Ⅰ 求上海高考英語滿分作文10篇
1.2005
Dear Haiqing,
hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can』t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.
To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don』t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things?
Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don』t earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don』t owe us expensive summer camps; they don』t owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don』t you think so?
Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive. What』s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you』ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.
Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person』s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn』t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long?
Keep in touch.
Yours
Huangping
2.2003
Dear Cathy,
I am writing to you to share my opinions on fashion with you, for I have just heard that you were depressed because you couldn』t afford the best(famous) brands.
I shall say that it is natural for everyone to pay much emphasis on his own image. And it is true that stylish clothes, shoes or something like those will make one more fashionable and eye-catching. However, everybody has his(her) own family background, and it is really extravagant for you to buy the famous brands. Besides, it will also add to the burden of your parents.
What』s more, beauty is just skin deep. There are many things which can make you popular with others except fashion. A great amount of knowledge, noble character and a warm heart will surely win others』 respect and admiration. Good qualities are the treasure in your life which is more valuable than anything you wear.
Never judge a person by the appearance. I hope that you will remember the saying and become as happy as you used to be.
Yours,Jane
Ⅱ 幫我收集20篇高考英語滿分作文
Pollution of environment These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more, since (the instrial revolution ),it is natural that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms. The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment). To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthing. We should do something such as (planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.
Ⅲ 2013年安徽高考英語滿分作文
新聞:
熱烈祝賀xxxx完全命中2013年安徽高考英語作文題
預測七:交通規則與人文素質(中國式過馬路、酒後駕駛)
預測題(1)中國式過馬路
最近,你將參加一個英語作文比賽。要求參賽者根據下面的這幅漫畫進行寫作。請按照下面的提示,寫一篇120字左右的英語短文。
1、這幅畫反映了當前的一種什麼現象?
2、分析出現這種現象的原因;
3、針對這個現象發表看法。
生詞提示:中國式過馬路:Chinese style of crossing road 紅綠燈:traffic light
【參考答案】
The picture shows what the Chinese style of crossing the street is. It is clear that some pedestrians tend to run the red light in groups when crossing the street. This phenomenon has attracted widespread concern in China.There are two main reasons behind this phenomenon. Some people are always in a hurry, so they ignore the traffic signal to save time. Others lack safety awareness,thinking drivers have to stop because so many people cross the street together.Actually running the red light is very dangerous because it may lead to more traffic jams and accidents. I hope immediate measures should be taken to prevent this bad behavior. First, the public should be ecated to follow the traffic rules. Second, more overpasses should be built to make it easy to cross the street. Besides, whoever breaks the traffic rules should be severely punished. By doing so, we will be able to get around safely.
【相關報道】2013安徽高考外語考試結束 英語作文與中國式過馬路有關
來源:萬家熱線
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資訊標簽: 2013安徽高考 2013安徽高考英語作文 2013安徽高考外語
6月8日,2013安徽高考外語考試結束,合肥八中、六中等考點的考生已陸續地走出考場。據合肥八中考點的一位孟姓考生介紹,英語試題不難,聽力也很清楚,作文題目涉及當下的時事熱點,教導行人車輛遵守交通規則。
合肥市十一中張姓考生說,英語考試和模考難度差不多,完型填空和閱讀均不是很難,單選是自己的弱項,英語作文是以「遵守文明,從我做起」為題,寫120字的作文。(吳婷婷 黃叢萍)
Ⅳ 十篇高考英語滿分作文
你去找下四六級的作文範文,背一下經典範文就可以了
網路文庫里就有
Ⅳ 近年高考英語滿分作文十篇
一
假設你叫王明,昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到北京來學習中文。他想了解如何學好中文。請你用英文給他回復一封e-mail,介紹學習中文的體會和方法,提出你的建議,以及表達你幫助他學好中文的願望。
英語作文網
Dear David,
I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
二
請你根據下面的提綱,以「我的家鄉」為題,寫一篇100—120字的短文。
提綱:
(1) 家鄉的地理位置;
(2) 解放前的情況;
(3) 解放後的變化;
(4) 對家鄉的感情。
My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
三
健康對於我們每個人來說是非常重要的,但你的父母天天忙於工作而忽略了這個問題,你很為他們擔憂。請你以此為話題,並結合提示給他們寫一封信。
提示:1.要走路去上班,而不是開車或坐車;
2.每周至少去體育館鍛煉一次,或打球、或游泳;
3.飲食要健康;
4.不要工作太晚,要早休息。
要求:1.短文結構完整,意思連貫,語言流暢,語法准確,符合邏輯;
2.80—100詞左右;
3.開頭和結尾部分已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Dad(Mum),
You』re so busy every day that you don』t pay much attention to your health. I』m worried about your health all the time. I』d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn』t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You』d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What』s more, it』s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.
Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
四
Dear Dad(Mum),
You』re so busy every day that you don』t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I』d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.
I』m looking forward to receiving your letter.
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
五
隨著陽光體育運動在全國開展,政府對中學生身體素質有所下降這個問題給予了高度重視,提出了這樣的標語:「EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY」。同學們參加了各種體育鍛煉之後,校園里出現了可喜的變化,強身健體,增強了學習效果,校園生活豐富了。請你報道一下學校開展這一活動的情況。
注意:1. 詞數80—100左右。
2. 要求文章結構合理、內容通順、句子連貫。
參考詞彙:build up one』s body strength 強健身體
rece diseases 減少疾病
As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play footb
Ⅵ 09-11年 安徽高考英語滿分作文
2006【安徽卷】【試題回放】
假設你是李華,作為選派的交流學生在美國某中學學習了一年,寄住在Mr. Brown家裡,剛回到國內。回國後,你發現自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家,因此給他寫了一封信,請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內容如下:
感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助
一本英語詞典忘記帶回
詞典是美國老師送的,非常珍貴
詞典很可能丟在卧室的書架上
郵資自己付
注意:
1、詞數100左右;信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。
2、可適當增加細節,使行文連貫
3、參考詞彙:郵資-postage
Dear Mr. Brown,
I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I』ll show you around in turn.
However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .
Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I』ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.
I』m eager to receive your reply.
Yours,
Li hua
[名師點評]
本文作為信件,首先其格式是正確的。既然是應用文,那麼文章的意圖就要明確表示出來,本文在表達作者寫作意圖的時候,情真意切,用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語從句,還採用了疑問句,讓句式變化而不呆板。
2007【安徽卷】【試題回放】
假如你是李華,美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物,該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信,假如你是李華,美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物,該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信,主要內容如下:
l 表示贊成。 l 提出你喜歡的欄目。 l 簡要說明理由。
注意:1. 詞數100左右。 2. 新的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。
3. 適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。4. 參考欄目:欄目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, 「culture express」 gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it』s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, 「blurt out」 is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, 「entertainment」 is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can』t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can』t list more. I really can』t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名師點評】
這是一篇滿分作文。由於這篇作文的出現,導致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章,寫的的確是好,很地道的美式英語,一些詞語的大膽使用,讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經歷,否則這么地道標準的英語,可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用,list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect! 況且文章中沒有一個錯誤,不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠學到這種程度,不可謂不讓人佩服。
2011高考英語滿分作文賞析
作文題目
假設你是李華,你的英國筆友Bob將於九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文,來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息,寫信介紹住房的情況,並告知住房面積為25平方米,月租500元。
注意:
1.詞數:100左右:
2.參考詞彙:房租—Tent(n.).
I』m very happy to receive your letter, and I』m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I』ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確,意思表述完整,行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句並用,還使用了以 『which,』引導的非限定性定語從句,從而使文章層次分明,富於變化,不愧為考場佳作。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there』re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I』U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確,內容完整,表述清楚,銜接緊密流暢,時態語態使用准確,特別是結尾末段適度的發揮,既充實了內容,又符合邏輯,成為本文與眾不同的亮點。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I』m so glad to know that you』ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I』ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It』s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you』ll like it. If not, I』ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文內在邏輯性很強,由遠及近。由外及內,層次分明,錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運用得恰到好處,很出彩,再則結構完整,從開頭的問候語到結尾都很完備。
作文:
Dear Bob,
I』m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I』ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I』ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文內容詳實,描述具體細膩,用詞適當准確,如「suitable house」、「not far from』』等,另外文中的選擇疑問句也很有新意。
Ⅶ 2019高考英語滿分作文
2018·全國Ⅰ卷
假定你是李華,你的紐西蘭朋友將去中國朋友家做客,發郵件向你詢問有關習俗。請你回復郵件,內容包括:
1. 到達時間;
2. 合適的禮物;
3. 餐桌禮儀。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【滿分範文】
Dear Terry,
How
are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to
a Chinese friend』s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some
relevant details.
To begin with, according to our tradition, you
are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare
the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you』d better
bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What』s more, when you
are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing
food.
