① 英語高考滿分作文及給分點
2004高考英語滿分作文
【全國卷I】
【試題回放】
假設你是李華,你在報上看到北京電視台今年七月將舉辦外國人「學中文,唱中文歌」才藝大賽。你的美國朋友Peter正在北京一所大學學中文,你覺得他應去試一試。請按以下要點給他寫信告知此事,並表示可以提供幫助。
比賽時間:7 月18日 。報名時間:截止到6月30日。報名地點:北京電視台
注意:1.詞數:100左右 2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫 3.參考詞彙:才藝大賽—talent show
Dear Peter,
I read in a newspaper today that a 「Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs」 Foreigners』 Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing ring that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you』ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名師點評]
從整體上說,本文書寫得簡潔明快。語言簡單平實,要點囊括齊全,結構完整。本文的主要特點是讓步狀語從句的使用,最後兩句話,採用了if引導的讓步狀語從句,結合將來時使用。
【全國卷II】
【試題回放】
假設你是李華,加拿大一所學校將於今年暑假組織學生來你校訪問。其間,Andy Smith將借住你家。請你代表全家寫信給Andy,歡迎他的到來,並告知有關事宜。信的要點如下:
1. 上午:學校活動2.下午:游覽市區3. 晚上:看電視,玩游戲,聊天
注意:1. 詞數:100左右2. 可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫3. 參考詞彙:安排arrange
Dear Andy,
I』m so glad that you』ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. I』m writing to express our warm welcome and introce the activities ring your stay here.
In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged. You』ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on. We』ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.
In the afternoon, you can tour around the city. And I』ll act as your tour guide. Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look. You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.
At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we』re interested in. I』m sure you』ll enjoy yourself. I』m looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
[名師點評]
本文行文自然流暢,文章要點齊全,意思表達真切。詳略得當,重點突出。從語言使用的角度來說,不但使用了一些生動的動詞,准確的名詞,同時為了使本文串聯自然,又使用了時間狀語為連接詞,將文章按照時間順序敘述完整。
[浙江卷]
【試題回放】
假設你是李越,你的加拿大筆友Steve來信說,他和他的一些同學正在學中文,請你推薦兩本學中文的詞典.根據下表提供的信息,請你給他寫一封回信.
英漢/漢英詞典新華字典
收詞(字)18,000(英語)
20,000(漢語)10,000
價格52元11元
特點大量例子、用法說明,適合初學者中國最常用的漢語字典
參考詞彙:
· 推薦 recommend (V.)
· 英漢/漢英詞典 The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary (ECCED)
· 新華字典 Xinhua Dictionary (XD)
Dear Steve,
I』m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.
I』d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.
The English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary , and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD costs 11 yuan.
Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries.
Yours,
Li Yue
[名師點評]本文要完成的是書信的主要部分,因此不需要注意格式,但是不能遺漏要點。本文要點齊全,內容完整,詳略得到。介紹的時候,層次清晰,逐一舉例。文章流暢而連貫。有很多關於詞彙和字典的表述,值得我們積累。
[廣東卷]
【試題回放】假設你是下圖的李華。請根據圖畫所提供的信息,寫一篇英語作文,描述昨天晚上鄰居看足球賽影響你學習的情況,並描寫你隨後與鄰居交涉的過程(如:你向鄰居提出要求,對方向你表示歉意等。)
注意:1. 詞數:80—120
2. 可以編寫對話或其它敘述方式描寫你與鄰居的交涉過程
About 9 o'clock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldn't go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor.
I knocked at his door and said," Good evening, Mr. Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework.'
「Oh, I'm really sorry to have disturbed you. We'll do as you say.」 My neighbor said politely.
「Thank you very much..」 I said and went back to continue my study.
