❶ 英語作文批改
第二段為了保持時態一致，第一句話也應該用過去時態，另外＂乘飛機去＂很少用take the air。通內常可用 take a plane，或者容更口語化一些，改為：I went to Saya by air this morning. 下一句... made me want to sleep ，從語法角度來說，沒錯。但不是英語習慣表達，建議改為：⋯made me feel sleepy 。下一句中can』t wait 應改為couldn』t wait,還是為了時態一致。下一句：The ocean was cool. 建議改為：The water in the ocean was rather cool.
❷ 英語作文求批改
Dear (要加 mother 或 mom),
Now I am writing to express my grantitude (gratitude) to you for these severy(several) years, a generous female who had done so much for me that I could never possible to repay (you).I feel ashamed to just accepted (accept) what you had done to me and take all of it for granted. it is the time to show my appreciation,sincere.(sincerely 和要去掉逗號)
Sitting at the table the memorise(memories) come back to me.you are a bussiness women (woman) and came to look after me seldom from my giralhood (girlhood), on a (an) occasion,you picked me up to (the) parks, took me to (the) zoos ,you drived (drove) me to the (shore of sea 改為 beach) and let me know the marvelous world. You cookde (cooked)) for me once a week,dedicated your spare time to spend with me. I recall that you never call me 「sweatheart」 instead of teaching me to be kindness (kinder) and modest (modesty), which the most precious common sense you thought. In addition,you prepared everything to (for) me and tried your best to make up me.however,I campliande (complained) about you for your successive leaving,pretende (pretend) to haven』t been aware of your efforts and consideration.
To be honesty ,I am (was) not a responsible daughter for ignore (ignoring) your hardness even (that 改為 though) I have been already conscious，so please give me a chance to send (you) my heartfelt gratefulness, (and) thank you all the time，my beloved mom.
(Daughter of) Yours
有甚多錯字，已替你更正好了，希望會對你有幫助，差望滿意採納，謝謝。
❸ 求批改一下英語作文
Ming Dynasty, which had ruled China for 276 years, is pictured as one of the greatest time with orderable management and stable society in human history . During this time, the development of making area improved the market economy and citilization. A large mount of proction, including wine and silk, was sold in the markets. Meanwhile, many foreign procts, such as clocks and smoke, were input by China. Large business centers, such as Beijing, Nanjing, Yangzhou, Suzhou, appeared one by one. And it was also in Ming Dynasty that the boat group which was led by Zheng He, had ever come to Indian Ocean for large scales of exploring trips for seven times. What to be worth saying is, three of four classical books of Chinese literature were written in Ming Dynasty.
❹ 批改英語作文
我就實話實說吧：這個作文我大概會打個67.5分吧：
We are surprise the scene
that a ck mother is begging eagerly monkeyteacher for purpose teaching the
child to climb the tree.
[教師點評]
[句子錯誤] 本句語法不規范，請檢查！
[拼寫錯誤] monkeyteacher
拼寫錯誤，可替換選項為：monkey teacher, monkey-teacher, monkeyed
[低頻警示] a ck mother 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[低頻警示] surprise the scene
在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: ask, beg, demand,
require, request, implore, claim, pray, entreat 均有「要求，請求」之意。
ask:
最普通用詞，指向對方提出要求或請求，長、晚輩，上下級之間都可使用。
beg:
指懇切地或再三地請求或要求，常含低三下四意味，也多用於應酬場合。
demand:
一般指理直氣壯地提出強烈要求，或堅持不讓對方拒絕的要求。
require:
強調根據事業、需要或紀律、法律等而提出的要求。
request:
正式用詞，指非常正式，有禮貌的請求或懇求，多含擔心因種種原因對方不能答應的意味。
implore:
書面用詞，著重指迫切、焦急或痛苦地懇求或哀求，常含較強的感情色彩。
claim:
指有權或宣稱有權得到而公開提出的要求。
pray:
語氣莊重，指熱情、誠懇和敬祈的要求，現不很常用。
entreat:
泛指一般「懇求或哀求」，含企圖說服對方或用熱烈的請求軟化反對意見的意味。
1.2
It is not a fantasy ,
because there are many similar phenomenon from society which concluding a lotof
parents having a hope their childwould become achievement .
