『壹』 "批改作文"英文怎麼說
春天，百花齊放，爭奇斗艷；夏天，到處充滿了生機；秋天，金風送爽，到專處一派豐收的景象；而冬天屬白雪皚皚，粉妝玉砌，是我最喜歡的季節。
冬天，我最喜歡下雪，因為學可以使世界變得粉妝玉砌，猶如一位披上銀裝的妙齡少女，十分美麗.下雪時，晶瑩潔白的雪花飄飄灑灑，漫天飛舞，像一個個蒲公英飛來飛去，隨風起舞；宛如一隻只銀色的蝴蝶隨著風從天空中跳著華爾茲來到了人間；又似一位位白衣少女在為大地母親點綴……這景象是多麼美麗，多麼令人喜愛，多麼令人心曠神怡啊！
一場大雪過後，世界的每個角落都變成了銀白色，分外美麗。校園里，到處是白茫茫的一片。孩子們歡天喜地地打雪仗，一陣陣愉快的笑聲在校園里回盪著。
田地里，雪姑娘為莊稼蓋上里厚厚的棉被，使他們在睡夢中度過一個美好的冬天。
樹林里，雪姑娘壓在光禿禿的樹枝上，為大樹裹上了一層銀裝，使大樹不再顯得光禿禿的，不再單調。
『貳』 手機批改網批改英語作文收費了，還有什麼別的軟體可以推薦啊
網路APP下載全能批改英語作文，他是智能自動批改英語語文作業。你要是開補習班的老師或者是學校的老師，使用這種原件給學生批改作業，也是極其不負責任的行為，對學生，對家長，是一種應付了事的態度。
『叄』 批改點評一篇英語作文！！！
文章的主體框架復還是不錯的制，但是你好像犯了一個大錯！全文的時態應該用過去式，而你在第三，四段卻用了一般現在時，好像不太合乎情理。另外，像precious ， attitude的詞可以多用一些，增加亮點！你的文章中也有許多的名言警句，這會增強老師對你的關注，會得到高分的！只是美中不足的，你文章中的復合句不是很多，基本上都是簡單句，這樣的話會使一些心情不好的老師不願意再往下看，這可是寫作的一個技巧(⊙o⊙)哦！！！！！！
『肆』 求批改 英語作文
刪 a
Should college ecation focus.....
At first,one』 imagination dominates one』s creativity
改成：At first, imagination nurtures one』s creativity
Where you can stay depends on where you think you can
改成：your mind decides where you are
Imagination is a ladder which leads us to the peak of our life.
改成：imagination is THE ladder that leads us to the pinnacle of life
如果你使用which，前面要用逗號隔開
In China, many colleges just focus on the basic facts and knowledge, neglecting what the society really needs, which is a critical reason that Chinese always lack masters and world-famous scientists while in China there are numerous talented teenagers.
改成：In China, many colleges just (focus on the basic facts and knowledge and neglect what the society really needs), which is a critical reason why Chinese still lack masters and world-famous scientists while talented teenagers are not in shortage.
( )內的句子，讓後面的which修飾
Therefore, I made the conclusion that college ecation should focus on cultivating the imagination of students. For instance, professors can just put forward the hot issues for students and leave everything else for college students to investigate and create. Instead of setting up standard answers, professors should take their charge in valuing students』 work and giving constructive advice to students.
改成：Therefore, I conclude that college ecation should focus on cultivating the imagination of students. For instance, professors can just put forward hot issues to students, and let students improvise their own conclusions. Instead of setting up standard answers, professors should only asses students』 work and provide constructive advice to students.
『伍』 求批改一篇英語作文 謝謝
1.1 Don't judge a book by its cover
[句子錯誤] 請檢查Do，確認主謂一致。
1.2 Welive in a complex world.
[句子錯誤] 請檢查句中謂語動詞。
1.3 In the world, there are good things and terriblethings.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查terriblethings，確認拼寫正確。
1.4 Let's see some contrary groups, beautiful persons and ugly persons,noble person and humble person, the rich and the poor, warmhearted person andcriminal person, honest person and tricky person.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查andcriminal，確認拼寫正確。
[批改提示] person表示「人」。注意與people的區別。詳情點擊
1.5 Just like every coin has twosides.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查twosides，確認拼寫正確。
1.6 Every thing also has its counterpart.
[批改提示] 查看every thing和everything的區別。
1.7 Clearly distingushing them is animportant skill for us.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查distingushing，確認拼寫正確。
[批改提示] 查看clearly與clear的區別。
2.1 Asa famous saying goes, don't judge a book by its cover.
[句子錯誤] 請檢查do，確認主謂一致。
2.2 I really experienced asimilar situation.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查asimilar，確認拼寫正確。
2.3 One day, I was looking for a data in library in myuniversity.
[其他] 請檢查a data in library，本族語中很少使用。
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查myuniversity，確認拼寫正確。
2.4 The appropriate data had not been founded for a long time.
2.5 FinallyI difficultly found a book.
2.6 What's worse,the book is really old.
2.7 It's cover wasold enough,too.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查wasold，確認拼寫正確。
2.8 What bothers me a lot was a mark on the page 2 said "Wrotedown in 1928", but the thing waiting for me next is amazing.Oh!
2.9 Thecontent of the book is useful a lot!
2.10 Since then,I haven't judged a book by itscover.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查itscover，確認拼寫正確。
3.1 Beautifulperson doesn't mean that she has a wonderful heart.
3.2 Do not believe other peopleeasily.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查peopleeasily，確認拼寫正確。
3.3 Rational judgement is important in our life.
3.4 For instance, when we arebrowsing all kinds of news online, we can never know the whole story well onlyby reading the oversimplified--sometimes even misleading -headlines.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查onlyby，確認拼寫正確。
[批改提示] all kinds of的近義表達有a great variety of。
3.5 Actually,we should not make a judgement on anything hastily until we've studied itcompletely.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查itcompletely，確認拼寫正確。
4.1 In my opinion, in order to make rational judgements, we'd better spend enough timeand energy to understand a person or a thing before drawing any conclusion.