[名師點評]
這篇文章從整體上來看,內容完整,要點齊全。在准確領悟題意的基礎上,用平實的語言,將文章娓娓道來,連貫而流暢。句式搭配長短結合。文章對對話的描寫,很生動,讓人有種身臨其境的感覺。
【英語各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 覆蓋所有內容要點。
3. 應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤,但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。
5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
6. 完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉1、2個次重點,但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確,些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
6. 達到了預期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉一些內容,但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,但不影響理解。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文內容連貫。
6. 整體而言,基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰當完成試題規定的任務。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容,寫了一些無關內容。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響了對寫作內容的理解。
5. 較少使用語句間的連接成分,內容缺少連貫性。
6. 信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成試題規定的任務。
2. 明顯遺漏主要內容,寫了一些無關內容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響對寫作內容的理解。
5. 缺乏語句間的連接成分,內容不連貫。
6. 信息未能傳達給讀者。不得分:(0分)
② 跪求「2010年北京高考英語滿分作文」
One possible version:第一題 Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schele, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.
第二題
In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does
③ 近年高考英語滿分作文十篇
一
假設你叫王明,昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到北京來學習中文。他想了解如何學好中文。請你用英文給他回復一封e-mail,介紹學習中文的體會和方法,提出你的建議,以及表達你幫助他學好中文的願望。
英語作文網
Dear David,
I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
二
請你根據下面的提綱,以「我的家鄉」為題,寫一篇100—120字的短文。
提綱:
(1) 家鄉的地理位置;
(2) 解放前的情況;
(3) 解放後的變化;
(4) 對家鄉的感情。
My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
三
健康對於我們每個人來說是非常重要的,但你的父母天天忙於工作而忽略了這個問題,你很為他們擔憂。請你以此為話題,並結合提示給他們寫一封信。
提示:1.要走路去上班,而不是開車或坐車;
2.每周至少去體育館鍛煉一次,或打球、或游泳;
3.飲食要健康;
4.不要工作太晚,要早休息。
要求:1.短文結構完整,意思連貫,語言流暢,語法准確,符合邏輯;
2.80—100詞左右;
3.開頭和結尾部分已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Dad(Mum),
You』re so busy every day that you don』t pay much attention to your health. I』m worried about your health all the time. I』d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn』t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You』d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What』s more, it』s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.
Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
四
Dear Dad(Mum),
You』re so busy every day that you don』t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I』d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.
I』m looking forward to receiving your letter.
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
五
隨著陽光體育運動在全國開展,政府對中學生身體素質有所下降這個問題給予了高度重視,提出了這樣的標語:「EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY」。同學們參加了各種體育鍛煉之後,校園里出現了可喜的變化,強身健體,增強了學習效果,校園生活豐富了。請你報道一下學校開展這一活動的情況。
注意:1. 詞數80—100左右。
2. 要求文章結構合理、內容通順、句子連貫。
參考詞彙:build up one』s body strength 強健身體
rece diseases 減少疾病
As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play footb
④ 高考滿分英語作文30篇及翻譯
例文1:
Dear David,
I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
翻譯1:
親愛的大衛,
我很高興你會來北京學習中文。中國是非常有益的,許多外國人正在學習,現在。這很難為你,因為它是相當的英語不同。你要記住盡可能多的中國話。同樣重要的是做一些閱讀和寫作。你可以看電視,聽廣播練習你的聽力。你最好不要談論與中國人民。你可以學習漢語,不僅從書本上,而且從你周圍的人。如果您有任何問題,請問我。我敢肯定你會學好中文。
希望能盡快看到你在北京。
此致,
王明
例文2:
My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
翻譯2:
我的家鄉
我的家鄉是一個美麗的地方。它站在旁邊是一個寬闊的河流和豐富的魚和米飯。
但它是一個貧窮落後的小鎮時光。許多人沒有工作。他們過著艱苦的生活。
1949年我的家鄉解放。自那時以來已發生很大變化那裡。街道已拓寬。工廠,學校,醫院,電影院和劇院便如雨後春筍,一個接一個。人民生活大大改善。
我愛我的家鄉。更愛我的人。他們正在努力,以使其更豐富,還有更美麗。
例文3:
Dear Dad(Mum),
You』re so busy every day that you don』t pay much attention to your health. I』m worried about your health all the time. I』d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn』t far from home, is it?
Why not walk to the office? You』d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What』s more, it』s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.
Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
翻譯3:
親愛的爸爸(媽媽),
你每天這么忙,你不重視你的健康。我對你的健康擔心所有的時間。我想給你一些建議。我聽到走路是最好的運動。您的公司沒有遠離家鄉,是嗎?為什麼不步行到辦公室嗎?你最好鍛煉,每周至少一次,如在健身房打網球。去游泳也是一個不錯的選擇了。更重要的是,它需要有健康的食物。盡量不要熬夜太晚。有足夠的睡眠可以讓你的大腦工作得更好。
爸爸,請接受我的意見。我真的希望你健康!
