高考滿分英語作文

⑴ 以下這篇英語作文如果在高考可以打幾分，滿分25

滿分25分，抄不同評分老師對同一篇文章評出的分數不會完全一樣。有的相差無幾，有的相差較大。這就是為什麼高考對書面表達的評卷要求三位老師負責評同一篇作文。
我給你打19分到20分之間，優點：1, 運用了正確的書信格式。2, 用英語按要求正確的表達自己。3, 信中用了狀語從句、賓語從句、同位語等從句。4, 非謂語動詞也用得較好。
5, 書寫工整。

⑵ 跪求20篇簡短的高考英語滿分作文範文。

2009年廣東高考英語滿分作文
Should tourists take photos with animals？
Koalas in wildlife parks can『t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists』 behaviour illegal to protect the animals.
When people are visiting wildlife parks， they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals ring their visit.
If I were an animal in the wildlife park， I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn『t feel happy at all！ I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.
However， I don『t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can』t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time， ring which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.

2009年的年廣東高考英語滿分作文
遊客應該給動物拍照嗎？
考拉在野生動物公園不能入睡，因為他們令人不安的遊客不斷。不結盟運動思想，使遊客的非法行為，以保護動物。
當人們正在訪問的野生動物公園，他們喜歡與動物拍照留念。原因是多種多樣的。一些人可能認為拍照與動物的有趣的對比拍照與其他人。其他人可能認為，這將是一個有趣的經驗，與動物拍照訪問期間。
如果我是一種動物的野生動物園，我會感到惱火的人不斷拍照時，與我。我的生活將得到極大的影響，我不會感到高興了！我想我應該有一些私人的空間和時間來放鬆消遣。
但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布採取與動物的照片。遊客支付門票參觀野生動物園，將是很可惜的，如果他們不能的照片，一種動物。也許野生動物公園可以設置一些特殊的時間，在此期間，遊客可以與動物的照片。它既能滿足遊客和保護動物。

最近，你校同學正在參加某英文報組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票?請你根據下表所提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。
60％的同學認為 40％的同學認為
1．不應該收門票
2公園是公眾休閑的地方
3l如收門票，需建大門、圍牆，會影響城市形象 1．應收門票，但票價不要太高
2．支付園林工人工資
3．購新花木

注意：1．信的開頭已為你寫好。
2．詞數：100左右。
3．參考詞彙：門票---entrance fee
Dear Editor．
I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance
fee should be charged for parks．

高考滿分作文1(1號題)
Dear editor,
I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people』s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

高考英語滿分作文第二篇
Dear editor,
I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

Dear editor,
I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn』t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I』d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
高考英語滿分作文第四篇

Dear editor, I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public』s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?
Yours truly, Li Hua
Dear editor,
I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those who don』t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can』t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city』s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

⑶ 英語高考滿分作文(帶翻譯）

Olympics and I
Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What‟s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it‟s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded. My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an indivial, I‟m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.
Sincerely yours,
奧運與我
親愛的朋友，我有一個好消息，告知這里。通過長期的努力，北京已獲得申辦2008年奧運會。作為一個在北京居住，我感到很興奮，你想分享我的快樂。 這一成功意味著很多超過我的游戲。首先，本屆奧運會一定會促進我們的經濟發展。據一些專家最近的一項調查，這項比賽將提高約3％的國內生產總值，提供職位約1.0萬。更重要的是，我們的文化將得到廣泛認可和接受世界各地通過奧運會。人們會走過來從世界的每一個角落，體驗中華文化在各個方面。此外， 5 透過游戲，我們的生活環境將大大改善。例如，公共交通系統會過時。此外，據了解，將種植更多樹木，草地將大大擴大。 我的朋友，我真的期待著這個偉大的奧運會的到來。作為個人，我都願意提供我的任何方式我可以提供幫助。我也希望能邀請大家來到這里，觀看2008年奧運會，此致。

