A. 寫一篇短文。 (求英語作文)
Last Saturday mary's 13th birthday. The mother took her to a big store, ready to buy her a new dress. But mary do not like the new dress she wants to eat, so her mother bought two kilograms of apples. mary also want a picture book and colored pencils, and her mother bought her.
B. 寫一篇英語短文
If I have a robot, I want him to do many things, you can rece the burden on the people, so that people can have a rest period will not be tired.
Robot for workers to build the housing, housing decoration, people let him do more than the beautiful house, workers no longer tired.
Nanny robot can do much to help his mother with household chores so that her mother was not home tired, so tired home sick.
A robot for astronauts for space exploration was done to rece the work of the astronauts, but also be able to fully replace the human work.
Into a robot to the police, arrested the first time when the bad guys will be a problem, and sometimes the police have Qiqingliuyu, perhaps by the police to seize the bad guys, bad guys beg for mercy, police may take him, and the robot will not do, whether bad guys are down , Or beg for mercy and will not let go of. Police also easy to work with robots, human might be easy for some.
如果我有一個機器人,我想讓他做許多事,可以讓人減輕負擔,讓人們能有休息時間,不會很累。
機器人能為工人建房屋,裝修房屋,讓他做得比人做得更漂亮的房子,工人不再勞累。
機器人能為人做保姆,幫媽媽做家務,讓媽媽不再為家中勞累,為家累得生病。
機器人能為一名航天員,為人們做太空探測,減少宇航員的工作,而且能完全代替人類工作。
機器人能成警察,第次抓壞蛋時都會遇到難題,有時警察有七情六慾,也許被警察抓住壞蛋,壞蛋求饒,也許警察放了他,而機器人不會這樣,不管壞蛋跪地也好,求饒也好,也不會放過的。警察也會工作輕松,有了機器人,人類也許會輕松一些。
C. 英語作文怎麼寫
With the continuous development of economy, our life is better, a lot of people live in the city, with tall buildings, the speed of a speeding car and fly in the sky planes, enjoying the advanced science and technology brings convenient, but some people prefer the countryside, in the countryside, we have clean air, static grace environment, fresh vegetables and fruits, but also have a small animal companions, enjoying the nature bring us comfort. I like the countryside very much. Everything here is beautiful. I prefer the small animals in the countryside to the cold machines in the city.
D. 寫一篇英語小短文
Different ways of travelling
As is known to all, airplanes, trains and ships are common vehicles for travelling.The following are some of my views.
There are many advantages for travelling by plane.For instance,it is so fast that you only spend couple of hours travelling to the other side of the world.
I prefer to travel by train.Because I can appreciate the scenery along the trip.Although it costs me longer time to reach the destination, I think it's worthy.
Sometimes we also travel by ship.As I'm always sick on the ship, I'd rather not choose ships even if it's a good chance to feel the sea wind.
In my hunble opinion, 樓上寫得很好,但不適合應試,閱卷老師不能很快找到給分點。
E. →怎樣寫英語小短文
英語小作文1《Lovely rabbit》
The rabbit is a kind of lovely again kind animal.It can run very quickly.It likes most the turnip and green vegetableses.Many persons consider as the pet to it to bring back a hello to keep.I also kept a rabbit, but it died.In fact, the rabbit is also more difficult to keep.We had better let rabbit return to in the great universe, letting it grown by itself, the oneself just seek the food to eat to.Still have, let us also protect other animals together.
2Who is she?
I have a friend. She is my best friend. She is a girl. She is ta11. She has two big eyes and a big mouth. She is a beautiful girl. She likes singing, and she is good at it. Who is she? She is Chen Jie.
3It is a big day for us
Today is a sunny day, I am very happy because my mother and I went to a library in the morning. I read a lot of books. We went home at 5 o'clock.
It is a big day for us!
4My Teacher
I like English class very much, because I can see my dear teacher-----Miss Liao.
Miss Liao is very beautiful. She has two big eyes , a small mouth .She is a good teacher. She is very clever .She play games with us in the class and we learn English happier and faster.
5Meet my mother
One year ago, my mother came back from Wuxi. My uncle, my aunt, my grand- mother, my father and I went to the airport to meet my mother. In my uncle』s car, I wanted to sleep, but I wanted to see my mother too. Finally, I fell to sleep. When I woke up, my mother sat next to me, we were very happy.
