Ⅰ 求一篇能得5分的英語作文
中國夢！我的夢
Ⅱ 英語作文！高分，5分鍾內回答給你200分
In regard to this matter, students from the affirmative side deem that the old style of wild-beast cage let them have a chance to observe wild animals in person. Otherwise, people can hardly get a close look on those lovely wild animals. Others in favor of the wild-beast cage believe that it helps to bring up people's love to animals and nature. Also it can protect animals from dangerous natural surroundings.
Students from the negative side reckon that putting animals in cage is very labour-consuming and is a waste of resources. Also, those animals lost their liberty.What's more, it destoryed the ecological balance.
In general, putting-animals-in-cage zoological gardens have both its pros and cons. In my opinion, it should depend on the animal. A tigar,for instance, would belong to it in a wild state for it has powerful abilities to protect itself and seek enough food.While those little animals should be taken care by man and be given more protection.
親愛的編輯:
關於這件事,贊成的同學認為動物園里用籠子養動物可以讓他們有機會親眼目睹野生動物,否則人們就不能很方便的看到那些可愛的野生動物.另外有一些同學認為這樣做有助於培養對動物和自然的熱愛,而且能保護動物免受處於野生環境中的未危險.
不贊成的同學認為這樣做浪肥費了人力物力,而且使那些動物失去了自由,更嚴重的是破壞了生態平衡.
總的來說,這種做法有好處也有壞處.按我的意見,我希望能看情況而定,讓那些有能力保護自己和尋找食物的動物自己生活.而那些需要保護的幼小動作就可以由人工來飼養了.
Ⅲ 英語作文，急需！（最好五分鍾內給我）
To editor of the journal of Green School,U.S.A:
In order to help the students enlarge their horizen,our school opened the optional courses which could offer the knowledge and skills out of the textbooks.The optional courses include music,sports,computer ,art and the American and British culture.The optional courses are arranged from 4:30pm to 5:00pm on Monday,Wednesday and Friday.Among the optional courses,art,computer and American and British culture are welcome by the students.Personally I think,most of the students are interested in the optional courses ,and they also think that they can get much knowledge out of their classes and textbooks.
Ⅳ 求一篇英語作文 在線等五分鍾！！
I have a classmate called Lihua,whose father is always working outside.So he has to look after his mother who is ill frequently at the moment study hard !,he fell down and hurt his legs yesterday.The doctor asked him to relax at home for two weeks!
As far as I am concerned,what a good boy he is!as classmates,help ling him is a certain .
In learning,I will tell him what I know to the fullest ,and Iam gland to discuss problems with him . As to the housework ,I will help him do some cleaning as well as other ity things .
I am sure we will be good friends.
Ⅳ 英語作文很不好 每次作文十五分,我總被扣五分.怎麼提高英語作文
其實考場上英語作文拿高分說簡單也不簡單,說難也不難.英語作文扣個回2、3分是正常的,批卷老師一答般先看看開頭,然後大體掃一下內容,最後再看看結尾就可以給分了 因此作文時,卷面十分重要,這是給老師的直接印象,如果有時間最好先打一遍草稿,再抄寫.其次一定要注意不要在開頭和結尾犯致命的錯誤,那樣你的成績是不會高得.最後內容上,現在的作文一般都會給提示詞,你一定要把提示詞全部用上,不要漏寫.還有寫的字數一定要多,每個單詞之間不要太密或太窄.我覺得這就是英語作文考試的一些小技巧 ,你不妨試一試!
對了,如果你英語學得不錯,你在寫作文時,可以將一些簡單單詞換得的深一點,這樣顯得你更有內涵.這一點你要慎用,如果不會就不要硬扯,最後反而會弄巧成拙 .
這就是我的經驗了 希望可以幫到你!
Ⅵ 英語作文很不好每次作文十五分,我總被扣五分.怎麼提高英語作文
其實考場上英語作文拿高分說簡單也不簡單,說難也不難.英語作文扣個版2、3分是正常的,批卷權老師一般先看看開頭,然後大體掃一下內容,最後再看看結尾就可以給分了
因此作文時,卷面十分重要,這是給老師的直接印象,如果有時間最好先打一遍草稿,再抄寫.其次一定要注意不要在開頭和結尾犯致命的錯誤,那樣你的成績是不會高得.最後內容上,現在的作文一般都會給提示詞,你一定要把提示詞全部用上,不要漏寫.還有寫的字數一定要多,每個單詞之間不要太密或太窄.我覺得這就是英語作文考試的一些小技巧
,你不妨試一試!
對了,如果你英語學得不錯,你在寫作文時,可以將一些簡單單詞換得的深一點,這樣顯得你更有內涵.這一點你要慎用,如果不會就不要硬扯,最後反而會弄巧成拙
.
這就是我的經驗了
希望可以幫到你!
Ⅶ 我寫的這篇英語作文能得5分嗎
朋友 一般來說 寫英語作文 無論怎麼寫 只要字數夠了 總會有五分的保底分 但若是你把英語的專基本五個句型掌握屬好 我相信你會得到更多的分 至少也是十六分左右 若加一些新穎的句子 或許能夠得十八十九分 當然 這是英語作文滿分是25分
Ⅷ 懸賞5分，英語作文
dear Mary,
how are you?
Thank you for inviting me to playing table tennis with you ring the weekend, but I have to prepare for the English Exam on Monday, sorry for not being able to come with you. But I'm free next weekend, we can go to see the table tennis match instead, what do you think? Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours
Liming
Ⅸ 總分五分小學英語作文沒寫going to扣多少分{四句話)
如果表達的是一般將來時，你沒有用going to ,那就時態出現了問題，是大問題，題應該要扣2_3分。
Ⅹ 英語作文求助信 5分
Dear friend
How are you doing these days?
Recently I was in bad luck and got into some trouble and I really need your help.When I was riding a bycicle yesterday,I fell down and broke my leg.And I was asked to stay at home for a rest of a whole week.But I really dont want to cut the classes.So could you help me out?Do you have any good ideas to solve the problem?I'd like to receive any suggestion of yours.Thank you!