A. 對英語的看法，英語作文（帶翻譯的）
Nowday , some students don』 like learning English because learning English is hardwork. I think it』s necessary for us to learn English in our daily life. We should have good ways of learning English and spend much moren time on it.
Here is my some advice.
First ,we should read English as much as possible and talk with your parents and friend. Don』t be afraid of make mistakes when you talk with other people . Because everybody makes mistakes . What is more, we should write as much as possible. We spend much time doing practis.We also try to listen to English more. We may listen to English music, some tapes.
Last ,but not least .It』s important for us to listen to teacher and take notes carefully in class. We should do our homework carefully. We also should believe ourselves.I believe if we work hard, we are sure to learn it well.
Nowday,有些學生不喜歡學習英語因為學習英語是勤奮。我認為我們有必要學英語在我們的日常生活中。我們應該學習英語的好方法,moren花太多時間在這上面。
這是我的一些建議。
首先,我們應該盡可能地多讀英語,跟你的父母和朋友。不要害怕犯錯誤,當你與他人交談。因為每個人都會犯錯。更重要的是,我們應該盡可能地寫。我們花太多時間在practis。我們還試圖聽英語。我們可以聽英語的音樂,一些錄音帶。
最後,但並非最不重要的。重要的是我們聽老師在課堂上認真和做筆記。我們應該仔細地做作業。我們也要相信自己。我相信如果我們努力工作,我們一定要學好它。
B. 英語作文評論 ，我寫的不是很好。
Shopping on the Net
Nowadays, more and more people become lazy and rich【個人傾向於rich but lazy】; in addition, surf【surfing，後面已經有is】 the Internet is become【becoming】 more and more【建議換個表達方式，盡量不要連續重復使用】 popular. So that some people like shopping on the Net.
People hold different opinions on that. Some think that shopping on the net is very convenient. First of all, we haven』t【此處用作實義動詞，don't have】 to go to the market tiredly and then the service staff will send 【前文沒有指代商品，最好還是寫清】to your home with present like a star【這個我沒看懂……】. Secondly, on the net have【用there be表達】 all kinds of goods, you can go shopping with reckless abandon. Last but not least, the goods prices online is cheaper than market.
However, some other people hold that shopping `on the net is harmful to people. In the first place, people look at the goods【建議改為goods people see】 online may be is【已經有be了，is就是be動詞，去掉】 not really【改為形容詞，real】, in other worlds【words= =】, it is picture【可數名詞，要不加a要不改復數】 and may be quality is not good【the quality may not be good】. In the second place, on the net have a few frauds【第二次出現該錯誤，對於物應用there be】. You give him or her some money for your goods【有點羅嗦，用pay即可】 that pitch on the net. But you don』t gain it【這里存在不確定性，原語義不通】. As a result, shopping on the net is not safe.
In my opinion, this question should be probed in depth. But form what has been discussed above, we can see clearly that the most important thing for us shopping on the net 【is （that）】the advantages 【are】far outweigh the disadvantages, because now more and more website【復數】 are more comprehensive for shopping on the net.
以上存在幾個問題
1，動詞。LZ去復習下幾種動詞的區別吧
2，物所有用there be表達，不能用have
3，用詞重復。像more and more就出現了三次，出現這種情況要盡量替換，尤其是開頭結尾不要出現連續的重復用詞。可以背一些常用的替換詞，寫作文會用得到
4，從句。從文中可以看出LZ是硬著頭皮用從句，弄巧成拙了。建議收集相關從句自己分析比較仿寫（參考書也是好物口牙！）
5，寫作文的時候要考慮翻譯成中文是否通順，是否能表達出完整的意思。寫完最好多讀幾遍，錯誤能免則免
LZ加油=v=
C. 我對英語的評價英語作文
Many students to a special examination on the tension, I think, first of all candidates in the test must establish a strong self-confidence, it is necessary that "there must be Tianshengwocai", the study is not the only way to become useful, good only become useful to learn a Only factor. The day before the test to calm down, so a buffer among us, so that more clear-headed examination will be able to play well. Parents will have to continue to give comfort to the children and not ratio of students still tense, the task of parents is to create a comfortable environment for a child more confidence. Second, the candidates can and parents, friends and family, such as consultants to give vent to their pressure, to seek support. Can also have a rhythm to do some things, such as listening to music to ease the mood, dance, painting, to regulate the use of color. If the pressure in particular, can play to the beat of music. Candidates proposed to do some aerobic exercise, or to carry out a deep breath. In addition, the efforts of students to exercise restraint until their basic emotional stability, that is, pay attention to mental relaxation, at the same time I like to think of things scattered about the brain and nervous to come back, the better the outcome will be. Finally, the students believe they have to in order to best deal with the state exam. I hope people will test a success
D. 評論英語作文，英語作文修改。
英語作文修改
Dear Peter,
I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program. The new program is to make a beautiful school. We are to make a better place for us to study. I think we must regularly cropped flowers and trees. That will build a concive botanical garden. We intend to build some statues to inspire the students and teachers.
