『壹』 如何用復雜句寫出滿分高考英語作文
如何用復雜句寫出滿分高考英語作文
復雜句寫作的五大殺器:
1.用定語從句表達功能:主句某個名詞後 + that can make + 表示功能的簡單句(簡單句的主語最好不用代詞,因為這里的代詞需要用賓格,如果掌握不好,還是用people等名詞比較保險)。
例如:I have many books that can make people like English.(我有很多書,能使人們喜歡英語。)
2.用主語從句表達事實:It is clear that + 表示事實的簡單句。
例如:It is clear that books are important. (很明顯書是重要的。)
3.用非謂語結構表達優點:Being considered as something important, + 表示事物優點的簡單句(這個簡單句的主語不可以是人,而且一定要是具有優點的物)。
例如:Being considered as something important, books will help us at school. (被認為是很重要的東西,書將會在學校幫助我們。)
4.用倒裝結構表達結果:Only in this way can + 表示上句話造成的結果的簡單句。
例如:(上句話是People should read books.)Only in this way can people learn different things.(只有通過這種方式人們才能學到不同的東西。)
5.用if條件狀語從句表達展望:If + 表示「如果」的簡單句1,+ 表示「那麼」的簡單句2(if結構需要採用「主將從現」原則,不懂這個原則也無所謂,只需要固定記住:簡單句1用一般現在時,簡單句2用一般將來時)。
例如:If we read books, we will learn different things.(如果我們讀書,我們就能學到不同的東西。)
當你掌握了這五種武器,你已經天下無敵了。面對任何作文題目你都可以切瓜砍菜一樣,讓它們俯首稱臣。當然,如果只寫這五個復雜句,字數還是不夠的。大多數省市作文要求是100字左右。那麼我們就要在作文里額外混合一些簡單句。別小看簡單句,有時候簡單句更有力量。比如征服世界的凱撒大帝有句名言:Veni, Vidi, Vici. 凱撒是羅馬人,說的是拉丁語,翻譯成英語就是:I came, I saw, I conquered. (我來了,我看見了,我征服了。)凱撒是純爺們,簡單句都說的這么霸氣!
而且,復雜句和簡單句的比例最好具體量化並固化,這樣更容易在寫作中執行到位。我的建議就是五長四短:長短長短長短長短長。也就是說,五個長句子(復雜句)和四個短句子(簡單句)穿插排列組合,形成固定的順序,看著舒服,也能符合字數要求(九個句子基本就是90-100字之間,就算對於作文字數要求在150字的變態省份,同學們可以自行加上若干同類型的長短句即可)。
另外,高考英語作文評分標准里還提到了銜接詞的重要性。銜接詞表明句子之間清晰的邏輯關系,讓作文更加渾然一體。四哥再教你三個基本的銜接詞,非常簡單:therefore(因此),besides(而且),however(但是),它們分別表示所在句子和上一句之間是結果、遞進、轉折的邏輯關系,而且一定要用於句首並加上逗號。比如:I like books. Therefore, I often buy books.或I likes books. Besides, I often give my books to my friends.或 I like reading books. However, I have no time.
終於學成了,帶著五大殺器踏上征途吧。我們隨便挑個敵手。所以,四哥不去刻意挑選作文題目。隨便在網路輸入關鍵字:「2013年高考英語作文」,搜索結果第一位的是網路文庫里的一篇文章「2013年各省市高考英語作文真題及範文」。其中第一道題是2013年上海高考英語作文,內容如下:
上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展,現就展出場所(博物館還是社區圖書館)徵集公眾意見,假設你是王敏,給上海博物館寫一封信表達你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求: 1. 簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇; 2. 說明你的理由(從便利性,專業性等方面對這兩個場所進行對比)
別急著寫作文,先簡單構思一下。我現在扮演的是學沫,單詞量就是初中水平,還有限。所以我會說「圖書館」(library)不會說「博物館」,那麼即使我內心深處認為畫展在博物館里舉辦更加「高大上」,但我也得忍痛含淚欺騙自己:還是在街道辦事處的圖書館舉辦畫展更好。更悲劇的是,畫展也不會說,那我就用「活動」(activity)籠統代之。最後,談論的事兒只要是好的一律good,只要是壞的一律bad,這篇作文就這樣不明覺厲地被我KO了,童鞋們覺著這樣寫作文OK不?
