英語作文評論

⑴ 英語作文評語大全

依式行文,文筆素源朴,結構嚴謹.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
內容豐富,結構嚴謹,體系完備,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
簡潔流暢,層次井然,結構嚴謹,文字生動,頗富幽默,筆調輕松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful

⑵ 英語作文點評

建議
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被動不合適)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有兩個謂語動詞，there be 和主系表結回果沖突。可改為答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名詞放feel後不合適)

⑶ 關於評論電影的英語作文

第1篇 英文：
Although Lei Feng left in a hurry, but leave us precious wealth. -- "
Lei Feng, the shock of universal name! When it comes to Lei Feng, my heart is always filled with respect and gratitude, especially after watching the movie "Lei Feng", this move is particularly strong.
No smoke of the battlefield on the screen, but each picture was so touching story; no extraordinary, plot twists and turns, but every detail was so exciting......
The movie "Lei Feng" tells the story of Uncle Lei Feng put one's heart and soul into serving the people's story. Was this a seemingly ordinary things, make Lei Feng in the hearts of the people to establish a very tall figure.
"No matter what position, I will do everything in my power, tried in every way to serve the people." This, Lei Feng -- a good son of the people! Outstanding member of the Communist party!
Each plot in the film is deeply moved me, however, the most let me unforgettable is Lei Feng for the victims.
Once, Lei Feng and his comrades driving transporting flood control materials to the disaster areas, to unload supplies, Lei Feng do not eat rice will return. Before he left, he took the opportunity to sneak an envelope was ready on the table, the envelope marked "with one hundred yuan donated to the disaster areas the people's Liberation Army soldiers". Beam director of the flood control headquarters after know, hurried to catch up, want to put the money back to Lei Feng, Lei Feng would take? Then, the beam director to see Lei Feng fall down an old pair of socks have mixed feelings, said: "you, you're wearing the socks, has donated one hundred dollars!?" He turned, the presence of people said: "comrades, this is not the one hundred dollars and a pair of thousands of joint million patch socks, this is a tremendous spiritual wealth!"
As you can imagine, this "one hundred yuan" was how huge amount! This can not but let us ponder: with only six yuan monthly allowance, save one hundred yuan of money is how not easy! However, who knows, Lei Feng's life is very simple: thirsty, refused to drink a bottle of that only five cents of soda; heat, even a sweat towel also did not carry...... But put those old socks, fill fill...... However, the people in the disaster areas have a difficult time, but he had no scruples, loosen one's purse strings generously, this is such a huge contrast!
At this time, the screen where everyone was excited; now, I had tears off screen. Who is not for Lei Feng's noble deeds and moved?
What is this spirit? This is work hard and perseveringly, thrift revolutionary spirit. Lei Feng's good qualities of this selfless dedication, sacrifice oneself to protect others is proud of the Chinese nation, is the pride of the Chinese people!
"A man's life is limited, but service to the people is limitless. I will dedicate my limited life to infinite serve for the people."
The film ended, Lei Feng's voice still echoes in my ears, my heart is not quiet for a long time -- although Lei Feng left us too early, however, he has left us with a very great wealth. This wealth, for you, I, he, the benefit of the whole society. I believe, this precious wealth will forever be handed down from age to age!
翻譯中文：
雷鋒雖然匆匆地離開了，然而卻給我們留下了寶貴的財富。——題記

