we should turn to cloth bags and shopping baskets from now on.
假設你是李華,在得知四川大地震的消息之後,作為校學生會主席,你決定給災區的中學生寫一封慰問信,主要內容包括:
1、得知四川發生突如其來的特大地震災害,心情非常難過;
2、看到你們表現得非常鎮定、堅強,感動得熱淚盈眶;
3、患難見真情,全校師生向你們表示慰問的同時,共計捐款12萬元;
4、美好家園可以重建,希望你們要看到希望、充滿信心。
參考詞彙:捐款 make a donation to
2、參考範文
Dear friends,
I』m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown. Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you. I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you. Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty. A better hometown can be rebuilt. Therefore, never give up whatever happens. Remember we won』t be far away when you need any help!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
中考英語作文範文--我的家鄉
請你根據下面的提綱,以「我的家鄉」為題,寫一篇100—120字的短文。
提綱:
(1) 家鄉的地理位置;
(2) 解放前的情況;
(3) 解放後的變化;
(4) 對家鄉的感情。
My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
Ⅶ 初三英語作文
My Views on Bicycle-sharing
Presently, in big cities like Shanghai and Guangzhou, bicycle-sharing system has becomeincreasingly popular. A large number of shared bikes can be found and rented at a low price.Moreover, you can park the bike almost anywhere you like. Urban transportation has thus been made much more convenient and even revolutionized.
However, along with its rapid development, bicycle-sharing system also brings some problems, including random parking, vandalism and possession of shared bikes, etc.
To solve these problems, there are some measures for the authorities to take. Firstly, the government could implement more strict laws and rules to regulate the operation and management of bicycle-sharing system. Secondly, the public should raise their awareness of using shared bike reasonably. Lastly, urban transportation system should be upgraded and improved to accommodate automobiles, bikes and pedestrians.
To conclude, a sensible attitude should be held toward bicycle-sharing program. With effectiveand efficient measures taken, and efforts made by those involved, it can be expected that bicycle-sharing system will play a contributive and constructive role in urban public transportation.
共享單車之我見
目前,在上海和廣州這樣的大城市,自行車共享系統已成為越來越受歡迎。大量的共享自行車可以找到並出租,價格低廉,而且你可以把自行車停放在你喜歡的任何地方。城市交通因此變得更加便利,甚至革命化。
然而,隨著自行車交通的迅速發展,自行車共用系統也帶來了一些問題,如亂停車、故意毀壞公物、共用自行車等。
為了解決這些問題,當局採取了一些措施。首先,政府可以執行更嚴格的法律法規,規范自行車共用系統的運營和管理。第二,公眾應該提高合理使用共用自行車的意識。最後,城市交通系統應升級改造,以適應汽車、自行車和行人。
最後,應該對自行車共享計劃採取明智的態度。以有效地採取措施,通過人的努力,可以預期的是,自行車共享系統將在城市公共交通中發揮積極和建設性作用。
Ⅷ 2017北京中考英語作文多少分
滿分十五分好嗎!我明兒就二模了,馬上中考,不會錯的。