好了,上學沫版範文!(標綠色的部分是五大殺器,標藍色部分的是簡單句的句核,標黃色部分的是經常附著在句核外的介賓短語,標粉色部分的是銜接詞)(記住範文里書信開頭結尾的格式,以後可以應用於一切的書信體裁的作文)
Dear Sir or Madam (如果知道收信人的名字就把Sir or Madam換成具體的人名),
It is clear that many people like the activity in Shanghai. I will say my idea in two parts.
If you have the activity in the library, many people will like the idea. The library is near our houses. Only in this way can you have many people in the activity. The activity will be good in the library. Besides, the library is a good place that can make people like reading. Therefore, people will like drawing in the library.
Being considered as something important, the activity will be popular in the future.
Yours,
Wang Min(作文給你起什麼名就叫什麼名)
一篇看似很難的作文就這樣被我們秒殺了!怎麼樣?有沒有I came (to 「高考英語」微信平台), I saw (四哥的「妙筆生花」文章), I conquered (高考英語作文)的霸氣!
PS:高考英語作文還有一個評分點:高級詞彙。因為本篇文章是從詞彙量很弱的學沫角度來闡述的,所以用詞都比較low,但如果運氣好,有可能會得到第一檔分數。以後四哥還會發布如何使用高級詞彙的文章。敬請期待,to be continued.
『貳』 求高考英語作文萬能句型,高級句型,高級詞彙。
萬能句型:
開頭句型:
1.As far as ...is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that... 不言而喻,...
3.It can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地說......
4.As the proverb says, 正如諺語所說的
5.It has to be noticed that... 它必須注意到,...
6.It's generally recognized that... 它普遍認為...
7.It's likely that ... 這可能是因為...
8.It's hardly that... 這是很難的......
9.It's hardly too much to say that... 它幾乎沒有太多的說…
10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特別注意的是
11.There's no denying the fact that...毫無疑問,無可否認
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 沒有什麼比這更重要的是…
13.what's far more important is that... 更重要的是…
銜接句型
1.A case in point is ... 一個典型的例子是...
2.As is often the case...由於通常情況下...
3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
4.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而問題並非如此簡單,所以……
5.But it's a pity that... 但遺憾的是…
6.For all that...對於這一切...... In spite of the fact that...盡管事實......
7.Further, we hold opinion that... 此外,我們堅持認為,...
8.However , the difficulty lies in...然而,困難在於…
9.Similarly, we should pay attention to... 同樣,我們要注意...
10.not(that)...but(that)...不是,而是
11.In view of the present station.鑒於目前形勢
12.As has been mentioned above...正如上面所提到的…
13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 從這個角度上我們可以說
14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我們還得看到事物的另一方面,即 …
結尾句型
1.I will conclude by saying... 最後我要說…
2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...因此,我們有理由相信…
3.All things considered,總而言之 It may be safely said that...它可以有把握地說......
4.Therefore, in my opinion, it's more advisable...因此,在我看來,更可取的是…
5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….通過以上討論,我們可以得出結論…
6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….通過數據我們得到的結論是,....
7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...從中我們可以得出這樣的結論8.From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看來……也許更好
舉例句型
1.Let's take...to illustrate this.
2.let's take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.
3. Here is one more example.
4.Take … for example.
5.The same is true of….
6.This offers a typical instance of….
7.We may quote a common example of….
8.Just think of….
常用於引言段的句型
1.Some people think that …. 有些人認為…To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地說,我不能同意他們的意見,理由如下。
2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.多年來,……一直被視為……,但今天的情況有很大的不同。
3. I believe the title statement is valid because…. 我認為這個論點是正確的,因為…
4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that ….我無法完全同意這一觀點的… I believe….
5. My argument for this view goes as follows.我對這個問題的看法如下。
6. Along with the development of…, more and more….隨著……的發展,越來越多…
7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….有一個長期運行的辯論,是否…
8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….它通常是認為…
高級句型:
People』s views on … vary from person to person. Some hold that …. However, others believe that….人們對……的觀點因人而異.有些人認為……,然而其他人卻認為……
People may have different opinions on …人們對……可能會有不同的見解.
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人們對待吸毒的態度因人而異.
There are different opinions among people as to …關於……,人們的觀點大不相同.
Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 對(失敗)人們的態度各不相同。
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有這些因素加以考慮,我們自然會得出結論……
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that …
考慮所有這些因素,我們可能會得出合理的結論……
Hence/Therefore, we』d better come to the conclusion that …
因此,我們最好得出這樣的結論……
There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫無疑問,跳槽有優點也有缺點.
