⑴ 高中英語作文指導:如何用英文寫信(1)
高中英語作文要求學生在充分領會「提示」的前提下,用自己的語言組織成一篇內容充實、語言正確、句子連貫、用詞貼切的短文。但由於各種原因,學生們在寫作的時候經常會出現審題不清、論證無效、思維混亂、結構鬆散等問題,因此,除了以一定的詞彙、句式、語法結構為基礎,在寫作時學生還應該掌握一定的方法,深思熟慮、精心構思,最終成文。下面以一篇作文為例談談筆者在作文教學中的一些想法。 -作文要求: 假如你是某中學學生李博文。最近,你班同學正在參加21世紀英文報組織的一個討論。話題為:「父母有沒有必要陪讀?」請你根據下表所列情況給報社寫一封信,客觀介紹討論情況。 70%的同學認為: 1.父母不該陪讀;2.父母陪讀讓我們養成依賴的習慣,不利於自控能力的培養,不利於培養良好的學習習慣;3.父母陪讀影響了他們的工作、學習和休息。 30%的同學認為: 1.父母應該陪讀;2.父母陪讀能使我們騰出時間專心學習,使我們身體更健康;3.父母陪讀能幫助我們確立學習目標,督促我們完成學業,鼓勵我們獨立解決困難,培養我們養成良好學習習慣。 一、分析要求 寫作的要求盡管都比較簡潔扼要,但卻包含著不少的信息,比如說文體、格式、中心等,所以同學們在寫作時必須通過仔細閱讀要求,找到中心詞以明確任務,在本篇作文的開頭要求中,可確定: 1)以書信格式給報社寫信 2)父母要不要陪讀(中心話題) 3)客觀介紹(客觀結果的敘述,無須主觀的論證) 二、分析材料本篇材料以表格形式出現,內容還是比較豐富的,所以同學們應就表格內容進行分析和梳理。可得到以下信息: 1)雙方觀點對立,具有辯論性(表格第1點) 2)各自理由的陳述(表格2、3點) 三、組織結構 對材料進行了一定的分析後,同學就比較容易確定所寫文章的結構組織。以本篇為例: 1.關鍵句式 引入句:i』m writing to tell you the discussion we』ve had about… i』m very glad to write to you about… 過渡句(第一段與第二段):there have been different opinions. opinions are divided on the question. it is certain that we do have different opinions on this matter. 不同觀點引入:……同學認為(贊同/反對) …students think… students hold(the belief)that …students have argued that …students are against the idea …students don』t accept the idea …students feel strongly about the idea …students are in favor of 2.中心詞彙 陪讀:accompany sb.studying at school 養成依賴的習慣:form/get into /fall into the habit of dependence 自控能力:the ability of controlling ourselves 對……有所影響:have a…effect(influence)on,affect 騰出時間spare more time 督促urge 鼓勵……做……encourage sb.to do sth. 獨立independently/by oneself/on ones own/alone
⑵ 求2篇書信類型的高中英語作文(80-----100字)
一.假如你是李華,一名叫Jim的美國學生參加夏令營活動將在你家住兩周,請你給他寫一封信,介紹你的家人和基本情況。再加上英語
⑶ 高中英語作文書信格式
Dear Mercy,
親愛的梅斯,
How is everything going! Last time you said you are anxious now because you find it hard to learn English well. Don』t worry. I think you have to improve your English step by step. And I will right behind you. In my view, you should develop you interest on English first. According to my experience, I think watching English movie, listen to some wonderful English songs and talk in English on the Internet would be helpful. Secondly, you have to prepare lessons before class that will help you understand what the teacher says in the class. I know you feel bored in the class, but you have force yourself to be concentrated. A few days later you will feel it a little easy to learn English. The left steps I will tell next time. By the way, we have not seen each other since your family move to Hunan a year ago. Have you ever thought about going back to visit me and learn English together in the coming Summer vacation. Looking forward to your reply.