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2018 · 全國Ⅱ卷
你受學生會委託為校宣傳欄「英語天地」寫一則通知,請大家觀看一部英語短片Growing Together,內容包括:
1. 短片內容:學校的發展;
2. 放映時間、地點;
3. 歡迎對短片提出意見。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【滿分範文】
Notice
In
order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding
English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from
2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the
Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin
with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the
development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only
meaningful but also interesting. What』s more, everyone of you will be
welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a
heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
The Student UnionJune
2018 · 全國III卷
假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Peter 來信詢問你校學生體育運動情況。請給他回信,內容包括:
1. 學校的體育場館;
2. 主要的運動項目;
3. 你喜歡的項目。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右:
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【滿分範文】
Dear Peter,
I
am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last
letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following
information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous
new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our
school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports
events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as
running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I』m intoxicated
with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the
challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
2018 · 北京卷 · 第一節
假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣,計劃明年來北京上大學。他向你咨詢相關信息。請給他回郵件,內容包括:
1. 表示歡迎;
2. 推薦他上哪所大學;
3. 建議他做哪些准備工作。
注意:1. 詞數不少於50;
2. 開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【滿分範文】
Dear Jim,
I』m
so glad to hear your future ecation plan in Beijing in your last
letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am
sure you will have the most unforgettable experience ring your
college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese
culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you
where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich
culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The
Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be
helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I
sincerely hope your dream will come true and it』s my pleasure to show
you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further
questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
2018 · 北京卷 · 第二節
假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序,寫一篇英文周記,記述你們上周接待外國學生,帶領他們體驗中國茶文化的全過程。
注意:詞數不少於60。
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the mountains. 'Don』t be late for supper,' Uncle Paul cried, 'and keep
to the track so that you don』t get lost!' 'OK! ' my dad cried back.
After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so
peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green
pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It
looked like a beautiful woven(編織的)blanket spread out upon the ground
just for us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
注意:
(1)所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;
(2)至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語:
(3)續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;
(4)續寫完成後,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。
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1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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【滿分範文】
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Suddenly
a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I
yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse
from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident,
the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed
closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse
and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get
lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.
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We
had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we
were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of
water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the
riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may
lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time
appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and
before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but
memorable experience it was!
2018 · 天津卷
假設你是晨光中學的機器人興趣小組組長李津,你的美國朋友Chris就讀於天津某國際學校,他曾在機器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團隊,參加即將於7月底在天津舉行的世界青少學機器人技能競賽。請根據以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。
(1)比賽的時間、地點;
(2)邀請他的原因;
(3)訓練計劃將發送其郵箱,請他提出建議。
注意:
(1)詞數不少於100;
(2)可適當加入細節,使內容充實、行文連貫;
(3)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
【參考詞彙】
世界青少年機器人技能競賽 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
I』m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【滿分範文】
Dear Chris,
I
have good news to tell you. Targeted at cultivating the teenagers』
interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to
throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World
Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children』s
palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a
good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each
other meanwhile.
I am eager to invite you to join our team for
the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make
acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know,
you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous
competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this
field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By
working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring
others' strong points as well as double our achievements.
If you
are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training
program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could
bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I』m
looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
2018 · 江蘇卷
請閱讀下面文字,並按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。
Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny
Our
family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago,
Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the
information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I
simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we
ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the
case and told me she liked it very much.
Su Hua 6 July, Sunny
This
morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We
found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We
spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot,
and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I
was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?
【寫作內容】
1. 用約30個詞概括上述利用排名(ratings)進行消費的現象;
2. 談談你如何看待消費排名,然後用2-3個理由或論據支撐你的看法。
【寫作要求】
1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;
2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱;
3. 不必寫標題。
【評分標准】
內容完整,語言規范,語篇連貫,詞數適當。
【滿分範文一】
As
a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient
source of information for shopping in our own consumption.
Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on
different consumers.
I tend to consult consumption ratings
whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality
of the proct, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my
beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods.
Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For
example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often
confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and
economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no
doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in
consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often
closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards
ratings.
【滿分範文二】
Nowadays,
most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These
ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in
customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes
unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring
convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable.
As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others』 judgment on the
proct or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need
or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others'
advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be
neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful
manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice
for some to pay for good ratings on their procts or services so as to
increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
Ⅷ 寫人的高考英語滿分作文
2011年北京卷高考英語作文範文
Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell. We were all worried about her. One of the boys carried her on the back, with the help of some others, to the clinic immediately. It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital. The following day, we went to visit her with flower and fruit. Seeing her lying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.
Ⅸ 2015高考安徽卷英語滿分作文
2015安徽高考英語作文題目及滿分作文
某英文雜志正在舉辦以 "Fancy yourself as an interviewer" 為主題的徵文活動,請你 以「A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 為題, 寫一篇英語短文。
內容包括:
1. 采訪的對象;
2. 采訪的原因;
3. 想提的問題。
注意:
1. 詞數120左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3. 短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息;
4. 短文的標題已給出,不計人總詞數。
one possible version:
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.www.2abc8.com
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.