All in all, we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
總之,我們沒有…是無法生活的.但同時,我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對付可能出現的新問題.
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).該是我們停止這一趨勢的時候了.
It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
該是採納……的建議,並對……的進展給予特殊重視的時候了。
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …
毫無疑問,對……問題應予以足夠的重視.
Obviously, … If we want to do something … , it is essential that …
顯然,如果我們想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we … 只有這樣,我們才能……
It must be realized that …我們必須意識到……
Obviously, if we don』t control the problem, the chances are that … will lead us in danger.
很明顯,如果我們不能控制這一問題,很有可能我們會陷入危險.
No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that …
毫無疑問,除非我們採取有效措施,很可能會……
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
很緊迫的是,應立即採取措施阻止這一事態的發展.
According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.
依照最近的一項調查,每年有4,000,000人死於與吸煙有關的疾病。
The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.
最近的調查顯示相當多的孩子對家庭作業沒什麼好感。
No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.
沒有一項發明像互聯網一樣同時受到如此多的贊揚和批評。
People seem to fail to take into account the fact that ecation does not end with graation.
人們似乎忽視了教育不應該隨著畢業而結束這一事實。
An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that ecation is not complete with graation.
越來越多的人開始意識到教育不能隨著畢業而結束。
When it comes to ecation, the majority of people believe that ecation is a lifetime study.
說到教育,大部分人認為其是一個終生的學習。
Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness.
許多專家指出體育鍛煉直接有助於身體健康。
Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.
應該採取適當的措施限制外國旅遊者的數量,努力保護當地環境和歷史不受國際旅遊業的不利影響。
An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.
越來越多的專家相信移民對城市的建設起到積極作用。然而,越來越多的城市居民卻懷疑這種說法,他們抱怨民工給城市帶來了許多嚴重的問題,像犯罪和....
高級詞彙:
severe 替換掉serious (嚴重的)
a severe water shortage嚴重缺水
needy 替換掉 ppor ( 貧窮的)
wealthy 替換掉 rich ( 富裕的)
benificial 替換掉 good (有益的)
undesirable 替換掉 bad (不好的,不受歡迎的)
nevertheless 替換掉 however (然而,不過)
fundamental / significant 替換掉 important ( 重要的)
relevant 替換掉 related (有關的)
....is highly relevant to.......
extraodinary 替換掉 surprising (驚人的,非凡的)
provided/providing (that )替換掉 if (如果..... )
promote /strengthen 替換掉 improve (提高,加強)
cope with 替換掉 solve ( 解決)
motivate 替換掉 encourage ( 激勵)
jeopardize 替換掉 be bad to (損害,
well-being 替換掉 happiness (幸福,安康)
pros and cons 替換掉 advantages and disadvantages(好處和壞處)
approach / method 替換掉 way (方法,方案)
adopt 替換掉 use (採用,採取)
the aged 替換掉 old people(老人)
adolescents 替換掉 the young (青少年)
『叄』 高考英語作文有沒有一些好一點的高級短語或句子啊!
作文可引用的36句諺語格言
1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
2.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。
3.Easier said than done. 說起來容易做起來難。
4.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
5.One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫釐,謬之千里。
6.Slow and steady wins the race. 穩扎穩打無往而不勝。
7.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一塹,長一智。
8.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 實踐出真知。
9.All work and no play makes jack a ll boy. 只工作不玩耍,聰明孩子也變傻。
10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.無德之美猶如沒有香味的玫瑰,徒有其表。
11.More hasty, less speed. 欲速則不達。
12.It's never too old to learn. 活到老,學到老。
13.All that glitters is not gold. 閃光的未必都是金子。
14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始於足下。
15.Look before you leap. 三思而後行。
16.Rome was not built in a day. 偉業非一日之功。
17.Great minds think alike. 英雄所見略同。
18.well begun, half done. 好的開始等於成功的一半。
19.It is hard to please all. 眾口難調。
20.Out of sight, out of mind. 眼不見,心不念。
21.Facts speak plainer than words. 事實勝於雄辯。
22.Call back white and white back. 顛倒黑白。
23.First things first. 凡事有輕重緩急。
24.Ill news travels fast. 壞事傳千里。
25.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患難見真情。
26.live not to eat, but eat to live. 活著不是為了吃飯,吃飯為了活著。
27.Action speaks louder than words. 行動勝過語言。
28.East or west, home is the best. 金窩銀窩不如自家草窩。
29.It's not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。
30.Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能當飯吃。
31.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。
32.The older, the wiser. 薑是老的辣。
33.Do as Romans do in Rome. 入鄉隨俗。
34.An idle youth, a needy age. 少壯不努力,老大徒傷悲。
35.As the tree, so the fruit. 種瓜得瓜,種豆得豆。
36.To live is to learn, to learn is to better live.活著為了學習,學習為了更好的活著。
另:寫作中使用率最高、覆蓋面最廣的基本句式
1.表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.