We welcome you to our school..
Yours,
Li Hua
note:I try to keep the originality of your composition by not over correct it.
E. 評論性英語作文怎麼寫
評論性的作文最重要莫過於兩點，1觀點，你要對自己的觀點，或者說立場一定要明版確，無論是從反面評權價一個事物或是以正面評價一個事物，你可以通過反向或正向推理來佐證你的觀點。2則是總結自己的感想，這也是很重要的，這是你文章的一個可以使你的文章凝聚升華的部分，其重要性不言而喻，我建議你你可以通過舉例來證明自己的感想，比如要寫關於善良的文章，你就可以舉一些歷史上很善良的人物。希望我的一些經驗可以幫到你。
F. 評論英語作文
My mother
My mother is a shop assistant,she is 34 years old.Her name is Sun Huanxia.She has two big eyes,a small nose,a small mouth and long black hair.Her favourite food is noodle,and Her favourite fruit is apple.She likes playing computer games with me.She helps me and I help her too.I like her very much.
注意一下SHE的所有格HER 根據英語國家習慣Her name is Sun Huanxia.這一句專可以刪屬掉
G. 怎樣評價一篇英語作文
談如何寫好英語作文評語。然而，在當前的英語教學實踐中，存在這樣一種現狀：教師重內視英語寫作訓容練，但卻忽視對學生作文的反饋，未能正確認識自己在學生作文批改中所扮演的角色。總之，教師只有把評價學生的寫作自始至終放在發現學生字、詞、句、段、文方面的優秀之處和可取之處，並時而通過評語與他們促膝談心，表達特別的關注和愛護，學生才能從遭遇失敗到嘗試成功，從懼怕寫到樂於並善於寫，進而全面提高自身的英語寫作能力。
H. 如何用英語評論英語作文
先寫一下文章總體內容，說說哪裡好哪裡不好，然後說說文章的現實意義。
I. 英語作文點評
建議
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被動不合適)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有兩個謂語動詞，there be 和主系表結回果沖突。可改為答A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名詞放feel後不合適)
J. 英語作文評價大全
說真的，我很討厭淅瀝的小雨，它們是那麼的纏綿，總會使心煩湧入心頭，驚濤拍浪，挖心的難受．因此在這樣的雨天我沒有在雨中漫步的情懷．但在北方由於在黃河以北降雨量少，註定淅瀝的小雨會是夏天的常客．於是我也有些厭惡夏天，好在夏天還有一位代言人——暴雨，使我對夏天有了一絲的眷戀．
我喜歡暴雨有種近似痴迷的程度，因為暴雨下出了北方人的豪爽，給人一種親切感．下暴雨時我喜歡將窗子開到最大，將手臂伸出窗外去感受豆大的雨點落下時針扎般的痛，那時卻感覺不到疼，有的只是毅力的考驗．張大嘴努力的呼吸泥土的清香那是一種久違的香氣，它會使我想起曾今那充滿鳥語花香的大自然．
今天又一場暴雨過後，我遙望天際發現天空是那麼美，頭頂的一片天是那麼的湛藍，藍的沒有一絲雜質，它又是那麼的飄渺，好像是七仙女拋下的一件藍色的薄紗在空中飄舞．不遠處還是灰色的，印在房屋上竟是土黃色，那種顏色給人一種壓抑的感覺．於是我尋找藍灰的交界處，那裡本應是逐漸的過度色，而大自然卻巧妙的嵌進去一朵還未完全舒展的雲，剎那間我感受到了活力，那是生命的詮釋．突然明白再陰的天也有晴朗的那一刻，再黑的夜也有黎明出現的那一剎那．
那是一幅美麗的油畫，是大自然給予人類的享受，更是自然給我們敲響的警示鍾，如果沒有人類保護大自然，恐怕以後連那雨過天晴的後的一絲感動也會一去不復返，至少我們會失去對生命的另一種詮釋