6The Concert
The forest will have a concert tomorrow. The snake, the lion and the elephant will play together. The snake will sing, the elephant will play the drums, and the lion will dance. The tiger will not play in the concert, but he will go to it!
7Cheng』s Climate
I live in Cheng, I like Cheng very much , because ChengDu』s climate is very pleasant .
In spring, It』s always warm in March and April . It often rains in May.
In summer, It』s always hot in June , July and August . The sun shines everyday.
In autumn, It』s always warm in September, October and November, and it rains sometimes, I like autumn best.
In winter, It』s often cold in December, January and February. I like this season too, because my birthday is in winter.
like Cheng and I like ChengDu』s climate too, Dear friends, welcome to Cheng!
8My winter vacation
I had a happy winter vacation. In the vacation I went to panda base with my parents.
There were many giant pandas and lesser pandas. The giant pandas were very nice .Their eyes and ears were black, the arms and the legs were black too. But their face and body were white. The giant pandas were fat very much .
I saw three baby pandas drank milk by themselves. One of them lie on the grassland, the other two pandas sat on the grassland. Every one of them had a milk bottle in their hand, they drank milk happily. When I saw them drank milk, I felt that milk was so delicious and I wanted to drink milk too.
But bamboo was the pandas』 main food .The giant pandas can eat 30 kilograms bamboo every day .
I was very happy in my winter vacation and I liked giant panda very much .
9I have nine little goldfish .Eight goldfish are all orange and one is black .I like the black one best. We call it Xiao Hei .Its body is black .It has two big and round eyes, a small mouth ,and a big tail. Though it』s very small ,it swims fast .
I often feed them and change water for them. We are good friends
10My favourite season
My favourite season is summer. I often wear my shorts and T-shirt. Sometimes I wear my jeans. In summer it is often sunny and hot. Sometimes rainy in summer. I usually swim with my father. Sometimes I eat ice-cream at home.
11My Chinses Teacher
I have a Chinses Teacher. Her name is Lui Xiaohong. She is from Lanchang. She』s very active and strict. She has two big eyes. She』s very nice.But she is short. She like to smile. I don』t know what season she like. Because I don』t know her very well. Her class is very funny, I like it.
In a word, I love my Chinese Teacher
12Father』s Day
Yesterday was Father』s Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didn』t remember it until in the morning.It was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him. Suddenly I
got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.
What a wonderful surprise!
13When I got settled, the total use of the microwave to do their own things to eat. One day, my father saw me, I am afraid to say that I grew up as a cook. I immediately shaken like a rattle-drum head, you said : "That is not my ideal. When I grow up I want to IT (information technology) instries. "Yes, I bought a computer five years ago after his father, I am familiar with it day by day. Until last year, and I have formed a deep bond with it. From then on, I want success in the information technology instry to make contributions to the cause of national computer. But my father said I could only do in the field "testing the game," is what the new game, and always let me play with, the report there will be any games. I think what he said is not their fault, I always play games recently, those who do not have a veteran like Flash. In recent days, I sprouted out of a bad idea : I will be playing the game that the network server to the black. My account will revise the highest level. However, I Xiangliaoyouxiang, this is wrong, but was caught by the police network is not good. When hackers but also need high computer skills. As a member of the IT instry is my ideal, I would like to advance this goal, to improve their computer skills
14China Sea listening to the story of the East China Sea Grandpa stresses. It is aware of the East China Sea using miles apart, can not be described in a vast sea, with 1000 960 high enough to describe the depth of the sea. It is very envious of the East China Sea. Therefore, it asked the East China Sea grandfather : "Grandpa East. Why then has the vast East China Sea so deep? "East grandfather told it :" I also another little drop of water, I and many partners around the clock to muddy pool together a small partnership, it becomes a small stream. But we do not stop pace, the United States is continuing to pour forward, and then became rivers. Finally many rivers come together, it becomes a sea, the formation of the East China Sea. "small drop asked : "We really have so much power? can be turned into a stream, into a river into the sea? "East Grandpa replied : "Of course not! can not become small rivers flow, so you can become the sea. Also, into the sea, Do not forget the existence of small water droplets, not to overlook the power of small water droplets, but it is the source of our life! Without it, We would not. "small drop in the East China Sea remember his grandfather, finally became the famous South China Sea.