2)The reasons for this are as follows.
3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek.
5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
例如:
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people』s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
註:如考生寫第一個句子沒有把握,可將其改寫成兩個句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.這樣寫可以避免套用中的表達失誤。
2.表示好處
1)It has the following advantages.
2)It does us a lot of good.
3)It benefits us quite a lot.
4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us.
例如:
Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
3.表示壞處
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2)It does us much harm.
3)It is harmful to us.
例如:
However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.
4.表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能
1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient, possible)for sb.to do sth.
2)We think it necessary to do sth.
3)It plays an important role in our life.
例如:
Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon, computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5.表示措施
1)We should take some effective measures.
2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties.
3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
例如:
The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.
6.表示變化
1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2)A great change will certainly be proced in the world』s communications.
3)The computer has brought about many changes in ecation.
例如:
Some changes have taken place in people』s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
7.表示事實、現狀
1)We cannot ignore the fact that...
2)No one can deny the fact that...
3)There is no denying the fact that...
4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
5)However,that』s not the case.
例如:
We cannot ignore the fact that instrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems, we can start by ecating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.
8.表示比較
1)Compared with A,B...
2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV.
3)There is a striking contrast between them.
例如:
Compared with cars,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly,they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to people』s health by giving them e physical exercise.
9.表示數量
1)It has increased(decreased)from...to...
2)The population in this city has now increased (decreased)to 800,000.
3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15% compared with that of January.
例如:
With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of people』s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on ecation has increased.
再如:
From the graph listed above,it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.
10.表示看法
1)People have(take,adopt,assume)different attitudes towards sth.
2)People have different opinions on this problem.
3)People take different views of(on)the question.
4)Some people believe that...Others argue that...
例如:
People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success.
Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However, others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.
再如:
Do 「lucky numbers
『肆』 高考英語作文中關於復雜句型和高級詞彙
1.表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.
2)The reasons for this are as follows.
3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek.
5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
例如:There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people』s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
註:如考生寫第一個句子沒有把握,可將其改寫成兩個句子。
如:Great changes have taken place in our life.
There are three reasons for this.這樣寫可以避免套用中的表達失誤。
2.表示好處
1)It has the following advantages.
2)It does us a lot of good.
3)It benefits us quite a lot.
4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us.
例如:Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
3.表示壞處
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2)It does us much harm.
3)It is harmful to us.
例如:However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.
4.表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能
1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient, possible)for sb.to do sth.
2)We think it necessary to do sth.
3)It plays an important role in our life.
例如:Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon, computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5.表示措施
1)We should take some effective measures.
2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties.
3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
例如:The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Thereforewe must take some effective measures to solve it.
6.表示變化
1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2)A great change will certainly be proced in the world』s communications.
3)The computer has brought about many changes in ecation.
例如:Some changes have taken place in people』s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and morepeople are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
7.表示事實、現狀
1)We cannot ignore the fact that...
2)No one can deny the fact that...
3)There is no denying the fact that...
4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
5)However,that』s not the case.
例如:We cannot ignore the fact that instrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems,we can start by ecating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.
8.表示比較
1)Compared with A,B...
2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV.
3)There is a striking contrast between them.
例如:Compared with cars,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly,they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to people』s health by giving them e physical exercise.
9.表示數量
1)It has increased(decreased)from...to...
2)The population in this city has now increased (decreased)to 800,000.
3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15% compared with that of January.
例如:With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of people』s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on ecation has increased.
再如:From the graph listed above,it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.
10.表示看法
1)People have(take,adopt,assume)different attitudes towards sth.
2)People have different opinions on this problem.
3)People take different views of(on)the question.
4)Some people believe that...Others argue that...
例如:People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success.Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However,others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.