雷鋒，這個震撼環宇的名字！每當提起雷鋒，我的內心總會充盈著崇敬與感激，特別是在觀看了電影《雷鋒》之後，這種感動尤為強烈。

銀幕上沒有硝煙彌漫的戰場，可是每個畫面竟那麼感人至深；故事裡沒有離奇、曲折的情節，可是每個細節竟那麼扣人心弦……

電影《雷鋒》講述的是雷鋒叔叔全心全意為人民服務的故事。竟是這一件件看似平凡的小事，使雷鋒在人們的心中樹立起無比高大的形象。

「不管在什麼崗位上，我都要盡一切力量、想一切辦法去為人民服務。」這，就是雷鋒——人民的好兒子！優秀的共產黨員！

影片中的每個情節都深深地感動了我，然而，最讓我難以忘懷的是雷鋒為災區捐款的事。

一次，雷鋒和他的戰友駕車給災區運送防洪物資，卸下物資後，雷鋒飯也不吃就要返回。臨行前，他趁機偷偷地把早就准備好的一個信封放在桌子上，信封上面寫著「內有一百元捐給災區人民解放軍一戰士」。防汛指揮部的梁主任知道後，急忙追出來，想把錢還給雷鋒，雷鋒怎肯收下呢？這時，梁主任見到雷鋒落下的一雙舊襪子，百感交集地說：「你，你就穿著這樣的襪子，卻捐出來一百塊錢！？」他轉過身，對在場的人說：「同志們，這不是一百塊錢和一雙千縫萬補的襪子，這是一筆巨大的精神財富！」

可以想像，這「一百元」在當時是多麼龐大的數額！這不能不讓我們深思：憑著每月僅僅六元錢的津貼費，積攢下一百元錢是多麼不容易啊！然而，又有誰知道，雷鋒的生活是多麼儉朴：渴了，不肯喝一瓶當時僅僅一毛五分錢的汽水；熱了，就連一條擦汗的毛巾也不曾攜帶……卻把那雙年久的襪子，補了又補……然而，在災區人民有難的時候，他卻毫不顧忌，慷慨解囊，這是多麼巨大的反差啊！

此時，銀幕里在場的人都激動萬分；此刻，銀幕外的我早已熱淚盈眶。誰不為雷鋒的高尚行為而感動呢？

這是什麼精神？這是艱苦奮斗、勤儉節約的革命精神。雷鋒的這種無私奉獻、舍己為人的優秀品質是中華民族的自豪，是中國人民的驕傲！

「人的生命是有限的，可是為人民服務是無限的。我要把有限的生命投入到無限的為人民服務之中去。」

影片放映結束了，雷鋒的聲音卻一直在我的耳畔回響，我的心更是久久不能平靜——雷鋒雖然過早地離開了我們，但是，他卻給我們留下了無比巨大的財富。這財富，惠及著你、我、他，惠及著全社會。我相信，這寶貴的財富將世世代代相傳下去！

⑷ 英語作文點評，請高人指點

沒有太大的問題，句子基本都把意思表達出來了

但是可能時態不是很清楚，過去時間段里專又摻帶了屬一般現在時，這個要改一下。

有一些詞看起來像是你直接查的字典就寫上去的，不是很恰當，用之前最好多看一下例句，模仿例句其實沒什麼壞處

有兩句話我畫了很長的線，實話講不是正確的句子，一個句好裡面用逗號連接了好幾個完整的句子。要是先讓句子看起來很高級就好好用從句，用不好不如直接寫成正確的短句。寫東西首先要是能表達清楚意思再是讀起來好聽

我試著盡量不改你的原詞，修改了前幾段，你可以參考一下。

⑸ 怎樣評價一篇英語作文

首先，應當理解題意；其次，應善於謀篇布局，而不是生硬得翻譯，在每個論內點開始時最好要有一定的容連接詞，比如first,second,third;first
of
all,then,in
addition,what
is
more,finally；再者，應當善於運用高中階段所學的各種句型語法，比如定語從句、同位語從句、動名詞的符合結構等等還有一些常用的句子，應善於積累；最後就是整體的事了，段落安排是否合理、書面是否工整、盡量減少語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤、字數在80到120之間。

⑹ 寫一篇電影的評論的英語作文60詞左右

Harry Potter series are my most favorite books.There are seven books in total.Last year,my father bought them for me as the new year gift.When I first read them,I liked them inmediately.The stories about Harry Potter are so exciting and adventurous.Harry Potter is a kind,brave and strong kid that he is never afraid of any difficulties.Besides,I admire him having two good friends.They always help him and never leave him,no matter how bad the conditions are.I am happy to see Harry Potter overcome all difficulties and live a happy life in the end.