15happy day
Today I』m very happy,after I have breakfast,I go to park.
It』s a sunny day ,the bird is singing,I』m singing too.When I get to park,I see some girls are playing games ,so I join them.We play very happy.Then I have lunch with my friends.We both have a good time.what』s a happy day!
16Mothers Day
母親節是五月的第二個星期日。今年母親節那天,我為母親買了一件毛衣和一束鮮花作為禮物,感謝母親為我付出的辛苦。母親收到禮物後,非常高興。
Mother』s Day comes on the second Sunday in May each year. On that day this year, I bought a sweater and some flowers for my mother to thank her for her hard work for me. Receiving my gift, my mother was very happy.
17Do you like me?
Hello! Everyone. I』m a little rabbit. My name is Hanhan. Look! I』m very lovely. My eyes are red. My ears are long. My hair is white. My tail is short. I like carrots very much. I have a good friend. She』s my little master. Her name is Zhou Xun. We always play games together. I like her very much and she likes me, too.
18Save Water 保護水資源
Water is very important for us. We must drink water everyday. We can』t live without water. Water is everywhere around us. At home, we use water to wash clothes, to wash dishes, to cook rice, to clean the flat, to have showers, to make drinks, to clean our teeth, to have a bath and so on. At work, people use water to put out fires, to grow vegetables, to make things in factories and so on. We also can swim in the sea. Water is important for us, isn』t it?
A poem:
Water has no taste at all.
Water has no color.
Water』s in the waterfall.
The pump.
The tap.
The well.
Water is everywhere around us.
Water is in the rain.
In the stream.
In the pond.
And in the river.
And in the sea again.
There isn』t much water on the earth. we must to save it. It is not inexhaustible.
It is very valuable.
19Dogs-狗
I like dogs.Many people like dogs.Dogs and people are friends.Some dogs also do different linds of work.Dogs are used to keep watch.They tell people when dangeris coming.Some dogs are used to keep people safe.They sre also used to move animals like sheep or goats.Some dogs are used for different kinds of hunting and some dogs help the police.
20Happy Holiday
May Day is coming. I』m so happy because my father and my mother take me to Wu Quan Park this holiday.
In the park, I see many trees and beautiful flowers. There are many children and many happy playing games, too.
My parents take me to the zoo. There are lions, tigers, eagles, bears, deer, monkeys, and so on. I like the monkeys best because they are very clever and they make us laugh. How lovely they are!
I have a good time that day. What a beautiful and happy holiday
F. 英語小作文怎麼填
一、分年段層層推進。
1、三年級——練說句子
語篇是由句子構成的,造句能力直接影響著寫作能力。所以,加強造句訓練顯得尤為必要。在實際教學中,我在課內外有意識地讓學生結合所學句型結構進行口頭或書面造句,經常為學生提供一個結合實際生活的情景或語境,避免注重語言形式,忽視語言內容,脫離一定的情景或語境。三年級是英語學習的起始年級。三年級教材中很多話題是關於家人的,這樣的話題比較能夠引起學生的共鳴。作為學習英語的起始年級,我們重點要保護孩子學習的興趣和信心,培養他們大膽說英語的習慣。畢竟英語不是我們的母語,要想寫些什麼,必須要知道用英語該如何表達。如在教授新版教材My family一課時,就可以訓練學生用This is 來介紹自己的家人:This is my father /mother/ brother...
