『壹』 陝西省三校生高考英語作文
教學目標:1、訓練學生如何觀察生活 2、什麼是作文的選材 3、掌握選材應注意的一些原則及方法; 4、校園生活作文選材訓練。 教學重難點: 掌握怎樣從校園生活中選材。 教學時數: 課時課前准備: 搜集素材,用相機抓拍一些校園生活的花絮;精選學生自己的優秀習作,做 文字的潤色和修改。 教學過程: 一、情境導入:一提起寫作文,許多同學就感到頭痛,提起筆望著題目發呆,總覺得無話可 說。平時有些同學聊天談論學校生活時,眉飛色舞、滔滔不絕,到這時候也開始 犯難了。有一幅對聯就生動地描寫出了同學們面對作文題時的痛苦情形。 上聯:苦坐苦想苦不堪言 下聯:愁綱愁情愁眉苦臉 橫批:寫不出來 但是班裡一些作文寫得好的同學,拿到作文題目總是思如泉湧,有寫不完的 新鮮事。文章生動有趣吸引別人,得到老師的表揚,同學的羨慕。他們的作文成 功的秘訣在哪裡呢?我想,首先一點有一雙慧眼,有一顆敏感的心,善於觀察和 感悟生活,並從中選擇貼切的材料,表達我們陽光向上的人生志向和情趣。今天 我們一起研究探討作文應如何選材。 (課件展示)從生活中找「米」――校園生活作文選材訓練 什麼是選材: 蜜蜂採花釀蜜,首先是能夠發現鮮花,唐代詩人羅隱詠蜜蜂的詩句有「不論 平地與高山,無限風光盡被占」,要遠遠近近、大大小小的花都能感受到才行; 其次,不是所有的花都能釀蜜,只有精心挑選、精心釀制,才有甘甜可口的蜂蜜。 選材是根據主題需要,有目的的選擇恰當的材料來表現主題,產生最好的效果。 二、校園生活花絮 老師活動: 講述:作文的素材應來自於生活,要學會從生活中去尋找,對同學們來說, 最豐富多彩的莫過於校園生活了。大家來到中學已經半年了,親身經歷、耳聞目 睹的大大小小的事情應該不少了。下面我們就一起來回顧一下半年來的校園生 學生活動:請幾位同學說一說校園生活[老師]同學們都注意到了校園內發生的一些像軍訓、運動會、聖誕節這樣的集體 活動,說得很好。老師用相機也抓拍了校園生活中的一些花絮,大家一起來欣賞 一下吧。 [課件播放校園生活照片:校園里:如為一位患癌症的職工捐款、中午食堂、 游泳館、藝術宮,班級生活:如值日、老師進班、為班級班費收集瓶子等] [教師] 我們的校園生活是多彩的,有趣的同學、盡職的老師、生動的課堂、 花樣繁多的選修課、熱鬧的文體活動、美味的食堂,有這么多豐富的素材,你還 怕寫不出好作文嗎? 三、精彩佳作展示 上周我們的作文是:「校園生活」要求寫一篇記敘文。有不少同學寫得非常 好。下面給大家展示一下幾位同學的作文及片斷,看看他們在選材上有什麼特 點?我請作者把它朗讀一遍,然後談談他們自己選材的心得。 課時目標:學生進行寫作,在教師指導下交流修改。 教學過程: 一、指導學生進行構思並打腹稿、列提綱。教師巡迴指導。及時對學生的問 題進行指導解答。 二、組織學生將自己的作文構思互相交流,以便起到相互啟發的作用。三、學生打草稿,如有不懂得問題,可以請教身邊的同學,也可以請教老師。 在老師和同學的幫助下編寫邊修改。 四、學生草稿完成的,互相交換修改,未完成的繼續完成。 五、組織學生以三到五人為一組,互相交換閱讀平息本族成員的習作,提出 意見和建議,並指定專人將同學們的發言記錄下來。 六、各小組負責紀錄的同學向全班匯報本組交流的情況,並推薦出本組優秀 習作,由作者本人朗讀給全班同學,大家共同進行評價。進一步推選出最佳作文 七、對最佳作文的作者進行表揚。八、教師對本次作文訓練情況進行總結,提出進一步加強作文水平的要求。 附:教學範文 傻妞的幸福生活 在1990 年的春天,一個胖乎乎的小丫頭在一個平凡的小鎮上出生了,這便 是我們可愛的傻妞小姐。傻妞的爹媽見到新生的女兒歡喜的不得了,給她取了個 名叫「琪樂」,意思是希望女兒長得如花似玉並且幸福快樂一輩子。 人如其名,小時侯的傻妞便是家屬大院中的開心果,不論誰見到她,都會被 她的快樂所感染。傻妞嘴巴很甜,像沾上了蜜似的,難怪有好多人都寵著她呢! 正因為這樣,傻妞才整天嘻嘻哈哈,蹦蹦跳跳的帶著一幫小傢伙滿家屬大院的亂 從小傻妞就像個小子似的,瘋起來找不著影,心思也從未放在學習上,至使她老是不上不下的,惹得爹媽在那吹鬍子瞪眼,硬是把她鎖在家裡,成績才有了 一點點上升。 傻妞不但像個假小子而且是個惹禍精,到處惹是生非。記得在傻妞七八歲時, 爹媽為了能讓她更好的學騎自行車特地買了輛「好孩子」牌的自行車。新車拿到 手時,傻妞甭提有多高興了,立馬推出來與小夥伴們分享,看得小夥伴們眼紅極 了,紛紛回家向他們的爹媽要自行車。於是乎,第二天一個個都推著新車出來要 玩,還在院子里開展了騎車大賽,縱觀所有選手,只有傻妞騎得像模像樣。