Ⅰ 關於高考英語作文
英語的連詞也有很多,在選取了一些適合高中生學習和掌握的連詞和連接語後,也大致的歸結為以下三類:
一. 表明事件發生的時間順序:
這一類連詞不多,大致有以下這些,也是最為我們學生所熟悉的,主要適用於第一類敘述類題型:
then, first, at once, next, after that, previously, while, when, the following day, etc.
二. 表明文章的組織結構:
這一類的連詞和連接語最多,也最為實用,適用的范圍也廣,能夠靈活廣泛的應用後四類題型。
1)漸進類(Listing): firstly, in the first place, secondly, thirdly, my next point is, last/finally, etc.
2)舉例類(Illustrating): for example/ for instance, to illustrate, an example/ instance of this is, let』s take….., take…. for example, etc.
3)重申類(Re-stating): in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, let me put it this way, or rather, namely, etc.
4)旁引類(Referring): in this respect, in that connection, as we said, apart from this, etc.
5)重述類(Resuming): to resume, to return to the previous point, getting back to the argument, etc.
6)總結類(Summarizing): to sum up, in short, it amounts to this, what I have been saying is this, etc.
7)強調類(Emphasizing): it is worth noting, I would like to direct your attention to, let us consider, we must now turn to, I shall begin by, etc.
三. 表明作者的觀點、態度
這一類連詞和連接語對於表達主觀觀點用極大的促進作用,適用於後三類題型。
1)看法類 (opinion expressing): in my opinion, I think/believe/suppose, I agree with…, as I think, it is said, people think, etc.
2)補充類(Introcing): further evidence: moreover, furthermore, in addition, what』s more, as well, etc.
3)原因類(Cause): because (of), since, owing to, on account of, e to, as a result of, etc.
4)結果類(Effect): as a result, hence, therefore, consequently, thus, so, etc.
5)對比類(Contrasting): in / by contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand, nevertheless, whereas, while, yet, however, but, etc.
6)比較類(Comparison): in like manner, likewise, in the same way, similarly, in comparison with, etc.
7)目的類(Purpose): to this end, for this purpose, with this in mind, in order to, so that, etc.
8)遞進類(Intensification): indeed, in fact, in any event / case, at no time, to tell the truth, etc. (上述連詞分類參考自「PETS閱讀中需熟練掌握的連接詞」一文)
熟練的掌握上述有限的單詞對於高中階段的學生來說要求並不高,相反其中很多單詞和短語都是學生的課本和練習中經常出現的,學生雖然經常讀到看到,但真正能在自己的寫作中運用的卻少之又少。現在按照上面的分類重新梳理上述連接語的作用和分類,把它們記住,就完成了我們高考作文進步的第一步。
高考作文評分的特點和應對方法
首先讓我們來看看高考對考生寫作能力的要求:
1) 靈活運用語法與詞彙、組句成文,正確表達的能力;
2) 審題准確、組織語言材料有序的能力;
3) 能使用好適當的過渡性詞語使上下文承接有序,自然通順的能力。其實以上三點合到一起就是檢測學生的英語綜合能力。上文已經說過,英語綜合能力的提高還是需要學生靠平時腳踏實地的積累。本文所要提出的,是在有限的迎考時間內有效的提高英語寫作得分的學習方法和迎考策略。因此,上面的第三點才是本文所要對症下葯的症狀。接著我們來看看高考閱卷的評分標准。
