Ⅰ 高考滿分英語作文
首先來了解一下英語作文的評分標准
各個檔次的給分范圍及標准(滿分25分)
A.第五檔(很好):(21-25分)1.完全完成了試題規定的任務。2.覆蓋所有內容要點。3.應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。4.語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤,但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。6.完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
B.第四檔(好):(16-20分)1.完全完成了試題規定的任務。2.雖漏掉1、2個次重點,但覆蓋所有主要內容。3.應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。4.語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確,些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。6.達到了預期的寫作目的。
C.第三檔(適當):(11-15分)1.基本完成了試題規定的任務。2.雖漏掉一些內容,但覆蓋所有主要內容。3.應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。4.有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,但不影響理解。5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文內容連貫。6.整體而言,基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
D.第二檔(較差):(6-10分)1.未恰當完成試題規定的任務。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容,寫了一些無關內容。3.語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。4.有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響了對寫作內容的理解。5.較少使用語句間的連接成分,內容缺少連貫性。6.信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
E.第一檔(差):(1-5分)1.未完成試題規定的任務。2.明顯遺漏主要內容,寫了一些無關內容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。3.語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。4.較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響對寫作內容的理解。5.缺乏語句間的連接成分,內容不連貫。6.信息未能傳達給讀者。
F.不得分:(0分)未能傳達給讀者任何信息:內容太少,無法評判;寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。
從上面可以看出英語作文高分的關鍵因素及高分秘訣:
三點關鍵定檔因素(不跑題是前提)
詞彙多樣性
語法復雜性
文章連貫性
書面表達的五項秘訣:
審題,遣詞,造句,潤色,謀篇
既然知道了這些關鍵因素和高分秘訣,我們要如何從這些方面入手呢?
審題的概念
拿到試卷後,首先瀏覽書面表達的題目,研究題目要求。正確的審題內容包括A、審標題B、審體裁C、審要點。審標題:看文章是否要求有題目(title)或者主題(topic)能夠確保你不跑題;審體裁:確能夠定文章的文體,為你寫作提供方向。審要點:如果英語作文中,有要求要點的,一般打分時是踩點給分的,准確把握住要點,是高分的一個訣竅。
如何審要點?要做到以下兩個方面:
總結歸納要點:不是所有內容都要寫出來,而是抓住其中的關鍵要點、銜接要點!
理順要點:將提煉的要點按邏輯關系(如時間關系、因果關系、轉折關系等)重新安排,這樣整篇文章看起來就整體有序,流暢自然,更加容易打動評分老師,從而作文分數提升一檔。
構思文章提綱:根據題目的要點,安排好段落和主次關系。要形成良好的分段意識,寫作分段是必須要進行的(2至4段為佳),這樣顯得文章不會擁擠並且層次分明。在行文意識上,要注意突出要點。
遣詞的注意點
不出現語言錯誤
詞語和短語搭配
適度使用加分詞彙
避免詞語重復
Ⅱ 誰有歷年高考各地的優秀英語作文
5月12日四川汶川發生大地震。很多人喪生,大量房屋倒塌,當地工廠、企業遭受很大損失,請你根據下面提綱和要求寫一則英語短文。
2004年湖北卷
二班的同學進行了一場有關英語學習的討論。討論的題目是:學習英語要不要從兒童時期開始?請你根據下表中的提示寫一篇短文,介紹討論的情況。
一些同學認為
另一些同學認為
1.應從兒童時期開始學習英語
2.兒童時期記憶力好,可以記住很多單詞
3.能為以後的英語學習打下堅實的基礎
1.不應從兒童時期開始學習英語
2.兒童時期既要學漢語拼音又要學英語,易混淆
3.會影響漢語學習和今後的英語學習
討論未取得一致意見
注意:1.文章的起始句已給出;
2.詞數:100左右(不包括已給的起始句);
3.參考詞彙:基礎—foundation 漢語拼音—Chinese pinyin
2006年湖北卷
受某英文報的委託,你最近對高中生的英語閱讀興趣做了一次調查。請根據以下信息,用英語為該報寫一篇100詞左右的短文。短文的標題及首句已為你寫好。
調查內容:在新聞、故事、科普、學習方法四種英文文章中,學生最喜歡哪一種
調查范圍:湖北省的10所中學
調查對象:高中生
調查人數:1200
調查方式:訪談
調查結果:(見下圖)
浙江卷
第三節: 書面表達 (滿分30分)
人們完成工作的方式通常有兩種:獨立完成和合作完成。兩種方式各有特點。請你以「Working Indivially or Working in a Team」為題,按照以下要點寫一篇英語短文:
1. 獨立完成:自行安排、自己解決問題。
2. 合作完成:一起討論、相互學習
3. 我喜歡的方式和理由
注意:詞數100-120,文章的題目和開頭已給出(不計詞數)。
Working Indivially or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done.
