⑴ 怎樣評價一篇英語作文
談如何寫好英語作文評語。然而，在當前的英語教學實踐中，存在這樣一種現狀：教師重內視英語寫作訓容練，但卻忽視對學生作文的反饋，未能正確認識自己在學生作文批改中所扮演的角色。總之，教師只有把評價學生的寫作自始至終放在發現學生字、詞、句、段、文方面的優秀之處和可取之處，並時而通過評語與他們促膝談心，表達特別的關注和愛護，學生才能從遭遇失敗到嘗試成功，從懼怕寫到樂於並善於寫，進而全面提高自身的英語寫作能力。
⑵ 英語作文評價大全
說真的，我很討厭淅瀝的小雨，它們是那麼的纏綿，總會使心煩湧入心頭，驚濤拍浪，挖心的難受．因此在這樣的雨天我沒有在雨中漫步的情懷．但在北方由於在黃河以北降雨量少，註定淅瀝的小雨會是夏天的常客．於是我也有些厭惡夏天，好在夏天還有一位代言人——暴雨，使我對夏天有了一絲的眷戀．
我喜歡暴雨有種近似痴迷的程度，因為暴雨下出了北方人的豪爽，給人一種親切感．下暴雨時我喜歡將窗子開到最大，將手臂伸出窗外去感受豆大的雨點落下時針扎般的痛，那時卻感覺不到疼，有的只是毅力的考驗．張大嘴努力的呼吸泥土的清香那是一種久違的香氣，它會使我想起曾今那充滿鳥語花香的大自然．
今天又一場暴雨過後，我遙望天際發現天空是那麼美，頭頂的一片天是那麼的湛藍，藍的沒有一絲雜質，它又是那麼的飄渺，好像是七仙女拋下的一件藍色的薄紗在空中飄舞．不遠處還是灰色的，印在房屋上竟是土黃色，那種顏色給人一種壓抑的感覺．於是我尋找藍灰的交界處，那裡本應是逐漸的過度色，而大自然卻巧妙的嵌進去一朵還未完全舒展的雲，剎那間我感受到了活力，那是生命的詮釋．突然明白再陰的天也有晴朗的那一刻，再黑的夜也有黎明出現的那一剎那．
那是一幅美麗的油畫，是大自然給予人類的享受，更是自然給我們敲響的警示鍾，如果沒有人類保護大自然，恐怕以後連那雨過天晴的後的一絲感動也會一去不復返，至少我們會失去對生命的另一種詮釋
⑶ 英語作文 一部電影的評價 用英語寫一篇 關於一部電影的評價
Titanic
A precious stone which called "The Heart of Ocean"brought a love story between Rose and Jack.
They met on Titanic and fell in love with each other.On the way to love,they came across many obstacles but surmounted.Four days after the Titanic set out,a very big iceberg floated towards her.The ship was holed by an iceberg.Many people cannot be saved besides Rose and Jack.Death is the biggest obstacle for love to surmounte.In other to save Rose,Jack lay down his life.
In this movie,when teh ship suffered the unexpected,some people would rather help other people than save themselves,such as the sailors and the musicians.They moved me the most.This movie made me thought a lot in some fields,such as relationship of the people around you.For example,when we are facing love,how to express our feeling to our lovers and deal the problem about love with them;When we are facing the social problems,how to settle them perfectly?Let's suppose we are on the Titanic and taking different positions,what we should do when the unexpected coming?In my opinion,diferent people take the different positions and we do different things in society,but the most important thing is that we should assume our responsibilities.
As a whole,this movie not only has a wonderful plot but also provide food for thought.(發人深思)
⑷ 怎樣評價一篇英語作文
首先，應當理解題意；其次，應善於謀篇布局，而不是生硬得翻譯，在每個論內點開始時最好要有一定的容連接詞，比如first,second,third;first
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all,then,in
addition,what
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more,finally；再者，應當善於運用高中階段所學的各種句型語法，比如定語從句、同位語從句、動名詞的符合結構等等還有一些常用的句子，應善於積累；最後就是整體的事了，段落安排是否合理、書面是否工整、盡量減少語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤、字數在80到120之間。
⑸ 對一篇很難的英語作文的評價（不少於50個單詞）用英文
Response Paper of The Alchemist
The Alchemist narrates a story of a Santiago who has a reoccurring dream that he can find his treasure near the Pyramids. Santiago, a shepherd, is guided by the king of Salem. Then he sells all his sheep in order to follow his dream. On his trip, he suffers many hardships as he loses all his money three times; he crosses the sea of death Sahara and even his life is in danger many times. Each danger he faced was worse than the one before. But under the guidance of the alchemist he overcomes all the obstacles in his heart. Therefore he always lands on his feet, and finally gets to the Pyramids. At the end he knows where his treasure is.
