㈠ 幫我點評一下英語作文
我給12分,六年級寫這樣已經不錯了的。
My
Favourite
Sport
Hello,everybody!do
you
like
sport?If
you
insist
on
it,it
will
be
good
for
your
health.
what
is
your
favourite
sport?
My
favourite
sport
is
swimming
and
it
is
very
interesting.otherwise
I
can
play
water
with
my
friends
in
the
swimming
pool.
I
am
not
good
at
swimming,but
I
like
it
very
much.
點評:1.注意句子之間的分段,
2.在寫swimming的時候,注意可以用it代替的,否則會因為重復覺得啰嗦了。
3.既然可以快慢自如的游泳了(I
can
swim
fast
or
slowly),就不要說我游的不好了(I
can't
swim
very
well
now),所以可以用be
good
at
的短語來說,雖然我不擅長(專業)游泳,但是我非常喜歡它。(I
am
not
good
at
swimming,but
I
like
it
very
much.)
呵呵,沒有改太多,希望你能學到東西哦!!!
㈡ 英語作文點評 謝謝
功底是有但是少些套路,建議背些模板和常用句型如議論文一般採用三段式模板好點正反對立觀點分類闡明最好終結表達自己觀點·····
㈢ 高中英語作文點評
第二行來that這樣引導定從不對,換成about
第四自行sell及物動詞,後面要加賓語,前後分局不是因果關系,用so鏈接不合適,選用however比較好
第八行collect當收集講,這里要是想表示保留最好使用keep
第九行give away表示贈送的時候需要接to
第十一行sell them to store to exchange
總的來說還是一片比較通順的文章,從高考角度講大約在二檔中偏下的位置,使用的片語較恰當,但是巨型過於單一並且還有錯誤,建議引入同位語從句和強調句,單詞過於簡單,如果你的作文打算求穩這樣既基本可以,如果要奪高分,就要使用一些高階詞彙和高級句子,比如提建議可引入虛擬語氣,連接詞還應更恰當,使文章更緊密。
㈣ 求簡短的適合所有英文文章的英語評價 急急急……!
依式行文,文筆素樸,結構嚴謹。
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
內容豐富,結構版嚴謹,體系完備,博大精深權
rich contents, perfect system, broad andprofound meaning,
簡潔流暢, 層次井然,結構嚴謹,文字生動,頗富幽默,筆調輕松
Simple and smooth, orderly hierarchy, rigorous structure, vivid characters, quite humorous, delightful
㈤ 英語作文點評
建議
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被動不合適)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有兩個謂語動詞,there be 和主系表結回果沖突。可改為答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名詞放feel後不合適)
㈥ 幫忙點評一下英語作文。
last summer是過去時態整體作文應該用一般過去時。
里邊還有好多小語法錯誤。比如a change的change怎麼加了復數
㈦ 怎樣成功點評學生的英語作文
Different people have different views on success. Some hold that making a great deal of money means success. Others argue that holding an important post in the government means success. Still others believe that having a high academic title at a famous university or a research institute means success.
In my opinion, success means brilliant achievement in our work. In other words, no matter what we do, making outstanding contributions to the development of our country and bringing help and happiness to others is success.
㈧ 怎樣點評高考英語作文
1. 關於……人們有不同的觀點。一些人認為……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗話說(常言道)……,它是我們前輩的經歷,但是,即使在今天,它在許多場合仍然適用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 現在,……,它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更為糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 現在,……很普遍,許多人喜歡……,因為……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______.
5. 任何事物都是有兩面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 關於……人們的觀點各不相同,一些人認為(說)……,在他們看來,……
People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人類正面臨著一個嚴重的問題……,這個問題變得越來越嚴重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成為人的關注的熱門話題,特別是在年青人當中,將引發激烈的辯論。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用,它給我們帶來了許多好處,但同時也引發一些嚴重的問題。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根據圖表/數字/統計數字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。很顯然……,但是為什麼呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while. Obviously,______,but why?
㈨ 英語作文點評,請高人指點
沒有太大的問題,句子基本都把意思表達出來了
但是可能時態不是很清楚,過去時間段里專又摻帶了屬一般現在時,這個要改一下。
有一些詞看起來像是你直接查的字典就寫上去的,不是很恰當,用之前最好多看一下例句,模仿例句其實沒什麼壞處
有兩句話我畫了很長的線,實話講不是正確的句子,一個句好裡面用逗號連接了好幾個完整的句子。要是先讓句子看起來很高級就好好用從句,用不好不如直接寫成正確的短句。寫東西首先要是能表達清楚意思再是讀起來好聽
我試著盡量不改你的原詞,修改了前幾段,你可以參考一下。