❶ 求以合作為主題的英語作文,字數在300~500之間謝謝
審題,是考生接觸作文題後首先跨出的第一步,至關重要。審題正確,所寫文章符合題旨,則高分有望;審題有誤,下筆偏離題意,則全盤皆輸,用「失之毫釐,謬以千里」來形容並不誇張。審題要做到「瞄準靶心,命中十環」,必須抓住下列四點。
掃描信息
這是指對作文試題各部分的字句作仔細審讀、揣摩,正確、全面地理解其含義,不偏不漏不折不扣地按要求作文。掃描的重點有四個:人稱、動詞(「選取」、「聯系」、「結合」等)、特殊要求、標點(如省略號)。南通市中考作文《合作》,有兩篇作文令閱卷老師深感可惜。一篇作文的大意是外星人來到地球,「我」和外星人「合作」解決了他們的難題,想像豐富,描寫生動;另一篇是議論文,中心論點是「合作是成功的保證」,作者列舉古今中外四個典型事例,論證有力,語言流暢。但這兩篇文章最後只能被評為三類卷,為什麼?因為這兩名考生沒有仔細掃描提示語中的下列要求:「……請選取你生活中的一段經歷……寫一篇文章,表達自己的真切體驗。」其中「你」(人稱)、「選取」(動詞)、「真切體驗」這三處關鍵詞語都被兩名考生忽略了,按照評分細則,這樣「走題」的文章一般不能進入二類卷。如果第二篇作文的作者能掃描出上述要求,詳寫「我」合作成功的事例,將原文中古今中外的例子壓縮為概述,那文章可能進入一類卷,這種因審題失之於粗而導致「千里之失」的教訓值得我們汲取。
辨析概念
特別是「似同實異」的概念,要通過比較把握各自的內涵,決定取捨。例如某市中考要求以「特長」為話題寫作,有名考生這樣寫:「我」原來對英語沒興趣,成績自然不佳;後來因為經歷了某一件事,認識到學英語的重要,興趣變濃了,考試也獲得了班級第十名。文章細節描寫生動,情感變化過程也寫得細膩,但作者一開始就進入了混淆概念的誤區。「興趣」和「特長」是有聯系但內涵不同的兩個概念,「興趣」可以轉化為「特長」,「有特長」一般也以「有興趣」為前提,但「特長」不等於「興趣」,它是指「人無我有」或是「人少有而我有」的技術和能力。上述病文如要對准話題「特長」,則構思框架必須作如下變動:「後來不僅英語成績提高了,我還嘗試著用英語演課本劇,在全市的文藝匯演上,我還得了特別獎呢!」英語成績全班第十名算不了「特長」,但能用英語演課本劇且獲獎,的確稱得上「特長」,與話題相符,如果立意正確而鮮明,就能獲得高分。
貫穿始終
這是指文章的切入、展開、收攏都要圍繞同一題目展開,中途不能游移不定,甚至隨意轉換。一名考生面對「興趣」話題,擬題「拜拜,我的鋼琴」,寫「我」上小學時在鋼琴世界盪漾,享受愉悅,但到了初中,沉重的負擔逼得「我」與鋼琴「拜拜」……寫至此,文章筆鋒一轉,歷數應試教育之弊端,一口氣寫了300多字。這樣,文章主題由「興趣」轉移為「應試教育」。其實,文章展開至與鋼琴「拜拜」時仍可持續「興趣」話題寫,如寫重負下的希冀,精要地議上幾句教育理念、模式與培養、發展興趣的關系等,這樣就能使文章話題首尾相援,一以貫之。
「准」中求「活」
審題的「准」與「活」不是對立的而是統一的,關鍵是要對題中信息的挖掘。例如,廣州市中考「傾聽」話題,導語中說傾聽「是接受信息的渠道」,「是凈化心靈的藝術」,這就暗示了「傾聽」的對象包括可聽信息和不可聽信息,文學作品、不發聲的物也可作為傾聽對象來寫。
一種體裁
只寫記敘文,好好把記敘文復習好。
兩個原則
1、真實才能動情。真正能打動讀者的,還是那些你親身經歷有真情實感的身邊小事;
2、妙語才能煽情。只有風趣幽默,生動活潑的語言才能讓讀者眼前一亮,讀之使人不斷點頭默嘆。
三字要求
1、穩:寫好事,力求能夠按照記敘文的六要素把事情交代清楚,開頭結章節附註意點題,結尾處要點明中心,穩定的發揮好自己的寫作水平。特別是寫作能力較好的同學,不要強求自己必須寫出「驚世之作」來,考試作文能夠發揮自己80%的寫作水平就很了不起了。