Tourism in China
Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future. Facing this tendency, we can‟t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people‟s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What‟s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
中國旅遊
最近幾年，在中國的趨勢，旅遊業增長較快。根據最近的一項調查顯示一些專家認為，約47％城鎮居民定期作出旅行，28％的農村居民，也使他們的全國巡演。該調查還顯示，更多的人在旅遊有興趣，並會在將來加入軍隊。 面對這一趨勢，我們不能不說是負責任的開發一些潛在因素。在第一個地方，隨著改革開放政策，對中國人民的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他們大多數都不能周遊。更重要的是，它相信，人們現在更積極的態度，旅遊業，把它作為一種生活方式。此外，旅遊設施正在變得越來越好。例如，交通運輸發展迅速，許多景點都已經上市。

What a disaster(災難)!
So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people. What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!
什麼是災難（災難）！
到目前為止，有報道稱，超過60,000人在四川earthquake.What的死亡，再加上數百萬人民有成為homeless.And他們在疾病和其他困難的危險之中。無論如何，感謝所有善良的人們，在國內外形勢已經改變well.But我們仍然在努力工作的，特別是為那些無家可歸的人建造房屋和醫治受傷群眾。 現在我們可以做什麼？除了做好自己的工作做好，我們可以捐錢給them.We堅信，有黨和政府的堅強領導，有全國各族人民的援助國，這將是一個抗震救災的勝利！

The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly. The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008. Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
在我們康明城市家庭平均收入從8000元，每年1998至2008年的20,000元。在此期間，平均家庭支出結構也發生了變化。這些圖形顯示了明顯的變化。 而一般家庭開支的最大部分是住房。 1998年，平均每個家庭花費了其對房屋的收入百分之25。在2880，關於住房支出上升到百分之42。食品和飲料是平均家庭開支第二大的一部分。 1998年，大約18％的平均收入是用於這一項目。 2008年，這一數字增長到30％。由於在費用等增加住房和食物，結果在其他項目的費用已經減少到1998年的57％，至2008年的28％。 因此，可以得出一個結論，隨著收入的增加，人們可以改善他們的生活步驟。但仍是一般家庭要花費很大一部分收入，以滿足基本需要。

⑷ 高考英語作文多少分

高考英語作文滿分為分。

具體評判打分標准如下：

第五檔（很好）：（21~25分）

1、完全完成了試題規定的任務。

2、覆蓋所有內容要點。

3、應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。

4、語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。

5、有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。

6、完全達到了預期的寫作目的。

第四檔（好）：（16~20分）

1、完全完成了試題規定的任務。

2、雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內容。

3、應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。

4、語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。

5、應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。

6、達到了預期的寫作目的。

第三檔（適當）：（11~15分）

1、基本完成了試題規定的任務。

2、雖漏掉一些內容，但覆蓋所有主要內容。

3、應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。

4、有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。

5、應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內容連貫。

6、整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。

第二檔（較差）：（6-10分）

1、未恰當完成試題規定的任務。

2、漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容，寫了一些無關內容。

3、語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。

4、有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內容的理解。

5、較少使用語句間的連接成分，內容缺少連貫性。

6、信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。

第一檔（差）：（1~5分）

1、未完成試題規定的任務。

2、明顯遺漏主要內容，寫了一些無關內容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。

3、語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。

4、較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內容的理解。

5、缺乏語句間的連接成分，內容不連貫。

6、信息未能傳達給讀者。

(4)高考滿分英語作文擴展閱讀：

英語作文寫作技巧：

書面表達是近年高考常選的命題方式之一，而且，所用體裁也相對穩定，以記敘文、應用文、說明文為主，題材多種多樣，有書信、日記、介紹、通知等，多數情況下，在提示中明確規定了用何種格式。

所以，考生只需根據表格里的提示內容，確定所要表達的要點，最後運用自己所掌握的句型和詞語知識，寫出一篇要點全、語句通、條理清、表達明、思路活、書寫正的短文。在具體操作時應注意以下兩點：

一、要謀好篇，布好局

即在動筆前，一定要根據表格里的提示內容，先確定好所要表達文章的題材，然後根據題材確定好文章的整體結構，先寫什麼，後寫什麼，略寫什麼，詳寫什麼，甚至要用到哪些句型和短語，都要做到成竹在胸。