2、四年級——仿寫句子
三年級到四年級是一個跨越。從單詞到句子的書寫,對於很多剛上四年級的學生來說很不適應。這是一個需要規范的年級——規范地書寫一句話:開頭大寫、單詞空格、字母占格准確、標點符號的使用。正確使用標點符號對正確表達思想十分重要,它也是寫作基本功之一。由於中英文之間的標點符號有一定的區別,學生在實際使用中經常出現一些錯誤,常見的錯誤主要集中在句號、逗號、頓號、省略號、書名號等標點符號。在英語寫作教學中我從學生的問題出發,把各種常見的標點符號的意義與使用規則對學生講解清楚。
四年級的每個單元都有要求學生掌握的四會句型。教師在教授的過程中,可以依託四會句型,讓學生進行仿寫練習。如4AUnit 4 I like...這一課的重點就是用I like來表達自己的喜好。三年級的時候學過類似的內容,但是要求不一樣。當時只要求學生能夠用這個句型進行口頭表達。在本課當中,要求學生能夠書面表達這個句型。那麼老師在教授的過程中就可以讓學生進行仿寫訓練。用這個句型表達自己的愛好,可以是食物、水果、顏色、運動、動物等,把這些句子組合在一起,就可以成為一篇小短文。
我曾經讓學生用4B教材中的There be句型來寫自己的房間。有一個學生這樣寫道:Look, this is my bedroom. There is a desk near the window.There is a bed near the desk.There is a lovely doll on my bed . There are a lot of books in the bookcase. I love my bedroom. Do you like my bedroom?這篇小短文很生動地介紹了自己的房間,而且沒有語法錯誤,句子通順。這是學生模仿課文介紹我們的教室來寫的。其中有一些並不是四會單詞,但是因為不是考試,所以我允許他們看書來寫。最後一句她還用了一個問句,使文章更顯得有趣味性。後來我問這名學生,你怎麼想到用一個問句來結尾的?她說:「我看了一篇英語短文上就這樣寫的.......」我想,如果我不布置這篇寫作的練習,也許她就不會去閱讀先關的文章。可以說寫作訓練也讓部分孩子拓展了他們的學習渠道,從而更主動地去學習英語。
3、五年級——改編對話
經歷了三、四年級的句子訓練,五年級的教材內容主要以對話出現,同時每篇對話前面還有一個交代背景的引言。我們在教學的時候可以依託引言,進行對話改編練習。在課文學完後,給學生一些重點詞句,讓學生根據這些重點詞句進行對話的改編。這個作業的設計可以分層進行:對於基礎薄弱的學生可以是完成課文內容填空,這樣相對來說降低了難度。而對於一些語言掌握比較扎實的學生,可以是在課文的基礎上進行改編,用第一人稱或第三人稱進行轉述。如在教完At the weekends一課後,可以讓學生用第三人稱介紹課文中的任務的假日活動;或者老師也可以提出更高要求:寫一些自己和好朋友或家人的假日活動。
4、六年級——素材重組
到了六年級,學生相對來說詞彙已經比較豐富,學過的話題也比較多。這個時候老師可以結合每個單元的主題,有針對性地設計一些作文的練習。如6A Ben's birthday 學完後,可以讓學生寫My birthday. 第六單元Holidays學完後,可以寫My favourite holiday.我曾經讓學生以這個為主題寫過短文。有一個同學大約寫了有200個詞,高考的要求也不過如此。而且該生寫得相當生動。不僅將這個單元的句型運用其中,更是綜合了三、四、五年級的相關內容。如I usually do...on that day. My father likes doing.... 文章的最後她還用感嘆句來抒發了一下感情:How happy we are on that day!
在這一系列有層次的訓練中,學生的語言水平提升很快。而且學生為了寫得更好,會主動閱讀一些英語讀物。對於一些英語水平本就比較高的學生來說,更是讓他們得到了提升的空間。
二、多途徑扎實訓練
1、同義句轉換訓練。在小學生的英語作文中,句型單調重復是一個普遍現象。小學高年級學生已經學習了一定數量的句型,進行同義句轉換訓練的時機也已經比較成熟。比如,『My favorite class is English.』可以用『I like English best.』轉換,『I』m going to take a bus to Shanghai.』可以用『I』m going to Shanghai by bus.』轉換,等等。
2、中英文互譯。雖然我們提倡學生寫作時用英語思維進行表達,但是受到母語思維的影響和干擾,所以在學生作文中出現的所謂「中國式英語」還是很多的,這是一個現實問題。比如,學生常把「我喜歡的食物是麵包。」翻譯為「I like the food is bread.」,把「我有時和媽媽一起購物。」翻譯為「I sometimes with mother together go shopping.」等等。面對這樣的問題,除了繼續大力培養英語思維外,對學生進行適當的中英文互譯訓練是有益處的,能讓學生更好地理解母語和英語在表達方式上的差異,從而更好地用英語表達。
3.看圖寫話式寫作訓練
