1. 英語作文評語大全
依式行文,文筆素源朴,結構嚴謹.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
內容豐富,結構嚴謹,體系完備,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
簡潔流暢,層次井然,結構嚴謹,文字生動,頗富幽默,筆調輕松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful
2. 怎樣評價一篇英語作文
首先,應當理解題意;其次,應善於謀篇布局,而不是生硬得翻譯,在每個論內點開始時最好要有一定的容連接詞,比如first,second,third;first
of
all,then,in
addition,what
is
more,finally;再者,應當善於運用高中階段所學的各種句型語法,比如定語從句、同位語從句、動名詞的符合結構等等還有一些常用的句子,應善於積累;最後就是整體的事了,段落安排是否合理、書面是否工整、盡量減少語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤、字數在80到120之間。
3. 成績不能評價一個人的英語作文
Many parents like to use the results to evaluate their children's good or bad, all like good grades, high scores, poor grades of children to criticize ecation, scolding children, this is unfair. Each person's starting point is not the same, the good children only represent the cultural advantages, but people are all aspects of development, sports, morality, culture, light culture is not good, some children are poor, but other aspects do well, they are more able to accept our praise.
許多家長喜歡用成績來評價自己孩子的好壞,都喜歡成績好的,分數高的,對成績差的孩子進行批評教育,打罵孩子,這是不公平的。每個人的起點不一樣,學習好的孩子只代表在文化方面有優勢,但是人是全方面發展的,體育,道德,文化,光文化好也是不行的,有的孩子成績差,但是其他方面做得很好,他們更有能力去接受我們的表揚。
謝謝。
4. 怎樣點評高考英語作文
1. 關於……人們有不同的觀點。一些人認為……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗話說(常言道)……,它是我們前輩的經歷,但是,即使在今天,它在許多場合仍然適用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 現在,……,它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更為糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 現在,……很普遍,許多人喜歡……,因為……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______.
5. 任何事物都是有兩面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 關於……人們的觀點各不相同,一些人認為(說)……,在他們看來,……
People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人類正面臨著一個嚴重的問題……,這個問題變得越來越嚴重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成為人的關注的熱門話題,特別是在年青人當中,將引發激烈的辯論。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用,它給我們帶來了許多好處,但同時也引發一些嚴重的問題。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根據圖表/數字/統計數字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。很顯然……,但是為什麼呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while. Obviously,______,but why?
5. 英語作文點評 謝謝
功底是有但是少些套路,建議背些模板和常用句型如議論文一般採用三段式模板好點正反對立觀點分類闡明最好終結表達自己觀點·····
6. 英語作文評價大全
說真的,我很討厭淅瀝的小雨,它們是那麼的纏綿,總會使心煩湧入心頭,驚濤拍浪,挖心的難受.因此在這樣的雨天我沒有在雨中漫步的情懷.但在北方由於在黃河以北降雨量少,註定淅瀝的小雨會是夏天的常客.於是我也有些厭惡夏天,好在夏天還有一位代言人——暴雨,使我對夏天有了一絲的眷戀.
我喜歡暴雨有種近似痴迷的程度,因為暴雨下出了北方人的豪爽,給人一種親切感.下暴雨時我喜歡將窗子開到最大,將手臂伸出窗外去感受豆大的雨點落下時針扎般的痛,那時卻感覺不到疼,有的只是毅力的考驗.張大嘴努力的呼吸泥土的清香那是一種久違的香氣,它會使我想起曾今那充滿鳥語花香的大自然.
今天又一場暴雨過後,我遙望天際發現天空是那麼美,頭頂的一片天是那麼的湛藍,藍的沒有一絲雜質,它又是那麼的飄渺,好像是七仙女拋下的一件藍色的薄紗在空中飄舞.不遠處還是灰色的,印在房屋上竟是土黃色,那種顏色給人一種壓抑的感覺.於是我尋找藍灰的交界處,那裡本應是逐漸的過度色,而大自然卻巧妙的嵌進去一朵還未完全舒展的雲,剎那間我感受到了活力,那是生命的詮釋.突然明白再陰的天也有晴朗的那一刻,再黑的夜也有黎明出現的那一剎那.