自從2001年開始,高考書面表達啟用了新的評分標准,規定書面表達按5個檔次給分。主要的評分原則有:評分時,先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然後以該檔次的要求來衡量,確定或調整檔次,最後給分;詞數少於80和多於120的從總分中減去2分。評分中應注意的主要內容為:內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性;如書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分數降低一個檔次。上面這一段話中的黑體字部分明確的表明連接語的運用得當對作文分值的影響。另外從高考閱卷的老師處也了解到:行文連貫是閱卷教師比較看重的一個方面。最後我們再來看看每一檔次的作文分值中對連接語的要求:
第五檔(很好):(21~25分):有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
第四檔(好):(16~20分):應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
第三檔(適當):(11~15分):應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文內容連貫。
第二檔(較差):(6~10分):較少使用語句間的連接成分,內容缺少連貫性。
第一檔(差):(1~5分):缺乏語句間的連接成分,內容不連貫。
從上面的評分標准可以看出,無論是英語水平處於哪一個檔次的學生,在寫作的過程中,如果想要交出令自己滿意的答卷,要想為自己的作文加分,都不能忽視下面這一條:要有適當的連接成分,即連接詞和連接語的使用。為了使文章在整體上結構嚴密,渾然一體,增強文章的說服力和感染力,考生應該在句子與句子之間,甚至段落與段落之間,恰當地使用一些過渡性詞語。
另外,考生很容易犯的一個錯誤是,在寫出若干個句子以後不使用連接詞或連詞,出現「run-on sentence」(連續句)現象,這是英語寫作的大忌。考生一定要牢記,在英語書面表達中一定要用一個連詞或連接詞連接兩個句子(當然,有時用一個分號要連接兩個句子),兩個連詞連接三個句子,三個連詞連接四個句子,依次類推。
要想讓學生最後能有針對性地應付高考中的作文題,一定先要熟識上述所有的連接語及其使用的語境,教師在平時可以多採用聯句成段的教學方式來培養學生使用連接語的習慣和語感,再加上平時的寫作練習,使學生能充分重視和體驗到連接語對於寫作的重要性。在進行寫作練習的過程中,可以給學生看一些經典範文,指出其中連接語對於文章結構的妙用,然後讓學生進行模擬練習,最後還要及時批改,對使用了連接語的作文進行表揚和點評以起到鼓勵學生的作用。
最後在考試時,學生在拿到作文題目後首先要明確寫作要求,即我們常說的審題,判斷題目到底屬於哪一類文體,然後在腦海中搜索適用的連接語,對於該用到哪些連接語一定要有一個清醒的思路,然後挑出有用的記錄在旁。從閱卷的情況來看,很多考生沒有認真思考,動筆就寫,之後在寫作的過程不斷出現一些錯誤,這是嚴重影響實際成績的魯莽的做法。
實例論證
我們首先看一看高考中的一篇滿分作文。
Sample Writing I (2001)
I'm very pleased to(強調類) tell you the changes of my life since(原因類) rection of learning load was brought in. But before that(比較類),I was often exhausted at weekends. I attended school and had classes the whole day. In the evening(時間順序類),I was often forced to do my boring homework and(結果類) I could not go to bed until 11:30. Since(原因類) the program of recing learning load was introced,my life,however(對比類),has been much more interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums,drop in at computer rooms and(時間順序) draw pictures in my leisure(=spare)time. After lunch(時間順序),I watch TV,read stories and(時間順序) look through newspapers to enrich my horizon. No longer do I stay up;on the contrary(對比類),I go to bed at about 10p.m. In short(總結類),I am quite satisfied with my life now.
上面這一篇作文,是一篇敘事性的文章,因此其時間順序類連接語也用得最多,在總共用到的13個連接語中,就有4個,但是每一個都不相同,因此通讀整篇文章,不僅不讓人覺得累贅,反而使文章結構合理,行文流暢。另外類型連接語的合理運用,就更使得整篇文章語言靈活,材料組織有序。相反,如果去掉文章中的所有連接詞,那麼這篇文章的分值就要掉兩個檔次。
再來看一篇高考範文:
Sample Writing II(2006)
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think(看法類) that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that(原因類) it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides(補充類), the film is usually more interesting, and(遞進類) it is easier to follow.