這種方式,中文課上經常用,可以拿來主義用在英語課上。教師出示與所教課文有關的單詞圖片和任務對話掛圖,讓學生發揮想像寫成短文並在班級交流。如筆者教5Aunit 9 Shapes 這篇課文後,老師出示了一些圖,全由圖形組成(汽車,木頭人等)讓學生運用課文上所學的內容寫一段話,學生能把抽象的圖形綜合運用,並自如的運用了課文句型What shape is it?It』s a ….The nose is a…The head is a…
4.連環畫式寫作訓練
小學生最愛看幽默的圖畫,或有連續性的故事連載,教師可巧妙地把每篇課文的小短文Reading PartE部分改成連環畫式的插圖,讓學生在會讀的基礎上,給連環畫配英文註解,這是非常受學生喜歡的一種方式。如筆者在教6Aunit 1 Mr Smith takes a walk in the park 這篇小短文時,機械性教學跟讀學生並不積極參與,老師把這段改成連環畫式插圖,讓學生用英語作備注,學生大多都能進入故事情節中,自然而然地把這篇小短文的重點難點掌握了。這種方式又稱為插圖式寫作。
5、半框架式寫作訓練
這種方式稱為大綱式寫作,常常用於概括課文中的重點情節。如筆者教5AUnit 3時課文中出現了許多學生以及他們的愛好,學生讀完課文後,筆者安排如下框架讓學生完成小作:Ben』s hobby is________.His brother』s hobby is _____________.He likes________ stamps. Yang Ling likes__________.But Helen likes__________.Mike likes________They have good hobbies.這種寫作在課上就能完成。更有利於鞏固課文。
6、閱讀式寫作訓練
小學高年級段的學生要有一定的閱讀能力,但是小學生的閱讀材料選擇有點難,很多學生反映買了課外讀物看不懂。其實教師可利用學生寫的內容,作為校本課程,互相傳閱並幫助修改。這種方式比純粹修改病句好多了,所以又稱修改式寫作。
7、聽寫式寫作訓練
6A和6B安排有聽力訓練(Part D)學生聽完後填詞,並不能完全聽懂這一段,學生可以在老師講解幫助的基礎上完成聽力小短文的寫作,同樣每個單元的歌曲,有些老師並不教,其實老師可以和學生唱歌,並讓學生填歌詞,有些學生喜歡流行歌曲,老師就和他們一起欣賞和演唱,熟練時,學生填歌詞,如《take me to your heart》 《big big world》《I wish you merry Christmas》等。
8、採用案例分析,及時糾正語言錯誤。
學生的作文中出現錯誤是難免的,應該允許學生在作文中犯錯,關鍵是讓學生學會從錯誤中學習。對於學生作文中的錯誤,應該指出並及時糾正,給學生一個正確的語言規范。在實際教學中,我經常結合具有典型錯誤的學生作文案例進行分析,及時糾正。下面這篇作文是學生的原文,裡面劃線部分的錯誤是典型的,有標點使用錯誤,有大小寫錯誤,有用詞錯誤,有動詞時態錯誤,有動詞語態錯誤,有單復數錯誤,還有句子結構錯誤等。
實踐證明,反復指出並及時糾正學生作文中的語言錯誤,有利於減少學生作文中的錯誤,更有利於學生形成正確的語言規范。
三、巧評價,激發學生的寫作內驅力。
要激發學生寫作的興趣,增強學生寫作的自信心,不斷提高學生的寫作能力,讓學生體驗寫作的快樂感與成功感,就需要教師合理地運用評價方法,充分發揮評價的導向、激勵、調節等功能,激活學生的寫作內驅力。在寫作教學中,我主要採用了以下三種方法:第一,展示學生作品。定期把所任教班級中的優秀作文列印出來,並裝訂成作文選,每位學生一本,要求學生認真閱讀同學的作文,也要求學生帶回家與父母分享。第二,評選寫作優秀之星和寫作進步之星。對學生的每次作文進行等級評定,根據評定的等級評選出一定數量的寫作優秀之星和寫作進步之星,並把結果公布在英語家校聯系單。第三,英語測試增加「作文」項目,並且作為基本題出現。以前的英語測試卷上沒有「作文」項目,或是僅把「作文」作為附加題,這樣的試卷沒有給學生一個明確的寫作上的評價導向,或者說是評價的隨意性比較大,這樣就導致學生在思想上不重視寫作,也導致學生的寫作能力發展滯後。
小學生英語寫作能力的培養不是一蹴而就的,需要教師堅持不懈地用心培養,需要教師採用合理、有效的寫作訓練策略,包括教材資源的開發利用,語言輸入與輸出並舉,開展寫作基礎訓練,改變學習方式和評價的介入等。筆者以為,只要教師堅持長期進行寫作訓練,不斷創新寫作訓練策略,小學高年級學生的寫作能力必定會有一個質的飛躍。
G. 用英語寫一篇作文
Nowadays, there appears a phenomenon that the western customs are spreading into the east countries step by step, thus making many inhabitants who live in big cities enjoy themselves on these western festivals such as Christmas Day, April Fool』s Day, etc. Such phenomenon shows us that the world people are getting close graally and the world is becoming smaller and smaller as well. Therefore, in my opinion, it』s a normal phenomenon s well as a necessary trend.