再如:Do 「lucky numbers really bring good luck?Different people have different views on it.
註:一個段落有時很適宜以問句開始,考生應掌握這一寫作方法。
11.表示結論
1)In short,it can be said that ...
2)It may be briefly summed up as follows.
3)From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that ...
例如:From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that
examination is necessary,however, its method should be improved.
註:例句1可用於任何一個段落的結論句;例句3則多用文章結論段的第一句。
12.套語
1)It』s well known to us that ...
2)As is known to us,...
3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about.
4)From the graph(table,chart)listed above,it can be seen that ...
5)As a proverb says,「Where there is a will,there is a way.
例如:As is well known to us,it is important for the students to know the world outside campus. The reason for this is obvious.Nowadays,the society is changing and developing rapidly,and the campus is no longer an 「ivory tower
『伍』 我需要一些高考英語作文的高級萬能句子。謝謝
對比觀點題型 (1) 要求論述兩個對立的觀點並給出自己的看法。
1. 有一些人認為……
2. 另一些人認為……
3. 我的看法……
The topic of ①------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------(理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
(2) 給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點一). For example, they think ②-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(為他們帶來的好處).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反對的理由之二).
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法).
闡述主題題型
要求從一句話或一個主題出發,按照提綱的要求進行論述.
1. 闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義.
2. 分析並舉例使其更充實.
The good old proverb ----------------(名言或諺語)reminds us that ----------------(釋義). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.
First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(舉例說明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(舉例說明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).
In my opinion, ----------------(我的觀點). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you」ll necessarily benefit a lot from it
解決方法題型
要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑
1. 問題現狀
2. 怎樣解決(解決方案的優缺點)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(說明A的現狀).Second, ---------------(舉例進一步說明現狀)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解決方法一). For another -------------(解決方法二). Finally, --------------(解決方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解決方法). Consequently, I』m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(帶來的好處).
說明利弊題型
這種題型往往要求先說明一下現狀,再對比事物本身的利弊,有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發,最後往往要求考生表明自己的態度(或對事物前景提出預測)
1. 說明事物現狀
2. 事物本身的優缺點(或一方面)
3. 你對現狀(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的優點之一). Besides -------------------(A的優點之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二個缺點).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(對前景的預測).)
議論文的框架
(1) 不同觀點列舉型( 選擇型 )
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___觀點一_____.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___觀點二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
英語作文模板:現象說明文
Recently ____,what amazes us most is_______,it is ture that__________.
There are many reasons explaining____.The main reason is_____.What is more________________.Thirdly______________.As a result_______________.
Considering all there,____________.For one thing_______,for another________
____.In Conclusion____________________.
開頭萬能公式三:比較正統的語法句子 讓老師產生一種你英語學得很好的錯覺 這樣高分作文更不是問題
As time goes by,.....隨著時間的流逝
There is no doubt that...毫無疑問...
As far as I'm concerned, I think....就我而言,我認為...
It is said that...據說...
Two heads are better than one.三個臭皮匠,頂個諸葛亮。
It is ...that...強調句
It is important for sb to do sth.
there be句型
Compared with A, B is more ...與A相比,B更...
in my opinion 在我看來
It is high time that we did sth.是我們做..的時候了。
Only in this way, can wei solve this problem properly.只有這樣我們才能妥善解決這個問題。
sth is so...that...如此..以至於..
not only ...,but also...不僅...而且...
To be honest To tell the truth 老實說來
too..to 太..以至於不能..
On one hand,..on the other hand,..一方面..另一方面...
希望能幫到你
『陸』 求高考英語作文高級詞彙,高級的,
1.對…大有裨益have a good influence on exert a positive effect on
2.加強strengthen=promote=enhance=improve
3培養 cultivate=foster
4.學校教育 schooling 家庭教育 upbringing=parenting
5.給..動力去內做 give motivation to do=motivate sb. to do
6.青少年 adolescents=youngsters=youth
7.老人容 senior citizens=the aged=the old = the elderly (adj)
『柒』 高考英語作文好句型
1、由引導的狀語從句
Different people have different views on opportunity.Some people think that there are few opportunities in the world,while others argue that everybody will have some kind of opportunity along his life route.
2、Those who...從句
Those who are in favor of the Internet claim that it has a lot of advantages.
Those who are opposed to the Internet hold that disadvantages are many.
3、倒裝句
Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beatiful future.
