A. 高一的優秀英語作文
奧運火炬作文
Olympic Flame
Now the 26th Centennial World Olympic Games are in full swing in Altanda. The Olympic flame is burning red and bright in the torch at the center of the Olympic square. Earlier before the official opening of the games it had been relayed one by one through the hands of runners, among them, students supported by the Chinese hope project. Thousands of people lined the struts to watch the relay.
The relay of the Olympic Flame is the symbol of the continuity between the ancient and modern Games. During the ancient Olympics a sacred flame burned at the altar of Zeus. A modern version of the flame was adopted for the Berlin Games in 1936, and the tradition has been observed ever since. The torch used to kindle the flame is first lit by the sun's rays at Olympia in Greece, and then carried to the site of the Games by relays of runners. Ships and planes are used when necessary.
The runners are specially chosen, All of them are hard working and as a result become overacbievers. The flame kindles the fire in everyone's heart to encourage people to go on and on and bring the Olympic spirit into full play.
翻譯
奧運聖火
第26屆世界百年奧運盛會正在亞特蘭大舉行。奧運聖火火炬在奧運廣場的中心燃燒得火紅明亮。在奧運會正式開幕之前,火炬通過長跑運動員的手一個一個往下傳,傳遞者中有受中國希望工程資助的學生。成千上萬的人排在街道兩旁觀看。
奧運火炬的傳遞象徵著古代和現代奧運的繼續。古代奧運聖火在宙斯聖壇點燃。現代奧運聖火於l936年在柏林開始採用,其傳統一直延續至今。火炬在希臘奧林匹亞用陽光點燃,然後由運動員傳遞到會場。必要時用船或飛機運送。
傳遞者通過精心挑選,都是些艱苦奮斗且卓有成就者。聖火點燃了每一個人的心,鼓勵人們發揚奧運精神永遠前進。
夏日的農村
【內容提示】
夏日的農村,鬱郁蔥蔥,繁花盛開,鶯歌燕舞,一派美景。請你用英語將這樣一幅夏日圖描寫一番。內容要點如下:
①夏天伴著它那溫暖的明媚陽光而來,使我們想起了各種美好的事情:在農村的度假,野餐活動,還有那翻曬乾草時節的聚會……
②春天到來的時候,乍曖還寒,大地空曠,草木未長;而夏季到來之時,世界成了另一番景象:是一片綠的世界——綠的樹葉,綠的草地,樹籬間植物蔥郁,鮮花到處盛開。
③白天長了,夜晚短了;在明媚的六月里,太陽早早起床,很晚才入睡。這是一年裡最美好最有生機的一個月。鳥兒從太陽升起一直唱到太陽落山以後才停息。
④當別的鳥兒靜下來之後,傳來一陣柔和的叫聲;再過一會,聲音大了起來,很快,夜鶯盡情地唱起它那奇妙的歌。
【作文示範】
The Countryside in Summer
Summer has come, with its warm sunny days, making us thing of all sorts of nice things, such as holidays in the country, picnics and haymaking①parties.
When Spring came, she found the earth cold and bare, but she soon changed all that, and by the time Summer arrives, the world is a very different place. It is a green world now, green leaves on the trees, green grass in the fields, green plants crowding in the hedges②, and flowers opening everywhere.
The days are long and the nights are short, for the sun gets up early and goes to bed late in sunny June. It is one of the best and brightest months in the year. Birds sing from sunrise till long after sunset.
As night falls, one after another the birds stop their singing, and after a few last sleepy sounds, put their heads under their wings to rest for an hour or two before beginning again. They do not all sleep, however. When other birds are silent, comes a soft cry, then, after a few moments, another, louder this time; and soon the nightingale③ pouring out his wonderful song.
Not only at night does the nightingale sing. On almost every warm day in early June, the little brown bird sings away in the roads and woods, but, as all the other birds are also singing at the same time, we do not notice his voice so much. It is at night, when he has the field all to himself, that we hear the nightingale at his best.