正當 傻妞神氣十足的時候發生了一起「交通事故」——咱可愛的傻妞小姐連人帶車的 翻進旁邊的陰溝中,人沒怎麼受傷但把車蹭得花花綠綠的,還有一個剎車給摔壞 了。這可把傻妞急的像熱鍋上的螞蟻,於是我們的傻妞一直躲在小夥伴的家中不 敢回家,直到天黑了,爹媽找來了才眼汪汪的回了家,挨了頓罵,清理好擦傷才 去睡覺,第二天又嘻嘻哈哈的「瘋」來了。 傻妞也是個懂事的孩子,小學四五年級時便幫媽媽幹活了。傻妞是貪吃的, 一碗香噴噴的蛋炒飯引來了不少大人的心。噢!忘了說,咱傻妞曾因為舞鏟弄勺 而引起了火災,不過火勢不大,僅僅只是油鍋著火了,把廚房裡的半牆壁給燒黑 了。事後問其原因,傻妞支支吾吾的說:「肚子餓想吃東西,為了看電視而又忘 了有東西在鍋中,所以……」 傻妞就是這樣一個稀里糊塗的小丫頭,但傻妞也有堅持的一面,小學畢業後 便開始自己照顧自己,開始了她的求學旅程,一個人面對著許多風雨,學會了許 多懂得了許多,連爹媽都說她變了,她長大了。但唯一不變的就是她迷死人不償 命的微笑。 好了,在此祝願我們的傻妞學業有成,永遠的幸福快樂,正如她的名字一
『貳』 2010陝西高考英語作文
Dear Sur,
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in China. It's almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.
All the best
『叄』 2011年陝西高考英語作文 範文
假定你是中學生李華。在一位名叫TigerMom的學生家長的博客上,你看到如下內容。請你根據博客內容、寫作要點和要求,給這位家長回復。
I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
寫作要點:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明);
3.提出至少兩條建議
要求:
1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域。2.短文詞數不少於100(不含已寫好的部分)。3.內容充實,結構完整,語意連貫。4.書寫需清晰、工整。
範文:
Hi, TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends』 advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.
希望能幫到你 嘿嘿
『肆』 09陝西高考英語作文
假定你是李華,在一個英文網路論壇上,你看到一個名叫Grown-up的中學生發貼(post)尋求幫助。請根據以下內容、寫作要點和要求回帖。
Hi,everyone,
I』m 17 years old and I amging to university this autumn.But my mother continues to treat me as a seven-year-old.What should I do?
寫作要點:
1. 告訴Grown-up要理解母親 2. 給Grown-up提出解決問題的具體建議
要求:
1. 短文須寫在答題卡指定區域 2. 短文字數不少於80(不含寫好的部分)
3. 內容充實,結構完整,語意連貫 4. 書寫清晰、工整
例文:
I think that Lora wants to work part-time for these reasons. First, she can make some pocket money to meet pet daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Second. she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace. Third, she can build up new friendships and improve bet social skills.
But her parents may regard learning as an increasingly important task for Lora. This holiday should be a catch-up time for independent study. Besides, personal safety may also be one of their major considerations.