[教師點評]
[搭配錯誤] 搭配不當，become
achievement不規范，建議修改。
常見的系動詞用法錯誤，點擊查看。
[句子錯誤] 本句語法不規范，請檢查！
[標點錯誤] 標點與其前面的單詞之間 不應該有空格，請檢查
[拼寫錯誤] childwould 拼寫錯誤，可替換選項為：child
would, child-would, childhood
[拼寫錯誤] lotof 拼寫錯誤，可替換選項為：lot of,
lot-of, loot
1.3
we all must confront with
the problem: how to dealwith the ecation hard and how should parents do when
they paly a role whichin a helper toward child or children's friends?
[教師點評]
[句子錯誤] 本句語法不規范，請檢查！
[句子錯誤] 請注意句首單詞首字母大寫
[拼寫錯誤] whichin 拼寫錯誤，可替換選項為：which in,
which-in, witching
[拼寫錯誤] dealwith 拼寫錯誤，可替換選項為：deal
with, deal-with, Duluth
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有「孩子」之意。
baby:
日常用詞，一般指從剛出生的嬰兒到滿兩歲的或非常小的孩子，常含鍾愛意味。
child:
普通用詞，含義廣，無感情色彩。泛指從胎兒、嬰兒到10歲左右的兒童。
infant:
書面用詞，狹義指出生後到兩歲的小孩，廣義指7歲以下的孩子；法律上則指未到法定年齡。
youngster:
泛指任何年齡的兒童或者少年，多指男孩，多為年長者的使用。
2.1
We all know only
thecondition along with the correct way would go to the goal , oneself want to
dowithout a ask of one else .
[教師點評]
[語法檢查] 請檢查 a ask (Wrong article)
[標點錯誤] 標點與其前面的單詞之間 不應該有空格，請檢查
[句子錯誤] 本句語法不規范，請檢查！
[句子錯誤] 句中不同單句之間需要添加連詞。
並不是任何標點符號，在任何情況下都可以用來連接兩個並列句子。常用的能把兩個句子連接起來，構詞並列復合句的標點符號有分號和冒號。在沒有連詞的情況下，一般不能用逗號並列兩個句子。點擊查看。
[拼寫錯誤] dowithout 拼寫錯誤，可替換選項為：do
without, do-without, without
2.2
when indivial and
interest are absent from a student , it might be a fail, which not only wastes
many resource but also ruins one's confidence.
[教師點評]
[句子錯誤] 請注意句首單詞首字母大寫
[搭配錯誤] 語法錯誤，be fail不規范，建議修改。
[標點錯誤] 標點與其前面的單詞之間 不應該有空格，請檢查
[低頻警示] absent from a student
在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 ruin...confidence
在教材中出現過 14 次
SeeAlso: destroy confidence108,break confidence34
2.3
" I don'twant to study "
just exist in the child's mind and teachers and parentsdon't know the truth ,
which is critical in making the whole plan .
[教師點評]
[標點錯誤] 標點與其前面的單詞之間 不應該有空格，請檢查
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 know...truth 在教材中出現過
1040 次
SeeAlso: acknowledge truth44,recognize truth34
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 make...plan 在教材中出現過
3156 次
SeeAlso: do
plan166,make design102,cause plan9
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有「孩子」之意。
baby:
日常用詞，一般指從剛出生的嬰兒到滿兩歲的或非常小的孩子，常含鍾愛意味。
child:
普通用詞，含義廣，無感情色彩。泛指從胎兒、嬰兒到10歲左右的兒童。
infant:
書面用詞，狹義指出生後到兩歲的小孩，廣義指7歲以下的孩子；法律上則指未到法定年齡。
youngster:
泛指任何年齡的兒童或者少年，多指男孩，多為年長者的使用。
[批改提示] know近義表達有cognize/
recognize/ realize/ foreknow
3.1
The more giving , fail the
interest and indivial , the moreworse to happened.
[教師點評]
[標點錯誤] 標點與其前面的單詞之間 不應該有空格，請檢查
[拼寫錯誤] moreworse 拼寫錯誤，可替換選項為：more
worse, more-worse, morose
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: give, accord, award,
confer，grant, endow, present, bestow 均含有「給予，贈給」之意。
give:
最普通用詞，泛指將自己的東西給予他人，所給予的東西，物質或非物質的均可。
accord:
側重所給予的是應得的或是恰當的，或是因某種原因而適於接受的。
award:
通常暗示所給予的東西是接受者應得的，而且給予者往往是具有裁判權力的。
confer: 通常指授予稱號或學位等。
grant:
多指出於慷慨、憐憫或正義感而給予，並且通常是在被請求下給予。
endow:
指捐贈大量的錢作基金，也可指給予非物質的東西。
present:
指正式地給予或授予，通常伴有儀式進行。
bestow:
正式用詞，指把某物作為禮物贈送於某人，也可作引申用。
3.2
living in a incorrect
situation concluding a wrong teacher anda short-sighted parent, is a crazy
ecation which drives child go to the edge.