北京卷
第四部分:書面表達 (共兩節,35分)
第一節 情景作文 (20分)
假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華,為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為「Our Spring Outing」 的英文稿件。 請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序,敘述上周你們班從准備春遊到春遊結束的完整過程。
注意: 詞數不少於60.
提示詞: 游樂園 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
(請務必將情景作文寫在答題卡II第一頁指定區域內)
第二節 開放作文 (15分)
請根據下面提示,寫一篇短文。詞數不少於50。
In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.
山東卷
第二節:寫作(滿分30分)
假設你是新華中學的學生張華,班裡從外地轉來一名同學李明,他一時無法融入到新的班集體中,感到很苦惱。請根據下列要點用英語給他寫封信:
1、幫他分析原因;
2、給他提出建議;
3、陳述你幫助他的具體打算。
注意:詞數120 ~150
Dear Li Ming,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Zhang Hua
廣東卷
第一節 基礎寫作(共1小題,滿分15分)
你很榮幸地成為2008北京奧運會的一名志願者,負責編寫奧運比賽項目的英語介紹。
寫作內容
請根據以下中文提綱,編寫射擊項目的英語介紹:
背景:射擊最初只是生存工具,19世紀末才發展成為一項體育運動。
1896:第一次成為奧運項目
1904:中斷
1928:中斷
1932:重回奧運會
1968:第一次允許婦女參加奧運射擊比賽
現狀:穩步發展,1896奧運會只有三項射擊項目,現今有17項。
寫作要求
只能使用5個句子表達全部內容
評分標准
句子結構准確,信息內容完整,篇章結構連貫。
第二節 讀寫任務(共1小題,滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文,然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.
Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it---good facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The Students』 Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.
One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way… it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.
寫作內容
學校最近組織了一次中美學生交流活動,你參加其中的「大學校園生活」討論。聽完Mike的發言之後,你准備寫一份發言稿,題目是「Preparing Myself for College Life」,內容要點包括:
1、以約30個詞概括Mike的發言要點;
2、然後以約120個詞談談你理想的大學生活,內容包括:
(1)對中學生活的感受;
(2)理想的大學生活;
(3)中學生活和大學生活的差別,以及你打算如何適應。
寫作要求
1、在作文中可以使用自己親身的經歷或虛構的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2、作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
評分標准
概括准確,語言規范,內容合適,篇章連貫。
江西卷
第二節:書面表達(滿分25分)
學校計劃舉行英語作文競賽,主題為「We Need Advice Older Generations」,請根據下列要求寫一篇作文:
你遇到了困難或問題,不知該怎麼辦。你去請教一位長輩,後來問題得到了解決。要求寫清楚下面三點:
1、當時面臨的困難或問題是什麼?
2、你獲得的指教是什麼?
3、結果如何?
注意:
1、作文總詞數為100左右;
2、不能在作文中出現所在學校的校名和本人姓名,否則本節判為零分。
遼寧卷
第二節 書面表達(滿分25分)
假定你是李華,准備參加學校舉辦的主題為「健康成長」的英語作文比賽。請按要求寫一篇短文,主要內容包括:
1、樂觀的人生態度;
2、努力學習;
3、參加體育鍛煉。
生詞:態度---attitude
注意:1、詞數100左右;
2、可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
安徽卷
第二節 書面表達(滿分25分)
假定你是李華。David是你的美國筆友。他對中國鼓勵使用環保購物袋很感興趣,來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫封回信,主要內容如下:
1、 感謝他的關注;
2、簡要介紹相關情況;
3、談談你的感想。
注意:
1、詞數100左右,信的格式已為你寫好;
2、可根據內容要點適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3、參考詞彙:環保購物袋---environment-friendly shopping bag
關 注 ---concern
June 8
Dear David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
重慶卷
第二節 書面表達(滿分25分)
學校網站新開設了一個「英語寫作」欄目(column),以便學生發表(post)英語作文,進行交流,提高寫作能力。現請你為該欄目寫一個英文介紹,內容包括:
1、開設目的;
2、欄目優勢:教師在線(online)指導等;
3、作文要求:內容貼近學生生活;
4、優秀作文的鼓勵辦法;
5、邀請大家參與。
注意:
1、詞數100左右;
2、開頭語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數);
3、請在答題卡上作答。
Welcome to the column 「English Writing」!