First of all, it shows that we Chinese have become much opener rather than clinging to some very old customs, which are opposite our living. Looking back on the history, we can find the answer to why our China was very poor and weak in the 1800』s. Yes, the answer is that we closed ourselves not to let other countries know about us, and this led us to a very hard road on which we suffered many wars that many European countries launched. So I think it is more than necessary to accept other customs instead of closing ourselves. Of course, festivals are just the beginning.
What』s more, the Open and Reform Policy results in this. So I want to say it is a great achievement for the policy. Since we took the policy into practice, our country is developing with a rapid speed. No doubt it is an essential trend.
Last but not the least, we may get closer and closer not only to our home friends but also to many foreigners. We can never feel embarrassed for not knowing the other』s customs and manners. And more misunderstandings can be avoided as well.
To sum up, the trend has its great advantage to a certain extent. However, if we admire the western customs too much, it will be a disadvantage because China is our own country, all of us should enjoy a patriotic heart. Wish in the near future, we can see the situation that westerners are enjoying themselves on the Spring Festival.
參考資料:英語作文網
H. 英語作文怎麼寫啊
思路:
審好題
仔細審查所給的內容提示(包括文字和圖表等),明確要求寫的內容,確定文章的體裁、人稱、時態等,理順思路,確定主旨。
看要點,寫片段
對於易於表達的內容,一次成句;對於一時難於表達的內容,寫出片語。此時,既注意不遺漏內容要點,也不要隨意添加任何內容。
步驟:
定句型,連詞成句
這個環節是成文的關鍵,一定要注意做到:
(1)選用比較有把握的詞彙,用恰當的句型寫出確切反映內容要求的句子。在熟悉的基礎上,鼓勵多用高級詞彙和結構復雜的復雜句。如表達「為了……」時,可用inorder to do 或 so as todo.也可用sothat引導目的狀語從句。
(2)寫出的句子要達意,完整,語法正確,合乎習慣,特別是句式、謂語動詞形式要有根有據。
(3)表達限定的內容有困難時,就要想到「AllroadsleadtoRome.」這句話,用變通的方法,以達到「曲徑通幽」。如要譯「他表哥外強中干」這樣一句話,表達起來似乎很難,但我們完全可以通過學過的東西將這句話明白貼切地表達出來:Hiscousinlooks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.
(4)盡量避免使用漢語式的英語。例如要表達「她睡得很遲」,不可寫成:Shesleptvery late.應該寫成:Shewent tobed verylate.因為「sleeplate」表示「睡懶覺」。又如要表達「他一點都不擔心他的英語」,不可寫成:Heisnot a little worried abouthisEnglish.實際上意思完全相反,表達成「他非常擔心他的英語」了。應該是:Heisnot a bit worried about his English. 或:He isnotworried about his English at all.