您的愛子(女)
湯姆(瑪麗)
例文4:
Doing sport builds up our body strength and reces diseases.
Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY,KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government.
At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.
The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let』s keep on doing it.
翻譯4:
做運動建立了我們的身體力量,減少疾病。
雖然我們過上更好的生活,我們的健康越來越差了。因此,「每天要鍛煉1小時,保持因病逝世」已經提出的政府。
在中午或放學後,我們玩球,游泳和跑步。瞧!操場似乎較小,因為很多學生都在操場上後援學校生活變得豐富多彩,我們energetic.As因此我們努力學習,更好。
在陽光體育運動帶來了一個令人振奮的變化給我們。讓我們繼續這樣做。
例文5:
Career or Family: which is more important?
When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one』s life.
It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What』s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job.
On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.
In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one』s life can become better and better. Therefore, it』s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.
翻譯5:
職業或家庭:哪個更重要?
在談到自己的事業和家庭的意見要求,人總是有不同的反應。有些人認為這更重要的是追求自己的事業,而總有那麼誰認為家庭應該是一個人的生活的人數1人。
毫無疑問,任何事業在我們生活中起著關鍵作用。在第一個地方,可以給我們一個職業生涯的目標是生活。沒有職業生涯中,大部分時間我們的生活一定會被浪費。更重要的是,職業生涯可以提供一種手段,對我們的生活。大多數人從工作中賺取的收入。
另一方面,家庭也是生活中不可缺少的一部分,因為很多人會承認。家庭一直被認為是一個地方,我們可以擺脫生活中的麻煩。此外,我們可以得到一個屬於家庭的感覺。沒有它,人會感到孤獨和絕望。
在我看來,職業和家庭是不反對對方。相反,它們可以加強彼此,使自己的生活能夠越來越好。因此,它不是對與錯之間的選擇,但理想和現實之間的一個。
⑤ 求北京英語高考滿分作文盡量是今年的要滿分的不是一類
看電視的好處 英語作文2 The Advantages of Watching TV(看電視的益處) The Advantages of Watching TV First of all, watching TV is good relaxation. After a day of hard work, we look forward to good relaxation. Watching TV can meet our requirements by easing our minds and comforting our bodies because the pleasant music and pictures can keep us away from tension and fatigue. Besides, watching TV is entertaining. There are so many kinds of entertainment, such as sports activities, performances, plays and movies, etc. in the world. Of course,it is impossible for us to be on every spot, even with the best means of transportation of our time. However, TV can bring them right in front of us and with them our life is full of joys. Above all, watching TV is ecational. Ecation TV service offers teaching programs on all subjects for people of different professions as well as for students, children and aged people. No doubt, it provides the widest ecation and has the largest audience. Everyone of us, more or less, benefits from watching TV. Indeed, TV has a great influence on people's lives, work and study. 看電視的益處 首先,觀看電視是一種很好的消遣方式。辛辛苦苦工作一天之後,大家都想好好放鬆一下。看電視使人心情放鬆,身體舒適,可以滿足我們的需要,因為令人愉快的音樂和圖像能使我們消除緊張,擺脫疲勞。 此外,看電視給人以娛樂。我們有多種多樣的娛樂方式,如世界各地的體育運動,演出演奏,戲劇電影等等。 當然,即便藉助現代最好的交通工具,我們也不能處處在場。然而,電視機把以上所有娛樂帶到我們面前。有了豐富多彩的娛樂,我們的生活才充滿歡樂。 最為重要的是,看電視可以接受教育。教育電視頻道不僅為學生、小孩和老年人,而且為不同職業的人們提供各類學科的教學節目。毫無疑問,電視提供最廣泛的教育,擁有為數最多的觀眾。咱們每個人或多或少都從看電視中獲得益處。 地址:http://www.yingyu.com/gaozhongyingyu/gaokaoyingyu/gaokaoyingyumanfenzuowen/ 這個網址上面都是高考英語滿分作文(幾乎都有翻譯的)。你自己看啊!