My advice for Lora is this: make a detailed plan for her study and work; ask her friends to work together with her, and tell her parents that she can manage things properly. I wish Lora a pleasant summer.
『伍』 13到17年陝西高考英語作文範文
這個簡單,你直接搜索陝西歷年高考英語作文
比如14年的
(2014)假定你是中學生李華。美國一個中學校長代表團即將訪問你校並出席英語周的一項活動。請根據寫作要點和寫作要求寫一篇歡迎詞。 寫作要點:
1. 表示對客人的歡迎; 2. 介紹此項活動(如活動目的、內容等); 3. 表達對客人的祝願。 寫作要求:
1. 詞數不少於100; 2. 稱呼已經給出,請寫歡迎詞正文; 3. 不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。 Dear American guests,
Dear American guests, On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities. As scheled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two o』clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence. I sincerely with you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.
歡迎詞經典句型:
1. 我很榮幸地代表„„向來自„„地方的„„表示熱烈的歡迎。
On behalf of sh., I have the honor/ I feel greatly honored to express/ extend warm welcome to sb. from sp.
2. 請允許我向遠道而來的貴賓表示熱烈的歡迎和親切的問候。
Please allow me/ Permit me to express/extend these warm welcome and gracious greetings to our distinguished guests coming from afar.
3. 我很愉快地以我個人的名義,向某某表示熱烈的歡迎。
I am very delighted to extend/express this personal warm welcome to…
『陸』 2011陝西高考英語作文範文,今年的陝西作文是什麼麻煩給一篇範文吧。
假定你是中學生李華。在一位名叫的學生家長的博客上,你看到如下內容。請你根據博客內容、寫作要點和要求,給這位家長回復。
I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
寫作要點:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明);
3.提出至少兩條建議
要求:
1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域。2.短文詞數不少於100(不含已寫好的部分)。3.內容充實,結構完整,語意連貫。4.書寫需清晰、工整。
範文:
Hi, TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends』 advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.
上面是試題 下面是範文,希望能幫到你
『柒』 高考英語作文一般扣多少分 陝西的
這個很難估斷的吧!其實只要語句通暢,句式多樣,沒什麼語法錯誤。滿分也是可能的
『捌』 高考英語作文
08四川
What can I do for our environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening, I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.
08陝西Notice
Our monitor suggests that we have 「Friday News Hour」. But some classmates do not agree. We will have a class meeting in English tomorrow afternoon to discuss this suggestion. Please prepare your talk and take an active part.
May 6th, 2008
Dear fellow students,
Our monitor suggests that we have 「Friday New Hour」. I think that it is a good idea.
Everyone knows that we are busy all day. Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad, let alone what we can do for our country. By reading newspapers we can get more information about the world outside. So I think 「Friday New Hour」 can broaden our mind and enrich our school life. What』s more, it will help us improve our reading skills.
As for my suggestion, I think it』s better to have it twice a week. And we should make a choice about what we』ll read. I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity.
08福建Dear sir,
I』m Li Hua from Fujian. When I was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impressed me greatly, I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12, I think it is a kind or win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life ring the summer vacation.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
08安徽Dear David,
I』m glad that you』ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern.
As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our govenment encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.
I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are to make our country an even cleaner place.
Yours,
Li Hua
08湖南Sample 1: Thomas Edison
Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He once thought to be a boy who was not worth ecating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination.
I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1000 inventions. In his little time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname 「the Wizard of Meio Park」. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many inventions.
What impresses me most is his famous saying, 「genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration」. Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when and where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.
Sample 2: Helen Keller
Every time I read 「…if I had the power of sight for three days;, I cannot help being moved by its author Helen Keller, an ordinary but great American woman.
I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life. She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old. Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence, and communication seemed only a dream for her. But she never gave up and struggled to lead an active life. Under the guidance of her teacher, Ms. Sulliven, Helen learned to read and write, and became a famous writer. For a disabled person like her, this was really a wonder.
Helen has set an excellent example to all of us. Her story tells us that we should value what we have and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
Sample 3: William Shakespeare
Do you know Hamlet? Have you read the Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favourite English writer and the man of all ages!
Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little ecation, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world. I like him because his comedies and tragedies gring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life!
Since 「life is a stage」, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone has his own role to play, and I will try my best to play my role well.
08湖北Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn』t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China,it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.I was so desperate on hearing that.How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
08北京 One possible version:
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
第二節 開放作文 (15分)
One possible version:
From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort. I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses, even pictures. So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show e respect for them.