2、細:不要像電視劇情介紹那樣的簡單敘述,中間要加入環境描寫、人物外貌、動作、語言、心理描寫,能力好的同學再來些遠近相襯、動靜相映、側面烘托、環境渲染、五覺描寫,是文章細膩、動人。
3、精:對於一般的同學來說,「精」體現在:(1)選擇自己最拿手的內容;(2)寫出自己最好的字;(3)採用自己最順手的結構(總分結構或順敘方式),力求發揮好自己的水平。對於寫作能力較好的同學來說,「精」應體現在:(1)選擇較有新意的、又是自己有把握寫好的內容;(2)有漂亮的書寫;(3)精心的安排好開頭和結尾,適當的採用倒敘、襯托、聯想、象徵、描寫、抒情、以小見大、欲揚先抑、渲染氣氛、借景抒情、托物喻志、以物喻人的方法方式結構文章;(4)採用適當的修辭手法,特別是運用比喻、反復、排比、反問等手法,恰當的運用成語、引用格言名句,增添文采。
四個流程(保住基本分)
1、審清題意:千萬注意,題意審不好,來個文不對題,哪就……應該先花2-3分鍾看看作文題,然後在開始答基礎知識題目。
2、立好中心:至少指導自己想說什麼,是喜歡、是厭惡?是感動、是反對?是快樂,是痛苦?是哲理、是深情?是贊揚、是批評?…………用一句話把它寫在草稿紙上。
3、選好材料:符合題目要求的、自己最熟悉的、能夠寫好的事。
4、寫好提綱:(1)用一句話寫出中心內容和主題;(2)分清開頭、中間、結尾各寫什麼?(3)打好開頭、結尾的細稿,以及每段的開頭句。
接下來就是在試卷里寫作文啦,要力求一氣呵成,只要提綱和開頭、結尾、段落開頭的稿子打得好,一氣呵成事不難做到的,思路順暢了20分鍾就可以把作文寫好。
五項技巧(贏得感情分)
1、有一個靈活的頭腦:造句法、篩選法、換題法。
2、有一張可愛的臉蛋:書寫要工整,自己的字能夠寫多好就必須寫多好,不得使用塗改液,不得隨意修改,特別是開頭、結尾和段落的開頭句,不能修改。
3、有一雙閃亮的眼睛:好的文題等於成功了一半。
4、有一身漂亮的衣裝:(1)一個最拿手的題材(適合自己);(2)一個好故事(好布料);(3)一個好結構(好設計);(4)一口流暢、優美的語言(好花紋、好色彩)。
5、有幾件精美的飾品:(1)倒敘、描寫、引用開頭(好發型)(2)結尾:議論反問式、含蓄餘味式、贊美抒情式、哲理深思式、名言點睛式、聯想做夢式、決心號召式(名鞋);(3)名言名句名作的恰好點綴(鑽石喲);(4)用景物描寫渲染氣氛(如夢的紗巾)。
六個大忌(莫丟冤枉分)
一忌潦草塗改:書寫要端正,千萬別連文題都改,只改明顯的錯別字,將錯就錯,能夠不改的就不改。
二忌過短過長:字數一定要足,字數不足,寫得再好也很難及格;字數不能太多,不要超出試卷中的作文紙,萬般無奈之下,也只能在2行以內。
三忌開頭議論:還不如開門見山、直接點題開頭的好,能來點環境描寫,就先來點描寫。
四忌分段太少:4-6段為好,千萬別少於3段。
五忌文不對題:不說也知道會有什麼後果。
六忌選材太俗:別總是玩呀、救落水兒童呀、貓啊狗啊……
七隆重忌一點,千萬別把人寫死了,也不能把人寫成癌症。
❷ 一篇關於合作的英語作文
Teamwork is very important
I am not fond of basketball,let alone to play it.But I have seen a wonderful basketball game between my class and postgraate class.It is so wonderful that I cann't help asking myself "is it real".The answer is pretty yes.I also learn a lot from the game.