福建卷
第二節 書面表達(滿分25分)
閱讀下面一則廣告,按照要求完成寫作任務。
寫作內容
假設你是李華,這則廣告引起了你的興趣,請用英文寫一封自薦信。要點如下:
1、對夏令營主題的理解;
2、根據招聘要求自我介紹;
3、參加夏令營的目的。
注意:1、信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數;
2、詞數100左右。
Dear Sir,
I』m Li Hua from Fujian, _____________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
第四部分:書面表達(滿分25分)
假設你是卜曼宜,你購買了一部某外國公司生產的手機,因有質量問題,要求該gonsi更換。請根據下列要點,用英文寫一封電子郵件。
要點:
1. 問題:手機不響鈴,不能發簡訊;
該產品已售完,無法更換;
型號新,無配件,無法維修。
2. 要求:公司應盡快予以更換。
注意:1. 詞數為100左右;
2. 參考詞彙:配件—— spare part;
3. 電子郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好(不計入你所寫詞數);
4.已給出的電子郵件的開頭和結尾不得抄入答題卡。
(以下內容不得抄入答題卡)
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr. 2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China….
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
1996年
假設你是李華,申請到一家外資企業工作。對方要求你用英語寫一篇短文,介紹自己的基本情況。短文應包括下表所列全部內容。
姓名: 李華
出生年月: 1977年2月
出生地: 遼寧大連
學歷
1984-1990 光明小學
1990-1996 大連市第六中學
所學主要課程
語文、數學、英語、物理、化學、電腦
特長
英語、電腦(去年在全校電腦競賽中獲第一名)
業余愛好
游泳、滑冰、集郵、流行音樂
注意:1. 情況介紹必須採用短文形式;
2. 詞數100個左右。
範文: My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graated this summer. The main subjects
Ⅲ 什麼樣的英語作文 可以在高考時拿高分
作為高考的過來人,英語作文的話就想強調兩點:
首先是開頭要好,為什麼呢?因專為開頭好你才能屬吸引老師的眼球,而且閱卷容易出現這樣一種情況,因為老師想要快點改卷子,所以他們很容易就是關注你的開頭,而中間和結尾也就簡單看看就完了,那麼開頭就顯得很重要了,建議你拿幾年的高考試卷的作文樣板看一看,多摘抄點好的句子,多背背,到時候套上去是個人認為挺不錯的方法,但是並不代表中間和結尾就不用看了,盡量作文是有頭有尾吧,中間的話穿插一些高級句式,老師會多給分的,前提是單詞、句子不要出現基本的錯誤,比如說拼寫,或是句式的錯誤。
然後就是字好了。字要嘗試著抽時間去練,如果時間很緊急的話沒辦法練就只能多把握前面的分數了,如果有時間練的話,可以看看衡水中學的那種字體,並不一定要完全一樣,但是或許那種字體可以給你一些啟發,練出有自己風格的字體也是很不錯的,要知道在高考的考場上讓老師有煥然一新的感覺給你的分數可是很不一樣的。
Ⅳ 高中生的英語作文。考試時(尤其是高考),英語作文如果寫一些唯美的句子有高分嗎
可以記一些英語諺語之類地道的英文句子,這樣話可以給文章添彩,另外,名著中特別出名的句子也可以運用上。
Ⅳ 10篇高中優秀英語作文
直接點擊用戶名,去高中英語博客看,裡面有高中英語作文
Ⅵ 求15篇高考英語作文
範文:Mrs Wilson ,
I』m going out shopping , and won』t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library . At about 1 o』clock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldn』t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home . She has already told Susan about this change.
LI Hua
10)全國卷 (2)
假設你是育才中學學生會主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽(speech contest),希望附近大學的外籍教師Smith 女生來做評委。請參照以下通知給她寫一封信。
英語演講比賽
主題:人與自然
時間:6月15日下午2:---5:
地點:501教室
參賽選手:10名
聯系人:李華(電話44876655)
範文: Dear Ms. Smith ,
I』m Li Hua , the chairman of the Students』 Union of YuCai Middle School ,which is close to your university . I』m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours . Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic 「Man and Nature」. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.
I』m looking forward to your reply .