From The Alchemist we can see that the way is rough for Santiago to pursue his dream. He gives up the way his father arranged to be a priest in order to travel. He gives up being a shepherd which he knows everything a shepherd should know. He also gives up being a crystal merchant』 assistant which is promising. Afterwards he leaves Fatima who he loves. All he has done is only for one purpose – his dream. When we stand before our dreams, perhaps we will try to grab it. But how many of us can stick to the end? It turns out to be not enough that we just possess dreams and ideals. When we face our dreams, should we be as fearless, resolute, and perseverant as Santiago? Or should we be like the crystal merchant who regarded his dream as a reason to go on living? Or even should we be the robber, who met with the boy next to the Pyramids who doesn』t believe his dreams at all. The answer is without any doubt. Our life is finite. If we waste time sighing about life』s unfairness, our dreams will eventually become our imaginations. Santiago gives us an example of his achievements by his personal legend no matter how hard and dangerous the trip was, it cannot sway his determination.
Do we really follow our heart when we are on the way to pursue our dreams? In the book of The Alchemist, the boy asked the alchemist, 「Why do we have to listen to our heart?」 「Because, wherever your heart is, that』s where you』ll find your treasure,」 the alchemist answered. 「You will never again be able to keep it quiet. Even if you pretend not to have heard what it tells you, it will always be there inside you, repeating to you what you』re thinking about life and about the world.」 That』s why we have to be clear what our hearts tell us. 「You will never be able to escape from your heart. So it』s better to listen to what it has to say. That way, you』ll never have to fear an unanticipated blow.」 Living in this diversified and changeful society, sometimes we ignore the voice from deep in our heart. Most of the time, we hear it. However we don』t have the courage to believe it and accept it.
Those words from Melchizedek, the king of Salem, are echoing in my mind while I am reading the book. 「When you want something, all the universe conspires in helping you to achieve it.「 「At a certain point in our lives, we lose control of what』s happening to us, and our lives become controlled by fate. That』s the world』s greatest lie.」 Indeed, any dream can be realized in this world, but it depends on whether the person possesses a heart of tenacity. When we focus on conquering the difficulties, our fate is controlled by ourselves.
Through this book the author is trying to tell us a truth. It』s that our lives will be brilliant and meaningful only when we to be a person who follows one』s heart, who believes in oneself, and who is dauntless to move forward to approach one』s goal. Santiago is not only a role of The Alchemist, but he also is a guide that leads us to see the beauty of life.
我自己寫的，是一本書的觀後感，行不？？
⑹ 評價別人的英語作文
Li Hua is my seatmate and we are friends,too.He is much cleverer at studying English than I am.He is able to recite the an English passage after reading it over once as if he had a camera eye.Li Hua not only studies hard himself but also can be ready to help others.when I have any troubles in English,he is always very patient to lend a hand to me.Besides,Li Hua thinks a lot of our friendship and never say anything to go against his friends.I must learn from him.