First ,teamwork is very important.You are sure to fail if you play by yourself.So five members must play together and well orgnized.Second ,you should have a aim.In order to reach it,you should try your best.
Last,never give up whatever have happened.Even if you get low scores,you shouldn't give up.If there is a will,there is a way.If there is a will ,there is also a opportunity.And you can make failure into success.Believe yourself and believe your team.You are the best one.
❸ 有關合作的英語作文
As the saying goes, "one boy is a boy, two boys half a boy, Everybody's business is nobody's business. An ant to move, move can not afford to move, two ants to move, the body sway to and fro, three ant to move, gently carried into the hole." The above two statements have different results. "Three monks" is a team, but they have no water to drink because of mutually making excuses, don't speak cooperation; "three ant to move" can "gently carried into the hole", it is the unity and cooperation of the results. There is a good song "unity is strength", and the power of teamwork is endless, once developed the team will create unbelievable miracle. Nowadays, with the advent of knowledge economy, knowledge, technology constantly bring forth the new through the old, the competition is increasingly intense, the increasingly diverse needs of the community, so that people are facing in the work of the study situation and the environment is very complex. In many cases, indivial ability alone has been difficult to fully address the various perplexing problems and take effective and efficient action. All of these are people who need to form groups, and require further interdependence between member organizations, interrelated, mutual cooperation, establish cooperative team to solve the problem of perplexing, and coordinate the necessary action, team ability development and continuous innovation, rely on the power of teamwork to create a miracle. The team not only emphasizes the indivial work, more emphasis on the overall performance of the team. Team relies on not only strengthen the collective discussion and decision making and information sharing and standard, it emphasizes the joint contributions of member, can get real collective achievements, sum of the collective achievements over the indivial performance, team more than the sum of its parts. The team is the core of common dedication. Need a to convince everyone to target the common dedication. Only practical and challenging goals, work motivation can motivate the team spirit and dedication, inject inexhaustible energy to work. So the team is a voluntary cooperation to reach the established goal appeared and collaborative effort. All the resources and talents which can motivate team members, and will automatically remove all the disharmony and injustice, and will give those who sincerely, selfless give return. If the team is out of be willing, it will have a powerful and lasting force. The team are often able to inspire unbelievable potential group, the total collective collaboration of the results do tend