二、要充分根據表格內容確定要點

因為書面表達最重要的評分依據就是內容要點要全，如果遺漏一個要點，至少要扣3分。

因此，在認真審題、弄清體裁、題材、題意的基礎上，應逐個地、完整無缺地把表格中的內容要點找出來，然後再根據不同體裁把要表達的要點表達出來。

如果是記敘文，六個要點缺一不可，即人物、時間、地點、事件、原因和結果。

在這六個要素中，人物、時間、地點通常放在文章的開頭；事件、原因通常放在文章的中間，它們是文章的主體；結果作為故事的結局通常放在文章的最後。

如果是應用文，首先是注意它的格式，因為格式錯誤，要扣2分；然後把要解說的事物的性質、對象、目的、發生的時間和地點等解釋清楚，使讀者對此事物有一個完整准確的了解。

⑸ 2019高考英語滿分作文

2018·全國Ⅰ卷

假定你是李華，你的紐西蘭朋友將去中國朋友家做客，發郵件向你詢問有關習俗。請你回復郵件，內容包括：

1. 到達時間；

2. 合適的禮物；

3. 餐桌禮儀。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Dear Terry,

How
are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to
a Chinese friend』s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some
relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you
are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare
the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you』d better
bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What』s more, when you
are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing
food.

Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 全國Ⅱ卷

你受學生會委託為校宣傳欄「英語天地」寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英語短片Growing Together，內容包括：

1. 短片內容：學校的發展；

2. 放映時間、地點；

3. 歡迎對短片提出意見。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Notice

In
order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding
English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from
2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the
Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin
with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the
development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only
meaningful but also interesting. What』s more, everyone of you will be
welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a
heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

The Student UnionJune

2018 · 全國III卷

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter 來信詢問你校學生體育運動情況。請給他回信，內容包括：

1. 學校的體育場館；

2. 主要的運動項目；

3. 你喜歡的項目。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右：

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Dear Peter,

I
am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last
letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following
information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous
new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our
school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports
events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as
running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I』m intoxicated
with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the
challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 北京卷 · 第一節

假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣，計劃明年來北京上大學。他向你咨詢相關信息。請給他回郵件，內容包括：

1. 表示歡迎；

2. 推薦他上哪所大學；

3. 建議他做哪些准備工作。

注意：1. 詞數不少於50；

2. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【滿分範文】

Dear Jim,

I』m
so glad to hear your future ecation plan in Beijing in your last
letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am
sure you will have the most unforgettable experience ring your
college in Beijing.

Learning your keen interest in Chinese
culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you
where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich
culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The
Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be
helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

I
sincerely hope your dream will come true and it』s my pleasure to show
you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further
questions, please feel free to let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 北京卷 · 第二節

假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你們上周接待外國學生，帶領他們體驗中國茶文化的全過程。

注意：詞數不少於60。

ards
the mountains. 'Don』t be late for supper,' Uncle Paul cried, 'and keep
to the track so that you don』t get lost!' 'OK! ' my dad cried back.
After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so
peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green
pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It
looked like a beautiful woven(編織的）blanket spread out upon the ground
just for us.

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

注意：

（1）所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；

（2）至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語：

（3）續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

（4）續寫完成後，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

Paragraph
1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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Paragraph
2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting
dark._______________________________________________________________________________

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【滿分範文】

Paragraph 1

Suddenly
a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I
yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse
from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident,
the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed
closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse
and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get
lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.

Paragraph 2

We
had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we
were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of
water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the
riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may
lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time
appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and
before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but
memorable experience it was!

2018 · 天津卷

假設你是晨光中學的機器人興趣小組組長李津，你的美國朋友Chris就讀於天津某國際學校，他曾在機器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團隊，參加即將於7月底在天津舉行的世界青少學機器人技能競賽。請根據以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。

（1）比賽的時間、地點；

（2）邀請他的原因；

（3）訓練計劃將發送其郵箱，請他提出建議。

注意：

（1）詞數不少於100；

（2）可適當加入細節，使內容充實、行文連貫；

（3）開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

【參考詞彙】

世界青少年機器人技能競賽 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you.