⑥ 2019高考英語滿分作文
2018·全國Ⅰ卷
假定你是李華,你的紐西蘭朋友將去中國朋友家做客,發郵件向你詢問有關習俗。請你回復郵件,內容包括:
1. 到達時間;
2. 合適的禮物;
3. 餐桌禮儀。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【滿分範文】
Dear Terry,
How
are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to
a Chinese friend』s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some
relevant details.
To begin with, according to our tradition, you
are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare
the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you』d better
bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What』s more, when you
are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing
food.
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2018 · 全國Ⅱ卷
你受學生會委託為校宣傳欄「英語天地」寫一則通知,請大家觀看一部英語短片Growing Together,內容包括:
1. 短片內容:學校的發展;
2. 放映時間、地點;
3. 歡迎對短片提出意見。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【滿分範文】
Notice
In
order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding
English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from
2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the
Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin
with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the
development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only
meaningful but also interesting. What』s more, everyone of you will be
welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a
heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
The Student UnionJune
2018 · 全國III卷
假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Peter 來信詢問你校學生體育運動情況。請給他回信,內容包括:
1. 學校的體育場館;
2. 主要的運動項目;
3. 你喜歡的項目。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右:
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【滿分範文】
Dear Peter,
I
am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last
letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following
information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous
new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our
school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports
events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as
running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I』m intoxicated
with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the
challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
2018 · 北京卷 · 第一節
假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣,計劃明年來北京上大學。他向你咨詢相關信息。請給他回郵件,內容包括:
1. 表示歡迎;
2. 推薦他上哪所大學;
3. 建議他做哪些准備工作。
注意:1. 詞數不少於50;
2. 開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【滿分範文】
Dear Jim,
I』m
so glad to hear your future ecation plan in Beijing in your last
letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am
sure you will have the most unforgettable experience ring your
college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese
culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you
where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich
culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The
Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be
helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I
sincerely hope your dream will come true and it』s my pleasure to show
you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further
questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
2018 · 北京卷 · 第二節
假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序,寫一篇英文周記,記述你們上周接待外國學生,帶領他們體驗中國茶文化的全過程。
注意:詞數不少於60。
ards
the mountains. 'Don』t be late for supper,' Uncle Paul cried, 'and keep
to the track so that you don』t get lost!' 'OK! ' my dad cried back.
After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so
peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green
pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It
looked like a beautiful woven(編織的)blanket spread out upon the ground
just for us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
注意:
(1)所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;
(2)至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語:
(3)續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;
(4)續寫完成後,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。
Paragraph
1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting
dark._______________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
【滿分範文】
Paragraph 1
Suddenly
a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I
yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse
from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident,
the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed
closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse
and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get
lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.
Paragraph 2
We
had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we
were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of
water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the
riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may
lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time
appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and
before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but
memorable experience it was!
2018 · 天津卷
假設你是晨光中學的機器人興趣小組組長李津,你的美國朋友Chris就讀於天津某國際學校,他曾在機器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團隊,參加即將於7月底在天津舉行的世界青少學機器人技能競賽。請根據以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。
(1)比賽的時間、地點;
(2)邀請他的原因;
(3)訓練計劃將發送其郵箱,請他提出建議。
注意:
(1)詞數不少於100;
(2)可適當加入細節,使內容充實、行文連貫;
(3)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
【參考詞彙】
世界青少年機器人技能競賽 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
I』m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【滿分範文】
Dear Chris,
I
have good news to tell you. Targeted at cultivating the teenagers』
interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to
throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World
Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children』s
palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a
good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each
other meanwhile.
I am eager to invite you to join our team for
the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make
acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know,
you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous
competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this
field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By
working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring
others' strong points as well as double our achievements.
If you
are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training
program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could
bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I』m
looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
2018 · 江蘇卷
請閱讀下面文字,並按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。
Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny
Our
family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago,
Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the
information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I
simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we
ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the
case and told me she liked it very much.
Su Hua 6 July, Sunny
This
morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We
found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We
spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot,
and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I
was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?