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太多了,打不了這么多。。
高考改英語作文最重要的是 字 。字要整齊,讓人看得舒服,而不是那些龍飛鳳舞的書法。一般字干凈了,老師的眼球才會停留久一點。能保證老師不誤判,甚至能讓你成為黑馬哦~
然後是 錯誤要少 。寧願不用高級詞彙和復雜的句子,也要簡簡單單地寫,把錯誤降到最低。這樣能保證所有老師都不會誤判。
最後是亮點啦,呵呵,自己總結一下,一些好句型,高級詞彙,多用幾次,就能把老師的眼球再驚爆一下了~
以上三點是按重要順序寫下的,高考改卷繁重,字總是最重要的,當你的卷面如一縷清風撲面而來時,就算寫得不咋樣,老師都會很喜歡的,因為字漂亮了,老師給你低分都覺得很可惜的。
『捌』 高考英語作文高分怎麼拿
高考英語作文評分標准及如何拿下高分作文
高考作文評分標准
1.本題總分為25分,按5個檔次給分。
2.評分時,先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然後以該檔次的要求來衡量,確定或調整檔次,最後綜合給分。
3.詞數小於100的,從總分中減去2分。 4.評分時,應注意的主要內容為:內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。 5.拼寫與標點符號是語言准確性的一個方面。錯誤書寫3個單詞從總分中減去1分,原則上不超過3分,重復的不計。英、美拼寫及詞彙用法均可接受。標點符號錯誤,將視其對交際的影響程度酌情減分。 6.如書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分數降低一個檔次。
高分書面表達必須具備的特點
1.內容要點齊全,清楚地表達了自己的觀點並進行了充分合理的論證;
2.准確性高,描述恰當,時態、人稱符合文章要求,語法、句法准確無誤,結構嚴謹,標點、格式、大小寫亦能正確; 3.連貫性好,銜接語使用恰當,全文結構緊湊; 使用了一些較為復雜的詞彙,句式,能體現出較強的語言運用能力;
書面表達的五項秘訣:
審題,遣詞,造句,潤色,謀篇
既然知道了這些關鍵因素和高分秘訣,我們要如何從這些方面入手呢?
審題的概念
拿到試卷後,首先瀏覽書面表達的題目,研究題目要求。正確的審題內容包括A、審標題B、審體裁C、審要點。審標題:看文章是否要求有題目(title)或者主題(topic)能夠確保你不跑題;審體裁:確能夠定文章的文體,為你寫作提供方向。審要點:如果英語作文中,有要求要點的,一般打分時是踩點給分的,准確把握住要點,是高分的一個訣竅。 如何審要點?要做到以下兩個方面:
總結歸納要點:不是所有內容都要寫出來,而是抓住其中的關鍵要點、銜接要點!
理順要點:將提煉的要點按邏輯關系(如時間關系、因果關系、轉折關系等)重新安排,這樣整篇文章看起來就整體有序,流暢自然,更加容易打動評分老師,從而作文分數提升一檔。 構思文章提綱:根據題目的要點,安排好段落和主次關系。要形成良好的分段意識,寫作分段是必須要進行的(2至4段為佳),這樣顯得文章不會擁擠並且層次分明。在行文意識上,要注意突出要點。 遣詞的注意點 不出現語言錯誤 詞語和短語搭配 適度使用加分詞彙 避免詞語重復
注意詞語和短語搭配使用
可以適度的使用加分詞句:高級詞、同義詞、短語等替代 造句的原則
表達意思要清楚無誤。
多種表達方式表達相同含義
避免句式單調(簡單句,並列句,復合句等適度調整) 表達意思清楚無誤:具體化,細節化 謀篇的攻略
注意分段、詳略搭配、注意連貫
行文時多用關聯詞、引導詞,把文章句子通過各種關系整合起來,達到起承轉合,運用自如的目的,從而獲取高分。
具體的連接關系有:並列關系、遞進關系、因果關系、轉折關系、讓步關系、列舉關系、條件關系、舉例關系、時間關系等。
高考書面表達題型
應用文:書信、通知、便條 記敘文:看圖作文、日記 說明文:人物介紹、活動 議論文:論述觀點
常用的連接詞
1. 表示遞進;在同一話題上補充內容
另外,還有:what』s more; besides; also; moreover; in addition
2. 表示轉折關系
但是,然而,相反:but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.