With best wishes
Li Hua
11) 全國卷 (3)
假定你是李華,正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程,遇到一些困難,希望得到學校輔導中心(Learning Center)的幫助。根據學校規定,你需要書面預約,請按下列的要求寫一封信:1.本人簡介 2.求助內容 3.約定時間 4.你的聯系方式(Email: [email protected] ; Phone:12345678)
範文: Dear Sir ,
I』m LiHua , a Chinese student taking summer course in your university . I』m writing to ask for help . I came here last month and found my courses interesting .But I have some difficulty with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library . I was told the learning center provides help for students and I』m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesdays mornings and Friday afternoons . Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me . Here are my email address and phone number :[email protected] ; 1234567.
Look forward to your reply .
Yours ,
Li Hua
09)安徽卷 (4)
假設你正在參加全省中學生演講比賽,請你針對有些父母經常翻開孩子的日記或書包這一現象,寫一篇演講稿,陳述你的觀點。 內容包括:1.認為同學們不必為此煩惱 2.希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷 3.建議與父母進行交流溝通
範文: Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,
Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it , but there』s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble . They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we』d like to trust them .If you don』t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .
Thank you!
10)安徽卷 (5)
假設你將參加某英文雜志開展的一次徵文活動,內容要求你在電視,手機和網路三者中,放棄其中的一個並陳述理由。請你以「which would you give up: TV, cell or Web?」 為題,寫一篇短文。
範文: Which would you give up : TV , cell or web?
We are now living in an information age , in which TV , cells and the web are widely used . It seems that many people can not enjoy themselves with them .
However , if I had to give up one of them , I would turn off TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet . I could do without TV because few TV shows can take my fancy and there』re too many commercials . Besides , most programs on TV are also available elsewhere .
As for cells and the web , they are more necessary to me . I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family , and almost all information can be gathered on the internet .
11)安徽卷 (6)
某校英文報社開設了一個專欄:experience . 本期話題是如何解決學習中遇到的困難。請你以「my approach to difficulties in learning」 為題,用英語寫一篇短文,談談自己的一些做法。
範文: My approach to difficulties in learning
As school students , we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning . Everyone has their own ways to deal with them . Here I would like to share mine.
When I am faced with a difficulty , I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages . In this way , I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself .
However , when it is something beyond my competence , I turn to my classmates or teachers for help . Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice . As a result , I have made steady progress in my studies .
11)湖南卷 (7)
假設你參加所在年級的英文寫作比賽,請按下面文字中的道理完成一篇短文:
A drop of water +two drops +many drops =sea
A tree +two trees +many trees = forest
One person +two persons +many persons =society
範文: The picture shows a simple truth : If too many drops of water are put together ,they will become a sea. Many trees standing together form a forest and many people make up a society . It conveys a message to us : A whole is made up of many small parts that are closely related .Nothing or no one could exist alone .
The picture sets us thinking deeply : our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters . If we want to create a harmonious society ,we must live in harmony with others . On the other hand , since everybody is related to others , we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others , which makes it possible for us to enjoy life to the fullest .
10)湖南卷 (8)
假設你和幾位同學成了一個英語俱樂部,開展了為期2個月的活動。現在,你將代表俱樂部在課堂上進行經驗交流,請寫一份英語發言稿。1.簡要描述俱樂部開展的一項與英語有關的活動 2. 談談你們開展活動的收獲。
範文:
Boys and girls ,
Today I』ll talk about our English club . Our English club was set up two months ago . Now we have members of 25 . We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far we have concted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students .
Last week we held an English story-telling competition . We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes . Every member took an active part in the activity . Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges . At last Li Ping won the first place . Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways . Not only did it improve their spoken English ,but also it brought them much fun . They hope many such activities can be held .
That』s all. Thank you.
11) 陝西卷 (9)
假定你是李華,在一位名叫TigerMom的學生家長的博客上,你看到以下內容。 請你根據博客內容,寫作要點和要求,給這位家長回復。
I』m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
寫作要點:1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陳述自己的理由 3.提出至少2條建議。
範文: Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends』 advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
09)湖南卷 (10)
假設你是某中學新老師李紅,請給你的朋友張華寫封信,告訴他你第一天上課的情景,主要內容如下:1.描述一件課堂上令你印象深刻的事情 2.介紹你處理該事的方式 3.談談你的感想
範文:
Dear zhuanghua ,
It』s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you an impressive story happening on my first lesson .
On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness . Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named 「mother」 for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I realized it .
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them . Do you think so ? I』m looking forward to your reply .