過得可好。上次你說你現在很焦慮因為你覺得很難學好英語。別擔心。我覺得要提高英語你得一步步來。我會幫你的。在我看來,首先應該要培養你對英語的興趣。根據我的經驗,我認為看英文電影,聽美妙的英文歌曲以及在互聯網上與他人用英語交流會有很大的幫助。其次,你要預習,這樣可以讓你理解老師在課堂上說的東西。我知道你覺得上英語課很無聊,但你必須強迫自己聚精會神的聽。一段時間後,你會感覺到學習英語變得容易些了。剩下的步驟下一次我會告訴你的。順便提一下,自從一年前你們家搬到湖南後我們就沒見過面。你有沒有想過暑假的時候回來看看我,我們可以一起學習英語。期待你的回復。
Best wishes,
Li
⑷ 英語書信作文120詞高中
It is first day of school, and I am excited. I am excited to attain new knowledge. I am excited to obtain new goals. I am excited to meet new friends, and I am excited to see fresh faces, and beautiful girls.
The school was great, The big front door, the beautiful girls in the same class as I, the nice teachers whom I met on the first day, and the gigantic building that entered my eyes - everything is as good as I thought they would be. I like the school here, and I believe I will have a good year learning in high school.
⑸ 高一英語作文寫信不少於60字
Helloe:
We have received your letter,I heard that you will come to Beijing on vacation. I am sure you know before departure with a visa is necessary, but also the best application in advance, because it takes some time to process visas 3 Beijing winter cold, a little more than the clothes are wise, of course, is also a good idea to carry much cash with me ring the holidays, it will take you everywhere around Beijing, visiting the Forbidden City, the Great Wall. now go! While in Beijing will ensure holiday fun!
⑹ 求一篇高一的英語作文。書信類的。
Dear wanggang, i am writing to tell you somrthing about my new school. this is a beautiful area.there are a big playgound and a Electronic reading room.all of this are very enjoyable.and i like the English teacher best,he is the first male English teavher.he has his different teaching ways.it is not make us feel embarrassed.my classmates are all friendly and study hard. i know my middle school life is begin.i will do my best .that is all.i am looking forward to hearing from you soon. yours, Liyong
⑺ 高中英語作文信件類作文帶翻譯10篇
Dear Robert,⑻ 高一英語作文『寫給朋友的一封信』
hi,dear friend:
how are you?what's going on right there?
l missed you for a long time.you know how l yearn you,my friend.Everythings is ok here about me. l had a good job about study in an alien land.l hope you can contact with me about the Christmas Day and New year Eve,also, l wish you can be happy and beaming in Christmas and Happy New year.
love,xxx
xx xx xx
⑼ 英語範文高中100詞左右寫信
Dear editor,
My name is Li Hua,from Jinan,Shandong province.I'm writing to put up with some advice on how to use spring.
It is known Jinan is famous for springs,such as Baotu Spring.These springs are not only provide necessary water for us,but also add color to our city and people's daily life.Therefore,we should protect them.First,I think we should limit the visitors everyday so as to decrease pollution on water.Second,it is essential to develop new technique to recycle the water.
In brief,every citizen should devote their efforts in protecting our enormous but not unlimited springs,so that we can take full advantage of them.
Best regards.