to be more than indivial performance. Is the so-called "Chengyu mountain, together with soil change gold." One group, if well organized, popular feeling drifts, everyone go one's own way, even in "wolidou", where the vitality and the vigor? How about entrepreneurship? A lack of cohesion of the environment, people have lofty ideals and high aspirations, and one's ability and cleverness, can not be given full play! Only strict and orderly collective organization and efficient teamwork, unity cooperation to overcome difficulties, or even create a miracle. Streams can only be broken waves, sea rivers can stimulate the tempestuous waves, personal relationship with the team as streams and the sea. Everyone will be their integration into the collective, to give full play to the role of the indivial. In short, the team spirit is indispensable to any organisation essence. Otherwise just as lacking spirit of cooperation; a chopstick is easy to bend, ten chopsticks break...... This is the team spirit importance intuitive strength of the performance, this is also my understanding of teamwork, team spirit is also important in. The
Between each other can learn from each other, this is very important, after all, a person's strength is always limited to complement each other so that you can fully reflect the better, more powerful! 中文: 俗話說,「一個和尚挑水喝,兩個和尚抬水喝,三個和尚沒水喝。一隻螞蟻來搬米,搬來搬去搬不起,兩只螞蟻來搬米,身體晃來又晃去,三隻螞蟻來搬米,輕輕抬著進洞里。」上面這兩種說法有截然不同的結果。「三個和尚」是一個團體,可是他們沒水喝是因為互相推諉、不講協作;「三隻螞蟻來搬米」之所以能「輕輕抬著進洞里」,正是團結協作的結果。有首歌唱得好「團結就是力量」,而且團隊合作的力量是無窮盡的,一旦被開發這個團隊將創造出不可思議的奇跡。 當今社會,隨著知識經濟時代的到來,各種知識、技術不斷推陳出新,競爭日趨緊張激烈,社會需求越來越多樣化,使人們在工作學習中所面臨的情況和環境極其復雜。在很多情況下,單靠個人能力已很難完全處理各種錯綜復雜的問題並採取切實高效的行動。所有這些都需要人們組成團體,並要求組織成員之間進一步相互依賴、相互關聯、共同合作,建立合作團隊來解決錯綜復雜的問題,並進行必要的行動協調,開發團隊應變能力和持續的創新能力,依靠團隊合作的力量創造奇跡。 團隊不僅強調個人的工作成果,更強調團隊的整體業績。團隊所依賴的不僅是集體討論和決策以及信息共享和標准強化,它強調通過成員的共同貢獻,能夠得到實實在在的集體成果,這個集體成果超過成員個人業績的總和,即團隊大於各部分之和。團隊的核心是共同奉獻。這種共同奉獻需要一個成員能夠為之信服的目標。只有切實可行而又具有挑戰意義的目標,才能激發團隊的工作動力和奉獻精神,為工作注入無窮無盡的能量。所以團隊合作是一種為達到既定目標所顯現出來的自願合作和協同努力的精神。它可以調動團隊成員的所有資源和才智,並且會自動地驅除所有不和諧和不公正現象,同時會給予那些誠心、大公無私的奉獻者適當的回報。如果團隊合作是出於自覺自願時,它必將會產生一股強大而且持久的力量。 團隊合作往往能激發出團體不可思議的潛力,集體協作干出的成果往往能超過成員個人業績的總和。正所謂「同心山成玉,協力土變金。」一個團體,如果組織渙散,人心浮動,人人自行其是,甚至搞「窩里斗」,何來生機與活力?又何談幹事創業?在一個缺乏凝聚力的環境里,個人再有雄心壯志,再有聰明才智,也不可能得到充分發揮!只有嚴密有序的集體組織和高效的團隊協作,懂得團結協作克服重重困難,甚至創造奇跡。 小溪只能泛起破碎的浪花,百川納海才能激發驚濤駭浪,個人與團隊關系就如小溪與大海。每個人都要將自已融入集體,才能充分發揮個人的作用。總之,團隊精神對任何一個組織來講都是不可缺少精髓。否則就如同一盤散沙;一根筷子容易彎,十根筷子折不斷……這就是團隊精神重要性力量直觀表現,這也是我理解的團隊精神,也是團隊精神重要之所在。答案補充
互相之間可以取長補短,這點很重要,畢竟一個人的實力總是有限的 互相補充這樣可以充分體現出更好,更強大!
❹ 英語作文關於合作與共贏80詞左右
My Happy Weekend
I was so busy and had to do so many things on last weekend. I finished my homework on Saturday morning.
In the afternoon, I helped my mother with housework. Because I am a good girl and wanna prove i am a valuable number of my family.
On Sunday morning, I visited my grandparents with my parents. In the afternoon, we went to the park together by metro. Because there was a kite performance.My grandparents and us enjoyed the show so much.We saw many varied kites there and we brought some beautiful kites, too. Then, we flew the new kites, that was fun.