[教師點評]
[語法檢查] 請檢查 a incorrect (Wrong
article)
[低頻警示] incorrect...situation 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[低頻警示] crazy...ecation 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[名詞錯誤] 冠詞缺失，drive child不規范，建議修改。
[動詞錯誤] 語法錯誤，建議將drive sb do改為drive
sb to do。
3.3
It must be impossible to
reap profitwhen child go to the first wrong step.
[教師點評]
[詞序錯誤] 請檢查the first wrong
step，確認詞序是否正確。
[句子錯誤] 本句語法不規范，請檢查！
[低頻警示] reap...child 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[拼寫錯誤] profitwhen 拼寫錯誤，可替換選項為：profit
when, profit-when, profiting
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有「孩子」之意。
baby:
日常用詞，一般指從剛出生的嬰兒到滿兩歲的或非常小的孩子，常含鍾愛意味。
child:
普通用詞，含義廣，無感情色彩。泛指從胎兒、嬰兒到10歲左右的兒童。
infant:
書面用詞，狹義指出生後到兩歲的小孩，廣義指7歲以下的孩子；法律上則指未到法定年齡。
youngster:
泛指任何年齡的兒童或者少年，多指男孩，多為年長者的使用。
3.4
try to make sure that child
having a chance in personality as a free childcan fly without
consideration.
[教師點評]
[句子錯誤] 請注意句首單詞首字母大寫
[拼寫錯誤] childcan 拼寫錯誤，可替換選項為：child
can, child-can, childcare
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 make...child 在教材中出現過
210 次
SeeAlso: make
baby148,make
kid114,do
child110,cause child34,make
fry17,make youngster8
[搭配統計] 動名搭配 have...chance 在教材中出現過
42559 次
SeeAlso: take chance7247,accept chance36
[學習提示] 易混詞彙: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有「孩子」之意。
baby:
日常用詞，一般指從剛出生的嬰兒到滿兩歲的或非常小的孩子，常含鍾愛意味。
child:
普通用詞，含義廣，無感情色彩。泛指從胎兒、嬰兒到10歲左右的兒童。
infant:
書面用詞，狹義指出生後到兩歲的小孩，廣義指7歲以下的孩子；法律上則指未到法定年齡。
youngster:
泛指任何年齡的兒童或者少年，多指男孩，多為年長者的使用。
3.5
I am firmly convinced that
under the change ofopinion , the parent would wiping the blind ecation
completely thoughchallenge should not underestimated , the achievement will
appear in the nearfuture.
[教師點評]
[動詞錯誤] 建議把 would wiping 改成 would
wipe (Auxiliary Verb Agreement)
[句子錯誤] 本句語法不規范，請檢查！
[低頻警示] blind...ecation 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[低頻警示] wipe...ecation 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語
[標點錯誤] 標點與其前面的單詞之間 不應該有空格，請檢查
怎麼樣？
❺ 批改英語作文，，說明一下。
這次作文大有進步，語法錯誤大大減少了。
❻ 求批改 英語作文
刪 a
Should college ecation focus.....
At first,one』 imagination dominates one』s creativity
改成：At first, imagination nurtures one』s creativity
Where you can stay depends on where you think you can
改成：your mind decides where you are
Imagination is a ladder which leads us to the peak of our life.
改成：imagination is THE ladder that leads us to the pinnacle of life
如果你使用which，前面要用逗號隔開
In China, many colleges just focus on the basic facts and knowledge, neglecting what the society really needs, which is a critical reason that Chinese always lack masters and world-famous scientists while in China there are numerous talented teenagers.
改成：In China, many colleges just (focus on the basic facts and knowledge and neglect what the society really needs), which is a critical reason why Chinese still lack masters and world-famous scientists while talented teenagers are not in shortage.
( )內的句子，讓後面的which修飾
Therefore, I made the conclusion that college ecation should focus on cultivating the imagination of students. For instance, professors can just put forward the hot issues for students and leave everything else for college students to investigate and create. Instead of setting up standard answers, professors should take their charge in valuing students』 work and giving constructive advice to students.
改成：Therefore, I conclude that college ecation should focus on cultivating the imagination of students. For instance, professors can just put forward hot issues to students, and let students improvise their own conclusions. Instead of setting up standard answers, professors should only asses students』 work and provide constructive advice to students.