【寫作內容】
1. 用約30個詞概括上述利用排名(ratings)進行消費的現象;
2. 談談你如何看待消費排名,然後用2-3個理由或論據支撐你的看法。
【寫作要求】
1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;
2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱;
3. 不必寫標題。
【評分標准】
內容完整,語言規范,語篇連貫,詞數適當。
【滿分範文一】
As
a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient
source of information for shopping in our own consumption.
Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on
different consumers.
I tend to consult consumption ratings
whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality
of the proct, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my
beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods.
Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For
example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often
confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and
economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no
doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in
consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often
closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards
ratings.
【滿分範文二】
Nowadays,
most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These
ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in
customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes
unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring
convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable.
As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others』 judgment on the
proct or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need
or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others'
advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be
neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful
manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice
for some to pay for good ratings on their procts or services so as to
increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
⑦ 英語高考滿分作文(帶翻譯)
Olympics and I
Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What‟s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it‟s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded. My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an indivial, I‟m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.
Sincerely yours,
奧運與我
親愛的朋友,我有一個好消息,告知這里。通過長期的努力,北京已獲得申辦2008年奧運會。作為一個在北京居住,我感到很興奮,你想分享我的快樂。 這一成功意味著很多超過我的游戲。首先,本屆奧運會一定會促進我們的經濟發展。據一些專家最近的一項調查,這項比賽將提高約3%的國內生產總值,提供職位約1.0萬。更重要的是,我們的文化將得到廣泛認可和接受世界各地通過奧運會。人們會走過來從世界的每一個角落,體驗中華文化在各個方面。此外, 5 透過游戲,我們的生活環境將大大改善。例如,公共交通系統會過時。此外,據了解,將種植更多樹木,草地將大大擴大。 我的朋友,我真的期待著這個偉大的奧運會的到來。作為個人,我都願意提供我的任何方式我可以提供幫助。我也希望能邀請大家來到這里,觀看2008年奧運會,此致。
Tourism in China
Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future. Facing this tendency, we can‟t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people‟s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What‟s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
中國旅遊
最近幾年,在中國的趨勢,旅遊業增長較快。根據最近的一項調查顯示一些專家認為,約47%城鎮居民定期作出旅行,28%的農村居民,也使他們的全國巡演。該調查還顯示,更多的人在旅遊有興趣,並會在將來加入軍隊。 面對這一趨勢,我們不能不說是負責任的開發一些潛在因素。在第一個地方,隨著改革開放政策,對中國人民的生活水平有了很大提高,因此,他們大多數都不能周遊。更重要的是,它相信,人們現在更積極的態度,旅遊業,把它作為一種生活方式。此外,旅遊設施正在變得越來越好。例如,交通運輸發展迅速,許多景點都已經上市。
What a disaster(災難)!
So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people. What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!
什麼是災難(災難)!
到目前為止,有報道稱,超過60,000人在四川earthquake.What的死亡,再加上數百萬人民有成為homeless.And他們在疾病和其他困難的危險之中。無論如何,感謝所有善良的人們,在國內外形勢已經改變well.But我們仍然在努力工作的,特別是為那些無家可歸的人建造房屋和醫治受傷群眾。 現在我們可以做什麼?除了做好自己的工作做好,我們可以捐錢給them.We堅信,有黨和政府的堅強領導,有全國各族人民的援助國,這將是一個抗震救災的勝利!
The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly. The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008. Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
在我們康明城市家庭平均收入從8000元,每年1998至2008年的20,000元。在此期間,平均家庭支出結構也發生了變化。這些圖形顯示了明顯的變化。 而一般家庭開支的最大部分是住房。 1998年,平均每個家庭花費了其對房屋的收入百分之25。在2880,關於住房支出上升到百分之42。食品和飲料是平均家庭開支第二大的一部分。 1998年,大約18%的平均收入是用於這一項目。 2008年,這一數字增長到30%。由於在費用等增加住房和食物,結果在其他項目的費用已經減少到1998年的57%,至2008年的28%。 因此,可以得出一個結論,隨著收入的增加,人們可以改善他們的生活步驟。但仍是一般家庭要花費很大一部分收入,以滿足基本需要。
⑧ 英語高考滿分作文
簡述經濟法的主要內容