In the evening, we had a big dinner.My grandparents likes eating fish and my grandma cooks fish very well. After dinner, we wa
❺ 關於合作的英語作文
Dear everyone,
There is an execellent chance for all the students in Senior 1 to know more about our Chinese history.Professor Wang ping will give us a lecture in Room405 ,Building 2.During the whole lecture ,you will wander around the wonderful river of history and extremely fall in love with it.
As for the time,the lecture will be hold from 2:30 to 4:30 on Wednesday,October 3rd.Everyone else who is keen on history
is welcomed!
Best wishes!
The Students'Union
❻ 英語作文合作
成功的合作A Successful Cooperation 20 Last week, my English teacher gave us a task, she asked us to form a small group, each group was made up of five students, the groups need to do a research, it is about how much people know about foreign country. In my group, there are three girls and two boys, at first, we did not know what to do, then I suggested our group take the cooperated work. As I and the girl are good at writing paper, so the two of us decided to design the questions, and the other three students are so active, so they like to ask people the questions. The research went go so well, we finished it in two days, thanks to the teamwork, we did well on the task. The teacher praised my group, I have learned the importance of cooperation, since then, I will considerate other people』s feelings.
❼ 關於「合作」寫一篇英語作文150字,急急急
例一:
Competition and Cooperation
競爭與合作
Competition is a common phenomenon in our social life. We compete when we play games, we try to do better than others in our study, and there is constant competition for jobs, fame, wealth and so forth. We can say that, in a certain sense, competition is one of the motive forces of the development of the society.
We often find competition and cooperation at the same time. Think of a football game. During the game, one team is competing against the other, but each member of the team must cooperate with his teammates. Otherwise, they would lose the game however skilled every indivial player might be.
While advocating competition, we must not forget cooperation. In modern society, cooperation is especially necessary because except for a few craftsmen and artists, most work is fulfilled with and through other people. In many cases, we can not achieve anything if there are only competition and no cooperation.
例二:
Nowadays, in our society, cooperation has become an absolutely necessary way for us to work..
We never can live and solve all these problems by ourselves, so learning to cooperate with others is crucial/important.
Firstly, Join and organize different kinds of activities is a good way to improve our ability of cooperation and communication. But that not means just to work together, the communication in mind is also necessary. So, in our usual life, learn to solve problems by discussing with people, maybe we can make it easily. But at the same time, you could not forget the spirit of independence, to do little things by yourself.
Last,Cooperate with friends and relatives or any other people who need helps is no matter can give us a pleasure day, but also can create a harmonious environment.
❽ 關於合作英語作文帶翻譯 120個
《合作》:
合作就是個人與個人、群體與群體之間為達到共同目的,彼此相互配合的一種聯合行動、方式.
俗話說,「一個和尚挑水喝,兩個和尚抬水喝,三個和尚沒水喝.一隻螞蟻來搬米,搬來搬去搬不起,兩只螞蟻來搬米,身體晃來又晃去,三隻螞蟻來搬米,輕輕抬著進洞里.」上面這兩種說法有截然不同的結果.「三個和尚」是一個團體,可是他們沒水喝是因為互相推諉、不講協作;「三隻螞蟻來搬米」之所以能「輕輕抬著進洞里」,正是團結協作的結果.有首歌唱得好「團結就是力量」,而且團隊合作的力量是無窮盡的,一旦被開發這個團隊將創造出不可思議的奇跡.
當今社會,隨著知識經濟時代的到來,各種知識、技術不斷推陳出新,競爭日趨緊張激烈,社會需求越來越多樣 化,使人們在工作學習中所面臨的情況和環境極其復雜.在很多情況下,單靠個人能力已很難完全處理各種錯綜復雜的問題並採取切實高效的行動.所有這些都需要人們組成團體,並要求組織成員之間進一步相互依賴、相互關聯、共同合作,建立合作團隊來解決錯綜復雜的問題,並進行必要的行動協調,開發團隊應變能力和持 續的創新能力,依靠團隊合作的力量創造奇跡.