連詞成句,添減相宜
單句寫出後,根據短文的內容要求,確定先寫什麼,後寫什麼,按照表述內容的情節發展和實際需要,重新排列組合已寫成的句子,劃分必要的段落,一般分成三段。
即:文章的開頭(Introction)、文章的主體(Mainbody)和文章的結尾(Conclusion).這樣寫成文章的初稿。在連詞成句的過程中,還要注意以下幾點:
(1)句子或段落間的連接不僅僅是個語言問題,也是個邏輯思維方面的問題,這兩者是不能分開的。能注意到這一點,你的文章就能達到條理清楚、層次分明的境界。
(2)為了使句子或段落語義連貫,表達合理准確,可以適當加入一些連接詞語。如表達轉折可用but,however,otherwise等,表達遞進可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等,表達因果so,therefore,asaresult等,表達對比可用atthesametime,meanwhile,while等,表達讓步可用though,although,evenif等。有時還需要加入一些必要的過渡句子以達到承上啟下的效果。
(3)仔細推敲在文章的哪些地方可用復雜句。切忌生搬硬套,給人一種為了用復雜句而用復雜句的感覺。要用得自然、得體。要順應行文的需要,與整個文章渾然一體。
盡量使用我們熟悉的賓語從句、狀語從句和定語從句。
檢查,修改,定稿,謄寫
檢查修改是進一步減少疏漏提高質量的最後程序,這時要對照題目要求,認真檢查以下幾點:
(1)內容有無遺漏或誤詞,最好一一對應檢查。
(2)體裁格式對不對。
(3)句子是否有語法結構錯誤,特別要檢查句子中的冠詞、代詞、名詞復數、動詞的時態、語態、主謂一致等方面是否有錯誤。
(4)句子是否合乎英語表達習慣,是否達意。
(5)書寫字跡和標點符號是否規范清晰,詞數是否基本上符合要求。經過認真修改潤色的短文,即可認真工整地謄寫在指定的卷面上。抄好後再速讀一遍,力求完美。
經典題例
下面以揚中樹人今年3月中考一模試卷的作文為例,談談寫中考英語作文的具體步驟和應注意的事項。
原題介紹
目前,揚州正在創建(create)全國文明城市(NationalCivilizationCity)。作為一個中學生,我們在學校、在家裡、在公共場合等等應該做到哪些才能稱得上是一個文明的(civilized)人呢?我們又如何為這個活動作貢獻(makecontributionto)呢?請你就此寫一篇100字左右的短文。
Nowadays,________________________________________________________________
解題步驟
第一步:認真審題,明確寫作體裁、提示要點、文章的時態、人稱和詞數。
分析:
這篇作文的體裁是倡議書。文章主要有5大提示要點,考生可以用筆將這些要點圈出來。1.揚州正在創建全國文明城市。2.作為一個中學生在學校怎麼做才能稱得上是一個文明的人?3.作為一個中學生在家怎麼做?4.作為一個中學生在公共場所怎麼做?5.我們又如何為這個活動作貢獻呢?
這篇文章時態以一般現在時為主。人稱用第一人稱。詞數100個左右。
第二步:分析提示要點,用簡明的英語寫出要點。
分析:五大提示要點只有第一要點是限定的,考生可以直接翻譯。其餘四大要點都是半限定的、半開放性的。考生需要根據文章主題的需要聯系實際生活進行適當發揮。不同的考生會有不同的答案。這部分既是寫作的重點也是難點。考生可用簡明的英語寫出要點。如:Atschool: keep the classroom clean and tidy. At home : helpparents dosome housework. In public places: obey the traffic rulesdont maketoo much noise . make a contribution to this event: giveoutleaflets to make people understand the importance ofthisactivity.
第三步:列出寫作提綱,並將要點擴展成句。
開頭(Introction):Yangzhouiscreating a National Civilization City. As middle schoolstudents,weshould try our best to become civilized persons.
正文(Mainbody):
At school, we should keep our classroom cleanandtidy every day. We shouldnt throw about rubbish.
At home, we should help our parents dosomehousework.
In public places, we shouldnt make much noiseinpublic places. We mustnt cross the road until the trafficlightsturn green.
We can make a contribution to this event bygivingout leaflets to the citizens to make them understand theimportanceof this event and take part in it.
結尾 (conclusion):Iam sure Yangzhou will become a National Civilization Citysoon.