3. 表示因果關系
因為,因此,所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關系
如果,只要: if on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否則: or else 5. 表示時間關系
當… 的時候 : when while在…之後: after 在…之前: before 直到: until 直到…才…: not……until…… 一…就: as soon as後來: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來: lately; recently 自從:since從那時起: from then on 6. 表示特定的順序關系
首先:firstly 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然後: then; next 最後: finally; in the end 7. 換一種方法表述
換句話說: in other words;that is to say; 8. 進行舉例說明
例如,比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, for this reason
9. 用於陳述事實
實際上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你說實話 : to tell you the truth 10. 對一個話題進行總結
總而言之,總的來說: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word, finally, in conclusion, generally speaking, as you know, in the end , 其它常用到的副詞 therefore otherwise finally furthermore Thus namely 12. 表示結果: thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that, luckily, unfortunately 13. 表示強調:above all, indeed, surely, certainly, of course, after all, without any delay, at least, at most , most importantly,
寫作句式策略: 1.多用五種簡單句
主語+不及物; 主語+系動詞+表語;主語+謂語+賓語(或雙賓語);主語+及物的謂語動詞+賓語+賓語補足語 2.巧用復雜句式
1.感嘆句 How happy I was when I received your letter!
2.強調句 It was this young boy who helped the old granny.
3.倒裝句 Only in this way can you solve this problem.
4.省略句 They read while walking or riding on a bus.
5、with短語 I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.
6、定語從句 Let』s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library. 7、各種名詞性從句 That』s what I should do.
8、各種狀語從句 Time passed quickly before we knew it. 3.如何增加亮點
亮點一共有四種:一、高級詞彙和語法;二、修辭手法;三、有效的連詞;四、名人名言或諺語。
一、肯定不如雙否好The postman comes on time every day----->The postman never fails to come on time.
There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not affected by the earthquake.
二、陳述不如倒裝妙Our library is in the center of our school.---->In the center of our school lies our library.
Only by taking exercises can we keep healthy. So glad am I to hear from you.
三、主動不如被動巧
We can borrow five books at most.----->At most five books can be borrowed at a time. 四、分詞結構不能少
If such is the case, you should apologize to her. ---->Such being the case, you should apologize to her.
Because I am a student, I』d like to know the price for students.--->Being a student, I』d like to know the price for students.
此外,書寫要規范
『玖』 高考英語作文怎麼拿高分
高考英語作文高分技巧一、緊扣主題突出重點
動筆之前,針對提示的文字或圖片必須先認真審題,組織內容,構思提綱,理順思路,切忌偏題,離題,東拉西扯,不得要領,一定要避免累贅繁瑣,條理不清,重點不突出的失誤。
高考英語作文高分技巧二、表達正確文字流暢
強調使用課本上學到過的單詞、片語、佳句確保文章簡潔通順,切忌使用隨便從文曲星或詞典上找來的冷僻單詞,特別強調的是必須避免使用不規范的中文式表達,受歡迎的作文是用詞用句實實在在,朴實無華,清晰流暢的文章。
高考英語作文高分技巧三、謀篇布局
⑴作文動筆之前一般都要先打腹稿。在確立中心上、運用材料上、篇章結構上,充分醞釀。
⑵考慮好想寫多少句子,該用哪些詞彙和句型等。
⑶邊寫邊思考內容的連貫性,語言和句子的准確性
高考英語作文高分技巧四、句式美觀
高考英語作文中句式單一、缺乏生氣的文章,哪怕無任何錯誤也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用會使本來結構單一、語句乏味的文章極具可讀性。合並簡單句使文章的語言由鬆散變得凝練。簡單句雖然短小精悍,但在語言表達上,不能單一地只注重簡單句的正確運用,還應多運用一些並列句或復合句,使句式靈活多變。考生在寫作時,可以巧變感嘆句,增強語言的表達力;省略與替代交替使用,避免寫作時不必要的重復與累贅,使句子更簡練、精確;主動句與被動句交替使用,使句子更具多樣性;分詞及with復合結構結合使用,使得文章句子結構緊湊,描述形象生動,為文章增色。
高考英語作文高分技巧五、保證賞心悅目
英語作文中注重書寫美觀,保證卷面整潔以提高印象分
⑴切忌塗塗抹抹;
⑵保持單詞之間的平均距離,一般為一個a字母的間隙;
⑶錯詞用一條橫線或斜線劃掉,盡量不要重復塗寫同一個字母或單詞;
⑷每段前空格約4個字母的位置。