I』m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【滿分範文】

Dear Chris,

I
have good news to tell you. Targeted at cultivating the teenagers』
interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to
throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World
Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children』s
palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a
good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each
other meanwhile.

I am eager to invite you to join our team for
the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make
acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know,
you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous
competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this
field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By
working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring
others' strong points as well as double our achievements.

If you
are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training
program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could
bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I』m
looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

2018 · 江蘇卷

請閱讀下面文字,並按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。

Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny

Our
family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago,
Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the
information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I
simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we
ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the
case and told me she liked it very much.

Su Hua 6 July, Sunny

This
morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We
found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We
spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot,
and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I
was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?

【寫作內容】

1. 用約30個詞概括上述利用排名（ratings）進行消費的現象；

2. 談談你如何看待消費排名，然後用2-3個理由或論據支撐你的看法。

【寫作要求】

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱；

3. 不必寫標題。

【評分標准】

內容完整，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。

【滿分範文一】

As
a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient
source of information for shopping in our own consumption.
Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on
different consumers.

I tend to consult consumption ratings
whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality
of the proct, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my
beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods.
Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For
example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often
confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and
economical to buy books according to the ratings.

There is no
doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in
consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often
closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards
ratings.

【滿分範文二】

Nowadays,
most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These
ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in
customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes
unsatisfactory.

There is no denying that such ratings might bring
convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable.
As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others』 judgment on the
proct or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need
or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others'
advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be
neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful
manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice
for some to pay for good ratings on their procts or services so as to
increase their sales.

Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

⑹ 高考滿分英語作文

首先來了解一下英語作文的評分標准
各個檔次的給分范圍及標准(滿分25分)
A.第五檔(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了試題規定的任務。2.覆蓋所有內容要點。3.應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。4.語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。6.完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
B.第四檔(好)：(16-20分)1.完全完成了試題規定的任務。2.雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內容。3.應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。4.語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。6.達到了預期的寫作目的。
C.第三檔(適當)：(11-15分)1.基本完成了試題規定的任務。2.雖漏掉一些內容，但覆蓋所有主要內容。3.應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。4.有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內容連貫。6.整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
D.第二檔(較差)：(6-10分)1.未恰當完成試題規定的任務。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容，寫了一些無關內容。3.語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。4.有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內容的理解。5.較少使用語句間的連接成分，內容缺少連貫性。6.信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
E.第一檔(差)：(1-5分)1.未完成試題規定的任務。2.明顯遺漏主要內容，寫了一些無關內容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。3.語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。4.較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內容的理解。5.缺乏語句間的連接成分，內容不連貫。6.信息未能傳達給讀者。
F.不得分：(0分)未能傳達給讀者任何信息：內容太少，無法評判;寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。
從上面可以看出英語作文高分的關鍵因素及高分秘訣：
三點關鍵定檔因素(不跑題是前提)
詞彙多樣性
語法復雜性
文章連貫性
書面表達的五項秘訣：
審題，遣詞，造句，潤色，謀篇
既然知道了這些關鍵因素和高分秘訣，我們要如何從這些方面入手呢?
審題的概念
拿到試卷後，首先瀏覽書面表達的題目，研究題目要求。正確的審題內容包括A、審標題B、審體裁C、審要點。審標題：看文章是否要求有題目(title)或者主題(topic)能夠確保你不跑題;審體裁：確能夠定文章的文體，為你寫作提供方向。審要點：如果英語作文中，有要求要點的，一般打分時是踩點給分的，准確把握住要點，是高分的一個訣竅。
如何審要點?要做到以下兩個方面：
總結歸納要點：不是所有內容都要寫出來，而是抓住其中的關鍵要點、銜接要點!
理順要點：將提煉的要點按邏輯關系(如時間關系、因果關系、轉折關系等)重新安排，這樣整篇文章看起來就整體有序，流暢自然，更加容易打動評分老師，從而作文分數提升一檔。
構思文章提綱：根據題目的要點，安排好段落和主次關系。要形成良好的分段意識，寫作分段是必須要進行的(2至4段為佳)，這樣顯得文章不會擁擠並且層次分明。在行文意識上，要注意突出要點。
遣詞的注意點
不出現語言錯誤
詞語和短語搭配
適度使用加分詞彙
避免詞語重復