❼ 怎樣批改英語作文
從教二十年，每天改作業，最怕的就是該學生的英語作文。寫錯單詞的，用錯句型的，存在語法錯誤的，毛病皆是。有的同學的作文如要一一幫他改正錯誤，等於老師重新幫他寫了一篇作文。這樣勢必造成批閱時間過長，影響其他環節的工作。如果粗略批閱則會阻滯學生英語寫作能力的提高。針對這一問題，我摸索出一套自認為行得通的方法。 根據不同情況採用不同的批改方法。如果是在課堂上進行的寫作（每個單元拓展部分都有寫的能力的活動）。採取大家批。具體操作是抽兩名同學在黑板上寫，其他同學在練習本上寫。寫完之後，和同學們一起當老師，找黑板上兩位同學寫的文章的錯誤。讓有類似錯誤的同學改正。指出文章的不足之處，有哪些地方需要改進。同時也要指出優點有哪些地方可供同學們學習.效仿。通過大家當老師一起改作文的方法既調動了學生的學習氣氛又加深了犯錯同學的印象，讓他們不再犯同樣的錯誤。 如果是課後作文，則採用收上來祥批和略批方式交叉進行。要確保每個同學在一期的英語寫作中有幾次祥批的機會。祥批時改出學生寫作中詞彙.句法.章法的錯誤。甚至包括單詞拼寫，大小寫，標點符號和其他語法錯誤。指出學生存在的問題指明其努力方向。略批則只畫圈圈點點，打分分等級。啟發學生自己去找錯誤。培養其自發學習的能力。 如果是自習課上的課文，則採取互相批改的方法。先由老師講解批改要點，指出批改方法和原則，注意要指出批改的具體注意點。如：大小寫，單詞拼寫，標點，時態，語態，人稱，句子結構，句子順序等等。讓學生心中有數，從而批改更詳細。 當然，經過不同方法的寫作批改後，有的同學可能寫作水平任是濤聲依舊。這時則需要找空閑時間面對面的批改了。就是當著學生面對面地批改。當面指出其存在的錯誤，讓學生自己改正錯誤以加深印像。改完之後，讓學生再體會一下。以便更好的整理思緒。 以上這些就是我在批改英語作文中找到的一些方法。希望同行多提意見，幫助我更好的搞好教學工作。
❽ 英語作文批改---付費
這么重要的事還是找現實中的高手比較牢靠。
❾ 求批改一篇英語作文 謝謝
1.1 Don't judge a book by its cover
[句子錯誤] 請檢查Do，確認主謂一致。
1.2 Welive in a complex world.
[句子錯誤] 請檢查句中謂語動詞。
1.3 In the world, there are good things and terriblethings.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查terriblethings，確認拼寫正確。
1.4 Let's see some contrary groups, beautiful persons and ugly persons,noble person and humble person, the rich and the poor, warmhearted person andcriminal person, honest person and tricky person.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查andcriminal，確認拼寫正確。
[批改提示] person表示「人」。注意與people的區別。詳情點擊
1.5 Just like every coin has twosides.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查twosides，確認拼寫正確。
1.6 Every thing also has its counterpart.
[批改提示] 查看every thing和everything的區別。
1.7 Clearly distingushing them is animportant skill for us.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查distingushing，確認拼寫正確。
[批改提示] 查看clearly與clear的區別。
2.1 Asa famous saying goes, don't judge a book by its cover.
[句子錯誤] 請檢查do，確認主謂一致。
2.2 I really experienced asimilar situation.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查asimilar，確認拼寫正確。
2.3 One day, I was looking for a data in library in myuniversity.
[其他] 請檢查a data in library，本族語中很少使用。
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查myuniversity，確認拼寫正確。
2.4 The appropriate data had not been founded for a long time.
2.5 FinallyI difficultly found a book.
2.6 What's worse,the book is really old.
2.7 It's cover wasold enough,too.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查wasold，確認拼寫正確。
2.8 What bothers me a lot was a mark on the page 2 said "Wrotedown in 1928", but the thing waiting for me next is amazing.Oh!
2.9 Thecontent of the book is useful a lot!
2.10 Since then,I haven't judged a book by itscover.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查itscover，確認拼寫正確。
3.1 Beautifulperson doesn't mean that she has a wonderful heart.
3.2 Do not believe other peopleeasily.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查peopleeasily，確認拼寫正確。
3.3 Rational judgement is important in our life.
3.4 For instance, when we arebrowsing all kinds of news online, we can never know the whole story well onlyby reading the oversimplified--sometimes even misleading -headlines.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查onlyby，確認拼寫正確。
[批改提示] all kinds of的近義表達有a great variety of。
3.5 Actually,we should not make a judgement on anything hastily until we've studied itcompletely.
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查itcompletely，確認拼寫正確。
4.1 In my opinion, in order to make rational judgements, we'd better spend enough timeand energy to understand a person or a thing before drawing any conclusion.