Some others have just the opposite opinion(對比類). They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile(對比類), the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with(看法類) the second view. Actually (遞進類)I have more reasons for it. I think(看法類) I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what』s more(補充類), I am able to better understand the author』s ideas. In a word(總結類), to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it. (2006浙江省高考參考範文)
這篇文章屬於議論文,因此,在其中用於表達主管看法類的連接語最多,其它的連接語也多是第三大類中適用於議論文的片語。一篇範文是老師閱卷的標准,範文既然如此,可見連接語的熟練使用對一篇作文有多麼的重要了。
綜上所述,希望可以通過本文的敘述,使學生認識到連接語在英語寫作中的重要性,並通過學習和掌握連接語的使用使學生的英語作文寫作水平能夠得到一定的提高。
Ⅱ 英語作文:高考後如何處理用過的書一百二十詞左右
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Ⅲ 五篇高考萬能英語作文
高考英語作文萬能模板
一、英語書信的常見寫作模板
開頭部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I』m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I』m pleased to hear that you』re coming to China for a visit.
I』m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
結尾部分:
With best wishes.
I』m looking forward to your reply.
I』d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口頭通知常見寫作模板
呼語及開場白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we』ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don』t be late.
結束語部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you』ll have a nice time here.
That』s all. Thank you.
三、議論文模板
1.正反觀點式議論文模板
導入:
第1段:Recently we』ve had a discussion about whether we should... (導入話題)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(觀點有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方觀點)
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3個贊成的理由)
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方觀點)
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What』s more... In addition...(列出2~3個反對的理由)
結論:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(個人觀點) オ
2.「A或者B」類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段: Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(贊同A的原因)
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2個B的優勢)
結論:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出結論) オ
3.觀點論述類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:提出一種現象或某個決定作為議論的話題
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的觀點是贊成還是反對)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (過渡句,承上啟下)
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3個贊成或反對的理由)
結論:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照應第1段,構成"總-分-總"結構)
4."How to"類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:提出一種現象或某種困難作為議論的話題
正文:
第2段: Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3個解決此類問題的辦法)
結論:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(強調解決此類問題的根本方法)
四、圖表作文寫作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題. The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點 . This means that as (進一步說明).
We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節一 . After 動詞-ing 細節一中的第一個變化, the動詞-ed+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化) . The figures also tell us that圖表細節二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (進一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (結論). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (給出原因). / It is high time that we (發出倡議).
五、圖畫類寫作模板:
1.開頭
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.銜接句
As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.結尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...
Ⅳ 高考後的暑假安排英語作文有翻譯
The summer vacation is coming. I will do my homework first so I am going to do my homework every morning. In the afternoon, I will play basketball and table tennis with my friends. In the evening I will read English and listen to English program. Sometimes I will go and visit my grandparents and help them do some housework. I am going to take a piano class. My parents and I will go to Hainan for about a week. I believe I will have a busy and interesting summer vacation.暑假即將到來。我將盡我的功課,所以我首先要每天早上做功課。下午,我將我的朋友們一起玩籃球和乒乓球。在晚上,我會讀英語,聽英語課程。有時我會去訪問我的祖父母和幫助他們做一些家務。我要帶一個鋼琴班。我的父母和我將前往海南為一個星期左右。我相信我將有一個忙碌而有趣的暑假。
Ⅳ 高考後想做什麼 英語作文
Having to learn english,college entrance examination, after the opportunity of going abroad,To improve my English I think I should use it very often in my daily life. I should listen to my teacher carefully in class .And laso finish the English homework every day is aiso necessary . Maybe,to find a native speaker to prictice with is also useful for me to improve English .
As the old saying goes :Nothing is impossible if you put your hert into it.I believe I will do better in my English.
Ⅵ 有關高考的英語作文!謝謝!
The College Entrance Examination, or commonly known as Gaokao, is an academic examination held annually in the mainland of our country. This examination is a prerequisite for entrance into almost all higher ecation institutions at the undergraate level. It is usually taken by students in their last year of senior school, although there have been no age restrictions since 2001.
大學入學考試,也就是我們熟知的高考,是每年在我國大陸進行的學業考試。本考試幾乎是所有本科層次的高等學府的入門考試,通常在高中最後一學期舉行,盡管
自2001起,本考試取消年齡限制。
College Entrance Examination is one of the biggest events in China, because it may change millions of students and families' lives. The number of participants reached its peak to 10.5 millions in 2008 and this year, the numbers drop to 9.15 millions. Study abroad and employment pressure are the two main reasons of the decrease. In China, there are hot discussions about this exam. People think that it's unfair to determine one's faith just by an exam, while others think that under the current circumstance, there are no other better ways. After year after year's try, some universities and colleges find more ways to recruit, and independent recruitment is the most popular. However, no matter how it will change in the future, workinghard is the key to get success in study.
