㈠ 英文文章糾錯，急！！
錯誤多，分值有點少喲！
①題目錯：First Swimming in the Sea（注意什麼詞該大小寫）
②Summer holidays has been arriving at改為：回Summer holiday has began ，I had been expecting that day for a long time.
不好意思，後面看不大懂答
㈡ 有沒有智能英語作文糾錯系統
可以考慮用Google Translate來輔專助屬
http://www.google.com/language_tools?hl=en
㈢ 英語作文 糾錯 有高級詞彙能用上的也幫忙說下
The Spring Festival is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do ring the holiday. Diffecent people have different ideas.
The girs think we should stay at home. Because we should relax ourselves and the homes are comfortable and COZY.FinalLy, the fare is low. The boys said that we should travel some places. If we do that we will not only increase our knowledge but also broaden the horizon.
However the boys said the girls' idea WAS not great , because we COULDN;T go through the naturAl by ourselves .And the grils said the boys' idea WAS too expensive and WAS not easy to PUT INTO PRACTICE.
PersonlLy ,I'd like to stay at home . Because the weather is so bad . I'm afraid of the cold wind . I think the home is the best place to stay . I can do something , like doing homework , watching TV , drawing...
㈣ 英語作文糾錯
有錯或需要修改的地方有括弧括起來，如下：
(As) you (may) see，I'm unhealthy. I don't like vegetables at all. I never exercise. But I want to get good P.E. grades. Who can (help) me with my health(?)
My P.E. teacher (says), we need drink water or milk every day, and eat vegetables at least 4 times a week. It is good for our health. As for sleeping, we must sleep (at least) 8 hours every night. Exercise is interesting. If we want to be strong, we need exercise every morning. (In) (this) way, we can be clever and (stronger).
㈤ 糾錯，英語作文糾錯。我今年初三，幫忙看一下這篇作文有沒有什麼錯誤，謝謝~
1.Because I think it cannot only help us learn what is happening throughout the world,but also help us learn more knowledge. [can not分開來寫]
2.Summer is hot and we can felel comfortable when we are simming。抄[feel 拼寫錯誤]
3. And I think it is a waste of time to go to a summer school .[這句話換個位置，放在這段最後很奇怪，跟前面一句話連接不起來]
4.你think重復使用太多次了，可以用 I consider / I believe/in my opinion 等
5.注意連詞的使用 可以用 In addition / Moreover 不要總用And
㈥ 英語作文糾錯 幫忙看下有無很嚴重的語法,用詞錯誤
簡單糾正一下語法錯誤，供參考
At present,social pratice has been （playing ）an increasingly important role in our college life.It's nessecary for college students to take part in social pratice
In fact,most of college students are busy（ with their study ）and pay less attention to social practice.Undoubtely,college students have benefited a lot from social experience that couldn't be learned in textbooks.In addition,college students can improve themselves.
In my oppion,I think it's necessary for college students to( be an active participant ) in social practice.The students spend lots of time in playing computer games and shopping on line nowadays.All in all,it's good for college students to take part in social practice.
㈦ 求英語作文糾錯!
My Dream
Every one may be asked a question about his or her dream., just as our teachers do in English class for example.For such a question, I always answer that my greatest dream is to be a famous writer.
In my childhood, I liked reading fairy teals which gave me a lot of fantasies and helped me make my mind to be a writer.I am sure I can also write distinguished novels in my own style in the future though I need a lot of hard work at present.
Life is tough, full of ups and downs. We should face with all kinds of difficulties. Juast as a saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. I believe that I will create a great novel one day. What is more, since I am young, I have more time to practise writing and will make a progress day by day.
㈧ 英語作文糾錯.
有些句子我都不知道怎麼改啊，很chinese english的感覺～說點語法小錯誤吧～
disperse us attention--our attention
So this habit will rece our work efficiency may lead to the mistakes .
是什麼樣的文章？雅思的話最好不要用so,用therefore之類的比較正式。may 前面要加and或that,不然沒有主語或是個錯誤的復句。
use earphone listen to concert to cause hearing for a long time , have loud injury to we student .
這句好難改啊～我是中國人都有點不太明白。we student -嚴重的錯誤。也許你可以寫成：if students spend too much on listening the conert by earphone,it may effect the sense of hearing of students.
choose some melody in a quick rhythm it will make student feel nervous but choose one song in a slow rhythm will make student asleep in summer and winter .
我覺得choose是多餘的，你硬要寫的話應該要寫成choosing,其實直接寫quick rhythm melody就可以吧～make student fall asleep 更好吧～
其他的就是注意句式的多樣性，你一直在重復listening to the music while doing homework,3次。
就說這么多！
㈨ 一篇英語作文幫我糾錯，謝謝。
If your car (is) park(ed) in a wrong place, a traffic police (officer) will find it.You will be very lucky if the policeman lets you go without a ticket.However, this does not always happen.Last holiday(week,month,year or whatever), I go(went) to holiday in sweden. I found a note on my car."sir,we welcome you to our city,but their(there) is a 'no parking' area,if you remind the street sign ,you will stay here happy,this only a reminder" if you receive a request like this,you can not fail to obey it.
㈩ 幫忙糾錯英語作文糾錯
1. One day no one will go to shops any more. 這里抄沒有at
2. So online shopping doesn't spend lots of time. 這里spend是動詞，所襲以不用isn't而用doesn't
3. But we can't see the proct from online shops and it is less fun. 你的原句出現兩個動詞see和have，語法錯誤。
基本上就是這樣了，已經幫您改正。
若不懂，請追問，望採納！