那是一幅美麗的油畫,是大自然給予人類的享受,更是自然給我們敲響的警示鍾,如果沒有人類保護大自然,恐怕以後連那雨過天晴的後的一絲感動也會一去不復返,至少我們會失去對生命的另一種詮釋
7. 英語作文 一部電影的評價
Titanic
A
precious
stone
which
called
"The
Heart
of
Ocean"brought
a
love
story
between
Rose
and
Jack.
They
met
on
Titanic
and
fell
in
love
with
each
other.On
the
way
to
love,
they
came
across
many
obstacles
but
surmounted.Four
days
after
the
Titanic
set
out,
a
very
big
iceberg
floated
towards
her.The
ship
was
holed
by
an
iceberg.Many
people
cannot
be
saved
besides
Rose
and
Jack.Death
is
the
biggest
obstacle
俯耿碘際鄢宦碉為冬力for
love
to
surmounte.In
other
to
save
Rose,Jack
lay
down
his
life.
In
this
movie,when
teh
ship
suffered
the
unexpected,some
people
would
rather
help
other
people
than
save
themselves,such
as
the
sailors
and
the
musicians.They
moved
me
the
most.This
movie
made
me
thought
a
lot
in
some
fields,such
as
relationship
of
the
people
around
you.For
example,when
we
are
facing
love,how
to
express
our
feeling
to
our
lovers
and
deal
the
problem
about
love
with
them;When
we
are
facing
the
social
problems,how
to
settle
them
perfectly?
Let's
suppose
we
are
on
the
Titanic
and
taking
different
positions,what
we
should
do
when
the
unexpected
coming?In
my
opinion,diferent
people
take
the
different
positions
and
we
do
different
things
in
society,but
the
most
important
thing
is
that
we
should
assume
our
responsibilities.
As
a
whole,this
movie
not
only
has
a
wonderful
plot
but
also
provide
food
for
thought.(發人深思)
8. 英語作文對老師的評價怎麼寫
Students』 Rating of Their Teachers(學生評價老師)
1.學生給老師打分已很普遍;
2.人們對其持不同態度;
3.我的看法
[寫作導航]第一段宜寫高校改革所帶來的變化使得學生評價教師很普遍,在有些高校學生的評價甚至成為教師教學好壞的惟一尺度;第二段應寫對這一做法,人們有不同的看法,有人贊成,認為學生最有發言權,而有人則反對,認為學生不具備評價教師的素質,對諸如教學材料、教師業務水平等的評價應由教師的同事來完成;第三段寫我的看法,我認為,學生評價教師有必要,但要切實做到對教師的教學有幫助,例如可讓學生評價在某門課上所學到的知識如何,興趣如何等等。
[範文]
A great change is now taking place in higher ecation throughout our country. Teachers are being held responsible as never before for how well they serve their students. It has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students』 rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.
This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system. They hold that since students attend the teachers classes everyday, they should have their opinion about their teachers』 effectiveness. Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They think that students』 rating is easy to administer and score, but it also is easy to abuse. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students』 rating forms. Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials used are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject.
These judgments require professional knowledge, which is best left for the teachers』 colleagues.
I think students』 rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be concted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers』 performance. Instead of rating the teachers』 knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to estimate what they themselves have leaned in a course, and to report on such things as a teacher』s ability to communicate with students, his relationship with students, and his ability to arouse interest in the subject.
9. 英語作文點評,請高人指點
沒有太大的問題,句子基本都把意思表達出來了
但是可能時態不是很清楚,過去時間段里專又摻帶了屬一般現在時,這個要改一下。
有一些詞看起來像是你直接查的字典就寫上去的,不是很恰當,用之前最好多看一下例句,模仿例句其實沒什麼壞處
有兩句話我畫了很長的線,實話講不是正確的句子,一個句好裡面用逗號連接了好幾個完整的句子。要是先讓句子看起來很高級就好好用從句,用不好不如直接寫成正確的短句。寫東西首先要是能表達清楚意思再是讀起來好聽
我試著盡量不改你的原詞,修改了前幾段,你可以參考一下。
10. 英語作文點評
建議
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被動不合適)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有兩個謂語動詞,there be 和主系表結回果沖突。可改為答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名詞放feel後不合適)