[動詞錯誤] 請檢查spend enough timeand energy to understand，確認動詞用法正確。
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查timeand，確認拼寫正確。
你可以搜索句酷批改網，很不錯的，上面內容均為那個網站上的。
『陸』 批改我的英語作文
Nowadays, more and more children prefer eating meat better than green vegetables。第二個eating太多餘了。
declivous應為delicious
a fifteen year old 應為 a fifiteen-year-old；
And應該小寫前面改成逗號,或者改成What's more, vagetables...。
lots前面加上since/because連成一句比較好。
如果要用are made ill，後面最好用by,這句話最好說lots of people become ill because of ...
後面的on有點嫌疑。。保險起見把on them 刪掉吧。
即：What's more, vegetables can be dangerous since lots of people are become ill because of the pesticides the farmers use. So I like meat.z注意每個句子不要太獨立，用點so這類的連接詞，會比較連貫。
it is not quiet right。。quiet應該是quite。這句話是病句，純中國式英語。。。太繞了，直接說However，that's not right.
Always eating meat 也是中國式英語。always 表示的可能性特別大，接近百分之百。改為：eating meat too much can also be dangerous！
heart attacks表示心臟病發作，最好改成heart disease。我印象中plenty修飾不可數名詞。can only find 改為can only be found.
A lack of vegetables is a lack of proteins.我覺得有點問題，但說不出問題在哪裡，你可以查一下lack 的用法。
On the one hand...on the other hand 要配套使用，同時只適用於相反的兩個方面（這點和多人不知道，會亂用）
and so do me不好，要用也是so do I
還有，你這篇作文的結構有點亂，缺乏條理，既然後面還要講吃太多菜不好，就前面就不要用Sally說了，直接總-分-總。
我一直搞不懂為什麼就冒出個Sally來了。。。
從你的作文看得出閱讀量有點不足，英語語感有待加強。平時多閱讀一些文章，21世紀報不錯。。。
呃。。。如果你是初中生，這篇作文很不錯。如果你是高中生，建議你不要只寫一些簡單句，高中的作文適當增加復雜句型（不多，一兩句就夠了，但是前提是要寫對。。）可以給作文增色不少，畢竟高中的作文要求會比較高。。。
我說話有點直，別介意。。。如果生氣，5分我不要就是了。。。就這樣啦~再接再厲~
『柒』 求批改英語作文
with percentages of 18.80%, 16.36% and 15.77% in sequence.
要麼把percentages of 去掉 要麼把百分號去掉否則就是重復
in sequence去掉，因為前面已經有followed by了 這里意思又重復了
To talk about Clothing/Footwear, story is different.
顯然用Talking about/of 結構更為規范，story前面的定冠詞也漏了
Italy was the leading country with a rate of 9.00%, while Sweden was lagged behind with a relatively low percentage of 5.40%.
【rate】的用法不能這樣用，應該改成 at the rate of 9:100 這個：號可以換成to
lag是不及物動詞不能用被動 pecentage的問題不再說了。
The other three countries was in between with rates at around 6.50%.
這句話的表達無法理解。between後面有對象的話則必須是A and B. 你的between後面只有一個對象，已經錯了。
Turkey was ranked No.1 the second time with a rate of 4.35%.
建議the second time的the改成a. 表示「再」的意味可以更明確
rank是不及物動詞，用被動，錯。
To draw a conclusion from the table
這個表達很不地道。直接In conclusion乾脆舒服。
percentage is different in each column,
每個豎條百分數據不同。根據這個表達意思。建議改成percentages vary from column to column更好。你的原句少定冠詞就不對，多了又感覺不舒服。
one thing was similar. It』s that consumers in all five countries spent most of their money on the item
可以去掉句號和it's改裝成同位語從句。更為簡潔和有語感
『捌』 批改英語作文 英語怎麼說
批改英語作文
【correct
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composition
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check是檢查，不是批改
有不會的可以再問我
『玖』 批改英語作文
craftsmanship，是針對一個人而言的手工藝技巧不能用，第二次用influence拼錯了，society前面加冠詞，cloning才是克隆內原型是clone，cloning作為一種容技術可以看做專有名詞前面不建議加冠詞，pay的是錢pay for的才是花錢的東西，regular作名詞時指人，想說宇宙規律說universe不就好了嗎，life time 是線性的lengthen它會更好，societ不存在的，改成social吧，最後的better沒寫完。整篇語法和詞彙都很低級啊，最好用一些高級一點的詞彙，不一定要很難的，比如both sides就比two sides好得多impact就比influence好得多。第二段第二句整句語法錯誤，可改成it is so helpful for medical treatments that mankind can live a longer life.(so that 和so ... that意思是分別是以便和如此...以至於，medical不能用作名詞)
『拾』 如何批改英文作文
在批改時，不一定需要每篇作文都進行逐詞逐句的修改，可以參照已有的回常用批改符號（correction? symbols）或自答行設計一套自用的符號系統，如在錯誤處畫一底線並寫上 sp（=spelling），vb（=verb form），agr（=subject—verb agreement）等，對那些學生能自己改正的錯誤則要求他們自行改正。但對這種批改方式也有不少學者和教師持異議，他們認為單靠使用vague或incoherent這樣簡單的評注，對學生幫助不大。這一點已為我國許多英語寫作課教師所認識。美國學者路易斯·米利奇（Louis Milic）指出，有些句子中出現的錯誤必須超越語法層次來分析