A. 考研英語作文，求範文～
The increase of private cars has brought more and more serious air pollution and traffic jams in our city, especially in the rush hour.
So I think it』 time to promote the green travel at present. In my opinion, first, we』d better not travel by car unless it』s necessary. Second, people should be encouraged to choose the public transport. They can take a bus or the light rail. They can even go by underground. These ways of travel can save energy and rece air pollution .They can also improve the traffic conditi. Third, we should choose to walk or ride a bicycle if we don』t go far away. Travelling on foot or by bike provide us with a chance to make us stronger and healthier.
In a word , I believe that we can improve the environment as well as our traffic conditi if we all choose the green travel.
B. 考研作文2011年英語（二）的作文：2008,、2009年國內轎車市場部分品牌市場份額示意圖 （望高手批改）
說實話來沒有一句通順，源建議重寫。
1. striking contrast？
2.Japanese Car Brands
3.do not use "phenomenon".
4.no comments?
5.So chinglish.
如果真的要找錯誤的話，我可能會找到至少30個。
C. 09年考研英語小作文~~~
如果你的篇幅不是很長的話，會影響你的得分，如果很長則沒事，但是絕對不會零分。
D. 09年考研英語大作文
網路的遠與近
本來就是說網路拉近了人們的距離
同時也讓人們只關注電腦，圖片中每個人身邊都隔了一道牆，說明網路讓身邊的人被牆阻隔，拉遠了距離
寫的應該是網路的好與壞的
沒事，我就是這么寫的，我挺你，不得偏題