⑺ 評論說英語作文的格式

評論性的作文最重要莫過於兩點，1觀點，你要對自己的觀點，或者說立回場一定要明確，無論答是從反面評價一個事物或是以正面評價一個事物，你可以通過反向或正向推理來佐證你的觀點。2則是總結自己的感想，這也是很重要的，這是你文章的一個可以使你的文章凝聚升華的部分，其重要性不言而喻，我建議你你可以通過舉例來證明自己的感想，比如要寫關於善良的文章，你就可以舉一些歷史上很善良的人物。希望我的一些經驗可以幫到你。

⑻ 英語作文 一部電影的評價 用英語寫一篇 關於一部電影的評價

Titanic
A precious stone which called "The Heart of Ocean"brought a love story between Rose and Jack.
They met on Titanic and fell in love with each other.On the way to love,they came across many obstacles but surmounted.Four days after the Titanic set out,a very big iceberg floated towards her.The ship was holed by an iceberg.Many people cannot be saved besides Rose and Jack.Death is the biggest obstacle for love to surmounte.In other to save Rose,Jack lay down his life.
In this movie,when teh ship suffered the unexpected,some people would rather help other people than save themselves,such as the sailors and the musicians.They moved me the most.This movie made me thought a lot in some fields,such as relationship of the people around you.For example,when we are facing love,how to express our feeling to our lovers and deal the problem about love with them;When we are facing the social problems,how to settle them perfectly?Let's suppose we are on the Titanic and taking different positions,what we should do when the unexpected coming?In my opinion,diferent people take the different positions and we do different things in society,but the most important thing is that we should assume our responsibilities.
As a whole,this movie not only has a wonderful plot but also provide food for thought.(發人深思)

⑼ 成績不能評價一個人的英語作文

Many parents like to use the results to evaluate their children's good or bad, all like good grades, high scores, poor grades of children to criticize ecation, scolding children, this is unfair. Each person's starting point is not the same, the good children only represent the cultural advantages, but people are all aspects of development, sports, morality, culture, light culture is not good, some children are poor, but other aspects do well, they are more able to accept our praise.

許多家長喜歡用成績來評價自己孩子的好壞，都喜歡成績好的，分數高的，對成績差的孩子進行批評教育，打罵孩子，這是不公平的。每個人的起點不一樣，學習好的孩子只代表在文化方面有優勢，但是人是全方面發展的，體育，道德，文化，光文化好也是不行的，有的孩子成績差，但是其他方面做得很好，他們更有能力去接受我們的表揚。
謝謝。

⑽ 英語作文評價大全

說真的，我很討厭淅瀝的小雨，它們是那麼的纏綿，總會使心煩湧入心頭，驚濤拍浪，挖心的難受．因此在這樣的雨天我沒有在雨中漫步的情懷．但在北方由於在黃河以北降雨量少，註定淅瀝的小雨會是夏天的常客．於是我也有些厭惡夏天，好在夏天還有一位代言人——暴雨，使我對夏天有了一絲的眷戀．
我喜歡暴雨有種近似痴迷的程度，因為暴雨下出了北方人的豪爽，給人一種親切感．下暴雨時我喜歡將窗子開到最大，將手臂伸出窗外去感受豆大的雨點落下時針扎般的痛，那時卻感覺不到疼，有的只是毅力的考驗．張大嘴努力的呼吸泥土的清香那是一種久違的香氣，它會使我想起曾今那充滿鳥語花香的大自然．
今天又一場暴雨過後，我遙望天際發現天空是那麼美，頭頂的一片天是那麼的湛藍，藍的沒有一絲雜質，它又是那麼的飄渺，好像是七仙女拋下的一件藍色的薄紗在空中飄舞．不遠處還是灰色的，印在房屋上竟是土黃色，那種顏色給人一種壓抑的感覺．於是我尋找藍灰的交界處，那裡本應是逐漸的過度色，而大自然卻巧妙的嵌進去一朵還未完全舒展的雲，剎那間我感受到了活力，那是生命的詮釋．突然明白再陰的天也有晴朗的那一刻，再黑的夜也有黎明出現的那一剎那．
那是一幅美麗的油畫，是大自然給予人類的享受，更是自然給我們敲響的警示鍾，如果沒有人類保護大自然，恐怕以後連那雨過天晴的後的一絲感動也會一去不復返，至少我們會失去對生命的另一種詮釋