08全國2June 8, 2008
Dear Peter,
I』m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you』ll be able
to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV
and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you』ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes
Li Hua
08全國1Dear Sir/ Madam,
Greetings from Chian!
I』m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I』ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I』ve been watching her grow on your website. Now she』s going to be there. I』d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
08遼寧We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power. We can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day』s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.
08 江蘇Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is 「Being a Good Listener」.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don』t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. (151)
Thank you for your listening!
5月12日四川汶川發生大地震。很多人喪生,大量房屋倒塌,當地工廠、企業遭受很大損失,請你根據下面提綱和要求寫一則英語短文。
提綱:
1、根據以上信息簡要描述5.12汶川地震
2、你所經歷(或從媒體得知的)這次地震當時的情況
3、你打算(或已經)為地震災區做什麼
要求:1、單詞量120左右
2、語意連貫,合乎邏輯
3、書寫工整、整潔
範文:
A powerful earthquake hit Wenchuan in Sichuan province on May 12, which killed so many people. Due to the earthquake, a large quantity of factories and firms have suffered a big loss. At the same time, tens of thousands of houses have collapsed.
When the earthquake happened, I was attending class. Suddenly I together with my teacher and classmates felt continuous shaking All the students in our class rushed down stairs at top speed. Soon our school playground got crowded. I saw many schoolmates tried to connect their parents or friends but they failed to have phone calls on the fixed line or the mobile.About an hour later, we got the news that a powerful earthquake hit Wenchuan in Sichuan province.
Immerdiately after the earthquake, people throughout the country took actions spontaneously(自願地), offering their help, donation,and support to the rescue efforts. As a Chinese, I also tride my best to offer my help to the disaster areas. Besides praying for people in the disaster areas I donated money and blood. Moreover, I intend to be a volunteer in the disaster areas after the college entrance examination this summer.
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『玖』 哪位有心人幫我看下陝西省最近幾年高考英語作文是什麼08 09 10年的。非常感謝!!
08年陝西高考英語作文
書面表達(滿分30分)
某天,你班貼出了一張通知,請根據通知、內容要點和要求寫一篇英文發言稿。
內容要點:
1、你對「周五讀報活動」的看法; 2、陳述你的理由(可舉例說明); 3、你的具體建議。
要求:
1、短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域; 2、短文詞數不少於80(不含已寫好的部分);
3、內容充實,結構完整,語意連貫; 4、書寫須清晰、工整。
Dear fellow students,
Our monitor suggests that we have 「Friday New Hour」. I think
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範文:
Our monitor suggests that we have 「Friday New Hour」. I think that it is a good idea.
Everyone knows that we are busy all day. Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad, let alone what we can do for our country. By reading newspapers we can get more information about the world outside. So I think 「Friday New Hour」 can broaden our mind and enrich our school life. What』s more, it will help us improve our reading skills.
As for my suggestion, I think it』s better to have it twice a week. And we should make a choice about what we』ll read. I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity.
09年陝西高考英語作文
學生和母親之間的關系問題(一位叫Grown-up的網友覺得母親總把自己當小孩,求助其他網友給些建議看怎樣解決這個問題)
Dear Grown-up ,
I have read about your complaint that your mother always treats you as a seven-year-old boy , which makes you feel uncomfortable because you will enter college this coming fall. As to your problem, I have several suggestions to put forward as follows.
To begin with(Initially), you should try to understand your mother, whose intention is to care for you. Just as a famous person says, 「Nothing can compare with the love from mother.」 In addition (Apart from this), communicating properly with your mother contributes to solving the problem. The more you communicate with her, the better you will understand each other. Finally, it is encouraged to resort to your friends or classmates when you have quarrel with your mother.
I do hope what I mentioned above can help you. Only by doing so, can you be friend with your mother soon. Do you agree with me?
Yours
Li Hua
2010年陝西高考英語作文
假定你是李華。你們學校和一所美國中學簽署了教師交流協議。在過去的一年裡,你的英文老師是來自這所中學的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美國任教。請你根據寫作要點和要求給Sue寫封電子郵件。
寫作要點:
1.對她表達感謝之意
2.介紹她離開後你自己及班級里發生的事情
3.希望了解她的近況
要求:
1.詞數不得少於100
2.內容充實,結構完整,語意連貫
3.開頭已給出
Dear Sue
I'm Li Hua,one of your students in China............
範文
Dear Sur,
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in China. It's almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.
All the best