(選自《英語學習》1984年第7期)
【詞語解釋】
①haymaking [』hei?meikiR] n.制備乾草
②hedge [hedN] n.(矮樹的)樹籬
③nightingale [』naitiRgeil] n.夜鶯
【寫作指要】
1)本文作者抓住「綠的世界」和「歌的晝夜」從視覺描寫到聽覺描寫給讀者描繪了一幅生機勃勃的夏日農村的美景。
2)第二段里「green」一詞的多次重復使「綠的世界」深深留在人們的心裡。在第三、四、五段里,作者把「歌聲」這一概念用不同的詞表達出來,如「sing」,「song」,「sounds」,「cry」,「pouring out」,「singing」,「voice」等,如此同義照應,使語義上下連貫,同時也加強和突出了「夜鶯歌唱」的主題。
3)本文作者使用了擬人(personification)手法,文章顯得格外生動:第二段Spring和Summer兩個詞首字母大寫,用「she」指代「Spring」;第三段中的「gets up」和「goes to bed」,「birds sing」;第四段中的「sleep」,「cry」;第五段中的「his voice」,「he」和「himself」都是擬人用法。
4)為了使描寫生動優美,作者使用了分詞短語「making us think of…」,獨產主格結構「green leaves on the trees…flowers opening everywhere」,省略句法「then, after a few moments, (comes) another (cry),(which is) louder this time」,以及傳神的短語「all to himself」和「at hisbest」等。
B. 10篇高中優秀英語作文
直接點擊用戶名,去高中英語博客看,裡面有高中英語作文
C. 高中英語作文如何拿滿分
有啊·
1.寫作文一般要分3-4段(一定要分),不要一寫一整段
2.字跡一定要工整,一般來說越到考試最後心情越急躁,自己也會變得潦草,但這無疑會給閱卷老師留些不好的印象,如會想:這人肯定水品不咋地,字都寫成這樣了·
3.注意運用一些比較新穎的單詞,片語
4.句子主語別總用 I/We/she/he/they 等 也可用被動或Ving 作主語
有時會啟動意想不到的效果
5.注意別老寫簡單句,畢竟·不是初中了,不能老停留在那水平,不是么?可以用些定從,狀從以及一些名詞性從句如主從(比較好用)等,句子套句子,一般來個1-3句就好了,不必太多,多了容易出錯就得不償失了
6,在老外寫作文時,一般都喜歡用物作主語,遇到動詞盡量把它變為n,遇n
可變為相應的短語,這樣更生動,例如
The bus stopped
The bus came to a stop
盡管兩句話意思一樣,但第二句明顯比第一句要好得多
7。就是懂得運用比喻。排比等(不要以為只有漢語有,語言是相通的)
8.中間段主要寫題目中給的提示句,但切忌逐句翻譯,這是要不得的。如題目中的提示有1,2,3 但你千萬寫的時候別分123條,
做到以上的基本就是A 類文了,但我想主要的功夫還是的下在平時,多讀讀英文周刊等,有專門的為高中生的報紙,買來看看,考試時注意文章時態別一會用
一般現在時,一會兒又用一般過去時,寫句子注意 用合適的連詞,表轉折的詞,但別老用那一個,適當的換換
D. 高中的英語作文部分可以做到滿分嗎
有的,你網路一下高考英語滿分作文就可以找到歷年的滿分作文。
E. 高中英語作文,高分,急急急!!!!!
我的原創,引用敬請註明原處哈。嘻嘻。
註:看到( )意味著我不知道前面這個詞兒你們是否學過,如果沒有,就用括弧里的詞代替。例如:pursue (look) --> 如果你們沒學過pursue 這個詞,就把pursue 去掉,換成look。
小朋友還是要讀讀姐姐的樣本文哈。不要一點都不學就不好了哦。還是要做點假,改錯幾個地方哈,免得你們老師一下子就看出來了。沒辦法,誰讓我那麼厲害涅。吼吼!強烈要求加分!
文一(148詞)
It is very common to find that some people are satisfied with what they have, while others want to pursue (look) for something they do not have. My view (thought) is that people should be practical and flexible (open-minded).
What do I mean by being practical and flexible? If what you have now is what the reality allows for, then you should be happy with whatever you have got. However, on the other hand, what you own is not really what you enjoy, then I suggest that you should make efforts to get what you really desire for instead of settling down with what is offer to you.
My attitude is that people should be both practical – i.e. set your mind on something that is within your ability – and flexible in the sense that we need to adjust (change) our goals in accordance with (following) the life reality.
文二 課余活動?(246 詞)
It seems every student is in front of a choice – to be a bookworm (good student) or to be a well-rounded student but not super good at studies; to be a traditional (「old-style」) good student or to be a modern student with strong points as well as shortcomings; to have a personal life or not.
Of all the good students at school – since I don』t believe that there exist 「bad」 or 「poor」 students as everyone has his or her strength and weakness – one has to decide which way they want to take. Traditional (「old-style」) students tend to spend all their time studying and doing exercises. As a result (therefore), they don』t have a personal life. They know which university they want to attend, which major (subjects) they want to study, but they don』t have other knowledge and experience outside school.
On the other side of the coin, some modern students are not very good at book knowledge. They go to parties, they play sports, they watch many movies or cartoons and some of them even make their own videos or cartoons. They are not the top students at school, but they have a life. They may get confused (lost) as to which university they should go to or which major (subject) they want to study, but they do well in other areas of life. They usually have great interpersonal (communication) skills.