" Cooperation ":
Cooperation between indivials,groups and between groups to achieve a common purpose,mutual cooperation,a joint action mode.
As the saying goes," one boy is a boy,two boys half a boy,everybody's business is nobody's business.An ant moving meters,moving to lift,two ants move meters,body swinging to and fro,three ants to carry meters,gently carried into the hole." The above two statements have different results." Three boys " is a group,but they have no water to drink because mutually making excuses,no cooperation; " three ants to carry meters " can " gently carried into the hole ",is the unity of the results.The song is good " unity is strength ",but also the power of teamwork is endless,once the team will create unbelievable miracle.
Like today's society,with the advent of knowledge economy era,knowledge,technology and constantly bring forth the new through the old,competition is increasingly fierce tension,the society needs more and more diverse,so that people in the work of the study situation and the extremely complex environment.In many cases,depends on indivial ability to deal with various perplexing problems and take effective and efficient action.All these need the people groups,and require further interdependence between member organizations,interaction,cooperation,establishes the cooperation team to solve the problem of perplexing,and coordinate the necessary action,the development team adaptability and sustainable innovation ability,depend on the power of teamwork to create a miracle.
❾ 有關於合作的英語作文
Teamwork&Cooperation
Teamwork and cooperation is significant forman's activities, including the business work, family life, social activities,even the social development. In the current stiff competition of our society,teamwork is the protection of executive force and the improvement of greatefficiency. In terms of maintaining teamwork spirit, cooperation is the most significant.
With the rapid technological specialization and social development, more and more tasks need to be accomplished with a collaborative effort. On the other hand, social development can』 be without social division of labor, as the saying goes, many handsmake light work. Through cooperation within the team, member of the society complement each other』s weaknesses with their strengths. Then the efficiency ofsocial construction, proction, and other social activities could get great improvement. The society like a big machine composed of many a part, cooperation is the grease which ensure its good running. While parts of the machine drop, it stops working immediately.All these tell us that union is strength. Only by doing the teamwork and cooperation well, so can the potential creativeness be fully reached and the over all goal of the development be achieved smoothly!
❿ 團隊合作的好處和壞處英語作文
Some people like to work alone while others enjoy teamwork. In my opinion, everyone had better learn to work with others together because teamwork is definitely necessary and important in modern society.
有些人喜歡單獨工作,而有些人則喜歡團隊合作。在我看來,每個人最好學習與他人一起工作,因為團隊合作在現代社會是很有必要和重要的。
First, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each other. Just as the saying goes, 「many hands make light job.」 Working in a team, teammates share their ideas with each other, which is helpful to create a better achievement. Second, working in a team is a way to broaden our horizon. Teammates in a team can learn something from each other because they are from different places, owning various experiences and hold different views towards things. Therefore, getting along with other teammates is also a process of increasing our knowledge. Finally, working in a team is also a way to establish our friendship. Teammates in a team have chances to help each other, to solve the problems together, to share the happiness of being successful, which make a great contribution to establishing friendship. Thus, working in a team is one of the most effective ways to extend our personal relationships.
首先,在一個團隊中工作為我們提供了一個彼此溝通的機會。正如俗話所說,「眾人拾柴火焰高。」在一個團隊中工作,隊友們互相分享他們的想法,這有助於創造更好的成績。第二,在團隊中工作是拓寬我們視野的一個好方式。一個團隊的隊友可以相互學習因為他們來自不同地方,擁有不同的經驗並且對事物有不同的看法。因此,和其他隊友相處融洽也是增長見識的過程。最後,團體合作有助於建立友誼。在一個團隊的隊友們有機會互相幫助,共同解決問題,分享成功的快樂,這些都為建立友誼做出很大的貢獻。因此,在團隊工作是最有效的擴展個人關系的方法之一。
To sum up, to learn to work in a team is really necessary and important and we should try to enjoy it.
總之,學習團隊合作是真的很有必要和重要。我們應該盡量享受這一點。