⑺ 高考必背英語作文

01 The Language of Music A painter hangs his or her finished pictures on a wall, and everyone can see it. A composer writes a work, but no one can hear it until it is performed. Professional singers and players have great responsibilities, for the composer is utterly dependent on them. A student of music needs as long and as arous a training to become a performer as a medical student needs to become a doctor. Most training is concerned with technique, for musicians have to have the muscular proficiency of an athlete or a ballet dancer. Singers practice breathing every day, as their vocal chords would be inadequate without controlled muscular support. String players practice moving the fingers of the left hand up and down, while drawing the bow to and fro with the right arm-two entirely different movements. Singers and instruments have to be able to get every note perfectly in tune. Pianists are spared this particular anxiety, for the notes are already there, waiting for them, and it is the piano tuner』s responsibility to tune the instrument for them. But they have their own difficulties; the hammers that hit the string have to be coaxed not to sound like percussion, and each overlapping tone has to sound clear. This problem of getting clear texture is one that confronts student conctors: they have to learn to know every note of the music and how it should sound, and they have to aim at controlling these sounds with fanatical but selfless authority. Technique is of no use unless it is combined with musical knowledge and understanding. Great artists are those who are so thoroughly at home in the language of music that they can enjoy performing works written in any century. 02 Schooling and Ecation It is commonly believed in United States that school is where people go to get an ecation. Nevertheless, it has been said that today children interrupt their ecation to go to school. The distinction between schooling and ecation implied by this remark is important. Ecation is much more open-ended and all-inclusive than schooling. Ecation knows no bounds. It can take place anywhere, whether in the shower or in the job, whether in a kitchen or on a tractor. It includes both the formal learning that takes place in schools and the whole universe of informal learning. The agents of ecation can range from a revered grandparent to the people debating politics on the radio, from a child to a distinguished scientist. Whereas schooling has a certain predictability, ecation quite often proces surprises. A chance conversation with a stranger may lead a person to discover how little is known of other religions. People are engaged in ecation from infancy on. Ecation, then, is a very broad, inclusive term. It is a lifelong process, a process that starts long before the start of school, and one that should be an integral part of one』s entire life. Schooling, on the other hand, is a specific, formalized process, whose general pattern varies little from one setting to the next. Throughout a country, children arrive at school at approximately the same time, take assigned seats, are taught by an alt, use similar textbooks, do homework, take exams, and so on. The slices of reality that are to be learned, whether they are the alphabet or an understanding of the working of government, have usually been limited by the boundaries of the subject being taught. For example, high school students know that there not likely to find out in their classes the truth about political problems in their communities or what the newest filmmakers are experimenting with. There are definite conditions surrounding the formalized process of schooling. 03 The Definition of 「Price」 Prices determine how resources are to be used. They are also the means by which procts and services that are in limited supply are rationed among buyers. The price system of the United States is a complex network composed of the prices of all the procts bought and sold in the economy as well as those of a myriad of services, including labor, professional, transportation, and public-utility services. The interrelationships of all these prices make up the 「system」 of prices. The price of any particular proct or service is linked to a broad, complicated system of prices in which everything seems to depend more or less upon everything else. If one were to ask a group of randomly selected indivials to define 「price」, many would reply that price is an amount of money paid by the buyer to the seller of a proct or service or, in other words that price is the money values of a proct or service as agreed upon in a market transaction. This definition is, of course, valid as far as it goes. For a complete understanding of a price in any particular transaction, much more than the amount of money involved must be known. Both the buyer and the seller should be familiar with not only the money amount, but with the amount and quality of the proct or service to be exchanged, the time and place at which the exchange will take place and payment will be made, the form of money to be used, the credit terms and discounts that apply to the transaction, guarantees on the proct or service, delivery terms, return privileges, and other factors. In other words, both buyer and seller should be fully aware of all the factors that comprise the total 「package」 being exchanged for the asked-for amount of money in order that they may evaluate a given price. 01語言的音樂

