❶ 英語作文修改
There are four seasons in a year,each of them has its own attractions,but my favorite season is spring.
A year's plan starts when spring comes.In spring,I can do many kinds of activities,such as flying kites,planting trees and so on.Spring is a wonderful season which is full of happiness.There are lots of nice flowers and trees in spring. Spring is so beautiful that I have fallen in love with it.
❷ 改英語作文..
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.......... this time.
chong fu~
even de no shi name tong shun, haoeva loushang de people dou help u gai le~
❸ 英語作文修改,英語高手進!
恩。。 第一句的介詞，用about不合適，對於一段時間的話，用ring，in 似乎要好一點。 第二句，句子順序不好，因為提前的是重點，我覺得重要的不是為了完成作業，而應該是你節約了時間。而游戲時間用gaming time會好的多。
第三句，sentence fragment，去掉so。至於in a row我不知道這樣好不好，不過我比較喜歡i got up early everyday for the whole week.
第四句，恩。。不知道你要表達的意思是不是你作業做累了，就幫媽媽做家務。。 。。 如果是的話，就改成I helped my mother with some housework, when i was tired to continue homework.
第5句。改成，so i could get physical exercise besides（other then） mental practice.
第6句。i planed and separated my work into pieces. Then i could finish one for each day.
7句：It was bored, but at least i done(finished) my homework.
最後：Time flies. The spring festival is over. I get some lucky money(red pockets) from relatives and friends. I really enjoyed my winter.
我沒有做大的修改，不過我覺得文章的構思上還有不少問題。。比如說既然寫寒假，在那麼短的作文裡面，不如不提春節。 或者只寫春節。
恩。。 不知道你是幾年級的學生了。。單詞用的不難。。應該沒問題吧。。
❹ 英語作文修改。
你的句子中主要是有許多不native(當地人的那種感覺）
下面是我幫你改的，但是還是參照了你的原文。對了，我改的是基於你的水平哈，不想它變得面目全非。
The way to relax ourself after exam(這里最好用名詞，再加個從句） 你的句子其實也沒錯
it's necessary (for us)...........exam. (so) 注意，這里你這里沒轉折。........ourself.
firstly, we can travel(to relax ourselves), (which is the good way)如果你學了從句可以用。
because we can (get attached with natural environment.) 與大自然相交流不是face the nature。這有點中式英語
we can (fishing)不是play with fish, ................And we (can)前面用一般，後面也一般時態.......
(secondly),.........such as (listening to music) 應為你的東西修飾的是activity,所以，要用listening,如果不懂你可以去問老師。這叫非謂語動詞做名詞， 後面watch 也是一樣的。
enjoy the time... 不是ourselves.....享受我們自己。。。。。聽起有點不對哈。。。。
third,後面還行。
最後還行吧。
❺ 英語作文修改
原文：Last Friday was my most unlucky day of this semester。In the morning ,when I got up to drink water ,i looked the clock in the way.oh my god ! it is already seven o』colck.while i compain ,while getting up as quickly as I can . To my surprise, the room whose my parents was very quiet. I thought perhaps they much too tired. I did not brush teeth as usual,but Ran out of the house with my bag. When I was just across the road, 15 car just drove right away. But I surprised to find Street lights was still lighting. When I go to school, I found that I was the third to arrive. Oh, it must be watch has stopped.In school,I failed Chinese dictation again. I was expreme upset. When I got home, I found I should have forgot to bring Chinese homework…
It was really bad lunck a day!
修改文:
Last Friday was indeed worst day in this semester for me. In the morning, when I got up to drink some water, I looked at the clock at the same time. Oh my god! It was already seven o'clock. Complaining and meanwhile getting up as fast as I can, to my surprise, my parents' room was very quiet. I thought that perhaps they were too tired. I did not brush teeth as usual and ran out of the house with my bag. When I was just crossing the road, 15 cars drove right passed. But I was surprised to find the street lights still on. When I went to the school, I found that I was the 3rd to arrive. Oh, it must be the watch that had stopped. In school, I failed Chinese Spelling again and I was extremely upset. When I got home, I found I should not have forgotten to bring my Chinese homework...
It was really a day of pure bad luck，but wish everyone all the best for tomorrow's mock test.
哈哈，挺有趣的文章，感嘆用得不錯，已經按照你寫的改了所有的語法和拼寫毛病，最後那邊應該是中文聽寫，是Chinese spelling, 而不是Chinese diction，原文總體還可以，不過應該加把勁檢查語法，很多地方以你的能力應該是可以避免的，比如過去是等等, 已經加上了對大家的祝福。
謝謝，希望可以幫到你。
❻ 修改英語作文盡量改到完美，切記抄襲其它作文語句
（。）或句點（抄．）是用於陳述句末尾的標點。文章內使用時機：「陳述句末尾的停頓，用句號。」「語氣舒緩的祈使句末尾，也用句號。」1「用在直述式文意已完足的句子。」在有些時候，句號也可以用在語氣舒緩的反問句的末尾。句號表示一句話的結束，新一句話的開始，提示讀者該句的表達意思已結束。西式的句號「.」（Period）也被稱作「句點。。
❼ 英語作文改寫
作文的改寫其實就是句子的改寫，意思不變，那麼改的肯定是他的表專達，一般從屬詞語的替換入手，尤其是一些關聯詞，同意片語，例如文章中如果有lead
to
那麼我們就可以改成give
rise
to
,result
in
等等表示導致意思的詞語。有些我們就要改寫句子的結構。例如有些時候我們可以改成形式賓語的形式，例如文章中有這么一句話English
is
so
hard
for
me.我們就可以改成I
find
it
hard
to
learn
English.當然我們不能為了改寫而改寫，改的時候要保證句子正確與漂亮，盡量避免相同的句式，也不要出現很多I
,I
,I什麼的。你可以先從改寫句子著手。希望對你有所幫助
❽ 要不要改約用英文
Please consider it whether you will change the hotel where you meet Mr.Han or not.
❾ 英語作文修改
Life likes weather.（生活應該像天氣，不應該像天空）It may be sunny or rainy sometimes,but it will never be continuing for a long time.So how can we do when we are in trouble ande how to deal with it
First,when you find you have made a mistake.這里既然用完成時，過去分詞就應該有Do not ask for help to others at once.You should try to deal with by yourself which can make you grow up and learn someting new quickly.(這里我給你改了用定語從句這樣更好，分數會更高)
Second ,if you find it is difficult to you to solve the problem .Don't hesitate turning (猶豫做某事應該用動詞ING形式) to your friends for help.It is a easy for them to help you out of trouble.Don't be shy(基本上沒有說FEEL SHY 的 都是 BE SHY.) and you can help others when they are in trouble .
Everyone has different ways( 不同的方式，方式用復數） to solve the problem.The theory depends on themselves .So,find a way which is suitable(這里應該用適合的形容詞形式） for you and keep a brave heart everytime（這是我給你改好了的，若是還有疑問就請再問我，以後有什麼困難也可以找我，我會盡力幫你解答的）