[動詞錯誤] 請檢查spend enough timeand energy to understand，確認動詞用法正確。
[詞語錯誤] 請檢查timeand，確認拼寫正確。
你可以搜索句酷批改網，很不錯的，上面內容均為那個網站上的。
❿ 求大神批改英語作文
題目有拼寫錯誤
In recent years, more and more people migrate to another country.
批改意見：more and more可以改為 an increasing number of
For instance,some stars,business men and the millionaire migrate to another country.
批改意見：stars, business men和millionaire 的並列性不太強，需要替換。migrate to another country與前文重復，可以替換為choose to immigrate into foreign countries.
What』s the reasons for this phenomenon.
批改意見：沒有問號……what's 應該為what are，注意主(reasons)謂(are)一致的問題。 句子可以考慮修改為What has led to the tend of migration?
First of all ,domestic environment become worse,such as haze weather and sandstorm weather.
批改意見：覺得這個高級詞彙使用上有點泛濫。國內的環境，霧霾天氣，沙塵暴天氣……這里的表達都非常的Chinglish。還不如改成，There is more extreme weather than before over the nation, such as sandstorms and severe smog. severe smog這個是我查BBCnews的表述，感覺比較native
And some big city』s traffic is heavy,population continues rise at the speed of 2 million people every year.
批改意見：還是表達很中國式英語的問題。建議改成The traffic in many cities is in poor condition because of numerous private cars. And the domestic population has started to climb sharply, increasing to 2 million annually.
Secondly,another country』s environment is better. Moveover,their policy of people is more humanized.
批改意見：怎麼都是中文直譯的感覺。要習慣native說話的語序。而且我覺得環境好這個理由有點牽強，畢竟世界上哪裡都有環境好的地方和污染中的地方，考慮替換另外一個理由。moreover拼寫錯誤。後面這一句Chinglish again，令我不禁懷疑這不會是翻譯軟體輔助的吧……而且什麼their policy？從英語角度考慮，這個they根本無從指向。而且這個理由寫得太sharp了，要是中國老師would probably want you to get real bad hurt.- -句子整句大修！考慮修改為Moreover, some foreign countries have better legal system so that indivial rights could be fully respected. 句子意思意會一下就可以了。
So people want to migrate to there.
批改意見：migrate to there低級錯誤。整個表達非常不可接受。For these reasons, quite a few people prefer to migrating to another country rather than staying in their home country。
Last but not the least,many people migrate to another country in order to follow the trend,They think migrate toanother country is also the symbol of reputation and wealth,so do they.
批改意見：Chinglish，不想重復了。Last but not least, many people choose abroad, following the trend of migration, most of whom think that migration is trappings of fame as well as wealth.
In general,I contend the idea that we should stay in China. because China is a friendly country, she is our mother.
批改意見：我只是不喜歡這個句式而已……感覺就是用得太死板了。盡管是標准六級作文句式。我個人認為，語句流暢是很重要的。平時多點閱讀，培養語感。為什麼不喜歡這一句，是因為這個句式和前文的搭配感覺不和諧。……對，不……和……諧……讀起來特別別扭。標點什麼的就不吐槽了。because前後因果關系不強，比較牽強。In general,I contend the idea that we should stay in China because China is our motherland, the most wonderful and historical country ever.
Although she has many disadvantages,we can help her to solve theproblems.And I believe that she will be better in the future...
批改意見：這句話要是批改老師看到了可能會罵一句熊孩子……好吧雖然我不是老師但我已經罵了。除了機器直譯這個蛋疼的東西，就是這兩句話所表達的意思……orz……不吐槽。Yet much else is discouraging，with lots of problems unsolved, our country is definitely worth our devotion to make it a better place.
總評：整篇文章的結構不是很清晰，需要分段，並且使用更多恰當的銜接過度的詞語。第三部分「我的看法」可以寫多一點，因為這篇文章是很清晰的三段式。分析原因的地方內容寫得不是很好，很空洞，沒有什麼實際的原因列出。內容也是很重要的！至於句子一些細節在上邊已經提到了，希望要好好注意！應該要重點表現的第三部分竟然這么短實在是很令人失望。要合理安排篇章的分布。
希望你寫作文可以有更大的進步！
看了很久打了很久，很認真的寫完了。
希望可以採納了哦親~~~