Yours truly ,
Li Hong
10)陝西卷 (11)
假定你是李華,你們學校和一所美國學校簽署了教師交流協議。在過去的一年裡,你們的英語老師是來自這所學校的Sue Wood 。 不久前她返回美國任教。請根據要求寫封電子郵件。1.對她表達感謝之意 2.介紹她離開後自己和班級發生的事情 3.希望了解她的近況
範文:
Dear Sue ,
I』m LiHua ,one of your students in China .It』s almost a month since you left us . We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together .
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day . I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help . Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday we went there and watered them. The three you planted yourself is growing well ,and the whole class decided to name it Sue wood . Will you come back to see Sue wood ?
How is everything with you lately ? We hope to know more about you and your American students . Hope to keep in close touch .
All the best
Liu Hua
09)陝西卷 (12)
假定你是李華,在一個英文網路論壇上,你看到一個名叫Grown-up的中學生發帖(post)尋求幫助。請根據以下內容,寫作要點和要求回帖。
Grown-up Post at 18-5-2009 20:08
Hi, everyone , I』m 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn .But my mother continues to treat me as a seven-year-old . What should I do ?
寫作要點:1.告訴Grown-up 要理解母親 2.給Grown-up 提出解決問題的具體建議
範文: Hi, Grown-up ,
As a student of your age , I understand your situation . The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers . However , it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt your mother』s feelings . Here are a few suggestions . First , it』s advisable to talk more with your mom . I am sure that talks must help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to let her know our ideas and attitudes towards many things . Second , you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a 「grown-up」, it』s even better to share more of the housework , such as cleaning ,washing and cooking .
Hope my idea will work out .
11)江西卷 (13)
假設你是星光中學的李華,將參加主題為「Let』s ride bicycles」的英語演講比賽活動。請撰寫一份演講稿,主要內容:1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞問題 2.騎自行車的益處,如節能環保,有利健康等 3. 參考詞彙 low-carbon life energy saving
範文:
Good morning , everyone ,
I』m Li Hua from Xing Guang Middle school . The topic of my speech is 「Let』s ride bicycle」 .
As is known to all, with the improvement of people』s living standards , cars have become a popular means of transport ,bringing great convenience to our life .However , they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams .
How can we solve the problems then ? As far as I am concerned , riding bicycles is a good solution .For one thing, bicycles don』t need any petrol and they are energy –saving . For another , bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won』t give off waste gas .What』s more , riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health .
Therefore, let』s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles . Come on and join us !
Thank you!
11)天津卷 (14)
假設你程光中學學生會主席李華。你校將於6月26日接待來自美國的某中學的訪問團。你受學校委託,負責安排其在天津的活動。請根據提示,給美國的領隊Smith 先生寫一封電子郵件,介紹活動安排並簡要說明理由,最後徵求對方的意見。 1.上午與我校學生座談(如校園文化,文化差異)2.中午與我校同學共進午餐(餃子,面條等) 3.下午和我校學生游覽海河。
範文: Dear Mr. Smith ,
I am Lihua ,chairman of the student union , from chenguang high schoo. I am very pleased to learn that you are coming to visit our school on June 26. I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.
In the morning , there will be a forum in the school auditorium , where visitors and students from our school communicate with each other ,talking about school life and cultural differences . At noon, you are invited to have lunch in our school cafeteria with students from our school. You can taste mplings ,noodles and other Chinese foods .In the afternoon, the students in our school will show you around the HaiHe river .
How do you like the arrangements ? I hope you will have a nice time in Tian jing
Yours sincerely ,
Li Hua
10)天津卷 (15)
假設你晨光高中的李華。你校擬選拔一些優秀學生,利用暑假到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語。你希望參加此活動。請根據提示寫給校評選組一封申請信:1.對此活動的認識(如對本人,學生和社會的益處)2.個人優勢(如性格,獨立生活能力,語言能力等) 3.你的計劃(如怎樣輔導等)
範文: Dear Sir/Madam ,
I』m lihua from class one ,senior two . I am wring to apply for the opportunity to help the students in chenxin Hope School with their English. Thus they can improve their English ring the summer vacation . Meanwhile , I can learn how to get along well the students and benefit the whole school.
I』m kind , easy-going and always ready to help others . I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence . English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests . So I think that I am qualified for the position.
I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need . Besides ,I 『ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories , singing songs ,playing games and so on .
I』d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity .
Yours Sincerely ,
Li hua
Ⅶ 2015年全國卷1高考滿分英語作文
Dear Jim,
are you these days? Recently, I make a plan to take part in a Dragon Boat Training Camp so that I can cultivate my interests, broaden my horizons and enrich my school life.