Which kind of student do you want to be? – It is surely a personal choice.
文三 看書vs 旅遊 (184詞)
There are at least two ways of accumulating (building) knowledge and experience: to read and to travel. Which works better if one wants to know more about the world and the human culture? I believe that everyone should do both to get a full understanding of the world and the human.
Books differ from travelling in that the former (first) is static (quiet) while the latter (second) is dynamic (ever-changing). Book knowledge is dead until one really experiences it. Let』s say that you read many books about Africa, not only the nature, the people, but also the politics, the culture. However, all the book knowledge does not make sense to you until you go there in person to listen, to watch, to appreciate, to feel what is going on. The first-hand experience from travelling in Africa has a deep impression and impact (influence) on you. It stays with you for your lifetime. You will never forget what you have heard, seen and experienced there. I will always share your ideas and thoughts with others. That travelling experience completes what books fail to show you.
文四 朋友 (169 詞)
No matter we realize it or not, we all attract (know) two kinds of friends in our life – who are like us or who are opposite to us. Some people choose to only hang out (make friends) with people who are like themselves, others are more open-minded. They want to make friends with people who are different from them. What do you do – to only meet and make friends of 「your kind」 or to meet and be-friend with 「other kind」?
It is really an indivial (a personal) decision to make, isn』t it? I personally do not think that one way is better than the other. Every coin has two sides – some good, some bad. What is more important in my view (eyes) is that one should be aware of (careful with) the way we choose friends and what we learn from them. As the old saying goes, out of three, there must be one teacher. If we watch what we pick up from a friend, either way is fine.
F. 怎樣寫一篇滿分高中英語作文
高中英語作文在英文考試中占據著非常重要的地位,聽力、閱讀的題目都是客觀題,有標准答案,而高中英語作文卻仍需要老師進行批卷,這也就意味著要拿到高分就要“取悅”閱卷老師的眼睛,讓他們感到眼前一亮。
大家往往知道要多看往年歷屆的滿分優秀高中英文作文,多背誦名篇名句,但你總結過一篇好的高中英文作文到底有哪些寫作技巧么?
1、善用名人名言和諺語:
高中英語作文和語文一樣,如果能夠善用名人名言與諺語,不僅可以展現你的英語水平和閱讀量,而且還能升華文章主題,一定能夠讓你的作文增設不少。
例如,對於生活的感悟:
Life is like the box of chocolates. You never know what's going to happen.
生活就像是一盒巧克力,你永遠不知道你將會得到什麼。——《阿甘正傳》
例如,關於時間:
Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery. But today is a gift. That is why it’s called the present.
昨天是歷史了,明天還是未知,但今天是禮物,所以今天才叫present(present有“現在”和“禮物”兩個意思)。
這些有深度的語言需要平時不斷地積累和總結,不妨在看電影或者美劇的時候,將喜歡的句子摘錄下來時時品讀一番,在寫高中英文作文時自然能夠下筆如有神。
2、高級語法、時態及修辭手法:
一些高級語法比如,雙重否定表示肯定、倒裝句等等,我們往往原本把它們作為一個語法知識點進行學習和記憶,其實在寫高中英文作文時,不妨也用上它們,絕對能讓你的文章增色不少。
雙重否定表示肯定
It is hardly unusual for children to tell lies.
孩子們說謊並不稀奇。
倒裝句(含虛擬語氣)
Nothing did Mary say before she left.
瑪麗什麼都沒做就走了。
Had I seen Jack yesterday,I wouldn't go to his home now.
如果我昨天見到傑克了,我現在就不去他家了。
3、收集萬能句
在文章的開頭、中間過渡和結尾處往往會出現一些“萬能句”,做個有心人收集這些可以在文章中套用的萬能句,絕對可以讓你的高中英語作文加分不少。
開頭的萬能句
As far as … is concerned 就…而言
【例句】
As far as technology is concerned, I believe Huawei is among the best in the world.
就技術而言,我相信華為在世界上名列前茅。
What calls for special attention is that…需要特別注意的是
【例句】
What calls for special attention is that money is not everything, virtue is priceless, especially to the young children.
需要特別注意的是,錢不是一切,尤其對於年輕的小孩來說,美德才是無價的。
As the proverb says 俗話說,常言道
【例句】
As the proverb says, good wine needs no advertising.
俗話說,酒香不怕巷子深。
中間過渡的萬能句
As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
【例句】
As stated in the previous paragraph, it is a virtue to stick to one’s promise.
如前段所述,遵守諾言是一種美德。
Further, we hold the opinion that… 此外,我們堅持認為…
【例句】
Further, we hold the opinion that all work and no play make Jack a ll boy.