⑺ 如何用英語評論英語作文
先寫一下文章總體內容，說說哪裡好哪裡不好，然後說說文章的現實意義。
⑻ 英語作文評語大全
依式行文,文筆素源朴,結構嚴謹.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
內容豐富,結構嚴謹,體系完備,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
簡潔流暢,層次井然,結構嚴謹,文字生動,頗富幽默,筆調輕松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful
⑼ 朋友對我的評價英語作文
「如何作自我介招？」這個問題看上去似乎很簡單，人人都會。其實並不然，也有說的不是很理想的。主要的現象有幾下幾點： 1、 不知從何說起。有很多同學當聽到老師問：「Can you make a self-introction」時，首先遲疑幾秒，然後怔怔的看著：「老師說什麼呀？」這一類算是「無准備型」。自我介紹是你與人打交道，參加各類口語考試，職場面試不可或缺的一部分，同時也是非常重要的一部分。作為口語測試，測試的老師其實重點考查的是你運用語言的能力，而不是對你的背景的了解。所以想把口語學好的同學不妨大膽的秀一下。 2、缺乏邏輯性。還有一些同學在作自我介紹時，要麼只說兩句話名字，年齡；要麼誇誇其談但缺乏邏輯性。別看簡簡單單的一個自我介紹有時也能反映出一個人的邏輯思維和做事態度。 3、缺乏幽默感。幽默的開場除了可以營造出活潑和睦的氣氛外，還能給對方留下深刻的第一印象，即使對象是以建立了朋友關系或同事關系的外國人，在酒會或聚餐等各式場合，同樣可以用詼諧的方式來表現自我，使你和他們之間的關系達到更圓滿的程度。 初學英語的各位人士，可以學著用一下；對於自認為用英語作自我介紹已經易如反掌的英語高手，不妨在平時也試試使自我介紹增添一些新意:) 1、 以星座為話題作自我介紹 I』m an Aries. Arians are supposed to be courageous leaders but troublesome followers. Half true. I』m definitely a troublesome. follower. (我是牧羊座的。 牧羊座的人據說是很有膽識的領導人物，但同時也是很會惹麻煩的部屬。說對了一半，我的確是個麻煩的部屬。) I』m a Leo. Some good Leo traits are: broad-minded, loving, faithful. Bad traits are: bossy, patronizing. I』m a typical Leo. I』m faithful but patronizing. 6park.com (我屬獅子座。獅子座的優點是心胸寬闊、有愛心，以及忠誠；缺點則是專橫、自以為是。我就是典型的獅子座，忠誠卻又自負。) 2、I』m a person of principle. I do NOT compromise. Because I don』t smoke , I do NOT wear a T-shirt with a Marlboro logo, even if somebody gives one to me free. 我是個有原則的人，絕對不會妥協。因為我不抽煙，所以我也不會穿印有萬寶路字樣的T恤，即使有人免費送給我。 I』m a great salesman. I could sell a knockoff Windows 2000 to Bill Gates. 我是一個很棒的推銷員，我能把盜版的Windows 2000賣給比爾*蓋茨。 3、I love shopping! My mom(friends) says, I should become a legislator 『cause I bring so many bills into the house. 我酷愛買東西！所以我媽（朋友）說我應該當國會議員的。因為，我把那麼多的bill(賬單/請願書/法案)帶進了the house(家裡/議院)。 以上一些簡單自我介紹只是個參考，希望想學英語的同學或是想把英語說得更漂亮的人士能夠舉一反三做出更具魅力符合自己個性的自我介紹。 Sweetness of your name fills my heart when I forget mine — like the morning sun when the mist is melted.
⑽ 對英語評價英語作文80詞帶翻譯」
2010 will be end ,and 2011will be come .In the new year ,we must be have much wishes ,because new year means that things end and another things start.So we need to make a new year"s resolution in order to the second year will be better.I want to share my new year"s resolution with you. Firstly,i decide to try my best to learn english .because my english so poor that it affects my other subject.I willface many differences ,such as broadening my vocabulary, training my listening ,improving my write and so on. I must work hard because i don"t want to behind the times. Secondly ,i will give up watching football games because every time it takes me two hours ,which makes me not finish my homework .As a student ,study is our ty ,so i wii focused more on study and less on playing . In order to my future ,i will work hard！ 2010年將結束，2011即將到了。在新的一年，我們必須有很多的願望，因為新的一年意味著事情結束和另一個東西開始.所以我們需要作出新的一年「的計劃，以便在第二個今年將是更好的新年與你分享。首先，我決定盡我所能地學習英語。因為我的英語很差，它會影響我的其他的科目.都有不小的差距，如擴大我的詞彙，我的聽力訓練，提高我的寫作等。我必須努力工作，因為我不想落後於時代。其次，我會放棄，因為每看一次我花了兩個小時，這使我無法完成我的作業足球比賽作為一個學生。，學習是我們的職責，所以我的將會更注重學習和玩少一點。為了我的將來，我會努力的！ 請採納！（中英兼有）