I want to tell you some details about the camp first. The camp will be held in my school next Saturday. And many other middle school students will take part in the camp as well. Therefore, we can communicate with each other very well.
Well, I have two main reasons why I want to join it. The first one is that the dragon boat race is one of the most important traditions in China. And people treasure it very much. You can know it』s a very funny and wonderful activity. What』s more, I can improve myself in the camp and learn many things that can』t be found in the books.
Would you like to join me? I look forward to your joining very much. Please give me a reply soon and let me know your decision, OK?
Wish you good luck.
Ⅷ 高考英語作文範文(帶翻譯) 高考英語滿分作文(帶翻譯) 謝謝
Dream and Reality
The beautiful legeng ,Chang'e flying to zhe moon, implies the dream of Chinese to explore the Moon . For thousands of years ,we Chinese have been working hard for it one generation after another . The moon orbiter ,Chang』e One,is named after the fairy . And the successful launch marks the nation's first step towards realizing its dream of exploring the Moon.
Indeed,I've got to learn a lot from this historycal event . First of all ,we need dreams in our life ,for they are the primitive drive to everything .Then we should follow our dreams and nevergive up.At the same time we have to be aware that the path to any success may not be easy to go though .Yet whatever we do ,we should believe 「Where there is a will ,there is a way ." And then try our best to make our dreams come true.
夢想和現實
嫦娥奔月的美麗傳說暗示著中國人民探索月球的夢想。幾千年來,我們中國人一代又一代地 為這個夢想努力著。嫦娥一號月球探測器就是以這個神話故事命名的。嫦娥一號的成功發射標志著中華民族實現探月夢想的第一步。
的確,我從這個歷史事件中學到了很多。首先,我們的生活需要夢想,因為夢想是一切事情的原動力。然後我們要堅持夢想,永遠不要放棄。同時我們必須認識到通往任何成功的路並不是平坦的。然而,不論我們做什麼,我們應該相信「有志者,事竟成」,進我們所能使我們的夢想成為現實。
Please Give up Smoking
Now we often see young men smooking in public places .They think smooking is a pleasure . How silly they are !
Reports show several millions of people die from smoking all over the world every year .Smoking all over the world evevry year .Smoking can cause a lot of illness.
Smoking is also the way leading the youth from bad to worse . In order to get money for smoking,some students take away the money from their parents'pockets.Some of them even steal money from others.
As we all know , smookers can't go on with their work without cigarettets.And the more they smoke,the worse their health will be.
Smoking is our dangerous enemy. Please give up smoking as soon as possible.
請戒煙吧
現在我們經常會看到年輕人在公共場所抽煙。他們認為抽煙是一種樂趣。他們多麼愚蠢呀!
報道顯示全世界每年有幾百萬人死於吸煙。抽煙會引起許多疾病。
Ⅸ 五篇高考萬能英語作文
高考英語作文萬能模板
一、英語書信的常見寫作模板
開頭部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I』m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I』m pleased to hear that you』re coming to China for a visit.
I』m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
結尾部分:
With best wishes.
I』m looking forward to your reply.
I』d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口頭通知常見寫作模板
呼語及開場白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we』ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don』t be late.
結束語部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you』ll have a nice time here.
That』s all. Thank you.
三、議論文模板
1.正反觀點式議論文模板
導入:
第1段:Recently we』ve had a discussion about whether we should... (導入話題)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(觀點有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方觀點)
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3個贊成的理由)
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方觀點)
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What』s more... In addition...(列出2~3個反對的理由)
結論:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(個人觀點) オ
2.「A或者B」類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段: Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(贊同A的原因)
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2個B的優勢)
結論:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出結論) オ
3.觀點論述類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:提出一種現象或某個決定作為議論的話題
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的觀點是贊成還是反對)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (過渡句,承上啟下)
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3個贊成或反對的理由)
結論:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照應第1段,構成"總-分-總"結構)
4."How to"類議論文模板:
導入:
第1段:提出一種現象或某種困難作為議論的話題
正文:
第2段: Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3個解決此類問題的辦法)
結論:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(強調解決此類問題的根本方法)
四、圖表作文寫作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題. The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點 . This means that as (進一步說明).
We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節一 . After 動詞-ing 細節一中的第一個變化, the動詞-ed+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化) . The figures also tell us that圖表細節二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (進一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (結論). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (給出原因). / It is high time that we (發出倡議).
五、圖畫類寫作模板:
1.開頭
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.銜接句
As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.結尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...