第四步:組句成文。
分析:根據文章內容和要求,可以適當調整以上句子的先後順序。為了使文章連貫自然,表達准確,適當加一些表達並列、遞進、因果、轉折等關系的連詞,然後組成文章,這時如果發現文章詞數不夠,可把短語變成句子,也可增添一些與表達內容有關的短語或句子。如:表達「在家」,不用「athome」.而用「When we areathome.」如果發現文章詞數超過要求,可以將句子變成短語或兩句並一句。
第五步:計劃時間,認真檢查、修改。
分析:
中考英語作文一般要求在20分鍾內完成。因此,考試時間有限,必須合理安排。成文後必須認真檢查修改。特別注意以下幾點:
1.內容是否符合要求,要點有無遺漏或誤解。
2.句子是否符合英語習慣,句型是否正確。
3.是否有語法錯誤。特別是冠詞、名詞的復數、代詞、主謂一致、時態、語態等方面。
4.是否有拼寫錯誤。
5.書寫是否有不清楚或不易辨認之處。
6.大小寫和標點符號是否使用得當。
7.詞數是否符合要求。
第六步:認真謄寫。
分析:
注意書寫清楚、規范,卷面整潔。中考20分作文,有兩分卷面整潔分。
下面是修改過的作文:
Yangzhou is creating a National CivilizationCity.As middle school students, we should try our best tobecomecivilized persons.
First, when we are at school, we should keepourclassroom clean and tidy. And we shouldnt throw aboutrubbish.Second, we should help our parents do some housework athome.Third, we shouldnt make much noise in public places. Besides,wemustnt cross the road until the traffic lights turn green.Whatsmore, we can give out leaflets to the citizens in order tomakethem understand the importance of this event and take partinit.
If everyone makes a contribution to thisevent,Yangzhou will become a National Civilization City soon.
I. 英語短文寫作應該怎樣寫比較好
英語寫作是語言應用的一個重要方面,也是語言能力測定的重要手段,衡量寫作水平的標准便是看其是否能用學過的語言材料,語法知識等用文字的形式來表達描述.
書面語言表達一般分為三個過程:思維、組織、表達.先是思維,把要寫的東西在腦中思考,這往往是個別的,孤立的一些素材,很凌亂瑣碎;因此要對此進行組織,把這些思維作出整理,使其條理、系統化,但這還是較粗糙的,可能還有一些用詞不當或語言錯誤;最後才是表達,把組織過的材料仔細推敲,確無問題了再落筆成文.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態呼應,用詞貼切等,這就是寫作.上述的三個過程,最難的就是第三個過程,這需要我們有較好的語法知識,掌握一定數量的句型,習慣用語,熟練的寫作技巧,這樣才能寫出通順生動的文章來.
總之,要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
那麼,究竟怎樣才能寫好作文呢?
閱讀優秀範文
首先要搞好閱讀.閱讀是寫作的基礎,在閱讀方面下的功夫越深,駕馭語言的能力也就越強.所以要寫好英語先要讀好英語,在語言學習方面狠下苦功,教科書要讀透,因為教科書中的文章都是一些很好的範文,文筆流暢,語言規范,精彩的一些課文段落要背誦.再就是要進行大量課外閱讀,並記住一些好文章的篇章結構.
加強練詞造句訓練
其次,要加強練詞造句的訓練.詞句對作文相當於造房的材料,無好材料就造不出好房子.平時在學習閱讀時要注意收集積累,把好的詞語、短語、句型做好筆記.平時在練習中的錯誤也要做好記錄,再對照正確句子,使地道的英語句子如同條件反射,落筆就對.
了解英語寫作格式
還有,要了解英語寫作的不同體裁與格式.可以先看一本介紹英語寫作入門的書,對英語寫作有一個初步的概念,如怎麼寫議論文,如何提出論據,如何展開,如何確定中心句;又如,英語信的格式,如何根據不同身份寫不同結束語等,然後根據不同的體裁進行寫作練習.
用英語寫日記
要養成記英語日記勤練筆的好習慣.經常用英語記日記,等於天天在練筆,這無疑是提高英語協作的行之有效的好辦法.在記日記時,不要總是用簡單句,要有意識地用一些好的片語、句型、關聯詞和復合句等,使文句更優美生動.還有要按照題目或所給情景寫文章練筆.寫好後對照範文,找出差距,然後再練習,這對提高英語作文也很有幫助,在游泳中學會游泳,只有多練習才能練好.
總之,平時學習語言素材積累多了,體裁格式記住了又經常練習不斷提高,到作文下筆時就會得心應手,水到渠成