Li Hua
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⑽ [英語]高中英語作文指導:如何用英文寫信
作者:金陵中學 高級教師 許鷹高中英語作文要求學生在充分領會「提示」的前提下,用自己的語言組織成一篇內容充實、語言正確、句子連貫、用詞貼切的短文。但由於各種原因,學生們在寫作的時候經常會出現審題不清、論證無效、思維混亂、結構鬆散等問題,因此,除了以一定的詞彙、句式、語法結構為基礎,在寫作時學生還應該掌握一定的方法,深思熟慮、精心構思,最終成文。下面以一篇作文為例談談筆者在作文教學中的一些想法。作文要求:假如你是某中學學生李博文。最近,你班同學正在參加21世紀英文報組織的一個討論。話題為:「父母有沒有必要陪讀?」請你根據下表所列情況給報社寫一封信,客觀介紹討論情況。70%的同學認為:1.父母不該陪讀;2.父母陪讀讓我們養成依賴的習慣,不利於自控能力的培養,不利於培養良好的學習習慣;3.父母陪讀影響了他們的工作、學習和休息。30%的同學認為:1.父母應該陪讀;2.父母陪讀能使我們騰出時間專心學習,使我們身體更健康;3.父母陪讀能幫助我們確立學習目標,督促我們完成學業,鼓勵我們獨立解決困難,培養我們養成良好學習習慣。一、分析要求寫作的要求盡管都比較簡潔扼要,但卻包含著不少的信息,比如說文體、格式、中心等,所以同學們在寫作時必須通過仔細閱讀要求,找到中心詞以明確任務,在本篇作文的開頭要求中,可確定:1)以書信格式給報社寫信2)父母要不要陪讀(中心話題)3)客觀介紹(客觀結果的敘述,無須主觀的論證)二、分析材料本篇材料以表格形式出現,內容還是比較豐富的,所以同學們應就表格內容進行分析和梳理。可得到以下信息:1)雙方觀點對立,具有辯論性(表格第1點)2)各自理由的陳述(表格2、3點)三、組織結構對材料進行了一定的分析後,同學就比較容易確定所寫文章的結構組織。第一段:介紹寫信目的第二段:70%同學的觀點及理由陳述第三段:30%同學的觀點及理由陳述第四段:結尾 簡單收尾四、關鍵句式及詞彙對文章結構了解清晰之後,同學們應對在文章中需要運用的一些句式和詞彙進行整理,這樣在用詞用句上就更有把握,同時還可以避免一些詞句上的錯誤。以本篇為例:1.關鍵句式引入句:I』m writing to tell you the discussion we've had about…I』m very glad to write to you about…過渡句(第一段與第二段):There have been different opinions.Opinions are divided on the question.It is certain that we do have different opinions on this matter.不同觀點引入:……同學認為(贊同/反對)…students think…students hold(the belief)that…students have argued that…students are against the idea…students don』t accept the idea…students feel strongly about the idea…students are in favor of2.中心詞彙陪讀:accompany sb.studying at school養成依賴的習慣:form/get into /fall into the habit of dependence自控能力:The ability of controlling ourselves對……有所影響:have a…effect(influence)on,affect騰出時間spare more time督促urge鼓勵……做……encourage sb.to do sth.獨立independently/by oneself/on ones own/alone五、完成全文完成了所有的准備工作,大家就可以胸有成竹地進行寫作了。六、注意點在寫作當中有一些要點同學們應謹記在心:1.不要將文章處理為三句翻譯的集合體。有些同學在處理這類信息類的作文時只是簡單地將所給三類信息進行翻譯,這是不可取的,應將所給信息進行處理和豐富。2.句句之間邏輯聯系的確立和正確的詞與片語的選擇。好的邏輯聯系可以使作文內容連續,結構清晰,所以要正確使用一些表示邏輯聯系的詞和片語。3.避免句詞的多次重復,可選用多種表達形式。有些相同或相似的內容應盡量避免重復,使作文句式更靈活多樣。作文訓練並非一朝一夕的事,只有在長期的練習中,認真構思、細心體會、不斷總結,才能有所收獲,做到處變而不驚。本文範文:Dear editor,I』m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school.It is certain that we do have different opinions on this matter.Most of us hold that our parents should not accompany us studying at school since it makes us fall into the habit of dependence,so that we won』t form the good habit of studying.What'smore,it is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves.At the same time it affects our parents' work,studies and rest.While the rest of the students think it necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school,which may let us have more time to spare for our studies.Besides,we shall be much healthier for their concern.On the other hand,our parents canhelp us set up our aim,urge us to finish our task,totell the truth,it is our parents that en-courage us to overcome difficulties in life and get us into the good habit of studying.Hopefully,we may get some advice from your newspaper,from which we can really benefit a lot and have a clear mind about it.Thank you very much.Yours truly,Li Bowen