高考是在中國是大事之一,因為它可能會改變成千上萬學子的命運及其家人的生活。2008年高考考生達到1050萬的高峰,今年考生人數降到915萬。出國留學及就業壓力是這一數據減少的兩個原因。在中國,高考引發了激烈的討論。人們認為僅靠一場考試決定一個人的命運是不公平的。也有人認為在當今社會背景下,沒有其他比高考更好的辦法。很多大學和學院,經過一年年的嘗試,找到更多招生方式,自主招生就是最為熱門的。其實,不管教育方式未來如何改變,努力學習永遠是通向成功的關鍵。
Ⅶ 求一篇英語作文 高考後想做什麼
,peopleusuallyhaveaing,"afterallisfair".Itnknot,andsaid,tsistrulyadoublespeak.;justiceandhappiness,neverabsolute.,couldbeclearlyseen,,insteadofgivingallgivetheso-calledfair,,,?Forvariousreasons,,theirpainisdeserved?Besides,,ionnumberisover,,istsfair?Buttodaywecometosee,,.Just,fairisalwaysrelative,happinessisrelative,"goodtng"bendthedefect.說到高考,人們通常都有一種說法,說「畢竟是公正的」。回頭我想想,跟不上說,這實在是一個欺人之談。高考從來也沒有公正過;公正和幸福一樣,從來也沒有絕對的。從一個考試的確定,可以清清楚楚地看到,它的目的是為了選擇一些人,而不是給所有的全體給予所謂的公正,目的已經確定了它的不公正,不因為它選擇所採取的手段是公開的就說它是公正的,難道那些沒有考上的高中畢業生就沒有資獲得社會的高等教育的資源了嗎?因為各種各樣的原因,落榜後痛苦的學生們,他們的痛苦是應得的嗎?再說,本來各地的教育水平就不一樣,而高考因為各地招生人數的人為分配數目不一,各地的考取分數網又不一樣,這難道是公平的嗎?但今天我們來看,我們不能因為快餓死的時候獲得一個饅頭的幸福,而以為這個饅頭永遠是我們的幸福。哦 對了 我目前上的ABC5夫下英語的外教才和我提過 若要學好英語很簡單的;一定有個恰當的學習情境和闇練口語對象,最關鍵就是外教水平 純正歐美口音才行,不間斷每日練習口語,1v1家教式輔導才能有非常.好.的進步幅度..學習後還要重復復習課堂錄音檔,來進一步深化知識~若真的是沒有練習對象的狀況下,那麼就上可可或滬江獲取課外學習資料學習 多說多問一下子語感就提升起來,整體效果會非常達成目標的..公正、公平永遠是相對的,幸福也是相對的,我們早應該檢討並且修正持續多年的一件「好事情」背後的缺陷了。
Ⅷ 求一篇高考的英語作文 關於高考一考定終身
1977年10月12日,國務院來批轉教育部自《關於1977年高等學校招生工作的意見》,正式恢復高等學校招生統一考試的制度。由此每年考試成為中國學子必經之路和必過難關,上線和落榜,演繹人間無數悲喜劇;一考決定了被考人今後生活和事業發展軌跡,決定了他一生的命運;「一考定終身」來源這樣歷史背景。
Ⅸ 有關高考後和媽媽度過的一天的英語作文
What to Do This Summer Vocation? After the long run of 12 years of studying hard, we Senior 3 students deserve to have a colorful and exciting summer vocation. Now we are completely free from schoolwork, and we can do whatever we like out of our own choice. Some students say after the College Entrance Examination, they long for a trip to get close to nature, for the blue sky and beautiful scenery will really relax their mind. Some students prefer to stay at home rather than go anywhere because they have been looking forward to the 2012 London Olympics. They want to watch their favorite matches and cheer for their idols. However, some students have mo...