此外,我們堅持認為,只會用功不玩耍,聰明孩子也變傻。
結尾的萬能句
Overall 總而言之
【例句】
Overall, honesty is a virtue.
總而言之,誠實是一種美德。
學完了以上的技巧,相信你也能寫出一篇讓閱卷老師“大跌眼鏡”的完美高中英文作文。
G. 如何寫出一篇滿分的高中英語作文
1.仔細審題是關鍵,立意鮮明效果現。
英語書面表達中,只有正確審題,理清要點,才能把握寫作方向和要求。要分析情景,弄清體裁,透過圖畫、圖表、提綱、文字描述等情景呈現形式看到內容。如看圖作文中,不能單純地望'圖'生義,一味地重視圖示內容。應將圖示內容與寫作背景幾所學知識結合起來,由圖內看到圖外,排除無用信息,扣緊文章主題。
2.減少語病,盡量使用熟悉句型。
句子結構的好壞直接影響意義的表達和文章的質量,在平時的寫作練習中,考生經常會犯一些錯誤,如句子殘缺不全,缺乏主語、謂語或其它必要成分;必須要牢記掌握一些常用句型或習慣表達,避免中文式英語,在實踐中不斷養成用英語思維寫作的習慣。如:Is it a good thing or a bad thing? Different people have different viewpoints, In my opinion, we should……
3.確定時態及人稱,內容連貫,結構緊湊。
高考書面表達評分標准明確規定,如人稱錯誤要扣分,不同的文體一般都有基本時態。日記通常記敘發生過的事情,多用一般過去時。議論文多用一般現在時,通知等文體通常用一般將來時。每個句子寫好之後,句與句之間要選擇恰當的連接詞。比如:
(1)表示承接、遞進用語,besides(並且)、what's more(並且),moreover(而且),firstly,secondly,finally(最後),from now on (從此),afterwards I after that(後來),to make things worse/ what's worse(使事情更為糟糕的是),the worst thing of all(最糟糕的是)。
(2)表示轉折關系用語。but bowever,otherwise,though,despite,in spite of...(盡管)on the other hand(另一方面),as(盡管),all the same(盡管如此)。
(3)表示因果關系用語。because/because of......for(因為),owing to (由於),thanks to (由於),e to (由於),so that (結果)。
(4)歸納總結用語。to summarize(總而言之),in short/in a word(簡而言之),on the whole(從總體看),generally speaking(一般說來),in my view(我的觀點),in conclusion(總之)。
H. 求短篇高中英語作文(100字左右),40篇
寫信篇:
Dear Mr Smith,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for yourself some
Best wishes,
自我介紹:
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. Last year I won first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
話題作文:
Freedom for many children is the coming day when they could improve myself in their own way to use my 24 hours. They can study language by watching film instead of working on boring grammar and multiple choices.
Freedom is as simple as my playing piano all night without worrying about disturbing my 14-year-old neighbour who has to go to school the next day for my house is specially made.
It also could be freedom in my dream that one day, political democracy becomes true. Freedom in my life is the name of all kindness and happiness.
People have common desire under the sun. For mankind, freedom commonly means respect, love, blessing and dignity. For some people, freedom is that some day, he can give up his own interests to guarantee others』 rights. It is no wonder that so many people fought for freedom even didn』t hesitate to give up their lives when necessary .
I would like to be a freedom fighter for human rights some day in future.
環境問題:
The world is not only hungry, it is also thirsty. This may sound strange, since nearly seventy percent of the earth's surface is covered with water. But about ninety percent of this is sea water. Man and most of the animals can only drink and use the remaining percent of water——fresh water.
The need for water is increasing day by day. Only steps are taken to deal with this problem immediately can we avoid a severe world wide water shortage later on. One of the first steps is to develop ways to reuse it.
Experiments have already keen carried out in this field. The used witer has been pumped to a water purifying plant. There, it can be separated from waste matter and treated with chemicals so that it can be used again, just as if it were fresh water from a spring.
書面表達001
某對外發行的英文報紙對中國群眾體育現狀進行了調查,請根據下列圖表和所給提示,用英語寫一篇報道,以便向該報投稿。
說明:1.體質下降;
2.應充分認識體育鍛煉的重要性;
3.採取措施,提供人們鍛煉的場地和器材(facilities );
4.字數:120 — 140. 報道的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數。
Recently, we have made a survey of the people on physical training. Only 35 percent of the people surveyed have taken part in physical activities.
Over half of the people say they haven』t got enough time to take exercises. 34.9 percent of them complain they don』t have places where they can relax themselves and that there are not enough training facilities, while another 12.9 percent of the people feel that they live too far away from the training centers. Some of them even don』t know how to train.
For lack of physical training, many people are not in good health. People should realize the importance of it, and measures should be taken to provide people with training facilities.