畫家,他或她的成品的照片掛在牆上,每個人都能看到它。 作曲家寫完了一部作品,但是沒有人能聽見它直到它被執行。 專業歌手和演員身負重責,作曲家依賴於他們。 一個學習音樂的人一樣,需要經過長期艱苦的訓練而成為一名演奏家就像醫科學生要成為一名醫生。 大多數的訓練都是技術性的,因為音樂家們都必須肌肉像運動員和芭蕾舞演員。 歌手每天練習呼吸,因為他們的聲帶必須沒有肌肉的有效控制不足。 弦樂演奏時感人左手的手指上升和下降,而繪畫船頭來回右臂前後完全不同的動作。

歌手和樂器必須使每個音符完全合調。 鋼琴家就沒有這煩惱,因為音調早已在那等著他們,鋼琴定調音師來調整儀器。 但他們有自己的難點;錘打在琴弦鋼琴不聽起來像打擊樂,還有每個疊音必須發清晰。

此問題弄清楚紋理是困惑學生教導員:他們必須清楚地知道每個音符的音樂和它如何發音,以及在控制這些聲音是懂得狂熱而無私的權威。

技術是沒有用的,除非它是結合音樂方面的知識和理解。 偉大的藝術家是那些語言駕輕就熟的音樂,能演奏寫於任何時代的作品。
02上學與受教育

人們普遍認為在美國那所學校是人們受教育的地方。 然而,也有一種說法,認為今天的孩子們上學打斷了他們受教育。 學校和教育之間的區別此觀點暗示了是很重要的。

教育是比上學內容更綜合和全面。 教育是無限的。 它可以發生在任何地方,不管在淋浴時還是在工作中,無論是在廚房或拖拉機上。 它既包括發生的正規教育,在學校和非正式學習的所有領域。 教育的代理人可以是德高望重的老者也可以是廣播中辯論政治的政客,可以是小孩也可以是一個傑出的科學家。 上學讀書多少有點可預見性,而教育往往能帶來意外的發現。 與陌生人偶然的一次談話可能會使人認識到自己對其宗教所知甚少。 人們從幼時起就開始受教育。 因此,教育是一個非常豐富的詞。 教育是一個終生的過程,這個過程的開始,長在進入學校之前就開始的,應該是一種人們整個生活的組成部分。

從另一方面來說,學校教育是一種特定的,正式的過程,一般模式的預設的一點一滴變化到下一個。 在全國,孩子們到學校在大約相同的時間,坐在指定的位置,接受一個成人的教學,使用相同的教材,做作業,考試等等。 的現實生活中的一些片斷,無論他們是學習字母或對政府工作的理解,通常都會科目范圍的限制被教導。 例如,高中生們知道沒有可能發現他們的課程中,他們社區政治問題的真相或知道最新上映的試驗。 有一定條件下的過程學校正式教育。
03的定義,「價」

價格決定資源的使用方式。 他們還種的產品與服務在買方中的配給有限。 美國的價格系統是一個復雜的網路的價格所組成的一切產品買賣經濟中無數的服務,包括勞力,專業人員、交通運輸、公共事業服務。 所有這些價格的關系構成「系統」的價格。 任何特定的價格與產品或服務的一個廣泛的,復雜的系統的價格,似乎一切東西都靠或多或少在一切。

如果你問一群隨機選取的個人定義「價格」的時候,許多人會回答那個價格一定數量的錢給買方,賣方的產品或服務,或,換句話說,價格的錢的產品或服務的價值約定在市場交易。 該定義就其本身來說自有其去。 對價格的完整理解在任何一個特定的交易的,遠不止涉及的金額一定要知道。 買賣雙方不僅應熟悉的,但是隨著金額的質與量的產品或服務,交流的時間和地點發生並且交易所將付款方式,這種形式的錢被使用,本信用證條款和折扣,適用於交易,保證的產品或服務,交貨條件,還許可權,以及其他因素。 換句話說,買家和賣家都應當充分意識到所有的因素構成整個「包裹」(「包裹」用於交換所需資金,以便評估一個既定價格。

⑻ 高考滿分英語作文30篇及翻譯

Dream and Reality
The beautiful legeng ,Chang'e flying to zhe moon, implies the dream of Chinese to explore the Moon . For thousands of years ,we Chinese have been working hard for it one generation after another . The moon orbiter ,Chang』e One,is named after the fairy . And the successful launch marks the nation's first step towards realizing its dream of exploring the Moon.
Indeed,I've got to learn a lot from this historycal event . First of all ,we need dreams in our life ,for they are the primitive drive to everything .Then we should follow our dreams and nevergive up.At the same time we have to be aware that the path to any success may not be easy to go though .Yet whatever we do ,we should believe 「Where there is a will ,there is a way ." And then try our best to make our dreams come true.
夢想和現實
嫦娥奔月的美麗傳說暗示著中國人民探索月球的夢想。幾千年來，我們中國人一代又一代地 為這個夢想努力著。嫦娥一號月球探測器就是以這個神話故事命名的。嫦娥一號的成功發射標志著中華民族實現探月夢想的第一步。
的確，我從這個歷史事件中學到了很多。首先，我們的生活需要夢想，因為夢想是一切事情的原動力。然後我們要堅持夢想，永遠不要放棄。同時我們必須認識到通往任何成功的路並不是平坦的。然而，不論我們做什麼，我們應該相信「有志者，事竟成」，進我們所能使我們的夢想成為現實。
Please Give up Smoking
Now we often see young men smooking in public places .They think smooking is a pleasure . How silly they are !
Reports show several millions of people die from smoking all over the world every year .Smoking all over the world evevry year .Smoking can cause a lot of illness.
Smoking is also the way leading the youth from bad to worse . In order to get money for smoking,some students take away the money from their parents'pockets.Some of them even steal money from others.
As we all know , smookers can't go on with their work without cigarettets.And the more they smoke,the worse their health will be.
Smoking is our dangerous enemy. Please give up smoking as soon as possible.
請戒煙吧
現在我們經常會看到年輕人在公共場所抽煙。他們認為抽煙是一種樂趣。他們多麼愚蠢呀!
報道顯示全世界每年有幾百萬人死於吸煙。抽煙會引起許多疾病。抱歉只有兩篇！

⑼ 近年高考英語滿分作文十篇

一
假設你叫王明，昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京來學習中文。他想了解如何學好中文。請你用英文給他回復一封e-mail，介紹學習中文的體會和方法，提出你的建議，以及表達你幫助他學好中文的願望。
英語作文網

Dear David,

I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

二
請你根據下面的提綱，以「我的家鄉」為題，寫一篇100—120字的短文。
提綱：
(1) 家鄉的地理位置；
(2) 解放前的情況；
(3) 解放後的變化；
(4) 對家鄉的感情。

My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

三

健康對於我們每個人來說是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙於工作而忽略了這個問題，你很為他們擔憂。請你以此為話題，並結合提示給他們寫一封信。

提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是開車或坐車；

2.每周至少去體育館鍛煉一次，或打球、或游泳；

3.飲食要健康；

4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。

要求：1.短文結構完整，意思連貫，語言流暢，語法准確，符合邏輯；

2.80—100詞左右；

3.開頭和結尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Dad(Mum),

You』re so busy every day that you don』t pay much attention to your health. I』m worried about your health all the time. I』d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn』t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You』d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What』s more, it』s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

四
Dear Dad(Mum),

You』re so busy every day that you don』t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I』d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.

I』m looking forward to receiving your letter.

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

五

隨著陽光體育運動在全國開展，政府對中學生身體素質有所下降這個問題給予了高度重視，提出了這樣的標語：「EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY」。同學們參加了各種體育鍛煉之後，校園里出現了可喜的變化，強身健體，增強了學習效果，校園生活豐富了。請你報道一下學校開展這一活動的情況。

注意：1. 詞數80—100左右。

2. 要求文章結構合理、內容通順、句子連貫。

參考詞彙：build up one』s body strength 強健身體

rece diseases 減少疾病

As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play footb